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  • @WhiteArtsMagic
    @WhiteArtsMagic3 күн бұрын

    lets get a live play through of you playing this!

  • @mister_Dima_
    @mister_Dima_7 күн бұрын

    Interesting thing. Variety of melodic and garmonic constructions is large. But i'd like to offer you another version of notation: at moments 4:26 (G-clef, end of 214) , 4:53 (G-clef, 241), 5:44 (G-clef, end of 329) you may use Alto C-clef, and notation will be readable.

  • @adammiller9029
    @adammiller902914 күн бұрын

    So is the pianist supposed to just inject their hands with pure cocaine in order to play this?

  • @LuminousVoid88
    @LuminousVoid8817 күн бұрын

    collab of the century????? 🤔

  • @maximilian_csadi
    @maximilian_csadi19 күн бұрын

    i love how people share their own pices like i do :D Keep it master X)

  • @Momusicrec
    @Momusicrec26 күн бұрын

    This sounds great!!! Would also love for u to check out my new composition on my channel!

  • @ethanbrowncomposer
    @ethanbrowncomposer26 күн бұрын

    This piece needs more contrast. Most of it is the same ideas repeated.

  • @Wadoy_productions
    @Wadoy_productions26 күн бұрын

    this piece was almost composed by bro with pure anger

  • @audsyt1282
    @audsyt128228 күн бұрын

    oh my god.

  • @potato4903
    @potato4903Ай бұрын

    AIN'T NO WAYYY YOU CAME BACK I'M A BIG FAN OF YOU MAN WHERE HAVE YOU BEENNNNNN

  • @carlogonza1126
    @carlogonza1126Ай бұрын

    0:34 This part is so 🔥 Keep up the good work man you’ve got some serious talent. 👍

  • @FranzLiszt0904
    @FranzLiszt0904Ай бұрын

    the main theme is very epic, i find that very catchy. however maybe you should think about having someone peforming your own works. the broken chord part in "mvt 1" seems almost impossible to peform in tempo. also dont mind the critics, indeed the descending notes are like chopin's, but the theme sounds original. keep up the good work friend!

  • @classictastic
    @classictasticАй бұрын

    How do u add the piano at the bottom of the score?

  • @susanacastagnet678
    @susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын

    Pdf

  • @susanacastagnet678
    @susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын

    Pdf

  • @susanacastagnet678
    @susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын

    Pdf

  • @susanacastagnet678
    @susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын

    Pdf

  • @marykolar7319
    @marykolar73193 ай бұрын

    First of all, congratulations for writing such an imaginative work! I'd like to make some suggestions that might improve this piece as well as future piano works. 1. having read many of the previous comments, I noticed that several mentioned that it was harmonically static. I thought the same thing. A piece this long definitely needs to move through different keys. 2. I sometimes sensed that there were many spots that were virtuosic for the sake of being virtuosic. As composer we have to make sure that we develop our theme(s) and not engage in "show-offy" passages that don't really add to the meaning of the work. 3. As mentioned by others, there are several passages that even by a concert pianist would be nearly (if not completely) impossible to play, especially at that tempo. If you would ever want this performed live, I would certainly simplify those areas. 4. Lastly, I think you could eliminate a lot of the material without sacrificing the integrity of the piece. Keep it to about 4 minutes, and take out a lot of the repetitive sections. Now having said all that, I did enjoy listening to it-the beginning sounded very Beethovenian to me! Keep writing-you have a lot of good pieces in your future!

  • @alkishadjinicolaou5831
    @alkishadjinicolaou58315 ай бұрын

    Beautiful. I would say that it incorporates later romanticism and modern eras of music!

  • @user-sn4fj5el2b
    @user-sn4fj5el2b5 ай бұрын

    This is not a sonata. This is a collection of various Chopin pieces. Chopin's Sonata 3, Scherzo 2, etc. can all be heard in this. Also, it is not in any type of sonata form, no matter how you look at it. When you start composing, you should start at the basics. Simple counterpoint, sonatinas, etc. If you really cant come up with your own melody, you can start by making a theme and variations on a melody by a different composer.

