The Adventure Zone - And You See Lup

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Animatic number 2 from episode 67 of The Adventure Zone, a D&D podcast by the McElroys!
Art and sound design by me, story and audio by the McElroys
The first song is a pitched up version of The Chalice because Griffin didn't release the version that played under the flashback (and I didn't like the pacing of the dialogue, sorry Griffin).
Second song is Disrobed.
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  • @leonmercury3732
    @leonmercury37326 жыл бұрын

    This is a beautiful example of show don't tell. I didn't think this scene could get more beautiful after the 2 dozen animatics I've seen. Not to discredit others' hard work, but I was wrong.

  • @KyrstOak

    @KyrstOak

    5 жыл бұрын

    It _would_ be a beautiful example of 'show, don't tell' if it made any sense. I'm guessing I'll have to watch the original game session for me to know what's going on in this animatic.

  • @masonallred5569

    @masonallred5569

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@KyrstOak you could watch other animatic of this scene because they have Griffin's narration in them. Or spend like 80-ish hours listening to that entire arc of the podcast.

  • @BostonTerrierLOVE
    @BostonTerrierLOVE6 жыл бұрын

    Oh I'm so glad you included Lup's experiences inside the umbra staff as well. What a treat. Thank you.

  • @Natiform
    @Natiform6 жыл бұрын

    goddamn this made me happy all over again. i LOVE that you went through and put in the audio from the scenes that griffin was describing, just SUCH a good touch. every detail of this was perfect.

  • @Strix182
    @Strix1826 жыл бұрын

    Ugh, this is FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC. I'm normally a little put off by animatics lacking the Griffin narration, but you did such a great job with the cinematic elements of these scenes that it came out beautifully. This is what I want from the eventual Adventure Zone movie that's totally gonna happen some day.

  • @keidangoins9364

    @keidangoins9364

    6 жыл бұрын

    I know right!? This is so amazing. The music that tracked though, and the sound effects just all made it so great. I would be so down for a TAZ movie

  • @michaelbreis

    @michaelbreis

    6 жыл бұрын

    They had better give it at least three movies. The richness of character and story deserve time at least as much as (and arguably much more than) The Lord of the Rings.

  • @solluxpesters3848

    @solluxpesters3848

    6 жыл бұрын

    theres over 80 hours of podcast, 3 movies woudn't cut anywhere close to enough. a movie PER ARC is the least that woudnt rush the story too much

  • @zoroarkking18

    @zoroarkking18

    6 жыл бұрын

    Movie? Honey, no. 20-minute episodic TV series. 8 seasons (for each arc, to put it roughly) plus a couple specials for things that happened in bonus/live episodes. 20 minutes, I think, fits well with the pacing and humor of the show, although making an episode per actual episode of TAZ might be ill-advised, despite the amount of narration it would cut out. Like, fight scenes that took almost an entire episode of podcasting could easily be done in a minute of animated television. But then there might be things that take longer to explain while translating to a visual medium and cleaning up the story a bit. For starters, if you keep at least some of the OOC banter (and how could you not), you have to have a set with all the McElroys in a basement you can cut to at a moment's notice, but pick which times it's worth it for the flow of a polished TV show, like when was it funny, and when was it not funny enough to justify the break in tension? Making a TAZ animated TV show sounds like hella work, honestly, but when you think about, it, it's technically already halfway done compared to other shows built from the ground up. You've already got a completed masterpiece of a story and all the voice work you could need (unless you want some awkward lines re-dubbed), the animation and editing isn't easy, but neither is the other stuff, and that's taken care of.

  • @henryg6623
    @henryg66236 жыл бұрын

    Ok so normally I never comment on anything, but this animatic made me cry so now im OBLIGATED the emotion packed into this is just. on point. Lup's joy when she was released (and really all the emotions she shows, but THAT PART ESPECIALLY GOT ME), the sound effects, the EXCELLENT cuts and direction around griffin's narration. God this is just so good. Fucking stellar work.

