Why the 5 Room Dungeon Falls Short!

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The five room dungeon is a great concept for narrative dungeon design for D&D, but what if we could extrapolate it onto other storytelling devices and further improve the toolkit the five room dungeon has to offer!?

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  • @Stray7
    @Stray72 жыл бұрын

    The 5RD assumes that the the dungeon has been set up in advance...that the party is heading to the dungeon on purpose, and thus that any set-up elements have already been established. The goal of the 5RD is to create a minimalist flowchart for a session's worth of content in an easy-to-build way. I do think including a part for the adventure set-up would aid the 5RD, but as you say, the dungeon entrance marks a boundary. It only concerns itself with what's actually IN the dungeon, and not the bits that lead the party TO the dungeon. It's an adventure site, not a complete adventure.

  • @Bluecho4

    @Bluecho4

    2 жыл бұрын

    It's especially useful as advice for new adventure designers - as in, those create adventure modules - because no matter how much context a designer might bake into their module, it's ultimately up to the DM to slot the adventure into their campaign in a way that makes sense _for them._ You can't know what brings the party to the dungeon, because that's up to the DM and the Players in the moment. You, as budding adventure designer, can't control for that. What you can control is the layout of the dungeon itself and what you populate it with. DMs reading your adventure are much more likely to take what you've put in, if it's part of the "meat" of the module. THAT is what the 5RD system focuses on: making a compelling enough dungeon itself, such that DMs will want to run it as is. Or to use that basic framework as a scaffold for their own ideas, while needing to do as little work of their own.

  • @deathbare5306

    @deathbare5306

    2 жыл бұрын

    Another consideration is the 5 room D can be a literal dungeon, but it’s really just 5 scenes that link together. Where they happen is not as important provided they link.

  • @DocEonChannel

    @DocEonChannel

    2 жыл бұрын

    Yeah, this video is really solving a problem that doesn't exist. ;)

  • @Vanye111

    @Vanye111

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@DocEonChannel only been watching a few weeks, but this isn't the first time I've had this same thought.

  • @hugofontes5708

    @hugofontes5708

    2 жыл бұрын

    dungeons themselves are not adventures and the 5RD doesn't have built-in purpose Not sure why that ever was in question here

  • @therealdoomsage
    @therealdoomsage2 жыл бұрын

    Baron Upside-down-Eyes is my favourite support character so far. What an effective character foil!

  • @srqminipainter

    @srqminipainter

    2 жыл бұрын

    Baron must be a Miniac fan.

  • @GLu-tb1pb
    @GLu-tb1pb2 жыл бұрын

    The flow charts went by fast, so here is my note on them. Rooster: e-> s-> P,B, or R After the initial entrance and setback, you have three rooms which present the puzzle, the big battle, and the reward. It makes sense as a "regular enemy" dungeon since an actual person would likely keep their valuables close to themselves, and have some lore-related tool next to them as well. The three choices makes it more interesting than a regular dungeon. The creator himself notes: "What if the setback mis-directs heroes toward the Puzzle, then the Boss circles around and attacks them from behind? And what if the passage to the Reward is a secret passage that the heroes miss?" Cross: E at the center, SPBR available anywhere. This is interesting since it's very unlikely a big boss would be easily encountered, therefore is more like a sandbox. This one allows you to take one step in any direction, thus being a versatile "choose your own adventure". I think one good example of this is Curse of Strahd where you select your decisions and random B(attles) may occur.

  • @HenkkaArtGames
    @HenkkaArtGames2 жыл бұрын

    Technically there was no plot hook for Vader originally. They figured the twist out when writing Empire. Before that, the story was that Vader was just the bad guy Sith lord and Anakin Skywalker was indeed killed by him. But I guess it's even more appropriate for DnD sinde a lot of plot elements are born out of player decisions and them asking questions about things and the DM thinking to themselves "Well, he wasn't the bad guy's son but now that you think he is, he totally is!".

  • @Dylan_Platt

    @Dylan_Platt

    Жыл бұрын

    I mean, "Vader" literally means "father" in Dutch, so

  • @adamdorris7104

    @adamdorris7104

    Жыл бұрын

    @@Dylan_Platt yeah, but that was probably more 'father of darkness' and as likely gave them the idea as anything.

