The Black Ship - Chapter 31
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The Black ship, book two continues...
Author: u/EkhidnaWritez
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Well we now know where Wyatts trait of fainting comes from. Good old dad. And he passed it along to all his children
@Soundwave119
28 күн бұрын
Who knows how many generations of Staples have had this rare genetic mutation. I wonder if this is a random genetic mutation or some artificial gene modification? I could see some weird noble wanting some commoners to have the same weird/funny problem that some goats 🐐 have.
I guess goat-fainting-genes run on the Staples family! Hope everyone enjoyed this chapter! As always, thank you all for your support, so stay tuned for the next chapter!
@steelblackface
28 күн бұрын
no, thank you my guy this story is movie worthy. Im 40 since april and i can say that ive read many books and watched over 1000 movies in my lifetime. This story is both original and very entertaining something todays films are lacking. Hollywood movies are lacking originality as of late. I really wish more people knew about this audiobook. please try to publish this book, its a gold mine. I am being sincere
@jb13878
28 күн бұрын
Do you have a patreon or anything that people can send financial support. I don’t know your backstory but I’m guessing this is a hobbie or side project. But a lot of us myself included have become I dare say o we engrossed in the story and wish to see it continue.
@davidorf3921
28 күн бұрын
@@jb13878 if you look in the main post you will find the Author has a Kofi
@andrewlatex950
28 күн бұрын
Fabulous story 😊
@taiwansivispacemparabellum9546
28 күн бұрын
OMG ! It’s Ekhidna! Thank you for your space opera which I look forward to every week. I hope Wyatt Knight Buffet’s journey doesn’t end at eradicating the Drazzon. Thank you again for the space opera.
Funny to see that Wyatt's fainting comes from his father
@sherritasanders996
29 күн бұрын
You beat me with that comment.
@Sethy1ST
29 күн бұрын
Looks like everyone in his family has kind of a problem with fainting uh? Hahahahah
Synchronized fainting, Clara’s new pass time
@zackbuelt9943
28 күн бұрын
The family that faints together stays together 😅
@SmokeWiseGanja
28 күн бұрын
She needs to enoble them all at once 😂
@Soundwave119
28 күн бұрын
@@zackbuelt9943But Wyatt's mom Winona does have the same fainting issues as her husband and children.
His whole family are fainting goats lol
@patricklaroseii70
28 күн бұрын
I love how the men in the family all faint and not the women. Anything that changes up stereotypes in a fun way has my praise
I'm glad Wyatt doesn't faint while in battle.
@carsparks1980
28 күн бұрын
Being faced with the immediate possibility of getting messily dead has a truly amazing capacity to focus a person's attention and efforts.
@user-xt1fm9rh6r
28 күн бұрын
It is something that happens getting up so HIGH.... then when it was over the DROP TO NOTHING....... The body just shuts down.....
This episode made me giddy with delight. When Wyatt’s father and brothers passed out, I almost whooped out loud . Thank you for a worthy addition to this tale.
Good chapter. Swear this is better than 99% of TV shows. Ty for all the work you guys put in. Wyatt asking his fam not to tell Mr warlow he's a blue blood now had me in stitches
@steelblackface
28 күн бұрын
i just wrote the almost the exact same thing. hollywood is lacking originality and the writing for most shows are terrible and im tired of the remakes.
@drmachinewerke1
28 күн бұрын
I have not watch TV other than football in years . To much trash
Thanks! again, The author has a sense of humour with the family fainting, had me laughing loudly. I am amazed at how much better your visuals are getting week by week, keep up the great work, nice to see the Staples Family. Roll on the next exciting episode, as always I will be watching.
@scifistories1977
29 күн бұрын
Thanks, Kevin! When my new streaming platform is online, i want you to be one of the testers. You'll also get a free account and never have to pay for access.
@kevinmorgan4267
29 күн бұрын
@@scifistories1977 i would be honoured, to help in any way i can, this sounds like a dream you've been working out for a while, your YT Channel has come a long way and you have helped to pool many great SiFi writers, As I have said before and will say again, You are MY go to KZreadr for bringing writers stories to life, i am sure it will be a huge success, I can not wait to see Your Adventures grow.
@Urbana2012
28 күн бұрын
Ditto about the visuals!
Duke Draymors little girl has even more serious issues than I originally thought, Also who's the third party, clearly the supplier of his ships, but it looks like maybe the instigator of the coup, also maybe a connection with the mysterious agent within the Prince's fleet ?
