Come on let the lamentors live. They’ve been through enough.

@Wolphen

9 күн бұрын

@@joshuadelgado1286 That might be asking a bit much....

Fuck yeah, lamenters!

@deadzone4155

10 күн бұрын

Oh fuck, it's the unlucky boys

@dranoelarios4788

9 күн бұрын

😊🙂🙁😰

@Edible_edibility

9 күн бұрын

@@dranoelarios4788 💀

“Emperor, Sanguinius, we try our best, we save your people, we love you, so please answer, WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO DESERVE THIS FATE😭😭😭😭😭😭….” Lamenters TTS

FOR THOSE WE CHERISH!

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

We die in glory!

1:13 typical Lamenters *"LUCK"* Never gets old (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)

Amazing work! In terms of improvements, I'd suggest trying to make things feel heavier, for example when the guy holding a heavy machine gun stood on the dead body for leverage, the gun and step felt too light. Also a section to improve upon would be just making movements flow smoother, there were multiple instances of animations that felt stiff. Still amazing work and I hope to see more from you!

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Hey mate, great feedback! And yeah, weight is one of the many things I'm still working on, I'm still relatively new to the animating side of things, so I still have a long way to go ;)

@ChillAssTurtle

9 күн бұрын

​@@Wolphenyoure on the golden path brother, i'd just add specifically the sound for the weight and bolters seem like they should be heavy stumpy BLASTS instead of like a small caliber shoota

@user-ko9pr9dt4h

7 күн бұрын

@@Wolphen Also about feedback - i think the powerpack on the marine armor is a bit thin, or too long, i cant explain why, but this look unfamiliar. If put this to the side - look very interesting and i hope you will succeed

FOR THOSE WE CHERRISH, WE DIE IN GLORY!

That lamenter medic failed his perception roll hard to get snuck up on by a god damn dread.

For those we cherish, we die in glory!!!

Literally every fan animation has used specific shots from Astartes - use the principles, not just the exact carbon copy of technique. This one is even paced the exact same.

@Aegis.

10 күн бұрын

relax mate.. astartes is the epitomy of fan animation

@spongmongler6760

10 күн бұрын

step 1: observation step 2: mimicry step 3: improvement

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Hey mate, your absolutely right 😂. Even though I only borrowed 2 shots from astartes, he was my main inspiration to start doing this, and I watched his animation so many times there's bound to be similarities. Either way though, I hope to find my own style as I get better with each animation and that you can still enjoy it for what it is :D

@scion5463

10 күн бұрын

Make your own?

@Thabooka

9 күн бұрын

minus the polish and fluid movements -

Honestly, this looks REALLY good. The animation’s a bit janky in a few parts but that’s probably gonna be fixed in post.

@Wolphen

5 күн бұрын

Thanks mate, since the animating for the actual film isn't being worked on yet, I hope to improve all the animations until then, so post editing of that sort won't be needed ;D

@LordCrate-du8zm

5 күн бұрын

@@Wolphen try not to overwork yourself my dude, we'll all be happy no matter what the result is.

Haven’t the lamented suffered enough? Jokes aside though, great animation. Exited to see the other parts.

Keep it up man, dont be afraid to spend longer on even shorter clips ❤ we love the realism, you know how it is :) Recoil and small details is whats brushed over in todays media so focus on that id say the true fans will always support you

great job massive improvement to you last work. keep it up.

@Wolphen

11 күн бұрын

@@campingcake Thanks mate :D

I really love the sound design. This was great to watch

@Wolphen

9 күн бұрын

Cheers mate!

"They can't take the life from us! The cannot take the light from uuus!! FOR THOSE WE CHERIIIIISH! WE DIE IN GLOOOOOOOOORY!!!!!" Imagine having a Dreadnought sneak on you

so... this is what job applications in animation look like these days :D

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Eh... still got a long way to go lol but I appreciate the compliment xD

it may not be official ,but damn is it good to see content on my sad taxi boys

In the Grim Darkness of the Far Future... Iron Warriors seem to prosper as the main antagonist! Woot! In your face, space coyotes!!

This video is beyond awesome. It's Wolphen! Truly next-level content!

Oouuuf Fighting against a chaos dreadnought

i see you did a few cool references as well ( kill the heretic on the bolt casing is one )

@Wolphen

Күн бұрын

Was hoping someone would notice that! Cheers mate ;D

Insane

I didn't see any World Eaters. I will take your skull for my lord khorne. BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!! Good animation. Like the lamenters, love the iron warriors. It's a bit stiff. Only one thing I didn't like is the Lamenter putting his foot on his dead battle brother.

