Dear Aleah. I just wanted to let you know that I listened to this so much, and on a regular basis that I know it by heart now. I wish you the best life has to offer for the beauty of the 26-letter combinations that you make.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+ibrahim al kattan thank you so much. this is very kind of you. it's crazy that you've memorized this!!! it took me awhile to memorize it, to be honest so that's impressive. thanks for the consistent support. c:

years later, still one of my all time favourites

I always come back to this.

I always end up coming back to this. My happy safe place.

Here lately this is all I listen to, so lovely. "...I keep thinking you're just waiting to honor me..."

i listen to this everyday, and i think of her, i think of the many times i wrote poetry, poetry that sucked just to hurt her, just to see if she could feel, just to make her suffer with my words as she suffocated me with her silence, to make myself look good... maybe i'm wrong but love makes us all crazy, and this poem kills me every time i listen to it, but i can never not listen to this

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+Becksan Enigma this means a lot to me. thank you for some serious dedication

Thanks for using Keaton's song to be with this poem. Pure art.

This poem moves me more than any other. It makes my heart break, it makes me reflect, and it makes me feel inspired. You have a real gift. < 3

Your voice is really good for poetry, the way you use tone and pacing it's really great. it's funny how much it reminds me of keaton henson, too. For a second, before I read the description, I thought this was by him. Really, really, really good poetry!

I really needed this Wow thanks so much! So Beautiful! Please take this Compliment beacuse you're Truth you're Poem mad me Smile and feel better in a Broken Home!

i never would have thought that any poem was beautiful enough to be paired with keaton's music but in this case i was terribly mistaken

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thanks, that means a lot coming from a Keaton fan. I was actually hesitant to use this song because of how much respect I have for his music.

@scarlettovington8942

9 жыл бұрын

I keep coming back to this poem, again and again.

That was just what I was trying to write some weeks ago. But, I doubt that I would do something as beautiful as yours.

This is honestly my favorite poem.

I really can't get over how beautiful this is. After hearing it twenty times it still makes me lose my breath. My god woman!

@MsSmileyFase

9 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for listening that many times!

I cry more and more for each time I listen to this. It fills my lungs and veins in ways no art have ever done. Mixed with keatons song this is just perfection

@Lillemanlovver

9 жыл бұрын

I would die to hear the story behind this poem. your heart is bleeding in front of everyones eyes and this time I'm so curious because this is too beautiful to waste

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+Hilda Kruuse sorry if it took me ages to reply to this but I really a appreciate this support and would love to have a chat about anything

I have been listening to this beautiful piece for about a year now, whenever I need it. You are truly magnificent. Thank you so much for sharing your mind with the world. I truly appreciate it

I want you go know I think about this poem every. Single. Day. I did a whole presentation for a photo essay project in 2017 with this poem as the "background music". My project was called Lose the Abuse. The inspiration and feelings I get ill never be able to describe. I wish I could show you the way i showed my teacher. Thank you for writing this. This poems gotten me through a good amount of things

With tears in my eyes, I do not know what else to say besides Thank You.

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for listening to my poetry and for enjoying it. I apologize for any tears, but i get that this was a rough one, even for me to record, i struggled.

I listen to this on a weekly basis and I can't even explain how amazing it is.. thank you for this

Just in case you didnt know Keaton saw your poem and called it beautiful. Secondly, I would agree with him and say its one of the best poems I have ever heard.

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

I saw that and I would just like everyone to know that I hyperventilated for about 4 hours.

This has made me cry. thank you so much.

I have listened to this about 15 times today in my garage. I am in love. What a beautiful sadness. My heart can feel this so deeply.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

i love that so many different people can have such similar experiences to feel affected by this. thanks so much for listening

Out of the many great poems i`ve listened to, i can`t help but refer back to this poem , its just that type of poem that drifts my mind away ,and every word is felt ,don`t let me even begin with your accent.. just simply Beautiful........and i can rant on and on... but all that i have to say is, u are best at what you do, Nobody else can write what you write .Never Quit At What Your Good At.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

thank you so much for the kind words and dedication! I'm working on a lot of new content right now and appreciate so heavily everyone who consistently say lovely things and their patience.

This is Beautiful

My god, what a beautiful poetry! So glad i found this

This is still my favorite poem. I come back and listen to it often.

I loveee this!!

I really love it. Full of meanings. Also the music is the right choice.

Omg that was... I am at a loss for words. All I have to say is that that was incredible i loved every second of it, your voice is so enticing, keep at it!

I keep returning to watching this. Its so beautiful, and heartfelt it makes me feel so deeply when I listen to it. I have shared it with many of my friends and they all love it too. You are insanely talented and I wish you all the good will in the world.

That is by far one of the greatest poems I've ever heard .

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much. That means a lot. c: Seriously thanks.

I love this so much. It is one of my favourites. You did a great job

I am absolutely in love with this. This is honestly my new favorite poem.