@carsparks1980
28 күн бұрын
Check back to Chapter 26 about the states outside the principality, then consider Anderson's words as he was restrained in Chapter 23. The Ur Diviners are a good bet for the mysterious "others".
@patricklaroseii70
28 күн бұрын
The Duke might want to remove the edges from all the knives in her house and hide the bullets.
@davidorf3921
28 күн бұрын
@@patricklaroseii70 Not to mention taking the power pack from her sword
Here I am, shutting down for Friday and - BAM, another half hour that comes first ;)
the plot thickens! glad to see wyatt's family and reactions to the story so far thanks for a great story
Twists and turns. Wheels within wheels. Another great episode! Thanks.
Gotta say i waited all week for this
@danielsebestyen7955
29 күн бұрын
Same
@davidorf3921
29 күн бұрын
Likewise
Mom’s pride replaces her fear for the moment
Best program on youtube Full stop
ROFL! I called it 😊. "By the way I'm a noble now. Got to go bye!"
like if you love this series 🙈
Another great chapter, the images of the video were great. They represented the story well. I loved how the last image actually said duke draymore. Veronica is feral dog that needs to be imprisoned. The mysterious call says the duke made some sort of deal to save the Principalities but still not why, can’t wait to find out why. The one thing I really hate about Wyatt is the fainting, and all the males log his family do it. Really? I didn’t remember hearing the names of his brothers but having everyone in his family having a W name made me laugh.
@davidorf3921
29 күн бұрын
Yeah all commoners on the planet apparently have a first name starting with W it was explained in a previous chapter - regarding the fainting there is apparently a hereditary condition Vasovagal syncope which can cause this so looks like the Author knows what they are doing LOL - I suspect that the more Wyatt hangs around with Clara and Cynthia the harder he will be to shock and thus the fainting will decrease, that or it will kill him
Looks like wyatt comes from a family of fainters🙄😂
This time I'm a little late, since i was watching "a humans best friend" at the time, but god, i rlly loved seeing how both Wyatt and his family are alike, haha
Thanks! This is one of my favorite series! Your graphics are getting better all the time. Keep up the great work!
@scifistories1977
20 күн бұрын
Thank you! sorry for the late reply. I very much appreciate your support. Chapter 33 part 1 is out later today.
The plot thickens!
Great episode! I love how the author is expanding our "sphere of understanding"!
Everything about this story is first rate, professionally & ingenuously written! This chapter was so well done... so enjoyable. Thank you again to the author for such a fantastic SSS & SciFi Stories for all the work in placing such great voices to the characters!
Right when i thought this story couldn't get any better, then WHAM ! I'm telling you right here and now ... This is so good in fact perfect !! Keep the voice it's icing on the cake, the best ... Please keep going so many ways to draw this out and expand the story '' The Black Ship '' . Just wanted to take the time and your eyes to read this ... This is a Win Win Win ... Looking fore ward to listen to Chapter 32 ...Thank You
The small background details adds to the depth of the story. One again another great chapter
I’m really enjoying 🤣 this story line, it’s not same old earth against the space council. Telling Wyatt’s surrounding story really helps and seeing his family today, a real joy 🤩 Thank you 🥹
Seems like all the men in that family are wound way too tight.😄 I'm very glad the author chose to cover Wyatt's call, and I hope we will get some more updates as episodes roll in I really appreciate how this isn't just a story about Wyatt. He's a bridge to a host of other stories and characters, all of whom are developing at a respectable pace. Then you have Draymore's story continuing to develop as well. The subtle foreshadowing is VERY well done, with Frederick Anderson's words as Cynthia restrained him being the preface to Draymore's call, and a testimony to the depth of the Duke's treachery. It will be very interesting when the two stories collide. Speaking of Anderson, the prince better have his story down pat. Anderson's absence from the procession will be noticed.
@thire7432
28 күн бұрын
Oh, that’s true. Frederick probably would have been one of the nobles in the procession.
I'm beginning to like this story even more and more. Please, keep it up.
Absolutely loved this chapter! I really hope that once why it gets to talk to them again fainted in front of the prince add a quart full of Nobles in the Royal family. Definitely would love to hear the family's reaction on that story! John, as always amazing job man! Keep up the Great work!
@scifistories1977
29 күн бұрын
My pleasure, Karter! Thanks again! I'd like you to be a tester for my new streaming platform. It's not ready yet... but when it is, I'd like to give you a login to check it out.