  • @wwade7226
    @wwade72262 жыл бұрын

    I use a similar "Act 1, 2 and 3" formula for my short one shots, but very condensed. I try to make each act about 1 hour. They work out great and players love them. The setup, the challenge, and the finale. There are usually 3 parts to the "dungeon" or encounter. A puzzle, a fight and the final battle, not always necessarily in that order. Sometimes, I put the BBEG first, then the players have to escape with the "treasure".

  • @mjolasgard2533
    @mjolasgard25332 жыл бұрын

    I'm not sure you've read the 5 room dungeon document you've shown by Johnn Four. He makes very similar points and explains how to foreshadow in his book. And while you're right about a narrative arc being often in three arcs, RPGs are not novels. They don't need to follow the same narrative function. Forcing that idea is tantamount to jamming the players down a single series of linear encounters to a conclusion. The 5RD is a simplistic design philosophy made to be adapted - not the be all and end all answer to making games. Do what works for your table.

  • @AsciiKing

    @AsciiKing

    2 жыл бұрын

    He is saying the 5 room dungeon assumes the setup, but would be better if stated directly. The stuff that happens before the dungeon can be an important part of the dungeon.

  • @mjolasgard2533

    @mjolasgard2533

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@AsciiKing Yeah - totally agree. But that's pretty much what the book says too. You can use the five-room dungeon fractally. Each section has 5 micro-challenges within it. Etc. I don't have a hard-on for five-room dungeons or anything, i just think that comparing a narrative arc for a story to how an rpg plays out is somewhat disingenous, and to imply that 5RD won't get you through a session if you need it too is unfair too. Idk. I've never seen someone ditch the 'mission giving npc' before, thats all.

  • @SeraphsWitness

    @SeraphsWitness

    2 жыл бұрын

    They don't have to be novels. They're stories. You don't get exempt from the rules of storytelling just because you're in an RPG.

  • @sapientmuffin

    @sapientmuffin

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@SeraphsWitness Actually, you do? You are? It's more by default, not choice. Players don't make decisions based on narrative frameworks, they make decisions based on... well, all kinds of factors. (Some might make decisions based on narrative, but not necessarily in a "3-act structure" or broad, narrative format type of way.) The point is, they make decisions, irrespective of things like plot, narrative structure, and so on. RPGs are stories like going out and doing something *adventurous* is a story. Things happen as a result of interesting situations/circumstances meeting interesting character decisions meeting chance, and a story to tell develops as a result. RPGs aren't written beforehand, right? They get written in play. We play to find out what happens. This is true even in a "linear" campaign. Players can rock even the most sturdy and restrictive railroads off the tracks, easy. And that's a good thing, because RPGs excel at creating stories as a result of Player decisions, not following some predetermined structure like it's a play or movie. TL;DR: RPGs don't make movie stories, they make campfire stories you tell to your buddies like, "remember that one time...." The GM isn't a storyteller. The Players aren't in a pre-determined plot. There are different types of stories, RPGs (typically) aren't following the same rules as those told in set-in-stone, written media. (Some RPGs specifically *do* do that, but that's a different deal. They also do that in a very freeform way, at the mercy of Player decisions, which is good because, again, we aren't acting out a play here.)

  • @SeraphsWitness

    @SeraphsWitness

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@sapientmuffin way too long. Condense your thoughts if you want me to read. You can ignore the structure if you want, but your game will have a subpar narrative, period. Some people dont care about story, that's fine. But if you do, you can't write a crappy one and use "its an RPG" as an excuse.

  • @jammassterflash9636
    @jammassterflash96362 жыл бұрын

    Extremely coincidentally, I just came across the 5RD concept a few days ago, in my fledgling DM career. In truth, I think the 5RD and the three-act story structure work in conjunction, with each supporting a need that the other doesn't supply. The three act structure provides the basic lay-out of how any story is best designed, but it doesn't tell you anything about what that story should be. 5RD gives you a blueprint for how to link a cohesive story together, which helps tremendously with content creation, but it will fall flat, if you don't also incorporate the three-act structure.

  • @erikbailey2525
    @erikbailey25252 жыл бұрын

    This was a fantastic breakdown! Essentially making it a 3 Act 7 Room Dungeon: Act 1 - Setup (setting/reinforcing the status quo) - Quest Hook/Inciting Incident Act 2 - Entrance/Guardian - Puzzle/RP - Trick/Setback - Battle/Climax Act 3 - Reward/Plot Twist/Revelation

  • @TheDrewjameson
    @TheDrewjameson2 жыл бұрын

    This is an interesting analysis of how to make a story-based campaign satisfying according to (western) narrative structure. But not all dungeon crawls have to be based on a story. A lot of players enjoy rpgs more like a board game, where the story can be only vaguely implied and the experience is still satisfying.