  • @jeeyyung1421
    @jeeyyung14215 ай бұрын

    damn。。

  • @JustKoyomi
    @JustKoyomi5 ай бұрын

    This is pretty good. Allow me to do some small critique here however: I think while the textures on the sonata help giving it a fresh taste at most turns, it doesn't help that the same chord sequence is repeat a bit too much, and the variations of the theme i think sometimes feel not as inventive as they could. You could try probably doing harmonic variations on some sections, probably tone down the repetitions. As it is as someone already pointed, feels more like a set of variations than a real sonata. Good job regardless!

  • @jakubdzwonkowski
    @jakubdzwonkowski6 ай бұрын

    Wow this is amazing! BUT I am very interested if this is even possible to play! (I'm a saxophonist soo)

  • @ruslans2006
    @ruslans20067 ай бұрын

    Bro's trying too hard to be Chopin

  • @vasiliykonovalenko1193
    @vasiliykonovalenko11937 ай бұрын

    Грандиозное Произведение . Слышу это впервые. Не забуду никогда . Спасибо огромное .

  • @matei_woold_wewu
    @matei_woold_wewu7 ай бұрын

    Bruh why did you put C# minor but I hear B minor

  • @lorenzovillani3102
    @lorenzovillani31029 ай бұрын

    Chopin sonata 3 remindings

  • @bradyredding1964
    @bradyredding196410 ай бұрын

    It’s hard to support a piece that directly takes from another composer - I would feel differently if the piece was titled variations or rhapsody on a theme by Chopin, but calling it a sonata is wrong both in the fact that it isn’t your material and the piece isn’t even sonata form.

  • @rheamaydaayata6354
    @rheamaydaayata635410 ай бұрын

    Etude Clam No.0 Op.0

  • @rheamaydaayata6354
    @rheamaydaayata635410 ай бұрын

    Etude Clam(2 Version)

  • @rheamaydaayata6354
    @rheamaydaayata635410 ай бұрын

    Alex Rabin-Prelude Op.6 No.1

  • @filipporincasato
    @filipporincasato Жыл бұрын

    Why did you stop?We need you!Where are you?

  • @pedroguilherme0803
    @pedroguilherme0803 Жыл бұрын

    Genius 🤩🤩

  • @marcabalde1367
    @marcabalde1367 Жыл бұрын

    Etude From Teneceqie Op 3 No1

  • @marcabalde1367
    @marcabalde1367 Жыл бұрын

    Etude From Techenqie No 3 op 1

  • @tiffles3890
    @tiffles3890 Жыл бұрын

    Shit, that was awesome. I downloaded the mscz and ran it in Musescore. Thanks for the music, and thanks for making the score file available.

  • @elijahkalebabalde1527
    @elijahkalebabalde1527 Жыл бұрын

    Kendard Chinese Ost-DG Castle Theme

  • @MiScusi69
    @MiScusi69 Жыл бұрын

    Good job! Your future sonate will be even better!

  • @pranavmurali8022
    @pranavmurali8022 Жыл бұрын

    Sounds like Chopin Sonata in B Minor

  • @posuga
    @posuga Жыл бұрын

    This is ART!!!!

  • @StrictlyEvan
    @StrictlyEvan Жыл бұрын

    Very impressive! So much ambition and energy!

  • @chestermajos880
    @chestermajos880 Жыл бұрын

    Great composition. Thank you for sharing.

  • @JohnDoe-ex1qn
    @JohnDoe-ex1qn Жыл бұрын

    I think this could be arranged beautifully with a New Orleans-style jazz band. People are hating, but I think this is great.

  • @jollylawyer9999
    @jollylawyer9999 Жыл бұрын

    4:16 My favorite part.

  • @leevinolla8818
    @leevinolla8818 Жыл бұрын

    Wow, you is amazing composer

  • @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5
    @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын

    Reminds me of Blumenfield

  • @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5
    @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын

    This one is actually very good! well done!

  • @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5
    @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын

    The only issue for some of your pieces is that you use the same chord progressions too many times. I suggest invariate and transpose.

  • @porkyminch5131
    @porkyminch5131 Жыл бұрын

    Lol he pretty much has given up composing as you can see (last time uploaded 1 year ago). So I guess this tip was useless.

  • @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5
    @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын

    @@porkyminch5131 Doesn’t matter he still needs to know

  • @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5
    @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын

    Reminds me a lot of Rachmaninoff Etude Talebeau. But nice piece!

  • @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5
    @IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын

    This is a very nice composition! Good job!