Interesting thing. Variety of melodic and garmonic constructions is large. But i'd like to offer you another version of notation: at moments 4:26 (G-clef, end of 214) , 4:53 (G-clef, 241), 5:44 (G-clef, end of 329) you may use Alto C-clef, and notation will be readable.
@adammiller902914 күн бұрын
So is the pianist supposed to just inject their hands with pure cocaine in order to play this?
@LuminousVoid8817 күн бұрын
collab of the century????? 🤔
@maximilian_csadi19 күн бұрын
i love how people share their own pices like i do :D Keep it master X)
@Momusicrec26 күн бұрын
This sounds great!!! Would also love for u to check out my new composition on my channel!
@ethanbrowncomposer26 күн бұрын
This piece needs more contrast. Most of it is the same ideas repeated.
@Wadoy_productions26 күн бұрын
this piece was almost composed by bro with pure anger
@audsyt128228 күн бұрын
oh my god.
@potato4903Ай бұрын
AIN'T NO WAYYY YOU CAME BACK I'M A BIG FAN OF YOU MAN WHERE HAVE YOU BEENNNNNN
@carlogonza1126Ай бұрын
0:34 This part is so 🔥 Keep up the good work man you’ve got some serious talent. 👍
@FranzLiszt0904Ай бұрын
the main theme is very epic, i find that very catchy. however maybe you should think about having someone peforming your own works. the broken chord part in "mvt 1" seems almost impossible to peform in tempo. also dont mind the critics, indeed the descending notes are like chopin's, but the theme sounds original. keep up the good work friend!
@classictasticАй бұрын
How do u add the piano at the bottom of the score?
@susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын
Pdf
@susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын
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@susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын
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@susanacastagnet6782 ай бұрын
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@marykolar73193 ай бұрын
First of all, congratulations for writing such an imaginative work! I'd like to make some suggestions that might improve this piece as well as future piano works. 1. having read many of the previous comments, I noticed that several mentioned that it was harmonically static. I thought the same thing. A piece this long definitely needs to move through different keys. 2. I sometimes sensed that there were many spots that were virtuosic for the sake of being virtuosic. As composer we have to make sure that we develop our theme(s) and not engage in "show-offy" passages that don't really add to the meaning of the work. 3. As mentioned by others, there are several passages that even by a concert pianist would be nearly (if not completely) impossible to play, especially at that tempo. If you would ever want this performed live, I would certainly simplify those areas. 4. Lastly, I think you could eliminate a lot of the material without sacrificing the integrity of the piece. Keep it to about 4 minutes, and take out a lot of the repetitive sections. Now having said all that, I did enjoy listening to it-the beginning sounded very Beethovenian to me! Keep writing-you have a lot of good pieces in your future!
@alkishadjinicolaou58315 ай бұрын
Beautiful. I would say that it incorporates later romanticism and modern eras of music!
@user-sn4fj5el2b5 ай бұрын
This is not a sonata. This is a collection of various Chopin pieces. Chopin's Sonata 3, Scherzo 2, etc. can all be heard in this. Also, it is not in any type of sonata form, no matter how you look at it. When you start composing, you should start at the basics. Simple counterpoint, sonatinas, etc. If you really cant come up with your own melody, you can start by making a theme and variations on a melody by a different composer.
@jeeyyung14215 ай бұрын
damn。。
@JustKoyomi5 ай бұрын
This is pretty good. Allow me to do some small critique here however: I think while the textures on the sonata help giving it a fresh taste at most turns, it doesn't help that the same chord sequence is repeat a bit too much, and the variations of the theme i think sometimes feel not as inventive as they could. You could try probably doing harmonic variations on some sections, probably tone down the repetitions. As it is as someone already pointed, feels more like a set of variations than a real sonata. Good job regardless!
