Beautiful and interesting film! My favourite parts were when she had her legs crossed as she sat on the loo & near the end when she lit a cigarette up.

@donaldmiller743

Ай бұрын

All girls need to light up a cigarette to be more beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

I am kind of blown away by how much is conveyed in three minutes. It would probably take me fifteen minutes to unpack my interpretation. Good work.

@olipina1699

4 ай бұрын

i’m very flattered! thank you so much, that means a lot!

i came here by youtube algorithm and resonate with crossing my legs while pooing. i love ur film's concept and color

@olipina1699

7 ай бұрын

thank you so much!!!

Don't know how I got here, but i was entertained!

@olipina1699

6 ай бұрын

yay!!

Make a smoking video

@olipina1699

4 ай бұрын

what

@donaldmiller743

4 ай бұрын

She would make a fantastic smoking video!

@biomorphic

4 ай бұрын

Make a video where you smoking a cigarette@@olipina1699

@davidbaldwin1233

Ай бұрын

Word

@biomorphic

Ай бұрын

@@olipina1699 there are a lot of people with a smoking fetish, who likes to see girls smoking. You have beautiful hands, and you are an attractive woman. Look like you have good camera skills. I think you can make great smoking videos. Video in which you just smoke, and you focus on hands, your mouth, your expression, context, camera angles. I think you can do in a way you can express your creativity. Think about that.

Very good , i like your hair🙂

Watched many shortfilms so heres my conclusion beeing brutally honest: Pros: 1. Good Lighting used and close up shots 2. Great Sounddesign Cons: 1. You look actually too pretty as weird as it sounds but its not so easy too focus on the film, maybe less makeup idk. 2. Camera work would need some improvement, maybe focus on having professional show you the best shots 3. Very hard to understand the core point, no visible storyline. Rather have a storyline and involve the core points into the film instead of having the film about the style mediums. 4. Don’t make it too confusing, the guy inside the clock was not making any sense for me, either use a regular old clock or make the point of him beeing inside a clock more obvious.

@olipina1699

6 ай бұрын

thank you! this was a school project. the point was to have it be an experimental film and the number one rule was NO storyline. although i have left it up to interpretation, my main concept was to convey the passage of time by wasting it; doing meaningless things all day that don’t take you anywhere. the guy was our clock conveying the hours going by with his eyes (again following the guidelines of experimental film) and i agree our actor is far too beautiful for an artsy role like this hahah. i appreciate the feedback!

Nice work, really well edited.

@olipina1699

6 ай бұрын

thank you!!!

Great!

Brilliant. Lynch will be jealous.

this is so cool

@olipina1699

6 ай бұрын

thank you so much!

masterpiece

@olipina1699

7 ай бұрын

thank you!

Ok, I'm here for it.

@olipina1699

6 ай бұрын

thank you!

@zacharhia

6 ай бұрын

@@olipina1699 Read your reply to another comment about the backstory of this short. What was the coffee spilling meant to symbolize?

@olipina1699

6 ай бұрын

@@zacharhia i wanted to portray dissociation through her morning routine ,to stay on theme with the fact that everything she does in her day doesn’t provide any long term benefits and alluding to present day consumerism and communism aswell, so i conveyed that through her drinking coffee!

@zacharhia

6 ай бұрын

@@olipina1699 awesome. Thanks for sharing!

@olipina1699

6 ай бұрын

@@zacharhia anytime!

soooo cooooolllll i loved that clock

I was very close to a breakthrough on my cure for cancer before watching this, but I found this video so pointless, so disturbing, so boring, so utterly devoid of entertainment value, that I've begun to question the motivation to save billions of humans worldwide. Who should I sue for recompense for the 2 minutes and 38 seconds of my life that I have wasted watching this? The DP Olivia Pina; the editor, Olivia Pina; the producer Olivia Pina; the editor Olivia Pina; the assistant director, Garret Doelman, or Alphabet's new KZread Product Chief Neal Mohan?

@olipina1699

29 күн бұрын

awww yay!!! i’m so glad❤️❤️❤️

@DUCKSAREEVILLLLLLLL

29 күн бұрын

@@olipina1699 You're welcome?