@KarterBigs
28 күн бұрын
@scifistories1977 Of course! You know I'm always happy to help! Just let me know when you ready for testers!
Thank you so much for another great episode.Can't wait for the next one❤❤❤❤
I love this story. This is the best story out there. Thank you
Draymore bad man get him WYATT 😊😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉
"He made a friend." Mothers always notice the important things. I love your work. Please keep going with the story.
@thire7432
28 күн бұрын
Actually it was Weskel who made that statement.
@Jekanadar
28 күн бұрын
@@thire7432 Oh. Really? Just listening to english is still difficult to me. Sometimes I miss details.
@thire7432
28 күн бұрын
@@Jekanadar yes, Weskal said that and then fainted. It was, apparently, the piece of information most surprising to him.
Books have always been the best way to tell a story. The mind is better at filling in back ground if the writer gives it hints of what suppose to eye, he does. I can’t wait for next chapter.
Thanks! You never disappoint!!!!
@scifistories1977
29 күн бұрын
Thank you again. You're very good to me, and I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
@sherritasanders996
29 күн бұрын
@@scifistories1977 your welcome!
And now we learn of what’s happening on the home front.
Been a long week waiting for this!.
I wonder when we will see veronica vs cynthia that will come. I also wonder if the bugs etc in communication bouys and satellites mentioned a couple of chapters ago will trace wyatt's call and put the family in danger. Definitely a few hmmmms going on. Another great chapter Ekhida
Enjoying the storyline. Keep up the good work.
@scifistories1977
28 күн бұрын
Thank you! Glad your enjoying the story.
Does this entire family have low blood pressure problems or something? The smallest little shock and they're dropping like flies.
@davidring681
29 күн бұрын
I bet you’d faint if someone gave you a million bucks lol
@ThomasTomiczek
29 күн бұрын
@@davidring681 Naj. Seriously. Also - and he is right - ONE yes, but ALL?
@davidorf3921
29 күн бұрын
Vasovagal syncope can be hereditary and causes fainting in otherwise healthy people
@Rhydan-rg6rj
29 күн бұрын
@@ThomasTomiczek just like goats
@woswasdenni1914
29 күн бұрын
@@davidring681 hard to faint with half a million worth of blow in your blood while jumping on half a million worth of hookers
Thank you
Awesome. Now we know that fainting runs in Wyatt's family.😂😂 Who is the puppet master over Draymore? 👍👍
Thoroughly enjoying this storytelling! Interesting, rich, and engaging.
Last episode was Book 2 Chapter 30. That and the change to Wyatt's family made me think I had missed something. Hope you have returned to chapters and leave out the Book part for simplicity. It appears that the Duke is a pawn of the builders of the Black Ships and he might be in a little over his head.
Already listened to this chapter 2 times! So it's a family thing.
Great episode, reading and pictures. Draymore knows what he is doing is wrong his wife wouldn't be there for him but for the children. So who is behind him and why is he doing what he is doing. slaughtering a whole house ???? I there should be blowback for that. Jincho said his people had more advanced weapons than the principality. His knowledge might help them turn the tide if he can help augment their ships. This could be a movie or series of movies.
Forgive me, but I'm not crazy about the way the family was portrayed. They looked like something out of the old west. I knew picky, picky.
It is always a pleasure to find another chapter has hit the youtube waves and I am so glad I don't have to depend on catching it on TV the old fashion way. The fainting spells having a very specific trigger for Wyatt is rather funny and makes him more human than most stories that have a hero without any serious flaws. I had already guessed that Duke Draymore had been 'encouraged' to push for this revolt. What this mysterious being is up to remains to be known but the fact Draymore has apparently acted upon this compulsion has many possibilities that remain to be known. But if I were to postulate on the various possibilities they would be. 1) The Mystrery Being (MB) has something to gain from the instability of the principality, 2) Draymore is just a pawn in this skeem of the MB. 3) There is a genuine threat from some outside force that has prompted all of this that the MB knows of but was unwilling to share with the proper rulers of the principality. 4)... I will hold on to this one till I know more. Anyway another great chapter in the story. But if I had one gripe I would say that the story should be released at the same time and day each week just to help us poor readers from checking their computer every 30 minutes. But who am I to tell y'all what is best. Thanks for giving us this great saga of Wyatt Staples, savior to the princess, adviser to the prince, punching bag to the lovely Cynthia, Knight Bannerett, and son and brother with a habit of fainting whenever he gets overwhelming emotionally overloaded.
