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  @MR.Prince210116 күн бұрын

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  @KorolJr11 күн бұрын

  🥐

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  @thetardis_is_the_universe451129 күн бұрын

  Wait is this superman Izuku good or bad guy in this story?

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  @KorolJr28 күн бұрын

  @@thetardis_is_the_universe4511 that on what the viewers perception of good or evil is 😁🥐

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  @Purplecat_23-b3yАй бұрын

  THEY'RE 12

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  @KorolJrАй бұрын

  I did age them up if I remember correctly 🥐

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  @what_ifuchiha7x394Ай бұрын

  Awesome video and I like the new thing with the sound ❤

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  @KorolJrАй бұрын

  Thank I was trying something new and the sounds messed up a lot but thanks 🥐

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  @owenknight4332 ай бұрын

  well he is son of dragon 😅

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  @elijahpratt30272 ай бұрын

  Please continue this bro

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  @KorolJr2 ай бұрын

  It’s a potential maybe I can’t give a certainty 😁🥐

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  @elijahpratt30272 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr thank you for taking it into consideration

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  @KorolJr2 ай бұрын

  @@elijahpratt3027 no problem I love responding to the comments 🥐😁

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  @Seigfried_sigil2 ай бұрын

  I wont lie seems a bit rushed and lackluster i mean it was good for a start even the barista part but the falling hard to fast part started to cause me to lose interest i did watch to the end but you could have had a good series not a 3 part here i mean keep the ship a mystery for a bit longer. Like lets go with the quirk part but instead of just explaining real quick of his quirks you could have made scenes where each quirk would come into play lets say training accident with bakugo took off izuku’s arm for regen. Another his snatch ability or quirk could been a accident like he was in class bored as he noticed a book on the teachers desk and wondered what it was (plot it was secretly midnight magazine) that he unconscious was aboe to just grab from a distance without anyone noticing. Next could work on how another quirk lets say weapon summon proficiency. This one is half locked he takes classes of practicing with a weapon similar to bans weapon and he trains with it in the forest after a good work out with bakugo the go to the cafe and thats where rumi comes in but stays a mystery of ??? But tone down the flirting keep them as just employee and customer with him slipping his number into the fold of cash as he walks away to train where later he experiments with thinks he can learn to snatch this leads him to learn he can snatch stamina and strength from those of his chosing. Drawback is that he gets tired and sleeps after returning the persons strength but stamina cant really be returned cause its energy that comes back naturally over time. This is where you can then end it with the 10 months of training before ua. Second part being he gets the idea to go to fight clubs to gain experience in fighting to put what he knows into practice. This leads to a few fights before he encounters rumi and this is where they fight and rumi accidentally breaks izuku’s neck thinking she just choked him out only to hear him say good to know i can survive getting my neck snapped which causes her to freak out that she almost killed the guy. She then runs off thinking she did something wrong after getting the money later meeting at ua exam where izuku finally shows off the weapon summon part of the quirk he has as he has fun destroying robots and using snatch to rescue other participants from danger but snatch strains his brain cause it takes concentration to perfect later he can continue working on his mental shit at ua to increase it so it becomes second nature with no need to give full focus to. Also a good prank to snatch the ball from aizawa before he can show it and makes aizawa try checking his hero suit trying to find it as he notices izuku playing with it. But back to the exam part he uses his hunters feast to grab strength from nearby students as they run past him not bothering to grabbthier stamina and then saves runi or random girl who had leg blocked by rock from 0 pointer then as the girl gets away the 0 pointer actually crushs izuku as this scares everyone and allmight shows up with teachers and removes the 0 pointer thinking they gotta handle a dead body only to hear izuku bitch about being mangled as some part of his body grow back and shocks the teachers. From now back to the test after they do the bs aizawa test during introductions introduces himself with bakugo’s nickname for izuku is ban the undead. Which makes the class ask about it then you can do a flashback or just have izuku and bakugo explain or they say we can show you why and bakugo litterally shoots holes in izuku like melodus does to ban at the tournament this causes everyone to scream and aizawa almost jumping to conclusions as he demands why he killed his classmate only for a hand to pat on aizawa shoulder and scare the class more as izuku is completely fine. This can be a running gag at times. Then can end there and save the hero vs villain stuff to be anti climatic like bakugo and izuku vs rumi and whoever you pick and all izuku does is steals the strength and stamina of the two until it ends as bakugo enjoys a nap this makes rumi mad wanting a rematch and can be flirting for part 3 and with the usj can make izuku jump behind 13 taking the hit as everyone forgets he is basically immortal later you can bring ozuku back suddenly as he punchs the nomu and has the slug fest only to suddenly get impaled scaring them again as he just takes it out and kills the nomu with it just after all might shows up. Ending part 3 for part 4 rumi is frustrated cause she feels weak and demands izuku to train with her and bakugo kirishima and momo and jirou all come along. Here is where you can do the jericho tsundere stuff as jirou crushing on izuku this can then give the audience to think if the ship will he rumi or jirou from there can make a choice or a 3 person relationship in a future episode i say wait til 5th or 6th part but you can build up relationship and the squad izuku teaching jirou rumi and momo skills to fight better like teaching momo confidence while training in staffs. For jirou teaching her to make her sound attacks more compact and teaching her to hear the faintest sounds while helping her build a resistance to loud sounds with bakugo help. Kiri can train his body and quirk cause he wants to he like izuku only he sees himself as a shield. Each can later during sports festival shinsou will he last member to the squad after thier match they chat more and have shinso replace mineta. From here you now have the 7 sins . Izuku greed. Momo gluttony. Jirou envy. Bakugo wrath . Shinso sloth. Rumi is lust cause basically all the porn about her and her thighs. And kirishima as pride cause he will take pride in tanking everything thrown at him. This will be as far as that goes and those nicknames will become thier hero titles. Example like momo was the everything hero but now it be the gluttony hero creati and she explains her hunger for knowledge for her quirk and also how she had to eat alot cause of her quirk. Or you use the names from the 7ds but i think explanation i did was better. Bakugo the wrathful hero: dynamight. Kiri the prideful hero: red riot. Jirou The envious sound hero: (can use her earphone jack name or whisper as the name honestly idk hoe to make hers sound awesome.) shinso the sloth hero: mindwave. Izuku the greedy hero:ban and rumi being the lusty hero mirko and midnight questions her if she plans to be like midnight as she says no cause she plans to make only make one man lustful. This canlater lead to jirou being jealous but like i said it be up to you by the end for ship. But that be the end of part 5 if you add build up 6th would be stain fight then either girls talk to confess or Izuku confesses but makes it sound like he is greedy for the rabbit or punk girl or both. Then can add wholesome stuff like a full date simple stuff like dinner movie walk on the beach then its late cant go back to dorms so they end up meeting inko. But rather then teasing mom its more a bit stricter she has the girls sleep in her room as its fine cause izuku still a gentleman. They can sleep and cuddle at dorms but i wanna see a responsible mom being a parent. From there you can go nuts however you want as part 7 and there on

