It is hard for me to believe that the Aliens were using rope. This in itself seems primitive
@KojoannaКүн бұрын
A good story❤
@ronniebentley5847Күн бұрын
Some of the whineist asses ive ever saw in my life comment in every 1 of these videos. If i were the creator i would kick you off the platform.
@drsadiqshaikh7028Күн бұрын
writer, forget the whole planet is on their herb ... just produce a sensation unnecessarily to find the herb ...
@davescheer5038Күн бұрын
🤔Hummm, “earthling vet bill “ ,
@Kentucky9212 күн бұрын
I was waiting on a move that made the hydra turn into Godzilla
@robertsebacher442 күн бұрын
WOKE preachy AI BS.
@cA7up4 күн бұрын
A pair of intergalactic hotties makes for a cosmic cacophony of trouble 😮😅
@rusco19485 күн бұрын
GREAT VIDEO
@charles_w.parker_jr.61196 күн бұрын
Core = CORP
@lisanidog81786 күн бұрын
What’s the delivery system! Shot? I.V.? Patch? Pill?
@lisanidog81786 күн бұрын
Now will they ask the Vet to do their taxes?
@lisanidog81786 күн бұрын
But will she get paid?
@lisanidog81786 күн бұрын
People have become too lazy letting an A.I. ‘write’ this. And the picture doesn’t match the description.
@gprivat812_my_selection67 күн бұрын
5:00 Not at all edited in an intelligent manner! Pls. do a better job next time!
@zhpara16 күн бұрын
Thanks for the great content, I learned a lot! Already subscribed, liked, and commented. Your channel is really great! I am also working hard to learn how to write audio novels. I hope you can help recommend my channel so that more people can discover it.
@jeanniecorn263225 күн бұрын
why we never none the end of this one .
@matix125625 күн бұрын
cool story. Kinda sad. Huamnity just "win" battle of New terra. More scary would be if aliens coaliton win... And they hummanity.. just NUKE THIER OWN PLANET, to have last word. and make aliens force destroyed by this with bilions of humans. And then alliens was like -> "THEY JUST DESTROY WHOLE PLANET... KILL BILIONS OF THIER OWN... JUST TO DONT GIVE US A WIN... THEY KILL THEMSELF... TO DONT LOOSE... "
@matix125625 күн бұрын
Aliens - lets give hummanity super technlogy which push thier advance to 200 years to future! So they can join galactic alliance! HUmanity - nice stuff... Can we use it to even faster killing eachoter? Aliens - ... WHAT?
@legion16226 күн бұрын
Please check these AI generated stories before uploading them, this should only be a 10 minute video, but the story was repeated twice!
@user-lg7vx6xp1o26 күн бұрын
The person who's the narrator good voice. The dark voice, it's clear well spoken. And it doesn't sound like an Ai cheap suit.
@nomerc360827 күн бұрын
To many repeated lines! 🇺🇸
@Enderwave2229 күн бұрын
8:16 *Half-Life flashbacks* Oh shit-
@jeanniecorn2632Ай бұрын
ok
@SciFiStoriesBeyondАй бұрын
Great story, here's my own stories I've started. kzread.info/dash/bejne/laKhy7aApaS5maw.html
@larryforet6271Ай бұрын
Not very well written.
@broongАй бұрын
Repeating yourself does not make for good story telling.
@starswfanАй бұрын
That last piece made no sense
@nerd1858Ай бұрын
This narrated like it's a chapter in a grade school history book. And the premise would've been more believable if the ship had been multi-generational and the humans, having faced the loss of their planet, learned from their mistakes. Not to mention traveling for years on a ship would've taught them better resource management as well as respect for anothers space
@alanmacificationАй бұрын
A common problem with these stories is the over dependence on explanations and backstory. The narrative bogs down.
@deforesttappan6478Ай бұрын
I can see humanity doing this!!! And the aliens sitting there saying " What the Frag is going on???" What???
@andrewmacfarland5253Ай бұрын
This story is the best I have read - so far, at least - in this series of stories. The story contains the seed of many more stories dealing with the interactions of AI and humans.it is fertile ground for the imagination. I will add that I was very pleased to come across a story that was not filled with slimy-scaled alien warlords whose razor-sharp talons ripped up the armrests of their chairs. Thank god, there was none of that. Please, more stories like this one! And, it’s almost time to consider a series of paperbacks. My thanks and congratulations!
@bernievandyne4444Ай бұрын
What you will only post if your paid sad
@bernievandyne4444Ай бұрын
Maybe I should unscathed
@RolandLytle-lw3qrАй бұрын
If the Vanguard consists of only four people, then they will not make a difference in the final outcome.
@johnwright5525Ай бұрын
Well done
@cuchulainnmurphy4526Ай бұрын
Another great story! As events happened, I could see them in my mind as if I was actually there.
@AlexMaurin-qx2xbАй бұрын
there is nothing unconventionable about military k9 units. they have been a part of the military longer than horses.
@eddiesims-bey5251Ай бұрын
I really like this one😊
@cuchulainnmurphy4526Ай бұрын
Excellent story. I could visualize what was happening in the story what I call my internal screen. It was as if the story was actually happening.
@SandraNelson063Ай бұрын
Um....there's no air on The Moon. And where are the cats? Cats love combat! And they are madly territorial. They don't need handlers. Just food and someone to point the way.
@francisvantuyleАй бұрын
This is a very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. Bravo to the Author. To those are confused about the image and the story don't seem to be in synch. The female in the image is the AI Lyra.
@marthapalermo1914Ай бұрын
Why does the click bait picture never match the story's description?