TGIF thank you for a wonderful chapter to close out the week. The staples family reunion though brief was a further development to the continued adventures of WS. The shield may need a rework to include a fainting couch 😅. Wyatt stepped up to the Plate and showed that he is truly a thoughtful son. Clara provided sound advice and though the 400K shocked the family Wyatt let them know that he now has the wherewithal to do more. All of the Staples males are afflicted with the fainting spells. Wyatt’s mother is genuinely proud of her son and all that he has accomplished to date. I am sure that the future holds bigger and better things for Wyatt. Looking forward to chapter 32 😊
This easily became one of my top 5 favorite story's. I'd love to see it animated.
Dude I laughed way too hard at this chapter!! I love this story so much
3:13 "...clearly *Wirting* on something..." I see what you did there 😏
Thanks!
@scifistories1977
28 күн бұрын
Thank you, Trinity!!
Thanks! Can't wait for the rest!
@scifistories1977
29 күн бұрын
Thank you!
The Black Ship Suppliers speaks
@johnnyrotten3175
29 күн бұрын
Exactly 💯 We knew that Duke D got His Black ships from someone outside the Principality. Now we just have to figure out who that is.🤔 And what Their interests are in sponsoring this coup.
@davidorf3921
28 күн бұрын
@@johnnyrotten3175 classically there are two main reasons for sponsoring a coup if you are from an external country, 1 stop the leader of said country from attacking you by forcing a change in leadership or 2. weaken the country by removing decent leaders making it more vulnerable to invasion
TY i loved learning about wyatts family, this was a nice surprise. i say this ever time but its true, i love this story and will read or watch as long as you want to write. TY
love that Wyatt's fainting spell is genetic from his father side. 😂
I inherited a fainting trait from my dad too
Well this was an interesting twist with about 2/3 of the chapter from Wyatt's family on Volantis. I do like how we get to see things from Weskal's pov. It is interesting to see how Wyatt's family is at the same time as Wyatt on the Noirnavio and not in the past. It was great showing the Staples reaction to hearing about the coup and the 3rd Fleet is loyal Duke Draymore, which Wyatt is (was) attached to. It was nice to see one of the reasons why Winona didn't want Wyatt in the navy was if there was a coup/Civil War. I do find it funny that by the time the Gimore finally tells their commoners about the coup Wyatt's family barely has time to think about it and Wyatt calls then 😂. I do love the wholesome scene with the family reunion Wyatt has with his immediate family after not talking with them for about a year. I do like how Weskals reaction to Wyatt wearing a officer uniform and the rest of families reaction quickly following 🤣. I am not surprised that his family is happy Wyatt is now serving in the Prince's fleet and safety at Macha. I am not surprised that Wyatt decided to make sure to see his family gets dumbfounded react of the 400,000 credits, similar to how Clara did to him 😊. It was hilarious that Wam teasing Wyatt thinking the woman's voice he heard from Wyatts end is Wyatt's girlfriend. Especially when Wyatt thinks about Cynthia being his girlfriend 😂 and rebuked his brother that the woman was his superior and his friend. I am not surprised that Wyatt ends the call with telling them he had become a knight barrent. Since he didn't want to deal with the fallout of it. Well you surprised me EkhidnaWritez with all male members of the Staples family has goat fainting issues at something supper surprising😂🤣. Interesting how Wirt fainted because Wyatt became a noble and Weskal due to Wyatt making a friend. I do think that Winona get along well with Clara and Cynthia in finding how Wyatt fainting spells. Poor Wyatt getting 😢 no support from him mom with thinking how many times he probably has fainting due to him becoming wealthy, a officer and a noble. It was nice touch how Cornelius relaxed then he saw the evidence backing up Veronica's claim that House Ivali had betrayed house Draymore and that Veronica did not go half cocked killing of an entire moderately powerful noble family. Its good that Cornelius is smart enough to realize that Veronica is hammer that needs to be kept in check, other wise she may kill people who don't deserve it and cause him unnecessary problems. I do like how Cornelius admits he screwed up raising Veronica.
@thire7432
28 күн бұрын
I knew someone else noticed that Weskal was more surprised by Wyatt making a friend than by the other news. Weskal knew that Wyatt would go far in life so him becoming an officer and wealthy noble was just surprising news, but he had long since resigned to the fact that Wyatt was so guarded that he would never open up enough to make a friend, so him making a friend was an outright earth shattering revelation.
