Fiction Master

Fiction Master

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  • @xyrothelast227
    @xyrothelast2273 сағат бұрын

    Humans have a saying, “Go big or go Home!”

  • @ToddHofer
    @ToddHofer7 сағат бұрын

    Jesus... "He D"? Cheap ass.

  • @ronellis9710
    @ronellis971010 сағат бұрын

    Worse AI ever

  • @thetoasterisonfire2080
    @thetoasterisonfire208010 сағат бұрын

    Written by some guy on reddit actually. Still not a great story tho.

  • @vanguard9067
    @vanguard90673 сағат бұрын

    Yeah, how could text to speech be so horrible.

  • @ethanlee9441
    @ethanlee944114 сағат бұрын

    Yeah, we have......so beware trespassers

  • @bobwillett3023
    @bobwillett302314 сағат бұрын

    The hell. The ending was very disappointing

  • @johndowds5770
    @johndowds577016 сағат бұрын

    Sorry ,but our ancestors ate meat and hunted relentlessly , we were only prey when separated from the tribe .

  • @garysimon7765
    @garysimon7765Күн бұрын

    Fiction Master has a style that works for me.

  • @TheBetterManInBlack
    @TheBetterManInBlackКүн бұрын

    Some of the pronunciations were painful, but the story was good.

  • @NessaEllenesse
    @NessaEllenesse2 күн бұрын

    Where is the rest of the story

  • @NessaEllenesse
    @NessaEllenesse2 күн бұрын

    I have seen this story somewhere else, but it was a complete video

  • @walterf1205
    @walterf12052 күн бұрын

    Was this the first and last draft written after waking from a fever dream?

  • @besttank8654
    @besttank86542 күн бұрын

    Saame

  • @jamesha175
    @jamesha1752 күн бұрын

    LOL his blood was boiling

  • @user-ow6zw5xe6j
    @user-ow6zw5xe6j2 күн бұрын

    I liked this one immensely, big gun, why the hell not?

  • @Tony_Fot
    @Tony_Fot3 күн бұрын

    Gay. This story is Gay.

  • @danileneherbert6108
    @danileneherbert61083 күн бұрын

    Hard to listen to this rubbish....

  • @KeithChastney
    @KeithChastney3 күн бұрын

    Nice start, but I feel cheated - there was no warning that this was part 1, and no way of knowing if there will ever be a part 2, let alone a conclusion.

  • @laydownlays
    @laydownlays3 күн бұрын

    Wow an English story not in English...just gibberish

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis83923 күн бұрын

    Why is the story repeating itself, have already heard about tanks, it just repeats over, and over again. Where is the rest of the story??

  • @christinetrue8198
    @christinetrue81984 күн бұрын

    Yet another story repeating, very annoying

  • @TERRYWIRT
    @TERRYWIRT4 күн бұрын

    Sounds like they had to deal with The Adjustment Bureau

  • @LawrenceKennard
    @LawrenceKennard4 күн бұрын

    What you can't afford to have a person read a story😮

  • @loytaverite2780
    @loytaverite27804 күн бұрын

    Is it just me or do a lot of these vid stories seem to repeat the same sections a couple of times?

  • @biasmushroom6311
    @biasmushroom63114 күн бұрын

    AH! I missed the launch! Its cool to hear my story on KZread! I am also going through the whole writer thing of hating my earlier work. I feel like I wrote soooooo pooooorly!

  • @TheDragonlair68
    @TheDragonlair684 күн бұрын

    Great story but a few glitches and it stopped mid sentence

  • @Kamelhaj1981
    @Kamelhaj19814 күн бұрын

    Reading the headline, I thought this was about Captain Kirk.😁

  • @techmarine83
    @techmarine835 күн бұрын

    Very disjointed.

  • @donaldscholand4617
    @donaldscholand46175 күн бұрын

    I gotta say it ... "If it bleeds, we can kill it!"

  • @murphymmc
    @murphymmc5 күн бұрын

    This makes the entire galactic community of FTL capable species nothing more than predators that never got beyond their base nature. Not probable, then again, none of these stories are probable but having them at least appear so does make them interesting. The premise behind this story is limiting.

  • @jimsavage147
    @jimsavage1473 күн бұрын

    I think it's significant that humans have a lot of War amongst themselves, and Xeno predators would also. Predators only become spacefaring if they do not destroy each other first. This is our current predicament and I suspect that other species face the same challenge. It seems to me that a group of spacefaring predator species would eventually destroy themselves. That eventuality will probably occur when humans arrive.