  • @chrisborgars-smith2439

    @chrisborgars-smith2439

    4 жыл бұрын

    god yes, ugly sobbing all the way through

  • @gcadams782

    @gcadams782

    3 жыл бұрын

    Lup was so goddamn overjoyed (relative to most portrayals, at least) and uhhh it kinda recontextualized her arc in a profound way? I can't believe I am only now finding this video, it's so fucking good

  • @madam-mint

    @madam-mint

    3 жыл бұрын

    YES I WAS JUST SAYING THAT!!! She’s just so happy to be free, I can almost hear triumphant laughter!

  • @WildfireMagni
    @WildfireMagni6 жыл бұрын

    Your Ango is a good, good magic boy. Loved the whole thing, but your version of Angus was so sweet and innocent I felt like I had to say something.

  • @kltbird182
    @kltbird1824 жыл бұрын

    I really like how you really went for the “show not tell” route! The scream when Lup goes lich was perfect

  • @Blaybay123
    @Blaybay1236 жыл бұрын

    I love how you basically showed us how it would look like for people in fiction in that room ... The art is amazing and just kudos to you

  • @phoenixcoffee9343
    @phoenixcoffee93434 жыл бұрын

    Now we need a TAZ animated series. I had tears streaming down my face, that was so good.

  • @Jesse-ps7gq
    @Jesse-ps7gq6 жыл бұрын

    The detail of her flicking Merle off the umbra staff, amazing

  • @xXEternallyWritingXx
    @xXEternallyWritingXx6 жыл бұрын

    THIS IS SO GOOD IM SCREAMING Your portrayal of Lich Lup is so striking and the moment of the vault being opened and ugh all of this I love this.

  • @wayverleesoulsong
    @wayverleesoulsong4 жыл бұрын

    I love how this looks like an official cartoon storyboard without Griffin narrating

  • @textbookapologist
    @textbookapologist6 жыл бұрын

    wow ok im just gonna play this on repeat for the next 8 days so if you wanna make a 10 hour version of this itd save me a lot of fuckin time

  • @flamecatgaming4175

    @flamecatgaming4175

    6 жыл бұрын

    S A M E

  • @luin6788

    @luin6788

    6 жыл бұрын

    listenonrepeat.com/watch/?v=-IBBPeS7KZ8#The_Adventure_Zone_-_And_You_See_Lup

  • @ConSolo29

    @ConSolo29

    6 жыл бұрын

    right click, loop

  • @Selunabun
    @Selunabun6 жыл бұрын

    I have been waiting to catch up so I can watch this animation for so long. And, damn, it transcended my expectations. I'm a visual person, so sometimes I can't quite for the amazing scenes in my mind when Griffin describes them, so animators like you are just so wonderful for taking those word scenes and bringing them to life. Thank you so much for this utterly amazing animation of one of my favourite characters

  • @KyrstOak

    @KyrstOak

    5 жыл бұрын

    You can't quite _what_ for the amazing scenes?

  • @kappaross6124
    @kappaross61246 жыл бұрын

    The animation and art is the greatest, but THAT EDITING is somehow even better than the art!

  • @PineappleLiar
    @PineappleLiar6 жыл бұрын

    Do you think Lup is short for Chalupa?

  • @Brandon-er3yb

    @Brandon-er3yb

    6 жыл бұрын

    Maddy Leaman F U C K now it is

  • @kia2285

    @kia2285

    6 жыл бұрын

    in one of the "the the adventure zone zone" episodes griffin confirmed that while she was at first meant to be chalupa he felt it would be culturally insensitive and decided that her name would just be lup ^^

  • @emmagrace1812

    @emmagrace1812

    6 жыл бұрын

    God. DAMMIT.

  • @lorendaemon7945

    @lorendaemon7945

    6 жыл бұрын

    Maddy Leaman Nah Griff said it wasn't

  • @jessephanqueer6015

    @jessephanqueer6015

    5 жыл бұрын

    i never did. but now it is. lmao

  • @izzie2194
    @izzie21943 жыл бұрын

    lup’s anger when she dies and goes back to her lich form is so powerful. i love how you added and portrayed that

  • @cubalayabandit5591
    @cubalayabandit55916 жыл бұрын

    UHG, it's so good!!! You've just made me very happy. I love all your character movements. Especially when Taako points the umbrastaff into the air during his date with Kravitz. That was so good looking. I love everything about this!!!!