  • @ricardomartins3653
    @ricardomartins36532 жыл бұрын

    Used car Salesmen got nothing on that smile on the thumbnail!!

  • @theargawalathing
    @theargawalathing2 жыл бұрын

    Just watched a writing/plot video about how establishing the setup or "promise" is the key in managing expectations. There needs to be some throughline from start to climax, even if it's up to the players on how to resolve everything.

  • @MagizardInternet

    @MagizardInternet

    2 жыл бұрын

    Care to share the video?

  • @theargawalathing

    @theargawalathing

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@MagizardInternet kzread.info/dash/bejne/nKZ90cmcmJiqcrg.html It's somewhat in the video for the specific topic, but it was a good listen all the way

  • @TonyLS9A

    @TonyLS9A

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@MagizardInternet not the original poster but look up any Three Act structure video. Save the Cat beats or other similar provide additional story beats.

  • @krelraz5486
    @krelraz54864 ай бұрын

    3:34 What?! The 5-room dungeon lines up perfectly with the 3-act structure that you laid out. It's just that the first 2 rooms aren't necessarily in the dungeon. Entry is the setup you get to see what the adventure will be about. The festival and burning effigy were the entry. Incident is what tells the story and you really get a purpose to the dungeon. The incident was the goblin attack. Plot twist is a setback. The king twist is the setback. The climax is most often the final battle. Then you have the final battle with the king. The resolution is the reward. You say you disagree then proceed to make an argument for the 5 room dungeon.

  • @greystorm9974
    @greystorm99742 жыл бұрын

    Just learned about it, 2 weeks ago... Didn't know it was well known

  • @felicien93

    @felicien93

    2 жыл бұрын

    Same! I learned about it 2 weeks ago and used it for the following session. It was awesome.

  • @fobmon19
    @fobmon192 жыл бұрын

    I love your content. Please keep it coming! Incredibly concise and informative.

  • @starwars90001
    @starwars900012 жыл бұрын

    These videoes are helpful for my video game too, learning dungeon design helps me make computer games better.

  • @AgranakStudios
    @AgranakStudios2 жыл бұрын

    Great video! I love the layout. I've used the 5 Room Dungeon method to some success but you are for sure right about the set for substance! Great stuff!!!

  • @MrContrapicado
    @MrContrapicado5 ай бұрын

    I never thought of this limitation of the method but now that I'm doing more research for a fanzine and doing more of those 5rd I get what you say. And your solution is a great one. Thanks a lot!

  • @custardpanda6209
    @custardpanda62092 жыл бұрын

    Awesome advice as always, presented clearly and pragmatically. Thank you Baron!!!

  • @JasonKingMonkey
    @JasonKingMonkey2 жыл бұрын

    Yeah there's never been any suggestion that 5RD dealt with Act 1.

  • @ajdynon
    @ajdynon16 күн бұрын

    When I first heard of the five room dungeon, I thought of it as a variation on the "five act structure" (Setup, rising action, complication, climax and denouement). And now I'm wondering what an RPG following the Asian "Ki-Sho-Ten-Ketsu" structure would be like.

  • @RoseKindred
    @RoseKindred2 жыл бұрын

    Thank you for this. I read "Dungeon Core" and "LitRPG" books and I have noticed MANY authors use the same pattern, the "5 room dungeon" design you described for their first story. Typically a "Birthing" of the core, digging out, and realizing they have to protect themselves against a dire threat. Then the POV typically switches to a select or "chosen" dungeon party and they face the obstacles within the "5-room" design. Typically it starts with a grand entrance, light defenders, a puzzle/trap, a setback or a "time out" for the party. Then the action reaches a peak in some grand boss fight that is typically a last stand, and the reward. The reward may be being spared by the party or them being bought off as a literal reward, or the reward goes to the core and they gain a huge boon. It was weird how so many new (to me) authors followed a similar formal as something I have already read. Sure, they could all be copying a few authors but this explains it to a more rational point to me.

  • @dungeonstorytime3807
    @dungeonstorytime38072 жыл бұрын

    I just posted my first video to trying to articulate that stories do not "emerge" as naturally during D&D as many are claiming in the comments here. So glad to see other content creators working toward better games and better stories at our tables. Thank you for this video!

