Take 2 (Let’s hope KZread doesn’t delete my comment this time): Okay, THIS. This is good. The voice acting for Taranza is phenomenal and the accent only serves to make it even better. The beginning monologue establishes tension in the mood and the ending dialogue snaps the tension as if flicking off a light switch. Very good stuff here. I like the narrative a lot here too; it feels as if Taranza’s character arc has climbed a mountain and was thrown off the summit. He has allowed his naivety and desperation consume him, and it destroys him. An interesting and important point in this video is that despite the title being “Taranza Vs. Morpho Knight,” The lyrics seem to imply that this is in reality Taranza Vs. His friends. Taranza is trying to make a deal with Morpho Knight (We don’t know the terms Morpho Knight has set for Taranza; we only know what Taranza wants from Morpho Knight) and Taranza’s friends don’t want Taranza to make the deal because they can tell it’s a trap. At this point Taranza’s character reaches tragic irony. Taranza hurt his best friend by always doing what she told him, and now Taranza is hurting his new friends by refusing to listen to them. He grasps nothing in his desperate reach for a miracle and it is his undoing. On another note, something I enjoy a lot about this series is how Morpho Knight completely changes his demeanor depending on who he’s fighting. It’s almost whiplash watching this video and then watching the Marx video. This change in demeanor indicates that Morpho Knight is highly manipulative and will implement not only physical but also psychological tactics on whoever he faces. I love it and it’s brilliant. (Constructive criticism below) I think the only thing I see that could do with some improvement is choosing words that fit the syllable count with the music better. Sometimes when writing lyrics it’s a good idea to go over the instrumental and try out the lyrics a few times. If the lyrics don’t fit, add extra words to make it fit or change the set of lyrics altogether. I hope that helps!

@creationarycrew

2 жыл бұрын

Wow. Wowwowwowwowwowwowwow. This made my day when I saw it (and I just woke up when I saw it). You, my friend, are an absolute legend. No one has ever taken the time to write a comment of this size or caliber on my channel, or add critiques in it. It's very nice to get this kind of support and help early on in my KZread career. (The only other person who helps in this way is Hooded Pitohui. You may have seen him credited in the majority of the GSwL videos.) Thanks so much for the comment and critiques! Both are very helpful! -Mags

Great video! Love all the references to Triple Deluxe and how Morpho Knight constantly sounds like he's trying to convince Taranza to join him.

@PonandCon9025

2 жыл бұрын

Also, we can't resist this pun... 1:52 Morpho Knight: Take the palm of of my hand. Taranza: ok... which hand do you want?

@rachaelchampion6195

2 жыл бұрын

Lol

@rachaelchampion6195

2 жыл бұрын

Pon,Con I loved fighting you!

@rachaelchampion6195

2 жыл бұрын

You got your first subscriber!

@PonandCon9025

2 жыл бұрын

@@rachaelchampion6195 Thanks!

Something that Spongebob, S.I.D, and Kirby has taught me is that Butterflies are evil.

Rhyming altar with alter is a true power move

love that you really cannot tell if he's trying to not serve Sectonia or pick up Kirby.

I love this!!

Me: writes a long comment praising this video KZread: DELETES my comment Me: DO I LOOK LIKE A BOT TO YOU?!!!

@creationarycrew

2 жыл бұрын

Agh, I hate it when that happens. Thanks anyways!

@cornballdangernoodle

2 жыл бұрын

I’ll try to rewrite it when I’m less tired.

Song of simping

Do it with Susie

@creationarycrew

2 жыл бұрын

Patience young one. It shall be revealed soon.

@rachaelchampion6195

2 жыл бұрын

Be patient the master tells you to.

@rachaelchampion6195

2 жыл бұрын

You must be trained young padawan.