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  @KorolJr2 ай бұрын

  This is really good advice and in all honestly a different story in itself, but at the same time the reason I don’t make long part videos and usually only go for 3 parters is because I personally just can’t. I limit my uploading schedule so I’d rather have short stories like these that can set up for a future series and can give a series within the same upload schedule. Another thing to note is that this particular series is something that I created when I started and just updated a couple things here and there so it really wasn’t the best. Nonetheless I do appreciate the advice and if your looking for more pacing and longer series I highly suggest the Harry Potter series I did as that even though I did have to cut things was definitely something I took my time with. 😁🥐

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  @Seigfried_sigil2 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr well have you tried instead make 3 long videos to make up for how short the series itself is?

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  @Seigfried_sigil2 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr i work alot so i only use ine of my days off to work on a story if i could make bank from yt alone id make stories more consistent like you and others lol

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  @KorolJr2 ай бұрын

  @Seigfried_sigil In terms of length sometimes I do worry of the video is long enough but in all actuality to me I’d rather have a good short video than a long dragged on video that’s when I feel I’m dragging something on I’ll either cut it or restarts 😁🥐

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  @KorolJr2 ай бұрын

  I get what you mean I’m working every day of the week currently whilst also in education this genuinely just started as a hobby I’d do when I was in a break from a shift 🥐😁

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  @Sorrow_crusader3 ай бұрын

  There’s not much if any how about deku in Tanya the evil

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  @Sorrow_crusader3 ай бұрын

  Beautiful 🎉

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  @ryanscarberry94153 ай бұрын

  Brovo my frejnd

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  @the_corrupted_feind3 ай бұрын

  Amazing As Always❤

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  @KorolJr3 ай бұрын

  Thank you 🥐😁

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  @teridyer72303 ай бұрын

  Episode 3 LET'S F-CKING GO!!