You really need to do more of this... please keep writing (and uploading)! Love it!!!

i keep coming back to this

@themocktailhour7958

7 жыл бұрын

Same :)

I love this so much I can say it is beautiful ❤️❤️ keep writing, you're amazing

This is wonderful

I come back to this poem every once in a while, and love doing so. Thank you for creating such comfortable words that slide so nicely into my ears. An appreciative listener. If you were ever to create more, you have my ears.

Wonderful

Thank you for making this.

I've come across this beautiful poem a few years ago, and I get back to it every once in a while. This poem has genuinely inspired me in so many ways. Take this as a compliment. Thank you :)

i read and listened to this eyes wide and holding my breath, i had no idea i was doing that. it was a wonderful feeling.

I found this poem a while back and fell in love with it. Recently I was broken up with by the person who I could only describe as my world. I stumbled across it again today and this poem has explained how I feel more than anything on this planet. Thank you.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

I'm so glad you could relate to it. that means a huge deal to me because it reassures me that I am not the only one who goes through stuff like this. so thank you. for reminding me why I write and hang in there.

ok now it touched my heart

ive been listening to this everyday, it is so beautiful.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

thanks so much emily! c:

This is the most truthful poem in the world. Thank you.💙💙

I am a poet myself, and while I definitely lean towards (writing) verse, I adore spoken word and I am blown away by the emotion and heart put into this. You should be very proud, and never. stop. writing.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

thank you so much. i would love to read any work you create so if you have links to anything feel free to send them over!!!

Love your voice sm 😭

God... so beautiful! One of the best poems i've ever heard. Thx for that great piece of art

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for the support. Also it means a lot to hear such wonderful comments. Thank you so much.

This brings me to tears everytime. It says everything I want to say yet can't. I listen to this every second of the day and honestly it is one of the most beautifully written words I have ever heard and read . I cannot even describe it. Thank you for creating this art. You truly are amazing my love "you are not my whole universe- because to say so would be an insult to space" god I love this

I never had a poem bring so many tears, it felt wonderful, thank you!

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

thank YOU. for listening to it and taking the time to comment. means a lot. so thanks c:

That was incredible. I am usually not moved by poems or poetry. But that moved me. It got me right in the feels!

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+Gitz C haha thanks for listening. hopefull you can find some poems you like. c:

please make more poems your voice is so delicate and deep! i really love your poems!

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+jessica lopez i will be posting some more soon. i know i say that a lot, but i will be

Thank you for this. You are clearly living in my head. Loved every syllable of thos poem

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thanks for taking the time to listen.

had so many feelings while listening to this. a wonderful work, cogratulations.

@MsSmileyFase

9 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for listening and commenting. c:

I'm in love with this ❤️

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

thank you haley. 💖

this kills me everytime and thank you

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+jiv vij thank you! for listening and taking the time to comment

@ivajovanova110

8 жыл бұрын

i'm listening again after 8 months and i love you even more. thank you for sharing this i feel it completely. thank you thank you thank you for existing

wonderful

Thanks! Thanks a lot!

this is the most beautiful thing I have ever heard, it is by far my favourite poem. I was in a very dark place and I'm so glad I heard this

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

I'm glad it could help in any way. I appreciate the kind words a lot. thank you

I really love your content it's beautiful :)

Is this an original? This ripped my fucking soul from me. What incredible writing.

Roses are red violets are blue looking at u makes me happy to giving a smile makes me see u care but the more u care the more u will get loved never give up and u fly so high i will see you one day and youll be so bright

thank you for this, this is amazing.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+alyssa lopezz thank you so much!!!

love your poem, and the music. Keaton Henson. so good, thank you, this means so much to me :)

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

it means so much that you took the time to listen and comment. thanks so much.

In my college class, I'm doing a 15-minute speech about this and I just wanted to thank you for saying all the right words and for teaching me that I am good enough. Your message is so inspirational and you're so talented, coming up with the right words to describe what you described is so difficult and it's so damn powerful. I found this when I was 14 and I'm 19 now and I've never stopped listening to it or forgotten about it. Thank you

@MsSmileyFase

5 жыл бұрын

thank YOU so much for taking the time to listen and for reaching out. i'm honored that you would write a speech about it and i'm grateful for you reminding me that my work means things to people.

@rhiannonshirck4338

5 жыл бұрын

@@MsSmileyFase Youre so welcome, is there anyway I could email you a few questions I had for you?

@MsSmileyFase

5 жыл бұрын

Rhiannon Shirck yes of course! My email is aleah.bradshaw@gmail.com

@rhiannonshirck4338

5 жыл бұрын

@@MsSmileyFase it said that its an invalid email address

@rhiannonshirck4338

5 жыл бұрын

I just sent you my questions via facebook messenger instead

This is so perfect

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much. :)

This is so brilliant.

@MsSmileyFase

9 жыл бұрын

Thank you!

this poem feels like home

this is so sentiment :')

very beautiful

@MsSmileyFase

7 жыл бұрын

thank you so much!!!

Thank you for this beautiful, this poem will be my favorite and I will listen every time I fall in love.. because I really like this poem, I intend to read it again with my friend who also likes falling in love and feel the same way..

