Watched twice mindfully. Excellent. A wonder boy's naughty infatuation & the trouble he was facing when bullied, unable to say NO. When supported taking right decision While fetching chocolate jar the almirah fell over the boy hurting him. Mother faced trauma but still strong keeping the self occupied. Sitting on a chair, doing nothing, having past guilt, the man is still taking care of children by watching over them. When needed closed the gates of the house & tried to protect his family finally taking a step ahead over coming guilt. Girl who left and is back, living with perceptions falls, fails, guides the younger one, cleans the clutter of the house and ultimately mind, realising what the man is doing exactly while sitting on the chair all the while. Dog is the hero. Man is faithful like a dog. Thank you.

@karnirathore983

7 ай бұрын

Thanks Rashmi Subodh for clearing the air. Though, not exactly clear about the trauma, the lady of the house, went through. LP

@naveedsegments

7 ай бұрын

Very generous comment ,only girls can comment like this😊

@maniqueen

6 ай бұрын

Wow

@ankitghanghas6036

Ай бұрын

@Rashmi ❤

To those who are complaining that they did not get the story, Be grateful for not having familiarity with such complex family dynamics and being far from all the trauma that you are unable to understand what is going on here.

@meerabakshi2676

4 ай бұрын

haah! one does not have to go through such terrible trauma. We get enough details of such cases and can visualize what the victim and their family members could suffer. That does not give freedom to a story writer to keep hanging thread for readers/viewers to collect reading viewers comments!

@kasturisamanta

2 ай бұрын

Cant agree more !!! The people who went through trauma like this can fillup the blank places !! It was so healing!! The acting was to the point !!!

You really did a great job. Due to some tragedy of the past, entire family was living with trauma but individually, now another trauma bringing them back together. And the nuances in the story, the girl clearing the clutter, guiding right path to a younger, the man of the family protecting the family... All are amazing. Some people may not watch mindfully, so won't get the story and will comment negatively, but the team really did a good job. Cheers to the entire team. (I was not about to leave such a long comment, but seeing the negativity in the comment section, I decided to elaborate a little.)

@naveedsegments

7 ай бұрын

Best comment and girl can only comment like this😊

@anjushishodia5653

5 ай бұрын

Yeah, great movie.. Only one can relate who lived a traumatized childhood

Beautifully done 👍.. Just reminds us how important it is to give a child a good childhood.. Most problems in the world is the result of problematic childhood.

I could relate to this. In a family there can be trauma , misunderstanding, disrespect, disappointments, family members can move away, fall apart but if one decides to put the past away and move on it’s never too late to. Each one did what they had to , each one has their own unique strengths too.

This is the best short film I have watched to date. Great unfolding of the story, character transformations, direction and editing, fantastic performances (esp. the lady who played the mother was simply extra ordinary in her controlled performance as the family anchor.)

😢 no words ..how great is this story. It's amazing. But only people like us can understand the message behind it...❤

Some stories bring your life into perspective. This will surely help grown-ups who had troubled childhood. Well done team, for bringing this story here.

Exceptional clip!!! The family dynamics was so complex. Each person was carrying an excess baggage of unresolved issues. In the midst of anger and hostilities, there were divided loyalties, denials and escapism. Each of them felt justified without seeking a collective resolution and reconciliation. Yet, there was a faint glimmer of hope to restore some semblance of normalcy among themselves without which each of them knew that there couldn't have been peace in their lives-- neither individually nor collectively.

Excellent work. ❤ POV (Probably) - Life is absurd, the greatest addiction, a habit. There come moments, times when it feels like all is over you can't move on. But you just have to hang in there. Life goes on even after the most gruesome events it goes on. You might feel stuck for a little period or long time but eventually u realize you have to move on even after everything.

That hug 🫂 of them 😌 So satisfying and heart melting

Gripping narrative. Mother's strength is awesome drowning her trauma in responsibilities. Acting ì superb. It haunted me all day. Want others to watch this.

Shefali singh soni looking very charmi, fabulous acting😊

THE ONLY PROMISING TALENT AND SHINING LIGHT IN THIS PATHETIC AND SHODDILY WRITTEN AND DIRECTED excuse for a short(endless rubber band aid short film) film IS SHEFALI SINGH SONI...she makes me 'live a little' WITH her screen presence and Abhiney(acting) AND I mean that in the nicest AND most respectful way! SHEFALI SINGH SONI Is my pick OF the most PROMISING TALENT OF the small and silver screen! She should get a WELL deserved chance to be among the emerging actors and NOT be compared with btown boomtown brats! 👍👍👍👍 for SHEFALI SINGH soni AS she has managed to impress YET again!