  • @creampuff1748
    @creampuff17486 жыл бұрын

    really thought i was done crying about this part, but hey look at me crying about this part again

  • @Lawcere
    @Lawcere6 жыл бұрын

    Holy shit, I love this so much. I love all the sounds you added and the recaps of all the times Lup has been helping taako throughout the series! She's been trying so hard to be there for her brother, and to finally be free (and for taako to finally remember her and figure out how to reunite with her) is just grand.

  • @NotRosyRose
    @NotRosyRose6 жыл бұрын

    I am loving these animations that edit out the like, OOC stuff, and adding in sound effects and stuff! SO GOOD

  • @londonhughes5986
    @londonhughes59864 жыл бұрын

    I’ve never seen this type of editing of the podcast commentary and I love how the story holds up without it. Simply a joy to watch.

  • @piyomiyopiyo
    @piyomiyopiyo6 жыл бұрын

    im crying ngl, i love this. the emotions are perfectly clear and i like how their actions / expressions seem so natural! its so cool to see it happen in "real time" without the buffer from narration :)

  • @marsgordon7395
    @marsgordon73956 жыл бұрын

    god im in love with this, the way you paced it, the cutting, the expressions, the lines from previous episodes, all of it is so amazing. i honestly got chills watching it

  • @willberman1562
    @willberman15626 жыл бұрын

    The way the inside of the umbrella looks kinda reminded me of the black lodge from twin peaks, was that intentional?

  • @MStemmm

    @MStemmm

    6 жыл бұрын

    i've never seen twin peaks so no

  • @chat33th
    @chat33th6 жыл бұрын

    I'm going to cry. This was beautiful and I absolutely loved this animation!

  • @hannahthomas249
    @hannahthomas24911 күн бұрын

    I am in love with this. You didn't NEED to include Griffin's narration because you showed it all so well!

  • @9darkspells
    @9darkspells6 жыл бұрын

    Um this is perfect

  • @mephostopheles3752
    @mephostopheles3752 Жыл бұрын

    The style. The character designs. The foley work. The minimal yet somehow fluid movement. The use of only dialogue, as if this is a normal cartoon we’re watching. The stitching together of scenes to illustrate Lup’s experience. I love literally everything about this, except that it’s only 5 minutes long lmao

  • @bazooka544
    @bazooka5446 жыл бұрын

    BRUH YOU DID SO GOOD

  • @rlvids9889
    @rlvids98896 жыл бұрын

    this was amazing holy shiiiiiiit??? I LOVE the bits of her pushing aside the fabric in the umbrella only to find more fabric rooms, it really showed how desperate and trapped she was

  • @doubleslashkarma
    @doubleslashkarma3 жыл бұрын

    "I'm going to flipping kill you know." What a line.

  • @madam-mint
    @madam-mint3 жыл бұрын

    I won’t lie, I teared up as Lup spun around while grinning/laughing. You could tell she was proud of herself and just...so relieved to finally be free. And also the way it looks like she’s screaming “IT’S ME! I’M IN HERE!” or something like that, just...such desperation in that expression.

  • @alliehera
    @alliehera6 жыл бұрын

    Incredible animation! I love the scene that you chose.

  • @rinseyong5202
    @rinseyong52026 жыл бұрын

    HOOOOOOOOOLY FUCK DUDE THIS SHIT IS FUCKING AMAZING??!?!

  • @Haphazardous31
    @Haphazardous316 жыл бұрын

    Fuck that was good. Holy shit. I am genuinely so impressed, not just with the artistry and the animation quality but with the editing as well. This is super well done. Good on you for knocking this out of the park!

  • @magicoA
    @magicoA6 жыл бұрын

    Seeing it from just LUP's perspective as even sadder,thank you for that good cry.

  • @keaton5101
    @keaton51016 жыл бұрын

    the fucking,,,, the perspective, the backgrounds are fucking powerful and the anatomy and how the characters are drawn at different angles its incredibly good at giving a sense of space

  • @mothmanofficaltm8397
    @mothmanofficaltm83973 жыл бұрын

    And I also love the backround music for this moment, it starts off very calm and sort of depressing, much how the scene starts, but slowly picks up speed as lup is killed, then she's entrapped inside her umbrella, until she finally escapes and the music that seemed to have a panicked and impatient feel to it soon turns into a song relating to triumph and power as the waiting finally paid off, and she escapes, stronger then before.

