OMG! Luna Lovegood?!

@vorphine4185

6 жыл бұрын

LOL

@Welther47

5 жыл бұрын

Luna Lovegood doesn't have black eyebrows. Paid attention to the details and follow up on them. ;)

@aneeshupadhya3170

5 жыл бұрын

That's what I thought!!!!

@reneebarrette4514

4 жыл бұрын

Looks just like her for sure!

@swiftiebee13

3 жыл бұрын

:p

That "secrets on a sheet of paper" was a really good/creative idea. I would have never thought of that! Helps a lot with thinking about how Mystery works!

This was a ridiculously helpful video for my project. Thank you!!

Wow! Very helpful. I realized I've been doing this naturally in my current manuscript but it helps to hear it in case I lose my way. ☺️

Finally I've been struggling so much with my mystery thriller!!

@swiftiebee13

3 жыл бұрын

I am the first one to like this comment 5 years later :p

Nice tip about the well scattered secret.

"more taller" 👍

@epshitachakravarty499

4 жыл бұрын

Double superlatives be like- oop😂

thank you Ms. for giving me an insight for writing a thriller novel!

Is it Luna lovegood is that you

Thank you, WritingMime. I recently stumbled upon your videos. They're helping a ton. Esp the example with the cat and dogs. I'm going to try to weave a couple of secrets into my novel as such.

My favorite genre!!!

Hi how many thrillers have u written and had published please?

Thanks! I'm writing a thriller/mystery novel also. If helped me realize a few things

Thank you miss. for this insightful informative information!

Hey I love this video. Why are you not doing some more ?

this was very helpful!!

Very well explained!

Thanks for this. Awesome video.

This is awesome!

Your videos really help.

your awesome, loved the video. helped me a lot.

🎯 Key Takeaways for quick navigation: 00:13 📚 A thriller creates suspense and engages readers by making them worried about the characters' fate. 00:54 🔍 Divide your story into sections, creating escalating suspenseful moments akin to a rollercoaster ride. 01:20 🕵️‍♂️ Add mystery by creating secrets within your plot, gradually revealing them to intensify the story's intrigue. 02:11 🔪 In a thriller, keep readers guessing by not favoring any character; maintain mystery about who can be trusted. 02:54 📝 Stay focused and keep writing; distractions won't add words to your document. Made with HARPA AI

I’ve watched this video one or two more times than necessary to get the information.

Take a shot every time she says the word "secret".

Luna Lovegood?

well done

Oo, nice! This definitely helps me make my supernatural thriller all the more intriguing! Thanks for the boost!

Beth from The Walking Dead???

That was good

Wtf luna lovegood ??! In harry potter ?? @@

@katrog3887

6 жыл бұрын

Soulskull Dark ikr

@swiftiebee13

3 жыл бұрын

:p

@hungthanh9410

3 жыл бұрын

voldy wassup :v

@swiftiebee13

3 жыл бұрын

Soulskull Dark not much hbu?

@swiftiebee13

3 жыл бұрын

Just figuring out what should be my next horcrux .O.

Luna lovegood omg l.l ( Luna lovegood )

You looks beautiful

This background music is killing me

@sparklejumpropegangsta1176

7 жыл бұрын

Kailah Birchler, you complain too much.

This was a little incoherent. I think if you rewrote this and polished it it would hit a lot harder and i would learn more a lot more.

I find it hard to pay attention to cute girls giving me instructions I need.