I feel you cuz...and pat listen to my first and second verse again...i didn't boast once...it's not really about money eg.the hook...it's more about what ever you strive for...most ppl sadly can only relate to money

don't be...its your opinion

My bad.

my verse is about tryin to get money haha not braggin, only alittle

Go Ahead I like this one better than the others But for the un- necessary use of the word nigga This is Hot

Here's my constructive criticism: From what I understand, the theme of this song is money, correct? I'm not trying to say you two are dirt poor, but you should be more plausible. What I mean by plausible is a song that is reasonable/believable. A lot of listeners will get the idea that you guys are filthy rich. You don't want to mislead them. If I misinterpreted anything, let me know. If you keep at songwriting, you'll become famous soon. On the contrary, your verses were flawless. =)