  • @ChristnThms
    @ChristnThms2 жыл бұрын

    While I don't have any objections to any of your points, I do think they're solving a problem that doesn't exist, and ignoring the far greater challenges. The problem that doesn't exist is players who are willing participants being dissatisfied with the how and why of a mission. With the exception of the edgelord, who will be professionally dissatisfied with everything, 99% of all players are totally happy to thrash a couple goblins and a bugbear to save the princess. They don't really care about plot holes. The far greater challenge for any DM is to get the party to recognize the plot hook for what it is, and not go off chasing something random because they misunderstood the significance of something. The deeper and more subtle the plot structure, the more likely things go sideways. If you want the party to go to the cave and get the shiny thing, an NPC that literally runs up and directly asks for that exact thing is the most likely way to get them to do that. Everything you do to "improve the story" increases the chance that they never even see the cave. I really like your insights and all. I just think you're talking about upgrading the radio on an old truck that often doesn't even start.

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    i have a script that talks about the problem you discuss in this comment, about how to shuffle macguffins around to get players back on track when they go in wild, random, directions.

  • @shaneintheuk2026

    @shaneintheuk2026

    2 жыл бұрын

    In addition to ’redirecting’ players back on track I think deeper stories become increasingly important for longer campaigns and experienced players. For quick sessions and groups that frequently change I think you’re right but as time goes by and a group stays stable, chopping up goblins starts to pale.

  • @ChristnThms

    @ChristnThms

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@shaneintheuk2026 I understand that theory, and it looks good on paper. But in practice, I find the exact opposite to be true. Every time I find a table with a "deep and meaningful story, and a world to really explore," I also find a group with no direction, chasing cats willy-nilly, and a DM who's far more interested in the story he's creating in spite of the characters, than in what the characters are engaged with. D&D evolved out of war games. It's true that the story element has taken on a much greater importance over the years, but not always as an improvement. If you can't ask each player in private, what the current goal is, and get a short, direct answer from each member that matches each other, then you don't have a "group" and your depth of story is taking away from the game. The blunt approach isn't supposed to match the story depth. It's purpose is to get everyone facing the same direction, working towards the same goal, sharing in the same victory (hopefully).

  • @macarraodeshanghai

    @macarraodeshanghai

    2 жыл бұрын

    I agree with this, especially in rpg events where time is short, the setup need to be made off scene, so the players don't wander around the town too long before getting in the dungeon. The 5RD is a guide to do dungeons, not adventures, you should add a setup, but it doesn't necessarily need to be entire scenes, in most cases you would end with material for another session just getting into the dungeon, and It can be made like a 5RD. - entrance (setup at town) - puzzle (how do we get into the dungeon?) - seatback (troubles while traveling to the dungeon) - battle (with an significative enemy from the plot, maybe the ones they are tracking to the dungeon) - reward (the party find the dungeon)

  • @josephbradshaw6985
    @josephbradshaw69852 жыл бұрын

    I always have a couple 5 room randoms for when my players go off the rails, into places I have uncharted.

  • @Zertryx
    @Zertryx2 жыл бұрын

    I actually use the "5RD" as a concept for creating an adventure more than i do for creating literal dungeons, as it always felt kinda natural to do so. breaking it down and comparing it to the 3 acts now makes sense why it felt that way. I always assumed the setup part was on us DM's anyways so i never really thought of that As "missing" however this is still a great video for explaining why its good to have that for others who might not know or feel that way. Keep up the good work! always enjoy seeing a video from you =]

  • @nathanrodic6294
    @nathanrodic62942 жыл бұрын

    I recently discovered your channel and I'm so glad I did. You have a fresh perspective with great ideas, and your presentation is so concise, no fluffing around. Keep up the amazing work

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    Yay, thank you!

  • @jimhavoc
    @jimhavoc2 жыл бұрын

    Well done. Not only do you identify a problem, you offer a solution. This is something missed by many. It's easy to point out what's wrong, it takes thought to come up with an answer.

  • @magispitt
    @magispitt2 жыл бұрын

    @3:09 I don’t think the subtitles are quite right unless I’ve misheard something - the subtitles say “the climax explodes” but it sounds more like “the climax resolves”

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    I write a script and then riff sometimes while recording

  • @RIVERSRPGChannel
    @RIVERSRPGChannel2 жыл бұрын

    I’ve never heard of this I learned something new I kinda do this in my sessions

  • @WouldbeSage
    @WouldbeSage2 жыл бұрын

    I like the example you give, but am having trouble abstracting a formula I would use when setting up an adventure. What I love about 5RD is how well it works and is easy to apply. Can you distill a similar formula here? I guess it's something like... foreshadow your puzzle and setback prior to the actual dungeon...?