@JackFrost008Ай бұрын
humans as a peace keeping species? what the bleeding hell are they smoking?!
@BostonDodgeGuyАй бұрын
Apex predator of the known galaxy Humans: Why friend shaped if not friend?
@BastardNation21Ай бұрын
So it’s an intestinal worm.
@silaskelly604Ай бұрын
Until this one, all of these stories have been entertaining and well written. It's very interesting to see that you can get a spectrum of writing out of AI's. I'll be very interested in explanations of what's going on. Different AI's, different prompts, different training. . . . . . . . .
@MoonNightAriaАй бұрын
aw puppy i say looking at a deathworld apex predator
@markpica1416Ай бұрын
Nien not the doggies you gamers will get this saying
@robo08ifyАй бұрын
Most of these stories on KZread need proofreading before posting. Many repetitions, mispronunciations, weird inflections, etc. make some of these stories hard to listen to. Also, is the alien’s name Zigor, Zagor, Zagar, Zegor, Zygore or what? It keeps changing.
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It is hard for me to believe that the Aliens were using rope. This in itself seems primitive
A good story❤
Some of the whineist asses ive ever saw in my life comment in every 1 of these videos. If i were the creator i would kick you off the platform.
writer, forget the whole planet is on their herb ... just produce a sensation unnecessarily to find the herb ...
🤔Hummm, “earthling vet bill “ ,
I was waiting on a move that made the hydra turn into Godzilla
WOKE preachy AI BS.
A pair of intergalactic hotties makes for a cosmic cacophony of trouble 😮😅
GREAT VIDEO
Core = CORP
What’s the delivery system! Shot? I.V.? Patch? Pill?
Now will they ask the Vet to do their taxes?
But will she get paid?
People have become too lazy letting an A.I. ‘write’ this. And the picture doesn’t match the description.
5:00 Not at all edited in an intelligent manner! Pls. do a better job next time!
Thanks for the great content, I learned a lot! Already subscribed, liked, and commented. Your channel is really great! I am also working hard to learn how to write audio novels. I hope you can help recommend my channel so that more people can discover it.
why we never none the end of this one .
cool story. Kinda sad. Huamnity just "win" battle of New terra. More scary would be if aliens coaliton win... And they hummanity.. just NUKE THIER OWN PLANET, to have last word. and make aliens force destroyed by this with bilions of humans. And then alliens was like -> "THEY JUST DESTROY WHOLE PLANET... KILL BILIONS OF THIER OWN... JUST TO DONT GIVE US A WIN... THEY KILL THEMSELF... TO DONT LOOSE... "
Aliens - lets give hummanity super technlogy which push thier advance to 200 years to future! So they can join galactic alliance! HUmanity - nice stuff... Can we use it to even faster killing eachoter? Aliens - ... WHAT?
Please check these AI generated stories before uploading them, this should only be a 10 minute video, but the story was repeated twice!
The person who's the narrator good voice. The dark voice, it's clear well spoken. And it doesn't sound like an Ai cheap suit.
To many repeated lines! 🇺🇸
8:16 *Half-Life flashbacks* Oh shit-
ok
Great story, here's my own stories I've started. kzread.info/dash/bejne/laKhy7aApaS5maw.html
Not very well written.
Repeating yourself does not make for good story telling.
That last piece made no sense
This narrated like it's a chapter in a grade school history book. And the premise would've been more believable if the ship had been multi-generational and the humans, having faced the loss of their planet, learned from their mistakes. Not to mention traveling for years on a ship would've taught them better resource management as well as respect for anothers space
A common problem with these stories is the over dependence on explanations and backstory. The narrative bogs down.
I can see humanity doing this!!! And the aliens sitting there saying " What the Frag is going on???" What???
This story is the best I have read - so far, at least - in this series of stories. The story contains the seed of many more stories dealing with the interactions of AI and humans.it is fertile ground for the imagination. I will add that I was very pleased to come across a story that was not filled with slimy-scaled alien warlords whose razor-sharp talons ripped up the armrests of their chairs. Thank god, there was none of that. Please, more stories like this one! And, it’s almost time to consider a series of paperbacks. My thanks and congratulations!
What you will only post if your paid sad
Maybe I should unscathed
If the Vanguard consists of only four people, then they will not make a difference in the final outcome.
Well done
Another great story! As events happened, I could see them in my mind as if I was actually there.
there is nothing unconventionable about military k9 units. they have been a part of the military longer than horses.
I really like this one😊
Excellent story. I could visualize what was happening in the story what I call my internal screen. It was as if the story was actually happening.
Um....there's no air on The Moon. And where are the cats? Cats love combat! And they are madly territorial. They don't need handlers. Just food and someone to point the way.
This is a very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. Bravo to the Author. To those are confused about the image and the story don't seem to be in synch. The female in the image is the AI Lyra.
Why does the click bait picture never match the story's description?
humans as a peace keeping species? what the bleeding hell are they smoking?!
Apex predator of the known galaxy Humans: Why friend shaped if not friend?
So it’s an intestinal worm.
Until this one, all of these stories have been entertaining and well written. It's very interesting to see that you can get a spectrum of writing out of AI's. I'll be very interested in explanations of what's going on. Different AI's, different prompts, different training. . . . . . . . .
aw puppy i say looking at a deathworld apex predator
Nien not the doggies you gamers will get this saying
Most of these stories on KZread need proofreading before posting. Many repetitions, mispronunciations, weird inflections, etc. make some of these stories hard to listen to. Also, is the alien’s name Zigor, Zagor, Zagar, Zegor, Zygore or what? It keeps changing.