@jakubdzwonkowski6 ай бұрын
Wow this is amazing! BUT I am very interested if this is even possible to play! (I'm a saxophonist soo)
@ruslans20067 ай бұрын
Bro's trying too hard to be Chopin
@vasiliykonovalenko11937 ай бұрын
Грандиозное Произведение . Слышу это впервые. Не забуду никогда . Спасибо огромное .
@matei_woold_wewu7 ай бұрын
Bruh why did you put C# minor but I hear B minor
@lorenzovillani31029 ай бұрын
Chopin sonata 3 remindings
@bradyredding196410 ай бұрын
It’s hard to support a piece that directly takes from another composer - I would feel differently if the piece was titled variations or rhapsody on a theme by Chopin, but calling it a sonata is wrong both in the fact that it isn’t your material and the piece isn’t even sonata form.
@rheamaydaayata635410 ай бұрын
Etude Clam No.0 Op.0
@rheamaydaayata635410 ай бұрын
Etude Clam(2 Version)
@rheamaydaayata635410 ай бұрын
Alex Rabin-Prelude Op.6 No.1
@filipporincasato Жыл бұрын
Why did you stop?We need you!Where are you?
@pedroguilherme0803 Жыл бұрын
Genius 🤩🤩
@marcabalde1367 Жыл бұрын
Etude From Teneceqie Op 3 No1
@marcabalde1367 Жыл бұрын
Etude From Techenqie No 3 op 1
@tiffles3890 Жыл бұрын
Shit, that was awesome. I downloaded the mscz and ran it in Musescore. Thanks for the music, and thanks for making the score file available.
@elijahkalebabalde1527 Жыл бұрын
Kendard Chinese Ost-DG Castle Theme
@MiScusi69 Жыл бұрын
Good job! Your future sonate will be even better!
@pranavmurali8022 Жыл бұрын
Sounds like Chopin Sonata in B Minor
@posuga Жыл бұрын
This is ART!!!!
@StrictlyEvan Жыл бұрын
Very impressive! So much ambition and energy!
@chestermajos880 Жыл бұрын
Great composition. Thank you for sharing.
@JohnDoe-ex1qn Жыл бұрын
I think this could be arranged beautifully with a New Orleans-style jazz band. People are hating, but I think this is great.
@jollylawyer9999 Жыл бұрын
4:16 My favorite part.
@leevinolla8818 Жыл бұрын
Wow, you is amazing composer
@IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын
Reminds me of Blumenfield
@IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын
This one is actually very good! well done!
@IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын
The only issue for some of your pieces is that you use the same chord progressions too many times. I suggest invariate and transpose.
@porkyminch5131 Жыл бұрын
Lol he pretty much has given up composing as you can see (last time uploaded 1 year ago). So I guess this tip was useless.
@IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын
@@porkyminch5131 Doesn’t matter he still needs to know
@IEEMAZ_Convoluted_14.2.8.5 Жыл бұрын
Reminds me a lot of Rachmaninoff Etude Talebeau. But nice piece!
Пікірлер
lets get a live play through of you playing this!
Interesting thing. Variety of melodic and garmonic constructions is large. But i'd like to offer you another version of notation: at moments 4:26 (G-clef, end of 214) , 4:53 (G-clef, 241), 5:44 (G-clef, end of 329) you may use Alto C-clef, and notation will be readable.
So is the pianist supposed to just inject their hands with pure cocaine in order to play this?
collab of the century????? 🤔
i love how people share their own pices like i do :D Keep it master X)
This sounds great!!! Would also love for u to check out my new composition on my channel!
This piece needs more contrast. Most of it is the same ideas repeated.
this piece was almost composed by bro with pure anger
oh my god.
AIN'T NO WAYYY YOU CAME BACK I'M A BIG FAN OF YOU MAN WHERE HAVE YOU BEENNNNNN
0:34 This part is so 🔥 Keep up the good work man you’ve got some serious talent. 👍
the main theme is very epic, i find that very catchy. however maybe you should think about having someone peforming your own works. the broken chord part in "mvt 1" seems almost impossible to peform in tempo. also dont mind the critics, indeed the descending notes are like chopin's, but the theme sounds original. keep up the good work friend!