@davidorf3921
28 күн бұрын
@@thire7432 Of course the family are not stupid so Weskal probably realised that given the friend is also his boss that she must be a fairly important noble as well
@Soundwave119
24 күн бұрын
@davidorf3921 I honestly could see Wam not realizing that Cynthia is a noble and Wyatt's suppior due to all the bombs he is dropping on his family 😂.
Weskell was wandering the woods, wanting to waste wascally wabbits with his wifle. The comedy chapter.
Thank you for these visual upgrades.
Excellent chapter!! I love your writing style. 😊
Bro single-handedly knocked out his whole family edit:minus his mom
@Soundwave119
24 күн бұрын
Winona did not faint. I can see Winona and Clara having fun trying to get the male Staples to faint just for their amusement.
Way to go WYATT 😊😊😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉🎉
So awesome. I love this series I can't wait to see more of it.
Yes,,,
I knew the Duke was nothing more than a pawn.
Excellent chapter
I am really enjoying this story, what a series this would make.
God i am so giddy with this ep. I wanted to see the fams reactions to his promotion to nobility
a long awaited episode. meeting his family
Thanks
@scifistories1977
20 күн бұрын
Thank you! sorry for the late reply. I very much appreciate your support.
Loving this story. Can't wait for more!
I love this group of episodes I'm always looking to watch the next one and was wondering when this was gonna come out. Keep up the good work and keep making these awesome videos.
I LOVE THIS!!!!
I think I'm following 4 or 5 sci-fi authors, but this one is hard wired in my schedule. It's a delight to listen in. The visual descriptions are great and getting better and better. And the story line...a Princess who can kick ass and a knight bannerette who thinks he's a regular Joe. I mean you can't go wrong.🎉
i was waiting for this phone call.
Great chapter. Maybe my fav so far. The dukes part in the end made it even better. I like the way the author does his writing. The family visit stirred emotion in me due to my own life exp. Only good authors do that. Love this story and thank you
Great story line. Thank you
One of the best chapters...... Looking for much more......!!!!!!! GREAT JOB......!!!!!!!!!
Love this story, hard to find one to get hooked on
Cornelius seems to regret a lot in regards to his daughter. Also her devotion is creepy af. Kinda makes me suspect her mind was forced into this level of devotion, probably by the entities that are pulling the strings behind the scenes. Which would explain why the Duke has locked his son up and hidden away from all prying eyes. He's not just a son that disagrees with him, he's in danger of getting turned in the same fashion as Veronica. My question would be what happened to the spy network that serve the Principality? It's difficult to swallow that the only spy network in the galaxy all belong to Cornelius and his allies! I'm hoping more allies of the Prince pop up in Cornelius's camp and start working against them in the shadows. Just my thoughts as a fan, not critiquing the brilliant work of EkhidnaWritez! I still love the story even if I'm way off lol 😅
WOW On a Friday! Thanks, it was a long week. I think I'll grab a beer
Thabks for the chapter! Just wondering if theres an expected schedule for the release?
The. Store is better and better love 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
I need this story made into an anime series at least, better yet, a live action series either on tv, or a streaming service. You have everything a good series needs to be successful! Thanks for the fun!
@scifistories1977
28 күн бұрын
I'm about to start a streaming platform (see my community posts). If I can get it off the ground, I plan to make this series into an animated cartoon series.
So now we know where Wyatt got his fainting spree from, lol lol lol 😂
Totally intrigued by who Lord Cornelius was talking to at the end. I wonder what the deal Cornelius made was for? This definitely could be made into a great TV series on one of the streaming services. Are you listening Amazon Prime? 😉
Why the hell am I tearing up?
Yipppppppeeeeeee so glad another chapter
love this book
Glad they didn’t declile the call😂
Can't wait for the next
And the Hidden Protagonist emerges . The " Master of Puppets " .
Another episode ❤❤❤
Once a week feels too long. I feel like a kid waiting on my next shonen jump episode. Could we get a release schedule?
Hit LIKE, it's a dam'd good story. . . listen to the Black Ship from the beginning, you won't be disappointed!
I just started watching these and became obsessed. I now can't wait for the next part to come out (assuming more parts are coming). Does anyone know the average time it take for new parts to come out?
@davidorf3921
26 күн бұрын
4 to 7 days typically depending on chapter length I dare say there will be a new chapter between Wednesday and Saturday