  • @gwandola
    @gwandola6 жыл бұрын

    god the fucking facial expressions. his face when he broke the umbra staff I threw my arms up it was so good. and then the rest of it was just the most beautiful animation. god like hearing that sequence felt like a treat, and watching it through your animation was the cherry on top. thank you.

  • @anacoanagoldenflower
    @anacoanagoldenflower6 жыл бұрын

    This is super well done, like absolutely incredible! It turned out beautifully and you can tell you worked so hard on it. It's a little detail, but I love Lup's scream when she becomes a litch!

  • @cosmosayz5338
    @cosmosayz53385 жыл бұрын

    This honestly has to be the best TAZ Animatic out there. The sound, the characters designs, the music and how well you do it without the narration all of it Is just so beautiful, and I swear every time I watch this one I just get so emotional because this was such a great moment and this animatic does this moment justice.

  • @cosmosayz5338
    @cosmosayz53386 жыл бұрын

    This is by far the most powerful and best animatic of this scene. The way the audio is, the narration being gone it's just.. im in love with this..

  • @alicehodges483
    @alicehodges4836 жыл бұрын

    This is hands down (heh) my absolute favourite interpretation of this scene. And, as much as I adore Griffin's beautiful monologues, the choice to not have Griffin describing what was happening was goddamn inspired. Genuinely, this is Amazing, and I Adore It.

  • @time-is-restored
    @time-is-restored6 жыл бұрын

    thiS IS THE GREATEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?! THE SOUND EDITING AND STAGING AND PERSPECTIVE AND CHARACTER DESIGNS ALL OF ITS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @vimesysammy
    @vimesysammy3 жыл бұрын

    I absolutely love this. The way you draw Lup and the expressions on everyone’s faces, it’s wonderful.

  • @eclipsedarksouls6036
    @eclipsedarksouls60363 жыл бұрын

    I love how it was edited to just being the in character dialogue.

  • @alexanderbacks8966
    @alexanderbacks89666 жыл бұрын

    I'm crying that was like something out of a full length film. you portrayed such emption in each shot, it was incredible

  • @yenee94
    @yenee945 жыл бұрын

    Holy shit that last scene!!! I think I fell in love with Lup thanks to this animatic, so much raw POWER damnnnn

  • @emko3264
    @emko32646 жыл бұрын

    I love your TAZ animatics! They are my all time favorites and I love re-watching the two!

  • @rorygiambalvo2955
    @rorygiambalvo29553 жыл бұрын

    I love the connotation that Lup had destroyed/devoured the essence of every other magic user trapped by the umbrastaff, taking their power for her own. All hail the undisputed Lich champion Lup

  • @drinkerofpaint
    @drinkerofpaint3 жыл бұрын

    Oh my god gathering all the voice lines and putting them in in order and drawing the descriptions is just,,, such an immersive way of doing it i appreciate the extra effort so much,

  • @masonallred5569
    @masonallred55693 жыл бұрын

    I watched like five different animatics of this scene before stumbling upon this one and this one made me feel more than the other ones. I wasn't just hearing about what happened. I was watching it unfold. Experiencing it. Good job!

  • @juice9029
    @juice90296 жыл бұрын

    THIS IS SO AMAZING THE ARTWORK THE LITTLE EXCERPT FROM THE EARLIER EPISODES IM AAAAAAAAAAA LUP LUP LUP LUP

  • @shadowbrine114
    @shadowbrine1142 жыл бұрын

    These ones are always my favourite because you edit out all the non-dialogue talking so it feels like a real show

  • @susanna9310
    @susanna93103 жыл бұрын

    wow this one rules! i especially love your lich design with the dark ears sticking out of the hood :)

  • @celineslinares2861
    @celineslinares28616 жыл бұрын

    This is AMAZING! The amount of detail that you put into this is incredible, there is so much emotion in your art, like the way you had lup desperately clawing at the curtains trying to get to her brother. I loved every moment of this video, keep up the good work!