How do u add the piano at the bottom of the score?
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First of all, congratulations for writing such an imaginative work! I'd like to make some suggestions that might improve this piece as well as future piano works. 1. having read many of the previous comments, I noticed that several mentioned that it was harmonically static. I thought the same thing. A piece this long definitely needs to move through different keys. 2. I sometimes sensed that there were many spots that were virtuosic for the sake of being virtuosic. As composer we have to make sure that we develop our theme(s) and not engage in "show-offy" passages that don't really add to the meaning of the work. 3. As mentioned by others, there are several passages that even by a concert pianist would be nearly (if not completely) impossible to play, especially at that tempo. If you would ever want this performed live, I would certainly simplify those areas. 4. Lastly, I think you could eliminate a lot of the material without sacrificing the integrity of the piece. Keep it to about 4 minutes, and take out a lot of the repetitive sections. Now having said all that, I did enjoy listening to it-the beginning sounded very Beethovenian to me! Keep writing-you have a lot of good pieces in your future!
Beautiful. I would say that it incorporates later romanticism and modern eras of music!
This is not a sonata. This is a collection of various Chopin pieces. Chopin's Sonata 3, Scherzo 2, etc. can all be heard in this. Also, it is not in any type of sonata form, no matter how you look at it. When you start composing, you should start at the basics. Simple counterpoint, sonatinas, etc. If you really cant come up with your own melody, you can start by making a theme and variations on a melody by a different composer.
damn。。
This is pretty good. Allow me to do some small critique here however: I think while the textures on the sonata help giving it a fresh taste at most turns, it doesn't help that the same chord sequence is repeat a bit too much, and the variations of the theme i think sometimes feel not as inventive as they could. You could try probably doing harmonic variations on some sections, probably tone down the repetitions. As it is as someone already pointed, feels more like a set of variations than a real sonata. Good job regardless!
Wow this is amazing! BUT I am very interested if this is even possible to play! (I'm a saxophonist soo)
Bro's trying too hard to be Chopin
Грандиозное Произведение . Слышу это впервые. Не забуду никогда . Спасибо огромное .
Bruh why did you put C# minor but I hear B minor
Chopin sonata 3 remindings
It’s hard to support a piece that directly takes from another composer - I would feel differently if the piece was titled variations or rhapsody on a theme by Chopin, but calling it a sonata is wrong both in the fact that it isn’t your material and the piece isn’t even sonata form.
Etude Clam No.0 Op.0
Etude Clam(2 Version)
Alex Rabin-Prelude Op.6 No.1
Why did you stop?We need you!Where are you?
Genius 🤩🤩
Etude From Teneceqie Op 3 No1
Etude From Techenqie No 3 op 1
Shit, that was awesome. I downloaded the mscz and ran it in Musescore. Thanks for the music, and thanks for making the score file available.
Kendard Chinese Ost-DG Castle Theme
Good job! Your future sonate will be even better!
Sounds like Chopin Sonata in B Minor
This is ART!!!!
Very impressive! So much ambition and energy!
Great composition. Thank you for sharing.
I think this could be arranged beautifully with a New Orleans-style jazz band. People are hating, but I think this is great.
4:16 My favorite part.
Wow, you is amazing composer
Reminds me of Blumenfield
This one is actually very good! well done!
The only issue for some of your pieces is that you use the same chord progressions too many times. I suggest invariate and transpose.
Lol he pretty much has given up composing as you can see (last time uploaded 1 year ago). So I guess this tip was useless.
@@porkyminch5131 Doesn’t matter he still needs to know
Reminds me a lot of Rachmaninoff Etude Talebeau. But nice piece!
This is a very nice composition! Good job!