my goodbye | dnd oc animatic

Фильм және анимация

tfw you get disowned by your adoptive father
audio: • My Goodbye

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  • @gi_to_the_gii
    @gi_to_the_gii6 ай бұрын

    To anyone curious (and just because i like rambling about my ocs lmao) here's some context: The girl representing Odysseus here is my pc Héloïse, and the guy representing Athena is named Marquis. Héloïse grew up in an orphanage but never really felt at home there aside from when she was with her best and only friend. So after she got into a fight with one of the headmasters of the orphanage over learning magic she ran away to do just that (learn magic that is). But she needed money to do so, so she joined a thieves' guild called The Den, led by Marquis. Marquis and his bf/lover/husband im not sure point is they're gay became like father figures to Héloïse and the three of them lived happily doing crimes :D until one particularly big crime came along where Héloïse and Philip found themselves in a predicament and that's what's my "i am damaged" animatic is about (shameless plug lmao) and that's why Marquis is not so fond of Héloïse anymore TL;DR: Short kid almost killed her dad and her other dad is mad at her The song doesn't fit that well into the context ik but I thought it would be fun to make an animatic and i have zero control over hyperfocusing

  • @deadman3824

    @deadman3824

    6 ай бұрын

    tbh, I think it still fits pretty well (assuming some stuff about the OCs, which of course can be wrong. I'm writing this based only on the lyrics of the song and the information you provided in this comment. Let me know if it is!) It could fit because it could be seen potentially as Marquis getting angry that his partner almost died, and seeing it as Héloïse's fault. Thus, he kicks her out (while Philip is still recovering/can't interfere maybe? intentional or not?) using the "This way you can't cross the line" as a way to say that they can't be put in more danger by her mistakes, and the "this way you won't waste my time" as a way to try and depersonalize the action, by treating her as a mentee/employee who's failed him so he's kicking them out. Héloïse of course responds with the "that's just like you, selfish and prideful and vain" line, a jab at Marquis' role as a thieves guild leader: a stereotypically selfish, prideful and often vain role. Sort of turning his employee depersonalization back around on him (which could also explains why he looks so hurt at that line: not only is he being insulted by someone he views/ed as family, but they turned his attempt at depersonalizing it into a weapon to make it *more* personal). The rest of the song is them arguing just like the original song goes: a person of power rationalizing their decision to cut off the other person, and that person trying to come to terms with it, while also trying to do as much damage to the offending person's ego/decision as they can on the way out. For a bit of my own subtext (because I'm a hopeful romantic sucker during stories like this) I'm personally hoping that Marquis isn't serious about this, and that the entire situation is just a giant lash-out during a stressful time, and will regret and try to undo the kick-out when he calms down (and/or gets yelled at by Philip). The reason I think this subtext is here is because of the "you'll keep yours and I'll keep mine" line while gesturing at the necklaces. I presume they're some sort of gift/emblem of them being a family (either as a guild or just between the three of them) and by allowing her to keep hers, he's subtly (perhaps subconsciously) saying that she's still a member of the family, even if she's now estranged. And of course, all of this could totally be wrong and I'm pulling it out my ass ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I just really like character analysis and got excited upon seeing lore for some amazing characters! I hope you don't mind my interjection here!

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    6 ай бұрын

    @@deadman3824 damn you broke this down really nicely pretty much everything is spot on!! As for the family's fate going forward tho it depends on the dm really, but I love your interpretation!! Also thank you for reading my lore ramble 😭🙏

  • @deadman3824

    @deadman3824

    6 ай бұрын

    I fuckin' love lore rambles, I should be thanking *you*! I'm looking forwards to more! @@gi_to_the_gii

  • @hakunamatata4975
    @hakunamatata4975 Жыл бұрын

    me: (knows nothing about these people) me, to the little one: TALK 👏YOUR 👏 SHIT 👏

  • @HauntedNutPizza

    @HauntedNutPizza

    Жыл бұрын

    Best comment 😂❤

  • @The_Lord_of_Cryptids
    @The_Lord_of_Cryptids8 ай бұрын

    The tall dude could not handle being the one rejected. He looked so unsettled during the second verse.