  • @Bene_Singularis
    @Bene_Singularis2 жыл бұрын

    That's your best kind of videos. Efficient, intelligent, so useful. Thank you very much for the knowledge and tips. I need to rewatch that a couple times to study it.

  • @Giantstomp
    @Giantstomp2 жыл бұрын

    The 5 room dungeon was never meant to be a mini-campaign, thusly it doesn't have what you say is missing because the 5 room dungeon is meant more like filler for quick dungeons or to be inserted into your already ongoing story. The 5 room dungeon assumes you already have this information, or you don't need it because you're simply doing a dungeon crawl for the sake of a dungeon crawl.

  • @mattpace1026

    @mattpace1026

    2 жыл бұрын

    He doesn't understand that. He's just here to brag about how (to him) he's the greatest GM of all time, and everyone else is an idiot.

  • @matto2971
    @matto29712 ай бұрын

    Great video. Thanks.

  • @colonelkilling2425
    @colonelkilling24252 жыл бұрын

    Great video, great content!

  • @ismirdochegal4804
    @ismirdochegal48045 ай бұрын

    [06:17] Please tell me more of this King Sir Cophagus und why he is so much-hated.

  • @richiecastle460
    @richiecastle4602 жыл бұрын

    Another well described and executed video.

  • @tomydrazenovic7556
    @tomydrazenovic75562 жыл бұрын

    Thanks for contributing to Game Mastering learning and development. We are definitely fans of Baron De Ropp. We do think there is a strong need to use a different approach to the 3-act perspective when it comes to TTRPGs. As basic tools, the 3-act and the 5-room do great. It would be awesome to have some more discussions on this.

  • @SarahWheeleeTravels
    @SarahWheeleeTravels Жыл бұрын

    incredibly helpful

  • @renanayoub8479
    @renanayoub84792 жыл бұрын

    Nice tips!

  • @peterevans6661
    @peterevans6661 Жыл бұрын

    Awesome. Very useful.

  • @ericweidus670
    @ericweidus6702 жыл бұрын

    I see what you did there. Well played sir.

  • @RyuuKageDesu
    @RyuuKageDesu2 жыл бұрын

    In my current game, nearly everything is random, meaning that the five room, or there about, dungeon is a great fit. What we have been doing at my table is placing the missing act at the end, allowing the players to figure out how the world fits with this new part. This doesn't go against your message, but backs it up.

  • @BlitzerkidSix
    @BlitzerkidSix2 жыл бұрын

    As the author of Mirimas Stormborn the Self-Proclaimed Sea Elf, The Musical Misadventures of the Minotaur Lords, The Berzerker's Curse, and Castlevania Ripoff, I can confidently assure you that 80+% of this elaborate storytelling will stay unexplored, and you should only bother with it if you personally enjoy it.

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    The trick is learning what to actually prepare. This is just five bullet points on a sticky note.

  • @ChrisHeinking
    @ChrisHeinking2 жыл бұрын

    Did you get the upside down glasses, funny voice bit from Miniac? He does that exact thing.

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    yep!

  • @sandymills.27
    @sandymills.272 жыл бұрын

    Do you think you could make a playlist of all of your videos

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    I suppose I could!

  • @dndshorts2750

    @dndshorts2750

    2 жыл бұрын

    Just FYI in case you don't know, you can create the playlist as well. You don't have to be the author of a video to add them to a playlist.

  • @BlackJar72
    @BlackJar722 жыл бұрын

    Meanwhile I'm using a 302 room dungeon focused on treasure hunting.

  • @python27au
    @python27au Жыл бұрын

    I don’t see the dungeon as being “the story” with plots etc., i see it as more of a situation. Maybe there is something connecting the dungeon to a greater plot but whether the PCs understand that or not is irrelevant. The story from the players perspective is how their characters interact with the world and the choices they make. For example the party enters a dungeon overcome/evade the orcs lairing in it and walk off with a treasure. In the treasure is a valuable item belonging to a powerful npc so now the party is plagued by bandits and assassins trying to get it back because its needed for some evil purpose. The players will only find this out if they capture and question an adversary. If i have an overriding plot then i like to construct it as if the players weren’t there, then the players come along and throw spanners into the bad guys plans, and possibly never find out that they just prevented the return of the great old ones or something. The dungeons are the same, they are a situation that the players can explore and overcome in their own way. Instead of deciphering the ancient script, killing the guardians and unlocking the vault to get the key to the ancient crypt they teleport past it or use some other clever magic trick to take a short cut. Or maybe they were supposed to use a scroll to gain access to something but they’re too stingy/stupid and kill half the party blundering into traps and fighting hoards of monsters. Or maybe they admit defeat and go off to do something else. It doesn’t matter because they are not the centre of the universe, and if the old ones come into the world then there’ll be more options for them to blunder their way through.