  • @geofthompson3844
    @geofthompson38445 күн бұрын

    This was a very different one to most of these stories and quite enjoyable. Because when you really think about it, everything this alien thought about us is factually accurate. We really did go from herbivore to omnivorous and from prey to apex predator and then back to herbivore with agriculture and organised animal husbandry with no real need to hunt. And we did develop higher intelligence. So we really are very dangerous. Maybe the Fermi paradox is actually caused by them being terrified of our savagery and intellect combination 😂

  • @murphymmc
    @murphymmc5 күн бұрын

    Well, not exactly.

  • @geofthompson3844
    @geofthompson38445 күн бұрын

    @@murphymmc pretty much. What is wrong in my comment?

  • @nesapanjalingam704
    @nesapanjalingam7045 күн бұрын

    Thank you for this story 🙏😊 Really enjoyable 😁

  • @rachaelcourtnell7275
    @rachaelcourtnell72755 күн бұрын

    LOL, Always good to have friends.

  • @snidecommenter7117
    @snidecommenter71175 күн бұрын

    LoL. Love the ending.

  • @KeithChastney
    @KeithChastney5 күн бұрын

    Nice story, and although I agree with the other comments about the dodgy narration, I would like to hear the rest of the tale.

  • @amberliddell4503
    @amberliddell45035 күн бұрын

    Boy talk about reverse of the nature predators here

  • @snidecommenter7117
    @snidecommenter71175 күн бұрын

    I saw a documentary where they hired a 'persistance' hunter to film. He indeed ran the animal until it could do no more than barely stand up. He killed it with a spear.

  • @Duke_Romilar_III
    @Duke_Romilar_III5 күн бұрын

    Interesting story, but get a better robot to read it!

  • @M29WeaselDriver
    @M29WeaselDriver5 күн бұрын

    Good sorry but the mispronunciation of all the words with apostrophe’s definitely takes away from it in a big way.

  • @stevet4573
    @stevet45735 күн бұрын

    Annoying AI voice.

  • @NessaEllenesse
    @NessaEllenesse6 күн бұрын

    34:26 I am going to seriously disagree with the author at this point. World War 2 only happened because of the humiliating and economically crippling terms of the Treaty of Versailles, Hitler and the Nazi party would not have been even a footnote in Hostory.

  • @bhh8005
    @bhh80055 күн бұрын

    If the allied had stayed out of the war it would have been no WWI, only another local war at the balcans.

  • @NessaEllenesse
    @NessaEllenesse5 күн бұрын

    @@bhh8005 The problem is the tangled mess of treaties designed to stop war only escalated matters

  • @freefall9832
    @freefall98324 күн бұрын

    Excuses, excuses, Germany is only sorry it lost ww2.

  • @georgepowe4898
    @georgepowe48986 күн бұрын

    Personally, I'll take my Radical NK-1 anyday.

  • @frog7118
    @frog71186 күн бұрын

    Too many cliffhangers on this site.

  • @frog7118
    @frog71186 күн бұрын

    A .22 LR bullet can reach almost the TWICE the speed of sound and that's a popular child's weapon.

  • @georgepowe4898
    @georgepowe48986 күн бұрын

    Pretty obvious that the author has never fired a firearm before.

  • @danepiussolomon
    @danepiussolomon6 күн бұрын

    need more, great job.

  • @ariox90
    @ariox906 күн бұрын

    Quiero más!!!

  • @MichaelWinter-ss6lx
    @MichaelWinter-ss6lx6 күн бұрын

    Difficult to listen to this false pronounciation. Get a real human reader, or perhaps three real readers.

  • @jeus2884
    @jeus28847 күн бұрын

    The story kind of reminded me of a mess Doctor who Star Trek and Loki in Erie

  • @Questor-ky2fv
    @Questor-ky2fv7 күн бұрын

    Someone needs to teach the robot how to pronounce contractions and the possessive "s". The current mispronnunciations are very jarring on the ear, and will get a lot of people to dump the story. I strongly suggest redoing the story with a real human reading it.

  • @CopiluRau
    @CopiluRau3 күн бұрын

    This narrator can read well, I had listened to other stories narrated by it and I assume it was the text it read that had something else instead of apostrophes.

  • @ToddHofer
    @ToddHofer7 сағат бұрын

    @@CopiluRau Maybe stop using AI to make videos. The only reason people do it is laziness and incompetence.

  • @thatotherguy7596
    @thatotherguy75968 күн бұрын

    Brain plasticity, a highly valuable quality. 👍

  • @sebastiancalvey1226
    @sebastiancalvey12268 күн бұрын

    Love How MOMMA BEAR Literally Gets A Passing Mention, Because They are Just THAT Blood Thirsty