@Bhadrakalishakti

3 ай бұрын

I second my first impressions of Shefali Singh soni! she's GOOD

To be perfectly honest, although I loved the direction & the realistic acting, I didn't quite get the entire story - But then I read the comments & realized that there was a lot that I had not caught ... (daah😋!?) Ahhh haaa - So Shefali has made quite a name for herself - I thought this girl looked familiar - She was in "Live a Little" too, where she wowed me!! What a versatile actress she is & looks like she has quite a loyal & loving fan base!! If she's reading this, I'd like to say: YouGoGirl - You've got what it takes👌...Shine💫ON - Best Wishes &💖From USA!!

@shefalisinghsoni8741

7 ай бұрын

You just made my day❤️ Thank you 😊

@AnalytiCritic

7 ай бұрын

@@shefalisinghsoni8741You're so deserving & welcome, Stay Grounded & Humble -Your Talent Speaks for Itself - ShineON 💖💫!!

@meerabakshi2676

4 ай бұрын

so, not the story , not the direction, not the acting made us understand but the comments from others helped what this story/drama is about! 😀

@AnalytiCritic

4 ай бұрын

@@meerabakshi2676 You Got That Right< Meera!! 💗✌

Many of us have some past traumas and different ways to deal with them. And before the past traumas are solved, a new incident occurs. A new feeling of guilty. Both the farther and the daughter may feel guilty for not having been there to look after the children. After an incident, even though we have not done anything wrong, our minds rearrange the story in a way that we start feeling guilty. But they are able to forgive.

Meaningful story and depicted very well. Well done full crew members of this movie. ❤❤❤

Father is guilty upset and tried to give his life . His wife saved him..she was matured enough to understan hus situation. And he was matured enough to understand her struggle and supported her even though he was not happy by himself in life. The girl was very young during the bad days and she made so many impressions that obviously she felt.she couldnt understand both mother and father. It took her 4 years to recover and she could understand whats happening slowly with more incidents..here mother was hero bcz she understood both of them.Father couldnt accept that girl deserved space and time for herself he was angry at her..women bhave more patience and sensitivity.🎉❤ loved the film😊

What was the incident the mother and daughter were referring to? What happened to the boy who fell down? Who were the people at the end outside their home?

@meerabakshi2676

6 ай бұрын

me too. many such issues kept vague. How viewrs could relate such hanging threads? Total failure for the script writer and the director whose creation we need to read comments to figure out what exactly is in the video is about!?!?

@Indraveer1357

3 ай бұрын

I agree. Haphazard & meaningless story.

Nice work Shefali. Hope you achieve great success in your life. It feels good to see on screen someone you know since childhood.

Excellent story. Simply awesome.

Kudos to the team for taking up and beautifully presenting such real and delicate situations of life

Shefaliji saw one of movies. You are extraordinary

ultimate story and screenplay 👍 out of the box thinking !!!

Name of the actress who has played the role of the mother please. Great acting, befitting the character

Story ye hai k wo ladki ko lagta uske father kuch nahi karte bas baithe rehte.. lakin jab uski maa sirf ek din ladki ku zimmedaari deti aur wo usme fail ho jaati (baccha mar jata)… Mtlb uska baap roz wo zimmedaari sambhaal raha tha aur ladki ko lagta tha k wo bas baitha rehta

childhood trauma is real. I went thru it myself. But in my family the roles were reversed. Mom was the absent one and dad was always there

Very much relatable, well made

So unique and connecting 😊..

How beautifully the father stands for his family to protect them from that crowd.❤ In the end,they eventually realised what he did to save them.😢

Wow guys 👏🏼 Well done ❤

She hates her father, but at the end, she sees, how he protects her from the crowd.some people become responsible , late in life. We should not hate people. All r not strong. Some people need others to take care of them. A twist in life, sometimes, makes the weak person also strong, just like her father. She takes good care of the small boy, or else , he would go astray, with the big, bad boys.a little boring film.😔😔

Just watched for Shefali, the most beautiful woman in this universe

@TauntTales

6 ай бұрын

Agree

Lovely !

Wow !! What good acting !!!

Good story!

Amusing!

Beautiful ❤❤

She's so pretty

Shefali ❤

I have understood and liked it 🙂 👌

Excellent meaningful story and excellent presentation ❤❤❤

Excellent !

Nicely concieved❤️

Nice story.. Masterpiece❤

Shandaar story

bohut pyaree kriti thanx

Beautiful story

Beautiful

I couldn't understand the last part.can somebody explain this?

