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  @Ai-Art-42Күн бұрын

  cool work

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  @gprivat812_my_selection65 күн бұрын

  16:00 A successful defence is too dangerous? It's hard to believe !! 20:30 Absurd woke arguments!!

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  @johncortesi42886 күн бұрын

  While later claiming That the opponent ship dwarfs the defiant. When writers say stupid crap like that it just goes to show you that it's either been written by AI Which isn't advanced enough to tell a Which isn't advanced enough to tell a decent story Or the writers just lazy and doesn't double check and add it is own story. It's a decent story story except for that I'm sure he was just trying to create drama some sort but You just can't make those kind of conflicting statements

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  @johncortesi42886 күн бұрын

  Keep track of your own statements please. The defiant can't be the largest ship on the battlefield by far no. 🇦🇸🇧🇷🇦🇸🇧🇸🇧🇪 🇦🇸🇦🇸 🇧🇪🇧🇷🇧🇸

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  @Ai-Art-426 күн бұрын

  Cool story, good job

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  @saintpaulsnail7 күн бұрын

  A good story but it needed duplication edited out.

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  @Ai-Art-427 күн бұрын

  great job, cool story

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  @Vaquero43828 күн бұрын

  Can't listen to this crap.

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  @Ai-Art-4213 күн бұрын

  very cool

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  @timl830217 күн бұрын

  Great story

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  @Rosivok22 күн бұрын

  So are there any male crew members or is this an all-female earth and Mars and anywhere else? I mean the blatant sexism is really unpalatable.

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  @Ai-Art-4223 күн бұрын

  cool

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  @Ai-Art-4224 күн бұрын

  Cool

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  @texaswildcat200026 күн бұрын

  WTF is with the restarts?? Ridiculious...

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  @ronaldknowles227126 күн бұрын

  Palpable that women are the main defense of Earth, lol

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  @saltsalt335327 күн бұрын

  next chapter?

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  @larryr.611528 күн бұрын

  Why is this looping & repeating itself?

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  @soundwaveshadlow29 күн бұрын

  Load of shit don't bother watching keeps jumping

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  @getterblakkАй бұрын

  capt karen was at fault!

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  @MikeJones-jb3bmАй бұрын

  Where's the audio

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  @user-lq9kh7rg7vАй бұрын

  Good story 👍

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  @soundbyte99Ай бұрын

  So the spaceship just appeared out of thin air. OK then!!!

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  @user-vg4ee6tc6nАй бұрын

  Well you-all TRYED 😊🎉

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  @antsquirly7654Ай бұрын

  You were doing good until the repetition kicked in.

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  @ccp4415Ай бұрын

  Shit chick lit.

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  @GreenfaceONEАй бұрын

  Most of these AI sci-fi channels have a decent AI narrator, but like others have stated, they don't have a human give it a once over before pumping it out. The stories are all over the place or repeat with subtle changes. Some are better than others, but every single channel seems to have horrible subtitle generation. The same characters name, one sentence later, is spelled differently. And most don't let us turn the bad subs off. Lazy work in this genre so far it seems.

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  @Faulty_Wiring_v0.85Ай бұрын

  I liked this story. Nice to see we don't have to go all the way to humans making peace with the whole galaxy and being the overlords in a HFY.

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  @adriancarroll1394Ай бұрын

  Do you think that any Sci Fi story can exist without using the word PALPABLE?

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  @neilfox4626Ай бұрын

  IDK Most stories in this subgenre are just fraught with the word.

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  @stanleycarrothers9227Ай бұрын

  Yep used to much.

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  @bearbryant349529 күн бұрын

  And FRAUGHT, that's another overused word.

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  @picklerick494428 күн бұрын

  You can't spell Palpatine without Palpa

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  @simonberg6505Tar.Ай бұрын

  Childish and Stupid.

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  @johanbertilsson2213Ай бұрын

  This was a good story, i liked it.

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  @ChadLetourneaurhavocАй бұрын

  I understand that you are using AI, but it would be great if you could take the time to proofread your work. Proofreading is an integral part of ensuring the quality of your publications. By doing this, you'll be ahead of other AI authors and ensure that we can fully enjoy the stories you are creating. Thank you for your attention to this matter.

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  @01041965100Ай бұрын

  Did we miss a few pages?? Repetitive, and what outburst? Wow.. I've read better stories from 5th graders..

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  @markbierman2985Ай бұрын

  Too much jumping around. Hard to get a good feel for the story

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  @jamjr1230Ай бұрын

  I liked the story* Great Naration

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  @JohnSmith-yy8gkАй бұрын

  this story is soooo raw, its like a first draft of a first grader or crack head.

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  @davecaskey429Ай бұрын

  Seemed short but good

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  @christenascott5280Ай бұрын

  You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Cx were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, end on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps you ran out of time, it would be a fitting end to this story .

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  @christenascott5280Ай бұрын

  You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Seahawks were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, and on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps she ran out of time, it would be a filling in, as there was no end to this story .

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  @mycroft16Ай бұрын

  Thats right... our soldiers are super model warrior maidens descended from Aphrodite herself. More importantly though, the blood of Ares himself runs in their veins and they will $!#@ing BURY you. Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is hilarious.

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  @leogarciabooksАй бұрын

  This makes sense no. It jumps from one point to the other. Is like pieces of the story were cut off.

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  @lindaplouff9310Ай бұрын

  How many times will the Captain leave thr med bay and still be there???

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  @eugeneblue299Ай бұрын

  Good story.

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  @warhawkbmАй бұрын

  Whoa whoa whoa, Why is the story repeating but slightly different? Yall run out of story?

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  @brianflorian7999Ай бұрын

  I like the story 

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  @markedwards6455Ай бұрын

  While I do love the “humans come to the rescue” themed stories.. Just as an inside joke, some alien bastard named Ralph, some slightly absurd human name would be a blast..😂 🤭👍

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  @murphymmcАй бұрын

  Zorgan, Zoran,Zonian / Zargon, Zaren, Zarthon? The author is confused with the species and characters? This story should have started with the second half repeat. I wanted to like the story, too much confusion with the name(s) of the whatever species and leadership. Weapons description was also varied and confused. Try again, try proofreading next time.

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  @hecate235Ай бұрын

  Okay, first problem. The implication in the first scan of Earth is that the aliens are tracking a pack of wolves hunting when they come upon the dog, and its companion. Why does the narrtor immediately assume that the biped is the higher life form? and not the quadruped that is genetically similar to the animals they were tracking? Other problems flow out of that first switch. Can we hear how the aliens discuss their data instead of always being "told" by the narrator? This piece needs a good editor.

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  @charlescburgie1910Ай бұрын

  More more more

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  @vernonriggins1846Ай бұрын

  Good story need another one

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  @nomerc3608Ай бұрын

  👍🏻🇺🇸🫡