5:00 Not at all edited in an intelligent manner! Pls. do a better job next time!
@zhpara9 күн бұрын
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@jeanniecorn263218 күн бұрын
why we never none the end of this one .
@matix125618 күн бұрын
cool story. Kinda sad. Huamnity just "win" battle of New terra. More scary would be if aliens coaliton win... And they hummanity.. just NUKE THIER OWN PLANET, to have last word. and make aliens force destroyed by this with bilions of humans. And then alliens was like -> "THEY JUST DESTROY WHOLE PLANET... KILL BILIONS OF THIER OWN... JUST TO DONT GIVE US A WIN... THEY KILL THEMSELF... TO DONT LOOSE... "
@matix125618 күн бұрын
Aliens - lets give hummanity super technlogy which push thier advance to 200 years to future! So they can join galactic alliance! HUmanity - nice stuff... Can we use it to even faster killing eachoter? Aliens - ... WHAT?
@legion16219 күн бұрын
Please check these AI generated stories before uploading them, this should only be a 10 minute video, but the story was repeated twice!
@user-lg7vx6xp1o19 күн бұрын
The person who's the narrator good voice. The dark voice, it's clear well spoken. And it doesn't sound like an Ai cheap suit.
@nomerc360820 күн бұрын
To many repeated lines! 🇺🇸
@Enderwave2222 күн бұрын
8:16 *Half-Life flashbacks* Oh shit-
@jeanniecorn263223 күн бұрын
ok
@SciFiStoriesBeyond25 күн бұрын
Great story, here's my own stories I've started. kzread.info/dash/bejne/laKhy7aApaS5maw.html
@larryforet627125 күн бұрын
Not very well written.
@broong26 күн бұрын
Repeating yourself does not make for good story telling.
@starswfan26 күн бұрын
That last piece made no sense
@nerd185826 күн бұрын
This narrated like it's a chapter in a grade school history book. And the premise would've been more believable if the ship had been multi-generational and the humans, having faced the loss of their planet, learned from their mistakes. Not to mention traveling for years on a ship would've taught them better resource management as well as respect for anothers space
@alanmacification26 күн бұрын
A common problem with these stories is the over dependence on explanations and backstory. The narrative bogs down.
@deforesttappan647826 күн бұрын
I can see humanity doing this!!! And the aliens sitting there saying " What the Frag is going on???" What???
@andrewmacfarland525327 күн бұрын
This story is the best I have read - so far, at least - in this series of stories. The story contains the seed of many more stories dealing with the interactions of AI and humans.it is fertile ground for the imagination. I will add that I was very pleased to come across a story that was not filled with slimy-scaled alien warlords whose razor-sharp talons ripped up the armrests of their chairs. Thank god, there was none of that. Please, more stories like this one! And, it’s almost time to consider a series of paperbacks. My thanks and congratulations!
@bernievandyne444427 күн бұрын
What you will only post if your paid sad
@bernievandyne444427 күн бұрын
Maybe I should unscathed
@RolandLytle-lw3qr28 күн бұрын
If the Vanguard consists of only four people, then they will not make a difference in the final outcome.
@johnwright552529 күн бұрын
Well done
@cuchulainnmurphy452629 күн бұрын
Another great story! As events happened, I could see them in my mind as if I was actually there.
@AlexMaurin-qx2xb29 күн бұрын
there is nothing unconventionable about military k9 units. they have been a part of the military longer than horses.
@eddiesims-bey525129 күн бұрын
I really like this one😊
@cuchulainnmurphy452629 күн бұрын
Excellent story. I could visualize what was happening in the story what I call my internal screen. It was as if the story was actually happening.
@SandraNelson06329 күн бұрын
Um....there's no air on The Moon. And where are the cats? Cats love combat! And they are madly territorial. They don't need handlers. Just food and someone to point the way.
@francisvantuyle29 күн бұрын
This is a very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. Bravo to the Author. To those are confused about the image and the story don't seem to be in synch. The female in the image is the AI Lyra.
@marthapalermo191429 күн бұрын
Why does the click bait picture never match the story's description?
@JackFrost00829 күн бұрын
humans as a peace keeping species? what the bleeding hell are they smoking?!