Very good one. Really well done.👌👌

Mind blowing 👌👏❣️

People most of the commnetors say they did not understand..and vo ladaki 4 baje ki bus se jaanevaali thi vo gayi bhi? ya chaay pine ko ruk gayi aur baad mein jaane kaa nirnay hi badal diyaa? everything left hanging for viewers to think and get even more confused!

ज़िन्दगी की पहली फिल्म जो कि समझ नहीं आई😜😂🤣😅🤫🥂🍺🥃

@meerabakshi2676

6 ай бұрын

yes, me too felt the same.."I commented almost same: many such issues kept vague. How viewrs could relate such hanging threads? Total failure for the script writer and the director whose creation we need to read comments to figure out what exactly is in the video is about!?!?"

Should have told about past trauma

Story thi kya, kuch samajh nahi aaya

@KavishS68

7 ай бұрын

Samajh kya nhi Aya 😮

@simranmahey7932

7 ай бұрын

@@KavishS68 story

कहानी का कोई सर पैर नहीं है सिर्फ़ किसी बिना मतलब के इमोशंज़ हैं।

Interesting! But who died, only the hand was seen. Was it the kid?

@RohitRajawat76

21 күн бұрын

Yeah

Ek visit, jo ek tute hui family ko bandh diya firse

Plz 2 nd part... Bahut achhi lgi... Smjhdaro k liye isahra hi kafi hota hai... Na smjho ko kuch nhi smjh aata... Isliye plz 2 part

Miss understanding between father and daughter 😢😢

Sabkuch women ke bare me hi hai. Baki hai hi nahi duniya me

Didn’t understand

Ajeeb tha sab, samajh hi nai aaya kuch, naa puri kahaani bataayi, naa koi lesson tha, bkwas tha overall

Slow pace spoils the effort.

Incident hua kya tha actually samjh nhi aya

Wo to dikhunga gayab thodi na ho jaunga ...

Very muddled up story

Middle-class families story

Not understand

बहोत Add है । ।

Kya tha ye hathoda kuch samjme hi nahi aya 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Mujhe ye kahani kuchh had tak samjh me nahi aae

Konse pagal ne likhi h story 😂

Sefaly will become a big star one day , like srk

Parivar: Beta:maa papa ne phir se phone kyu kiya? Maa:tu padhai par dhyan de. Mein uparwale room me hoon Maa seedhi chad kar uparwale room me jaati hai Toilet me jaati hai. Beta chupke se halke kadam se upar jata hai. Darwaze ke andar wale side stool par khade rehkar toilet ke andar jhaank raha hota hai Mahila apna dress ko adjust karke ajeeb aawaz se pati se baat kar rahi hoti hai. 20-25 min baad maa toilet ke bahar aati hai Chehra pasine se bheega hota hai. Maa:tu yaha kya kar raha hai Beta:aapki andar rone wali aawaz aa rahi thi Maa:tu nahi samjhega. Tere papa mujhe dobara phone karne ka matlab kuch aur hai. Beta:kya matlab hai? Maa:hum yaha itne dur hai. Woh saat samandar paar hai. Tune kya kya dekha? Beta:aapka dress neeche gira tha. Maa:aage se uparwale room me aaya mat kar. Achche sanskar nahi hai Beta:jo aawaz aap niklati ho woh kya hai? Maa:jyada sawaal mat pucha kar. Meri majburi hai. Teri padhai ki umar hai.

Mujhe to ye kahani samjh hi nhi ...

Jinhe samjh nhi aaya last me kya hua let me tell you wo bache chocolate chura rahe the jiske douran ek bachaa copboard k neeche dab gya ya phir mar gya that's why unke ghr me logo ne attack Krna shuru kr diya or uske father ne bachaya apni beti or wife ko