  • @kelljan70
    @kelljan706 жыл бұрын

    Excellent work! I loved how you showed the time before Lup was trapped, during, and after. Was not expecting that.

  • @sampdesigns
    @sampdesigns6 жыл бұрын

    This is amaaaaaaazing. Its suprisingly better when not having the additional narration and silent/music only.

  • @DaisyPeach
    @DaisyPeach6 жыл бұрын

    GOD i just got the same goosebumps i got from listening to the episode all over again.... this is SO GOOD thank you for this

  • @Bacongolem
    @Bacongolem6 жыл бұрын

    This is so great. The storytelling in the pictures is perfect. I love that it needs no GM narrative to show what happened. Thank you. I've watched it like 7 times already.

  • @duke__
    @duke__6 жыл бұрын

    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so good! like fucking fantastic! also, bless your soul for going back to all the older episodes just so you can add in those extra dialogues during Lup flashback.

  • @kieransaul2711
    @kieransaul27114 жыл бұрын

    I usually don’t like animatics that cut out Griffin’s narration, but this is one of the rare exceptions.

  • @aerinpage
    @aerinpage2 жыл бұрын

    I love that Griffin really managed to capture the sibling dynamic between Lup and Taako at the end. After all this time they haven’t been able to see each other Lup’s first words to Taako is just “you’re dating the Grim Reaper????”

  • @beholdingsarchivist
    @beholdingsarchivist4 жыл бұрын

    Phantasmal and Resplendent

  • @galacticjewels7856
    @galacticjewels78563 жыл бұрын

    “Are you the one that’s been hurting my brother out there?” 🥺🥺❤️

  • @LochNessie2626
    @LochNessie26263 жыл бұрын

    Wow wow I love the way you have cut in just the dialogue. And how you collected it from various episodes! Also Taakos face when Angus does the spell really shows his realization and it was perfect

  • @rorzeebubbles3293
    @rorzeebubbles32936 жыл бұрын

    im actually crying a little bit??? this is perfect, with the extra audio bits from previous episodes and the sound effects and your art?? so good?? you made my wife look so good and i love every second of this video

  • @MaggieTheNerd
    @MaggieTheNerd6 жыл бұрын

    I am fucking crying, both at this scene and the amazing art/sound work you've added to it. Fantastic job!!!

  • @betheleanor
    @betheleanor6 жыл бұрын

    the editing in this is PHENOMENAL. you really went above and beyond for this animatic!!! great job!

  • @alyssaclarke9867
    @alyssaclarke9867 Жыл бұрын

    Literal goosebumps!!! So damn beautiful thank you for making this!! (Sorry I'm five years late lol)

  • @parkeraddams7590
    @parkeraddams75904 жыл бұрын

    Showing us rather than telling us made this animation absolutely astonishing. It's not the same narration I've heard from all the other animations of this piece, instead, you trusted your art to tell us, the viewers, what we already knew: Lup's story and how she returned to Taako.

  • @dishfishes
    @dishfishes6 жыл бұрын

    Theres been so many renditions of this scene but this is by far my favorite so far aaa

  • @jaydayart9526
    @jaydayart95266 жыл бұрын

    YES!! YES YES YES this is my absolute favorite!!!! The expressions, the sounds, the movement holy shit this is great!!

  • @DementisVenustas
    @DementisVenustas5 жыл бұрын

    Still cried, then burst into cry-laughter at the end, just like I did when listening to the episode. This is so great, nice job!

  • @paigevalley6151
    @paigevalley61514 жыл бұрын

    I didn't cry at this part originally I don't think but this animatic was so good that I cried of emotion, Great job!!

  • @nyssarc146
    @nyssarc1466 жыл бұрын

    By far one of my FAVORITE animations of this scene, I feel like I’m watching a movie uuUGH, the sound effects and the movement it’s all just so perfect, thank you for blessing us with this 🙌🏽🙌🏽

  • @Alyssa-he6mn
    @Alyssa-he6mn5 жыл бұрын

    You are amazing! This is such a spectacular portrayal of everything that happened, even more so by adding in the little tidbits from when Lup was able to influence outside events. I am actually crying because of how good this is.