@BostonDodgeGuy29 күн бұрын
Apex predator of the known galaxy Humans: Why friend shaped if not friend?
@BastardNation2129 күн бұрын
So it’s an intestinal worm.
@silaskelly60429 күн бұрын
Until this one, all of these stories have been entertaining and well written. It's very interesting to see that you can get a spectrum of writing out of AI's. I'll be very interested in explanations of what's going on. Different AI's, different prompts, different training. . . . . . . . .
@MoonNightAria29 күн бұрын
aw puppy i say looking at a deathworld apex predator
@markpica1416Ай бұрын
Nien not the doggies you gamers will get this saying
@robo08ifyАй бұрын
Most of these stories on KZread need proofreading before posting. Many repetitions, mispronunciations, weird inflections, etc. make some of these stories hard to listen to. Also, is the alien’s name Zigor, Zagor, Zagar, Zegor, Zygore or what? It keeps changing.
@rayraamsalu6092Ай бұрын
Ok perhaps mars had been terreformed but the moon... Also if.the dogs senses could be that easily enhanced why not the humans? Interesting idea but i think that some aspects may have been overtaken by reality.
@direwolfwollf2270Ай бұрын
They should have gone back to the ship and tried to communicate with the planet before freaking out.
@direwolfwollf2270Ай бұрын
Humans must be different in the ruture no communication just attack?
@jeanniecorn2632Ай бұрын
Thank you😊
@donaldwalker3738Ай бұрын
Good thing the government did not get involved in this story. The government can mess up a trip to Dairy Queen
@terryhayward7905Ай бұрын
My favourite story so far :)
@ringneshansaАй бұрын
same as the little alien girl.. please fix
@edwardroche2480Ай бұрын
The first half is pretty good but the last half is all talk talk talk talk talk talk blah blah blah blah blah blah. But I should just listening to the first part until the rain is over on the attractions
@billyhomeyer7414Ай бұрын
How to turn a two minute story into 36 minutes of repeat rhetoric.
@RolandLytle-lw3qrАй бұрын
The title has nothing to do with the story!
@fredmaxwell9619Ай бұрын
Good story. Was really nice hearing a heartwarming story. I wonder how Zara got on the ship and crashed on Earth.
@timogin4377Ай бұрын
Then the Zarixians searched for the source of the xenopathogen. And as the trail of destruction led to the Sol system and then third planet from Sol they discovered a Wuhan laboratory in the country of China had created the virus doing "research" of gain of function was the root of the pathogen. Angered by this discovery and the carelessness of these humans they demanded an explanation but received only denial of any wrong doing and pointed to the American scientist who funded their research, placing the blame on him for his profiteering greediness and his connection a pharma company named Pfizer and their unsuccessful attempt at making a vaccine for the pathogen they had help create the Xarixians decided to annihilate the entire planet to rid the universe of a bunch of lying politicians, ruthless fearmongering Pharmaceutical degenerates and profiteering scumbags.
@rdragonsheridanАй бұрын
More woke bs
@hillbillyhippipeАй бұрын
hello there storyteller very good story man thank you...
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5:00 Not at all edited in an intelligent manner! Pls. do a better job next time!
Thanks for the great content, I learned a lot! Already subscribed, liked, and commented. Your channel is really great! I am also working hard to learn how to write audio novels. I hope you can help recommend my channel so that more people can discover it.
why we never none the end of this one .
cool story. Kinda sad. Huamnity just "win" battle of New terra. More scary would be if aliens coaliton win... And they hummanity.. just NUKE THIER OWN PLANET, to have last word. and make aliens force destroyed by this with bilions of humans. And then alliens was like -> "THEY JUST DESTROY WHOLE PLANET... KILL BILIONS OF THIER OWN... JUST TO DONT GIVE US A WIN... THEY KILL THEMSELF... TO DONT LOOSE... "
Aliens - lets give hummanity super technlogy which push thier advance to 200 years to future! So they can join galactic alliance! HUmanity - nice stuff... Can we use it to even faster killing eachoter? Aliens - ... WHAT?
Please check these AI generated stories before uploading them, this should only be a 10 minute video, but the story was repeated twice!
The person who's the narrator good voice. The dark voice, it's clear well spoken. And it doesn't sound like an Ai cheap suit.