  • @whitemansucks
    @whitemansucks2 жыл бұрын

    The 5-room is short because each hero sequence has 6 short term goals; are 18-21 hero goals in three acts.

  • @b0xf0x13

    @b0xf0x13

    2 жыл бұрын

    What do you mean by hero sequence, Mac? That sounds interesting.

  • @kalleendo7577
    @kalleendo75772 жыл бұрын

    Awesome!

  • @greystorm9974
    @greystorm99742 жыл бұрын

    Hehe, this is actually exactly how I fixed Tomb of Annihilation

  • @nimz8521
    @nimz85212 жыл бұрын

    Question for the crowd... I'm playing in a campaign with a first time dungeon master. It's not going well. They're very excited about the world but haven't read the rules and don't think things through. Some examples; Players started with a profession and between 1000 and 10,000 gold starting money. (I'm not sure why they thought this was a good idea as it makes low level loot meaningless) Opening sessions were spent playing other characters in an on-rails manner (Also not sure why, even players that tried to suicide out just respawned. Also, not a great sign that some of our players tried suiciding out in the first session) Monster with crazy immunities, like a Will-o-wisp thing that was immune to slashing/piercing/bludgeoning from any source including magic. So fighters/rogues etc were only able to soak damage. The list could go on with random class debuffs, odd quest structure etc. Anyways, I want to help them build this into something playable, but get our group doing something fun in the meantime. How would I phrase that?

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    Show your dungeon master this comment

  • @tuomasronnberg5244
    @tuomasronnberg52442 жыл бұрын

    >"storytelling disaster" >flashes new star wars kek

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    Thank you for understanding my extremely dry humor.

  • @AsciiKing
    @AsciiKing2 жыл бұрын

    Brilliant

  • @Yerflua
    @Yerflua2 жыл бұрын

    4:46 - Yeah, bad example I'm afraid, respectfully this is imposing "it was all planned" onto something that was actually improvised. If ANH+ESB together follow a three act structure, it's a Bob Ross happy accident. ANH didn't intentionally set up anything so far as Vader being Luke's father is concerned. Vader being Luke's father was only introduced by the writer of ESB, Lawrence Kasdan, who had nothing to do with ANH. Yes, Lucas agreed to it, but it wasn't planned from the start. Vader having killed Luke's father in ANH was originally flat-out truth, written to give Luke a personal reason to hate Darth Vader and thus add a personal enmity between them. Remember, ANH was written by George Lucas as a one-off, he had no idea whether he'd get a sequel to ANH when he first made it -- as testified to by pretty much anyone who worked on ANH other than Lucas, who regularly changes his story about what was "intended" or not with the Star Wars films. For example, around the time ROTJ was released Lucas would regularly and blithely say that Star Wars was always a story about "a brother and a sister", which makes certain scenes in ESB pretty damn awkward to watch, and makes it kind of hard to believe George on that one. And sadly, explaining ESB's plot twist was almost as awkward as Luke and Leia being brother and sister, since then Obi-Wan Kenobi had to (hilariously) resort to postmodernism from the netherworld to not look like an outright psychopath.

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    considering the plot twist was established while the story was mid flight is specifically why this is a FANTASTIC example for D&D, a game specifically designed around improv.

  • @Yerflua

    @Yerflua

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@DungeonMasterpiece Agreed!

  • @sebbychou
    @sebbychou2 жыл бұрын

    What's the Flying V?

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    enter the dungeon. two doors. each door takes you to two rooms in order. the four rooms don't connect.

  • @sebbychou

    @sebbychou

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@DungeonMasterpiece Thanks!

  • @briangronberg6507
    @briangronberg65072 жыл бұрын

    Do you count the Baltic German Sylvester Wilhelm Gotthard von der Ropp, Baron Daudzegir, as an ancestor?

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    He's my greatgrandpa

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    Also, he's not Prussian. He's Baltic German.