  • @zerumsparklez9956
    @zerumsparklez9956 Жыл бұрын

    Whoooooah, this video is trippy when stoned. Great vid tho. Really love how you only included music and the actual speaking, you told the story beautifully with just your art.

  • @DB-su4ke
    @DB-su4ke3 жыл бұрын

    oh holy shit, SOUND EFFECTS?! my heart can’t take this!

  • @carolinea3899
    @carolinea38996 жыл бұрын

    This is like one of my top favorite animatics it's so amazing.

  • @s-r-w
    @s-r-w6 жыл бұрын

    OK, favorite TAZ animation I've ever seen holy shit!! Good job!

  • @emilyboudreaux4527
    @emilyboudreaux45273 жыл бұрын

    shaken to my ABSOLUTE CORE. THANK YOU.

  • @michaelthompson2363
    @michaelthompson23634 жыл бұрын

    Ooo, I really like how Killian and Carrie were drawn! I don't mean the other drawings weren't as good, but those the way you drew those two is the closest to how I envisioned them when I listened out of any other artists' rendition I've seen so far. Nice work my friend!

  • @user-vn6gi1kt2s
    @user-vn6gi1kt2s5 жыл бұрын

    Holy, this is such great visual storytelling. Got chills watching this.

  • @flamecatgaming4175
    @flamecatgaming41756 жыл бұрын

    dude i got fucking chills, literally cried not even joking. ive watched this like five times now and it never gets old

  • @NikoshiSenika
    @NikoshiSenika6 жыл бұрын

    GOD i saw your preview of this on twitter when you started working on it and i was blown away THEN, and it's just. this is so much and im SO GAY for lup and. GOSH

  • @sleepyselkiesiren
    @sleepyselkiesiren5 жыл бұрын

    I didn't think anything could match the magical quality of Griffin's voice during this scene, let alone match it without using the words! This is honestly amazing

  • @tristonanan
    @tristonanan6 жыл бұрын

    This is so good. Oh man. I am listening to the podcast for the first time, and I just finished this scene. I needed to watch this because, damn, this scene gave me chills. Your animatic was fucking incredible!

  • @NyxKnacks
    @NyxKnacks6 жыл бұрын

    This might be my favorite TAZ animatic ever??? The expressions are wonderful and I love how you did the scene where Taako's preventing Lup from blasting Kravitz

  • @DrownedFrenger
    @DrownedFrenger6 жыл бұрын

    this is so damn good and so expressive and i just literally shed a tear I went through all the emotions again :D THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!

  • @mrTwisby
    @mrTwisby3 жыл бұрын

    I'm grinning ear to ear with tears in my eyes. This is perfect! 👌

  • @ToxicXNature
    @ToxicXNature4 жыл бұрын

    Holy hell this animation was beautiful every part of this is absolutely amazing

  • @disactel8148
    @disactel81485 жыл бұрын

    holy shit, this is amazing, just the way you put in the audio and the character design and the cinematography. Just everything together is amazing!!!

  • @sepiasmith5065
    @sepiasmith50655 жыл бұрын

    YES YES YES MAKING IT LIKE A MOVIE W SOUND EFFECTS SO GOOD ALSO GREAT ART

  • @statelyelms
    @statelyelms Жыл бұрын

    There's something funny yet touching about how the first thing Lup heard from her brother after getting trapped was "excuse me, uh d-dj-d-dorf, there's a cane here to look at"

  • @AnomGamerGirlPOTATO
    @AnomGamerGirlPOTATO6 жыл бұрын

    aMMAAAAAZZINNG~ So beautiful, The editing, the way you showed their emotions! It was all so AWESOME!

  • @reymazing731
    @reymazing7314 жыл бұрын

    Oh my god this is like the best thing ever??? And all the time you spent to add all the extra sound effects??? It’s so good I love this so much.

  • @scotty2hotty232
    @scotty2hotty2323 жыл бұрын

    Congrats this is the best I’ve seen. I miss the attaboy though. I know Clint says it but I imagine it as lupe

  • @rosemarycat5
    @rosemarycat52 жыл бұрын

    oh wow this is incredible!! I love your use of audio from the other scenes (when they find the umbra staff and kravitz)

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