कहानी का अर्थ बहुत गहरा हैं

@AnushaMangal

Ай бұрын

कृपया बताइए

@nishasinghsitare7842

Ай бұрын

​@@AnushaMangalइस पूरी कहानी में हमें बताया गया है कि जब हम पर मुसीबत आती है तो हम भाग खड़े होते हैं। और उस मुसीबत का इल्जाम हम दूसरों पर खासकर हम अपने अपनों पर लगा देते हैं । बिना यह सोचे कि उन्होंने भी उस चीज को झेला हैं। जैसे हमें पहले वाली स्टोरी नहीं बताई गई की लड़की घर छोड़कर क्यों गई, शायद उसके पिता की नौकरी चली गई थी , उस समय मां ने ही सब कुछ किया। पिता घर बैठ गए और लड़की मुसीबत आते से ही भाग गई लेकिन वो सारा दोष अपने पिता को देती रही। वही कहानी के लास्ट पार्ट में जब अलमारी गिर जाती है और पूरी पब्लिक घर के बाहर खड़ी होती है । तब मां और बेटी डरी होने के कारण अंदर रहती हैं, तब पिता सारी सिचुएशन हैंडल करते हैं। उस समय लड़की को अपने पिता की अहमियत फील होती है। कहानी हमें मैसेज देती है कि हमें धैर्य बनाकर रखना चाहिए मुसीबत में हमें अपनों का साथ देना चाहिए जैसा की कहानी में मां ने किया। ना की मुसीबत से भाग कर एक दूसरे पर इल्जाम लगाना चाहिए। क्योंकि कभी-कभी हम कमजोर पड़ जाते हैं। हम कमजोर पड़ जाते हैं, मतलब कोई भी कमजोर पड़ सकता है तो हमें इल्जाम लगाने की जगह उस व्यक्ति को समझने की कोशिश करना चाहिए।❤ Ok

What was the story?😅

@meerabakshi2676

6 ай бұрын

haa haa haa..you watch the video and keep on trying to pick up tangled threads..and suddenly story ends, leaving you jaw dropped! 😀

What's story kuchh shamj hi nahi aaya aayse story banao ki dusro ko bhi samj aa jaye ......aayse thodi hota hai tum itna achha banye ho or namak dalna bhul gaya ho 😅

@meerabakshi2676

6 ай бұрын

kisi kisi ko aadat hoti hai, jo mann mein sochate hai..usi thread pe vahi points se bolanaa shuru karatey hai..saamane vaale ko pataa hi nahin hotaa ki ye aadami kyaa aur kyun bol rahaa hai? aage ki aadhi kahaani pataa hi na ho tau kisi ke dimag ki baat binaa bataaye thode hi pataa chalati hai? aisi hi sthiti yahaan par dikhati hai.

Last mein family k sare members baap ki trah kursi par baith gaye newspaper aur chai k sath. Realizing how their father was worried about their safety by sitting whole day.

@pallavijamkhandi646

2 ай бұрын

😂😂😂...you should get best commentator award.🎉 what an inference..what an observation and articulation. U cannot judge on what you see.. apke comment ne meri ankhe khol diya..thank you

@Sanatan_Vichaar_Vimarsh

2 ай бұрын

@@pallavijamkhandi646 toh apke hisab kya sahi hai?

Hua kya tha kisi ko pata chala?

Should I watch this 🤔 because comments says its bakwas made

@mariashaikh7890

7 ай бұрын

Yea .... It had no point

@meerabakshi2676

6 ай бұрын

yes, if you want to waste your time. I wasted and am still wasting my time reading comments because I am furious how stupid this story was and how people can give thumbs up! Ladki ki natural acting is a plus point apart from this BAKWAS video!

@poornimavidyashankar9174

4 ай бұрын

It's sad that you can't understand basic feelings 😢 that is why you're saying bakwas

Faltu story ...kuch samjh nhi aaya...kya drama hai

koi muju smjao Kya stori thi😡😡😡

@meerabakshi2676

6 ай бұрын

heheh Director ko hi puchho! DISLIKE de dau , use samajh mein aa jayegaa ki Story produced is a total failure!

kuch samj ni ayea ....and film direction was too boring ......simple rakhne ke chakr mein kuch zada hi gadbad krdi

2nd comment 🤣🤣🤣🤣

लोगोने घर पर atrack क्यों किया?

@meerabakshi2676

6 ай бұрын

vo bikhari chocolates paas jo haath dikhaa na? ees ke kaaran! aur the couple running coaching class ARE resposible for the mishap. Showing here that father saved wife and daughter by closing the gate and the main door of the house is not at all justified! kisi ke bachche tution ke liye aatey hai.n tau een ki surakshaa ki jimmedaari coaching class chalaane vaale ki hi hai, harjaanaa bhugatanaa hi padataa hai. Aur wife jab office bhi jaati hai aur coaching class bhi chalaati hai tau vo niththallaa husband kyun khursi pe hath pe hath dhare baithaa rahetaa hai? Bhale hi vo office job na karataa ho par bachcho.n ko padhaane kaa kaam tau ghar baithe kar hi shakataa thaa! aise "na kam ke na kaaj ke, dushman anaaj ke" pati_o.n ko patniyaa.n kyun vendhaarati hai? Galat message conveyed by this video.

Senseless

Boring.

Shortfilm k nam PR b bawasir faila do ...logic story badme dekh lenge

Bakwas

@shefali ❤❤❤😊