  • @briangronberg6507

    @briangronberg6507

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@DungeonMasterpiece, my apologies for the error and thank you for the correction. That’s also remarkable!

  • @briangronberg6507

    @briangronberg6507

    2 жыл бұрын

    Fixed.

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@briangronberg6507 how do you know of him?

  • @JasonFuhrman
    @JasonFuhrman2 жыл бұрын

    As a writer, your basis of the three act structure is a little antiquated, which could hinder the rest of your design. I prefer four acts, with a midpoint in the center to send the protagonist tumbling into the third act for the ultimate low point. Then they are forced to approach the problem in a new way to ultimately succeed or fail in act four. Maybe I'm splitting hairs but the midpoint and low point are extremely important in storytelling, and I feel they may add more interest to dungeon design. Check out Adam Skelter's channel, the art of story.

  • @alexp.4270

    @alexp.4270

    2 жыл бұрын

    My only counter argument is that, in my experience, players only get through three or so encounters a session. For the purpose of planning out single session adventures or scenarios, the three act structure works great to help create a solid session.

  • @JasonFuhrman

    @JasonFuhrman

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@alexp.4270 I hear you but still argue he's missing a crucial part of story structure. He's completely missing the low point or the "all is lost moment." It's evident in his graph which is all rising action, whereas there are more ups and downs in a story, which could lead to more twists and turns in dungeon design. Before I started studying story structure I always wondered why act 2 was this giant chunk, until people more inventive than me fixed it by dividing it into two chunks by the midpoint. You can still have three sessions. I don't think each act needs to be a session though, because the final act would be pretty boring if using his structure.

  • @jasonreid9267

    @jasonreid9267

    2 жыл бұрын

    Three act structure, four act structure, six act structure...no matter how many acts you want to break act 2 into, the point of this video is that you shouldn't skip act 1.

  • @JasonFuhrman

    @JasonFuhrman

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@jasonreid9267 sure, but I wanted to point out the flaw in the overall structure regarding storytelling, because I think breaking it down further to more digestible chunks opens up even more possibilities.

  • @vinspad3

    @vinspad3

    2 жыл бұрын

    Jason, the low moment you're looking for is the setback. That's 20% of the 5RD. 20% of your dungeon is focused on 'loss.' Perhaps it wasn't explained as clearly? Cut it up however you'd like, but the 5RD and 3 Act Play as an analogy do what you're proposing.

  • @Markleford
    @Markleford Жыл бұрын

    The vaunted "three act structure" is BS that people overlay on things as a stab at "depth", or even legitimacy. The fact that it's so simple makes it work for practically anything by saying "see, it's got a beginning, a middle, and an end!" or "every story has a setup, reaction, and resolution!"

  • @andrewhaldenby4949
    @andrewhaldenby49492 жыл бұрын

    Great video, always been suspicious of the five room lol

  • @dmpunks
    @dmpunks2 жыл бұрын

    Or, "How to tell other people I didn't really grok the 5 Room Dungeon concept." The "story" happens during play, based on what the PCs do ingame, not what GMs write beforehand. Pure RPG story is emergent. All the players (including the DM!) are experiencing the emergent story as it unfolds, and they drive it with their decisions and reactions and encounters.

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    What if you got so good at improv, you could create a 3 act structure story on the fly and the players never knew?

  • @charper13126
    @charper131262 жыл бұрын

    I don't think there's enough content like this proposing storytelling structure in adventure design. I often use Save the Cat beat sheets in my adventure design. Each session, even. Of course, nothing goes to plan, but if you know where you are in the pacing of the session or adventure, you can adapt to where they are to keep the story and plot moving forward

  • @DungeonMasterpiece

    @DungeonMasterpiece

    2 жыл бұрын

    I used to think this, but I think it's a matter of DMs not understanding the essentials of story structure, and how to use it as a framework for improv.

  • @NoActuallyGo-KCUF-Yourself
    @NoActuallyGo-KCUF-Yourself2 жыл бұрын

    _Five_ room dungeon? Is that what they're teaching kids these days? My first dungeon as a DM was 2nd ed. Undermountain.

  • @DaronSchmit
    @DaronSchmit2 жыл бұрын

    I see someone else also watches Miniac 😂

  • @notoriouswhitemoth
    @notoriouswhitemoth2 жыл бұрын

    Define the rules, subvert rules, then prove you haven't broken the rules. Pledge, turn, prestige. It's a magic trick.