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  @KorolJr3 ай бұрын

  Yes it was a long time coming 🥐😁

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  @ghosty44673 ай бұрын

  Love the story But that ps slightly evil leaving us with an unfinished story I love it

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  @KorolJr3 ай бұрын

  😁🥐

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  @LepocalypseLB3 ай бұрын

  Spoiler Warning! Beautiful. Just beautiful. We got more information on the Red Death, Hercules, from the Grimborn History, we got freaking spirits, Drago is still alive, and we finally have a reunion between Heather and Izuku. Though I’m curious to see if him and Heather have kids or not, and if Baraq has kids too. Oh well we may see them in the future we may not. But as for this story, it was a great conclusion! Take a good rest, you earned it pal!

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  @KorolJr3 ай бұрын

  Thank you for the kind words and I thought it fitting as I was genuinely more interested in the history of the dragons 🥐😁

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  @Mutated-Reptile3 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr WHO is Atali?

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  @KorolJr3 ай бұрын

  That’s from Race to the Edge, she is the leader of elite women warriors who take care of a baby razor whips and use them to fly themselves and let them go once they are old enough to take care of themselves🥐

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  @what_ifuchiha7x3943 ай бұрын

  Phenomenal performance ❤

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  @brendononeil90624 ай бұрын

  Can you maybe do a izuku x Heather 18+ 18+ 18+ episode in the future i watch all of your videos and your videos are so amazing and hiccup Astrid and heather find izuku in the hidden world

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  @KorolJr3 ай бұрын

  I most likely won’t do 18+ stories unless it makes sense to go with it for the story as then to me it just degrades the story🥐😁

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  @the_corrupted_feind4 ай бұрын

  Please continue this❤ this series is one of the best things ive read so far on youtube and i love it so much❤

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  @justinstone86024 ай бұрын

  Amazing story man i loved it! Side question when is the next episode of the httyd series

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  @KorolJr4 ай бұрын

  Not sure yet🥐😁

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  @sgtgaming35764 ай бұрын

  Can’t wait for the next part

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  @KorolJr4 ай бұрын

  All the parts are uploaded 🥐

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  @shadow_uchiha77195 ай бұрын

  When’s the next episode coming😭😭😭😭😭

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  @KorolJr5 ай бұрын

  Idk man until I can sort this issue out with people just copying the video word for word I don’t think I’ll post part 3 🥐

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  @blankslate75 ай бұрын

  Someone copied your stuff

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  @KorolJr5 ай бұрын

  Are you able to send their channel name and such?

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  @blankslate75 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr yea it's jiro ts

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  @blankslate75 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr sorry, I just seen it and I didn't see you comment on the copy

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  @KorolJr5 ай бұрын

  No it’s fine when you said copy I thought you meant maybe they took a few ideas which I’m fine with but they really just took it all even the title 🥐

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  @blankslate75 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr nah, when I say copy I mean they fully copied it, when I say it looks like they were inspired by you I mean there's similarities

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  @angry_mig4745 ай бұрын

  part 3 and I love the fact that izuku has a Skrill.

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  @KorolJr5 ай бұрын

  Skill just felt fitting 🥐

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  @miguelgagne24565 ай бұрын

  When is the next part

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  @KorolJr5 ай бұрын

  I can’t give a definite answer right now 🥐

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  @ethensonofposeidon2285 ай бұрын

  Why didn't Hermione just say accio Trevor

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  @KorolJr5 ай бұрын

  I’ll be honest I forgot 🥐

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  @ethensonofposeidon2285 ай бұрын

  @@KorolJr no I mean in the book and movie

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  @KorolJr5 ай бұрын

  @@ethensonofposeidon228 idk plot or just trying to make them work harder than they have to

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  @Nebulae_Aka_Jr3 ай бұрын

  ​@@ethensonofposeidon228 maybe because the little creature part was thpufhted about in the fantastik beasts