1 person couldn't take this as a compliment

I'd love to make a video out of this, your voice is so relaxing, every words you said comforts me

@MsSmileyFase

7 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for listening and I'd love to see an adaptation of this! Anything anyone makes on here using this audio or if they'd want just the stripped version with no music or anything, please don't hesitate to ask! I'd love to see your art as well.

Please dont say "im sorry,i write poems" anymore.. U have a gift, to handle in such deep, emotional way the words, and i feel like im "honored" to have listened this poem because u decided to share it with all of us "strangers" :D on a open space like this...i think not everybody would have done that, i mean, share in public ur poems i think it means like standing naked, expose ur deepest emotions u expressed through that words, so u are a brave soul, by my "weird"? ;D point of view!! I loved also the choice of the music, keaton henson is another delicate,sensible soul, just like you! :)

@MsSmileyFase

9 жыл бұрын

Lisergic Queen thank you so much for listening. also comparing me to keaton in any respect is the highest of honors so thank you so much.

Still moves me

wow, this is amazing. well done

@MsSmileyFase

9 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much! Thank you for sharing it and taking the time to listen!

I've never feel so identificated with nothing except Keaton Henson, and this poem. You have a gift, please don't stop, keep writing poems likes this. I need to thank you for this, listening to this I find the words to express my feelings so honestly. Please keep writing. Here you have a fan :)

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

+3LM4UR1 thank you so much. this is incredibly encouraging tbh. i really appreciate your support.

I'm reaching out to you because I absolutely love this. I'm not big on watching stuff like this, and to be honest I found you on facebook off of a clothing page. Ive watched all your videos since then and just ... you have a great gift. Thank you so much for sharing this. You write beautifully. Thank you so much

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for listening. I do promise to have new work out soon. Also if you youtube my name there are some poetry videos from channels that are not mine. i also have a blog i put out a lot more written work on. -> prescriptionpoetry.tumblr.com i appreciate all the love so much. you guys all inspire me

it sounds like you have hurt alot.. i just hope you are okay and that I have listened to your poem with compassion and love

This made me cry, damn you're a good writer. Thank you for blessing me with this poem 😊

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

thanks for listening and commenting. means a whole lot!!!

you are beautiful!!

This beautiful... You have amazing talent. I wish I could write something as this, keep it up (: I support you and your works. I hope it gets into a book

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

I'm working on my first book of poems right now! and thank you so much for all the love

I just keep thinking you're waiting to honour me

fuck, you make me feel a lot of feelings. you are good !

you actually broke my heart

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

I am so terribly sorry! Didn't intend to, i swear.

thank you so much for this poem, I listen to it everyday because it reminds me of my ex boyfriend. You are so talented and thank you for writing so beautifully xoxo

i still eat all the food i hate first, and ive been saving up the food i like for fat too long.

so amazing. I'm so glad I found your youtube, I love your poetry but this one is definitely by far my favorite and it inspires me to write my own poetry. do you still write poetry? it seems it's been awhile since you posted more.

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

hi hello thanks so much for the comment and for the love. i do still write a lot, but I've been doing a lot of live performances more than video work. that should change soon. also idk if any of you have seen the short film adapted from this poem but you should check it out. it's by Ruckus Apparel and it's called insult to space.

By the way, I saw it on Tumblr. Thanks again.

hi i've loved this poem for what feels like forever, and i can't stop coming back to it. i'm wondering if i can use this in one of my videos? i love it so much and really want to make something visual about it. please let me know if not, thank you so much :-)

This is a the most beautiful poem, I was looking for you on google because I was convinced you must of had a book. You don't. I would seriously consider publishing one.

@MsSmileyFase

9 жыл бұрын

I've actually been compiling for some time and my hope is to eventually publish, but as I'm sure most people know, it's really difficult to find publishers willing to invest in an 18 year-old. haha. Thank you so much for the support though, and I will keep everyone updated if anything cool happens in the department of publishing.

Your GOOD :D

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much :D

Hi! omg! i super love this. new subscriber here. i'd love to make a video out of this.

Sandra Bullock

Your poem is amazing ! Is it in writing anywhere , it's nice to listen to it but I love to read poems too

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

That's a really good suggestion. I have a blog -> thedrivebypoet.tumblr.com I'll write it up and put it on there in my "full pieces" page

This is stunning... I just feel this should have a video with a story. Anyway you inspired me to write more and more. What sort of poetry do you read?

@MsSmileyFase

10 жыл бұрын

Thanks. i think it would be ideal to actually shoot videos for my poetry, but I'm a pretty crap film maker. :) I'll work on it though. Thanks again for the feedback.

What is the backing music? It works so perfectly! :)

@MsSmileyFase

9 жыл бұрын

It's "Petrichor" by Keaton Henson. He is truly an amazing artist, I recommend everyone do some digging and check out his stuff.

I would love to get part of this tattooed on me if that's okay

@MsSmileyFase

8 жыл бұрын

that is definitely okay! i'm so very honored you would do such. thank you.

What is your meaning behind this poem?