  • @bladewolfvii6383
    @bladewolfvii6383 Жыл бұрын

    But the "Guardian" is the setup! This "room" establishes why the players enter the dungeon, and why noone else (or hardly anyone, it depends) did before them.

  • @marioevildm7410
    @marioevildm74102 жыл бұрын

    love this! but my goblins do not raid for human food, they eat peoples fresh alive, and drink their blood. It's good for them they never get sick. 😏

  • @Gellafnu111
    @Gellafnu1112 жыл бұрын

    D&D assumes the dungeon setup and prelude happens *outside* the dungeon. As far as I'm aware, 5-Room Dungeons isn't meant to tackle the Act 1 scenes, but rather establish the Act 2 and 3 in a coherent narrative. It's a lot easier to tack on an Act 1, or set up a scaffold for Act 2 and 3 with 5RD onto your existing Act 1, than it is to make a structural method for an entire narrative. In short: I feel you're ignoring the actual point of 5-Room Dungeons and skipping out on the real point of 5RDs.

  • @Liberaven
    @Liberaven Жыл бұрын

    Massive cope on the ad. Wow

  • @cadenceclearwater4340
    @cadenceclearwater43402 жыл бұрын

    SPOILERS 😨😨😨

  • @nightcitycrafts
    @nightcitycrafts2 жыл бұрын

    Very well as articulated. I've never been a fan of the 5 room setup. Almost everyone who GMs in 5e and its annoying. It almost always devolves into combat after combat.

  • @perrogoblin7615
    @perrogoblin76152 жыл бұрын

    .

  • @Pistonrager
    @Pistonrager18 күн бұрын

    The problem with a five room dungeon... is shit before the dungeon? Oh man that's super lame....

  • @michaelwolf8690
    @michaelwolf86902 жыл бұрын

    5-Room-Design has always bugged me as a way of Dungeonifying a heroes journey. It's basically all of the parts of the adventure that work in the weird context of D&D rather than trying to make a D&D game have a robust and fulfilling story.

  • @ralphyoung6032
    @ralphyoung60322 жыл бұрын

    Applying 3-Act structure to TTRPGs is itself problematic. It was developed for the stage, and later screen, assuming an audience experiencing a story in a single sitting. The 5 Room Dungeon was itself set up similarly, on the assumption that 5 encounters comprises an in-game work day, and a single long 4-6 hour session out of game which could be broken down into two smaller sessions as needed. Adding a whole 'act' to the 5RD throws off it's pacing. An introductory first act followed by five encounters is almost always going to be outside the practical limitations of a single session. The players simply won't have the time to address the whole three acts in one go, and that throws off the pacing and structure. Realistically, a 3 Act structure in TTRPG format would be similar to a half hour television show to fit within a day's gaming constraints. There would be a status quo first act, inciting incident leading into a second act, rising tension leading to a SINGLE combat encounter, followed by some falling action. You can squeeze in maybe two combat encounters, one as inciting incident and one as climax, into the time constraints of a single session. Stretching more over multiple sessions throws off the pacing that is the entire point of the three act structure in the first place. With the rise of serial dramas and commercial-less streaming television, formal act breaks have been increasingly de-emphasized even in the world of TV. Some argue that the concept of "acts" don't apply at all, while others think that 4 or 5 informal "acts" per 50 minute episode have become the norm. I tend to the former camp. But in the world of TTRPGs, I think the structure of old Saturday morning theatrical serials from Republic is the most appropriate, or more recent "webisode" 5-10 minute shorts on the internet. You just can't fit a 3 Act structure into the time constraints of a normal TTRPG session while also including dungeon exploration at all, unless you decide to make some encounters "off screen," which is itself highly problematic.

  • @vidgrip8622
    @vidgrip86222 жыл бұрын

    Or you could design your dungeon, use obvious hooks to lead the players to it, and then let them create their own story there. No need to engage in story writing techniques because it isn't your story to tell. No acts required.

  • @feral_orc

    @feral_orc

    2 жыл бұрын

    Of course, the DM doesn't get to tell any part of the story at all. No in fact they do not have any ownership over the game they run. Good point

  • @vidgrip8622

    @vidgrip8622

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@feral_orc DM has ownership of the rules and the environment. The story that emerges is largely the result of player decisions and some die rolls.

  • @NoActuallyGo-KCUF-Yourself

    @NoActuallyGo-KCUF-Yourself

    2 жыл бұрын

    Enjoy continuing to fail at life with that mind set.

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