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  • @cyborg_potion
    @cyborg_potion5 күн бұрын

    i am thankful for this bonus because of part 1 why but good job on the bonus

  • @wealthakuoma380
    @wealthakuoma3809 күн бұрын

    Jennie be like:ahwooo!!!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

  • @SherbieCelineFabria
    @SherbieCelineFabriaАй бұрын

    Hi am a big fan and in the morning i always watch your videos and moon evening and night

  • @Ghost_038
    @Ghost_038Ай бұрын

    Author thank you for this. I recently lost my brother and im heart broken.

  • @Ghost_038
    @Ghost_038Ай бұрын

    Nice read author. ❤

  • @Ghost_038
    @Ghost_0382 ай бұрын

    Hahaha nice oneee i liked it author

  • @kornbsblinkindazeevanmoomoobp
    @kornbsblinkindazeevanmoomoobp3 ай бұрын

    Im glad they are together but i wouldn’t be with someone who killed my friends

  • @yanisumadi6801
    @yanisumadi68014 ай бұрын

    Indo translate please..

  • @EnchantedPixelettes
    @EnchantedPixelettes4 ай бұрын

    Please dont quit author , i am loving your stories until now an di want u to keep the good work up! Fighting!

  • @michellejohnson2656
    @michellejohnson26564 ай бұрын

    Hi author, please 🙏 make a bonus for this story. I would love to see how everyone (jisoo and rosé. Seulgi and irene. Lisa and jennie) turnout. Thanks again author. Ur supportive fan always. ❤❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊😊

  • @user-mz7xg5bx8e
    @user-mz7xg5bx8e5 ай бұрын

    Bunos hehe

  • @user-mz7xg5bx8e
    @user-mz7xg5bx8e5 ай бұрын

    Bonus❤

  • @user-mz7xg5bx8e
    @user-mz7xg5bx8e5 ай бұрын

    😭

  • @Me-some
    @Me-some6 ай бұрын

    😢

  • @blinkobv
    @blinkobv6 ай бұрын

    What the... 😭

  • @LalisaManofoot9697
    @LalisaManofoot96978 ай бұрын

    This is a masterpiece author 👏🏻 😍 🙌🏻 ❤ i don't like it cuz i love it!👌🏻

  • @LalisaManofoot9697
    @LalisaManofoot96978 ай бұрын

    Your story is amazing author ❤ this is what i want mafia jennie but a clingy wife to L❤❤ i want more author;)

  • @adubird6919
    @adubird69198 ай бұрын

    Jennie kim is the bravest woman

  • @edwwinandika7057
    @edwwinandika70579 ай бұрын

    Apa gk ada yg bhs Indonesia

  • @chrisradja2876
    @chrisradja28769 ай бұрын

    I don't read it in complete because in between I read the comments 😅 I have no problem with the sad ending, as long as the author won't make any bonus in which make the death lives again with the ridiculous twisting 😅😅 I ever read the kind of twisting plot like it, and I'm really mad about it. It is like the author really testing my sanity 😂😂 So, I will wait for you author to publish a new story before I read this, just to make sure thst you are not going to make unrealistic bonus.

  • @user-tz4rp5fd3z
    @user-tz4rp5fd3z9 ай бұрын

    Don't call your ex name when you have a girlfriend like a kitten🐱

  • @user-lo3iu9ns4c
    @user-lo3iu9ns4c10 ай бұрын

    😢😢😢😢 y would Lisa die lyk dis

  • @nancyngo9348
    @nancyngo934810 ай бұрын

    Good job Jenny 😂😂😂don’t let no one play you even it’s a prank

  • @alohinalo
    @alohinalo10 ай бұрын

    Don’t skip 18+ part plz.. You can create adult scenes using different symbols then it will not affect your channel badly...plz... I request u...🥺

