it was too ordinary / to even dare to remember.

@pvrunner8

3 жыл бұрын

So devastating to realize so forcefully and all at once what you've known this whole time but couldn't admit to yourself because you have to go about living your life as scheduled: this isn't normal, not even close.

@sophialorraine6185

3 жыл бұрын

thank you for introducing me to this account john

"Because we'll someday ache, for any regular Sunday in June" Maaaan, that hits different

@ourspoetica

3 жыл бұрын

One of my favorite moments in the poem! - Paige

@Diana-gt1rv

3 жыл бұрын

So lovely,... I totally feel in accordance with the deep meaning of this wonderful poem. 💕

@RamtheCowy

3 жыл бұрын

it hits even harder now unfortunately

I love that twist at the end of the poem - the end of everything for us might just be the climax of something immense for the universe.

"there's the black / chasm of want expanding / in my chest the way a bead / of ink breaks, making me difficult / to touch without an exit plan" Augh so good.

is the first part for me : "at which point time will cease to exist and i can finally stop complaining" I fell in love at once.

sav's poetry has always struck a chord with me. absolutely delighted to see her on this channel :)

I KNEW she would be on here soon. I have been waiting quite impatiently

@ourspoetica

3 жыл бұрын

I've been waiting impatiently, too!

This title really grabbed my curiosity and I absolutely love the line 'there was not a single indication the cosmos would one day shut like your eyes, tight with pleasure.' E.P.I.C.

The rough, raspy voice and the pauses that are a-little-too-long take this poem to a whole new level.

@rightonrightonrighton

3 жыл бұрын

Agreed! This was beautifully read and not at all affected

That’s one that will stay with me.

@HannaAnderberg

3 жыл бұрын

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this poem sent genuine chills shooting through my body - as someone who also painfully struggles with time and change and the thing time distorts and leaves behind I absolutely loved this poem and the idea of how we must the most ordinary and mundane the most when everything goes askew and fades and how we can't hold onto it all no matter how hard we try

God I didn't consider how great Sav's writing has become. And that intonation, immaculate

i just discovered Savannah Brown and am now tearing through all her work and wow, this one hits different. i want more moments like this

This is one of the most staggering poems on this platform so far, and there have been so many others. Thank you.

I really love Savs voice. she's got a really nice rhythm even when she's just talking.

im so excited for this poetry collection

Super. Lots of fresh directions going on all the time. Love the way you keep shuttling back and forth between the cosmic and ordinary (and microcosmic). Great gentleness and humor.

i subscribed to savannah’s channel when i was younger and, when i came back to youtube, didnt end up finding her again-it was a really lovely bit of deja vu seeing her on this channel, and a wonderful poem

@peptobismolveins

2 жыл бұрын

Her full name is savannah brown and her channel is by the same name. You can search and sub again and watch all the things u used to watch.

I love Savavah, she's a very good poet. Thank you Ours Poetica for bringing her here.

Wonderfully performed! A lovely start to my morning

oooooooof i like this a lot. the bead of ink breaking, the ordinary to remember, the ending with the eyes shutting tight- what a beautiful piece

I closed my eyes after reading your poem, and I destroyed my notion of circular time. Beautiful imagery!

extremely good upload Ours Poetica. I crushed the thumbs up on your video. Always keep up the superb work.

oh man sav!!! this was so beautiful

I loved it! Really beautiful voice, too!

Sav ive been following you for years. My preorder of sweetdark got shipped yesterday ( possibly the day before ...) and i just wanted to thank you , for the impact youve had on me from a far . for your first collection and for your book .they gave me something to lean on and to quote when i didnt understand my own feelings . thank you for giving me the words to express myself . I can wait to give your newest work a read ( probabaly in a corner in one sitting like the first ) im so proud of you for it

Aesthetic for sure-

Wow, I'm really impressed.

"Don't be shy, put some more"

"the day sucks with leech-teeth." I'm just gonna have to get the most out of today, aren't I?

Yup, this is one of the ones to keep, for me.

That is so good. That is just so good.

I love savannah so much! I am so glad she is sharing this snippet with us on this channel. I love you guys so much for bringing he on here ;-;

Wonderful

ohhhh so good

Savannaaaaah!!!

@adityakhanna113

3 жыл бұрын

Her voice is a wonderful mixture of pain and pleasure and rasp. Damn!

YESSS!;

a fragile world reflected in the glassy pearl of your spit left on my belly Loved it!

Damn. This is good

WOAH

Most metaphors/images used were of specks smaller than us specks of the universe.

I'm not crying, you're crying

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As a physicist I must say that your premise might be false. But otherwise I aprove.

“The black chasm of want” oof..

Most boring voice on poetry i ever heard😹😹😹😹😹