To many repeated lines! 🇺🇸
8:16 *Half-Life flashbacks* Oh shit-
ok
Great story, here's my own stories I've started. kzread.info/dash/bejne/laKhy7aApaS5maw.html
Not very well written.
Repeating yourself does not make for good story telling.
That last piece made no sense
This narrated like it's a chapter in a grade school history book. And the premise would've been more believable if the ship had been multi-generational and the humans, having faced the loss of their planet, learned from their mistakes. Not to mention traveling for years on a ship would've taught them better resource management as well as respect for anothers space
A common problem with these stories is the over dependence on explanations and backstory. The narrative bogs down.
I can see humanity doing this!!! And the aliens sitting there saying " What the Frag is going on???" What???
This story is the best I have read - so far, at least - in this series of stories. The story contains the seed of many more stories dealing with the interactions of AI and humans.it is fertile ground for the imagination. I will add that I was very pleased to come across a story that was not filled with slimy-scaled alien warlords whose razor-sharp talons ripped up the armrests of their chairs. Thank god, there was none of that. Please, more stories like this one! And, it’s almost time to consider a series of paperbacks. My thanks and congratulations!
What you will only post if your paid sad
Maybe I should unscathed
If the Vanguard consists of only four people, then they will not make a difference in the final outcome.
Well done
Another great story! As events happened, I could see them in my mind as if I was actually there.
there is nothing unconventionable about military k9 units. they have been a part of the military longer than horses.
I really like this one😊
Excellent story. I could visualize what was happening in the story what I call my internal screen. It was as if the story was actually happening.
Um....there's no air on The Moon. And where are the cats? Cats love combat! And they are madly territorial. They don't need handlers. Just food and someone to point the way.
This is a very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. Bravo to the Author. To those are confused about the image and the story don't seem to be in synch. The female in the image is the AI Lyra.
Why does the click bait picture never match the story's description?
humans as a peace keeping species? what the bleeding hell are they smoking?!
Apex predator of the known galaxy Humans: Why friend shaped if not friend?
So it’s an intestinal worm.
Until this one, all of these stories have been entertaining and well written. It's very interesting to see that you can get a spectrum of writing out of AI's. I'll be very interested in explanations of what's going on. Different AI's, different prompts, different training. . . . . . . . .
aw puppy i say looking at a deathworld apex predator
Nien not the doggies you gamers will get this saying
Most of these stories on KZread need proofreading before posting. Many repetitions, mispronunciations, weird inflections, etc. make some of these stories hard to listen to. Also, is the alien’s name Zigor, Zagor, Zagar, Zegor, Zygore or what? It keeps changing.
Ok perhaps mars had been terreformed but the moon... Also if.the dogs senses could be that easily enhanced why not the humans? Interesting idea but i think that some aspects may have been overtaken by reality.
They should have gone back to the ship and tried to communicate with the planet before freaking out.
Humans must be different in the ruture no communication just attack?
Thank you😊
Good thing the government did not get involved in this story. The government can mess up a trip to Dairy Queen
My favourite story so far :)
same as the little alien girl.. please fix
The first half is pretty good but the last half is all talk talk talk talk talk talk blah blah blah blah blah blah. But I should just listening to the first part until the rain is over on the attractions
How to turn a two minute story into 36 minutes of repeat rhetoric.
The title has nothing to do with the story!
Good story. Was really nice hearing a heartwarming story. I wonder how Zara got on the ship and crashed on Earth.
Then the Zarixians searched for the source of the xenopathogen. And as the trail of destruction led to the Sol system and then third planet from Sol they discovered a Wuhan laboratory in the country of China had created the virus doing "research" of gain of function was the root of the pathogen. Angered by this discovery and the carelessness of these humans they demanded an explanation but received only denial of any wrong doing and pointed to the American scientist who funded their research, placing the blame on him for his profiteering greediness and his connection a pharma company named Pfizer and their unsuccessful attempt at making a vaccine for the pathogen they had help create the Xarixians decided to annihilate the entire planet to rid the universe of a bunch of lying politicians, ruthless fearmongering Pharmaceutical degenerates and profiteering scumbags.
More woke bs
hello there storyteller very good story man thank you...