  • @alohinalo
    @alohinalo10 ай бұрын

    Author, don’t skip the 18+ scene plz... I want more described..plz..😭

  • @ssiiz
    @ssiiz10 ай бұрын

    why i can’t stop crying..😭 and i love it!😢

  • @Nilili00
    @Nilili0010 ай бұрын

    Author what’s the song in 0:11

  • @slythjen
    @slythjen10 ай бұрын

    for you

  • @Nilili00
    @Nilili0010 ай бұрын

    @@slythjen thank you

  • @pahul-randhawa
    @pahul-randhawa10 ай бұрын

    I want gf MSG me ❤ below 👇 i'll give my insta I'd

  • @bellalhossain8460
    @bellalhossain846010 ай бұрын

    *sigh* I love it... But It's A sad ending Story 😢😢

  • @mardelizara777
    @mardelizara77711 ай бұрын

    Author, can you make Jennie as JenTop in one of your stories? And for the title "the Innocent Girl falls in love with an The Player", Jennie is the man (CEO) and Lisa is the woman (Jennie's personal secretary). Please can you make the duration around 40-50 minutes? I really appreciate that Author @slythjen Because I noticed that you always make stories where Jennie always suffers as a woman, and I feel uncomfortable with Jennie's condition, which is always weak💔😓

  • @Blinkyyy96
    @Blinkyyy9611 ай бұрын

    Jenlisa forever ♾️ Tysm author love you❤you’re the best!🫡🖤

  • @hanburger5696
    @hanburger5696 Жыл бұрын

    kinda reminds me of the kdrama business proposal, especially the start ❤

  • @Jyotirmoy0094
    @Jyotirmoy00946 ай бұрын

    was going to say that 😂

  • @mardelizara777
    @mardelizara777 Жыл бұрын

    13:03 Lisa, you love Jennie but you doesn't realize it🤣🤣🤣😝 17:31 Lisa, you were wrong in this case, even though you clearly looked stiff and cold when Jennie approached you😒 I even feel sorry for Jennie because she is too madly in love with Lisa😓 to be cruel to other people🥺 because of Lisa, Jennie became evil😮‍💨😓 17:47 Lisa, you also still act cold after bae and nancy's death😒 The author doesn't seem to have changed anything about Lisa after that🙄 even when she's drunk Lisa doesn't say a word about Jennie, isn't it when people are drunk then that person will talk about the things that are in their heart at that time like what Jennie did when she was drunk. But Lisa doesn't show that at all (doesn't Lisa love Jennie? ) It's weird in my opinion, Author😅 19:41 Looks like Jennie is starting to give up on her love😢 because of her earlier rudeness🥺because she regrets everything😢Jennie😭😭😭My heart hurts when Jennie gives up on her love❤️‍🩹💔 this really makes her weak😢 she already fully regrets it all, Lisa😭😭😭 She doesn't want to force your love on her anymore😭 Lisa, when Jennie had given up on her love, you gave her hope again to love you again🥺 I hope that, Lisa💝

  • @mardelizara777
    @mardelizara777 Жыл бұрын

    16:21 Poor Jennie😢 that's why she seemed afraid to live in this world because she was afraid no one could understand her situation😢 she suffered enough at that time🥺so that his life feels wrong in his life 😢and he's afraid to tell anyone, that's why he's holding all the pressure on himself😢omg jennie, so bad for you😭😭😭 i hope lisa meets that guy and punchs him up😡😤 that's better

  • @rexieluna2995
    @rexieluna2995 Жыл бұрын

    Thor...i'm not sad....huhuhuhuhu.....sob...sob.....you made us cry and lonely....but its an amazing story....keep it up...youre so good....be safe....

  • @mardelizara777
    @mardelizara777 Жыл бұрын

    24:23 It says "after 3 years" but why does it say JenLisa has a 4 year old child?🙄 I'm confused Author😅 Can you explain this?😊 @slyth jen

  • @slythjen
    @slythjen Жыл бұрын

    It’s a typo, I clicked the wrong num 😅

  • @jessamaellagas5670
    @jessamaellagas5670 Жыл бұрын

    And I hope you can make a bonus

  • @jessamaellagas5670
    @jessamaellagas5670 Жыл бұрын

    And sorry for the late reply 😔😔😔

  • @sarahabubakar5935
    @sarahabubakar5935 Жыл бұрын

    Sad I feel hurt and cry💔😭

  • @user-nr7ws6uv6p
    @user-nr7ws6uv6p Жыл бұрын

    Youth of May

  • @MigzHeaven-ct7mp
    @MigzHeaven-ct7mp Жыл бұрын

    Bunos pls.😦

  • @MelodYmomentS-PodCast222
    @MelodYmomentS-PodCast222 Жыл бұрын

    Please it's hurts too bad and I started to crying please again don't make sad ends and sorry❤

  • @shirleydiego3350
    @shirleydiego3350 Жыл бұрын

    Z(#@@##$%<&