The Apothecary would have had a Battle Brother with him, and they both would have heard a Dreadnaught way before it turned the corner, they aren't made for sneaking.

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Yeah it was a bit of a stretch for cinematic pruposes, there won't be anyhting like that in the actual film ( I hope ;D)

I see 40k I click 40k

I wont lie, this animation is very very cool and I like it, but suggestion: try to make things feel weighted, I'd suggest rewatching an animation you've made and seeing if it, to you, looks weighted, if not, add more frames of movement so it looks like it's moving 'slower' and is 'heavier'.

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Yeah, good advice that's something I noticed too lol. I'll definitely work on that for part 1 :D

Are those Lamenters?!?!?$ 🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏

Face the judgement of Iron!

Still Loving Your Work.

@Wolphen

5 күн бұрын

Cheers mate! Will you be playing Space Marine 2 when it comes out?

@slayer6498

5 күн бұрын

@@Wolphen Probably.

Love it!

Was that a Iron Warriors dreadnought in the end when the apothecary got attacked?

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Yup!

@CaptainPoseidon282

10 күн бұрын

@@Wolphen yeah the only reason I noticed was the security stripes

Great animation and I’m excited for the finished product. Only thing is I’d say you should make the bolters feel heavier

@Wolphen

9 күн бұрын

Thanks mate! Do you mean the sound or the recoil/feel of the bolters?

Incredible works, beautiful 👍

I love it. Well done.

Great Work!^^

Fuck yeah Iron Warriors!

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Ye filthy heretic...

Can't wait to see GW immediately cease and desist this.

FOR THOSE WE CHERISH WE DIE IN GLORY!!!!!!!!!!

Great video

Looks great!

lesss fuckin gooooo!!!

The video looks great, but why did a shooting brother place his foot on the body of a fallen brother? I think it's weird that a loyal Astartes could be so disrespectful.

@Wolphen

9 күн бұрын

Thanks! Yeah, that is something I hadn't realized or thought about too much. I hope I can avoid details like that for the actual film!

Yessss😍😍

The Dread just joinked him

the models look good but all the movements are kind of Janky - you should either get a mocap suit to get some natural animations to work with and build a base of knowledge from - or just buy some basic animation assets of walking running shooting guns and same deal build your knowledge editing and playing with those.

@Wolphen

9 күн бұрын

Hey mate, thanks for the comment! I'm still quite new to the animation side of things, so I have a lot to learn on that front, as you pointed out. Unfortuntley,, as an amateur, I can't afford a mocap suit and movement libraries just don't transfer well onto Astartes. But yes, movemments are one of my points of focus - hope you enjoyed watching nonetheless!

Frag, when that dreadnought turned the corner I freaked...

Whatever you do, don't let GW take you down bro.

Fan made, fan made... Such fans, that don't even know that bolter is semi-auto rifle...

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Hey mate, just wanted to point out bolters are cannonically confirmed to have 3 modes of fire - Full auto included, (the 3 modes being single shot, burst and of course full auto). Anyway, hope you still enjoyed!

@Poperillnik

10 күн бұрын

@@Wolphen ah, ok. Did not knew that. Still rely on older codexes. Thank you.

also its dark as f**k bro cant see s**t - dont use darkness to cover up bad animation or models - make sure the audience can see whats going on

@Wolphen

9 күн бұрын

Hey, thanks for the feedback, but I am a little confused on this one. None of the people (including myself) who I talked to after watching the animation seemed to have issues with the lighting - heck, some said the scenes were too bright for 40k! If you are referring to the apothecary scene at the end, where the dread is somewhat obscured, that was unfortunately unavoidable, as my relatively weak PC couldnt handle any more lights in that scene, meaning it was a bit darker than I wanted it to be. Cheers!

Very shitty, astartes much more better

@Wolphen

10 күн бұрын

Hey, sorry to hear you didn't like the animation. Even though I wasn't aiming at replicating his level of expertise and talent, as I am relatively new to the 3D space, I would still appreciate any feedback you can give me to improve even more!

@user-pp6db2ee1g

10 күн бұрын

Calm down, nobody owes you anything. It's just a hobby. Don't act like arrogant King. You are not in that position.