Using SETUP and PAYOFF to Write Great Mystery CLUES

Today we’re talking about how to keep readers glued to your mystery novel by stretching out a single clue into a nice, juicy setup and payoff. We'll talk about:
*4 ways to do this
*why it has such an impact on the reader
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This video includes clips from:
Brick
The Da Vinci Code
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  • @janekalmes
    @janekalmes2 жыл бұрын

    Ready to plan some clues? Check out these 5 types: kzread.info/dash/bejne/eYKGkslvYNCWdaw.html

  • @joeywiles9165
    @joeywiles9165Ай бұрын

    If I can just remember all this stuff…. Thanks for these videos!!!

  • @meandera
    @meandera2 ай бұрын

    You are such a good teacher! Thanks!

  • @pratiknarayanan6586
    @pratiknarayanan65862 жыл бұрын

    You're a master mystery writer Jane. Your videos are incredibly helpful.

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Wow, thank you!

  • @annavernick1490
    @annavernick14902 жыл бұрын

    Yes! I can think of stories I've enjoyed with the stretched out clues and never really thought about how to do that. Thank you for the clarity!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    You're so welcome, Anna!

  • @TheLegem
    @TheLegem8 ай бұрын

    Thank you! I am learning so much from your videos ❤

  • @bostonhayworth1264
    @bostonhayworth12642 жыл бұрын

    The information in your videos is priceless

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Thanks so much!

  • @linetteholm7127
    @linetteholm71272 жыл бұрын

    You always come up with inciteful and key ingredients for creating a great cozy mystery. Tysm for all the work you put into your videos!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    You are so welcome!

  • @notprocrastinating2504
    @notprocrastinating25042 жыл бұрын

    I'm binging your videos they're very informative, thank you for sharing

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    You’re so welcome!

  • @wiseauserious8750
    @wiseauserious87502 жыл бұрын

    Edgar wright is the master of set-ups and payoffs, it's almost supernatural how effortless he makes them

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Cool, I will have to re-watch some of his movies!

  • @leesa6970
    @leesa6970 Жыл бұрын

    Just wanted to say I stumbled across your videos a few days ago and I am really enjoying them. I love the way you explain things and the way you use fun examples

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Thank you so much!

  • @alisongood9572
    @alisongood95722 жыл бұрын

    You have been such a huge help. These videos on getting and giving clues have been hugely beneficial. It's what's been missing for this newbie.

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    That’s so great to hear!

  • @GUTOG
    @GUTOG2 жыл бұрын

    Professor Jane strikes again! Your videos just keep getting better.

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Thank you so much, Anthony!

  • @neverfinishedstory
    @neverfinishedstory2 жыл бұрын

    the timing of this. i am blessed

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Thanks, Ivana!

  • @mariavalente6304
    @mariavalente63042 жыл бұрын

    This makes so much sense I have no idea how I haven't learned this before and was still trying to write mystery.

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    When I wrote my first mystery, I also did not have an understanding of many of the things I talk about in my videos. It’s only through needing to come up with video content, and needing to express it in a way that other people can understand, that I’ve managed to clarify many of these concepts for myself. That’s been one of my biggest takeaways from this channel: the best way to learn something is to teach it!

  • @RAHilliard
    @RAHilliard2 жыл бұрын

    Great as usual. Can't wait for next week's video!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Thanks, Robert! I'm excited about it, too.

  • @ananyachoudhury1537
    @ananyachoudhury15372 жыл бұрын

    Super helpful info... Thinking back on Mystery movies/ series I had watched and books I had read that I love, I totally see how they had used set-ups and pay-offs. Thanks for guiding us on how to do that...waiting for the next one

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    You’re so welcome!

  • @JillMaurer
    @JillMaurer2 жыл бұрын

    Another juicy video Jane!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Thanks you, Jill!

  • @jesbrimer3096
    @jesbrimer30962 жыл бұрын

    I love this video! It's helpful as a person's turkey pants lol. I think you answered this already, but how many clues should be in a cozy????

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Generally, about 1 per piece of info. Or perhaps 2, if you stretch that info out into a setup and payoff. In my current 40K-word novella, I think I’ve got about 8, if I include each setup, payoff, etc. as one. In a full length novel, I'd need more, because I’d have more red herring subplots, and each of those would need its own clues.

  • @jesbrimer3096

    @jesbrimer3096

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@janekalmes Thanks!! I look forward to more videos

  • @JuliaSusa
    @JuliaSusa2 жыл бұрын

    You're Videos are so amazing and helpful 💖 thank you very much 🌷

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    You're so welcome! I'm glad you enjoy them!

  • @jcandye1
    @jcandye12 жыл бұрын

    That's what I've been looking for, thank you so much! I could NOT figure out how to create clues. Thanks again, very helpful! :)

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Awesome to hear!

  • @storydtechtiverobertjones464
    @storydtechtiverobertjones4642 жыл бұрын

    Great job! Like how you’re also promoting your book in the little window without stopping the video for a plug.Just went to Amazon and bought it 😊

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Oh, wow, thank you! I hope you enjoy it! Do you have a book out? You could easily do something similar on your videos.

  • @storydtechtiverobertjones464

    @storydtechtiverobertjones464

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@janekalmes My novels are still in the works. Writing has become my master passion, but it’s also my second dream to follow. My first one was working for Marvel, which I did for a number of years.

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Very cool! I’ll look forward to seeing your first novel!

  • @storydtechtiverobertjones464

    @storydtechtiverobertjones464

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@janekalmes Short novel for self publishing debut…probably next year since we’re planning to move across the country. Sherlock Holmes tale. Probably not entirely a surprise :)

  • @RAHilliard
    @RAHilliard2 жыл бұрын

    Also, stretching out clues, like stretching out an elastic band, increases tension.

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 жыл бұрын

    Great point!

  • @michelled.613
    @michelled.6132 ай бұрын

    Help! I need to figure out how to create clues for a cold case (murder was 2 years previous and in another country during a war). Any and all suggestions would be appreciated!! Thanks for the great video!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    2 ай бұрын

    Hi, Michelle! At the top of this livestream, I talked quite a bit about Cold Cases. Hope something here will help! kzread.info7F6nopCv92Y?

  • @michelled.613

    @michelled.613

    2 ай бұрын

    @@janekalmes wow you are on top of your comment section! Thanks so much Jane!!!