  • @TsubasaOfTheSword
    @TsubasaOfTheSword9 ай бұрын

    This song works SOOOOO well for D&D characters. I like to make playlists for all of my characters and this song immediately had to go into one for my Tiefling rogue assassin. He was in an assassin’s guild where he fell in love with a cryomancer. While they were on an assignment together, they figured out their target was a group of children. And though the rogue refused to go through with it, the cryomancer didn’t hesitate to start cutting them down. To save as many as he could, he was forced to kill her during an argument that feels a lot like this song and made it resonate with me the first time I heard it.

  • @catherinep.1268
    @catherinep.1268 Жыл бұрын

    This was nicely done! Really good movement, the scenes flowed well and the angles for some shots only felt rigid in a couple of places. All in all a really nice video to watch! My favorite moment is when you see the two characters side by side (seeing the contrast in size and design) and when the character representing Athena in this song got in close and nearly drew his weapon. Well done!

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    Жыл бұрын

    Thank you so much!! Your comment made me really happy it feels honest so thank you for that c:

  • @hazyanimal9816
    @hazyanimal9816 Жыл бұрын

    Where are your subscribers? Seriously. Subbing rn

  • @kaiiimee

    @kaiiimee

    Жыл бұрын

    For real though!

  • @Paul_Revere451
    @Paul_Revere451 Жыл бұрын

    THIS IS GORGEOUS! im already so invested in the characters just by this

  • @Yukiba
    @Yukiba Жыл бұрын

    Damn this made me wonder, wtf they do to get disowned?! Like now I'm interested in the back story lol

  • @SkyyGamingX
    @SkyyGamingX11 ай бұрын

    This was so emotional but perfect in every way! Storyline, gestures, reactions, just perfect. Im subscribing right now and you cant stop me!

  • @mariel1533
    @mariel153310 ай бұрын

    This is one of my favorite songs and I love the animatic you made! Your character expressions are so full of emotion. Great work!

  • @ForenzaAudio
    @ForenzaAudio Жыл бұрын

    congrats. . . i am now subscribed and you can't get rid of me. Such wonderful art and emotional displays here! Not just in facial expressions, but in body languages, perspective and interactions. I look forward to more!

  • @quite_contrary_9956
    @quite_contrary_9956 Жыл бұрын

    Omg your art is so breathtaking!!! Awesome animatic!!

  • @AhiruArtist
    @AhiruArtist Жыл бұрын

    OH MY GOD IT'S ASTOUNDING THAT'S 3 minutes and I'm already hooked And it brought a smile to my face You give soooo much effort and talent too this great job

  • @timelane-qd2np
    @timelane-qd2np Жыл бұрын

    This is absolutely amazing! I love the expressions and how it all flows together! When I saw this I thought it would have at least 2.k views! Hopefully you get there because, this is just absolutely incredible!! 💕

  • @ilvekokopffs
    @ilvekokopffs Жыл бұрын

    your character designs are so pretty

  • @jess_the_dragon
    @jess_the_dragon Жыл бұрын

    Beautifully done, amazing work

  • @PiedPied.
    @PiedPied. Жыл бұрын

    Omg I love your art style!

  • @mastertofu
    @mastertofu3 ай бұрын

    Your artstyle and character designs look amazing

  • @pixxeldust
    @pixxeldust9 ай бұрын

    This is amazing! I’m so surprised this doesn’t have more comments. You earned yourself a subscriber!

  • @Starlightdreamer112
    @Starlightdreamer112 Жыл бұрын

    Beautiful! Just amazing

  • @tumblingartist
    @tumblingartist Жыл бұрын

    ooooh this is so pretty!!

  • @madison954
    @madison954 Жыл бұрын

    This is so cool keep up the good work.

  • @mentalrebllion1270
    @mentalrebllion1270 Жыл бұрын

    Nice! Makes me wonder if this song will ever fit one of my dnd characters. I can think of one direction it will suit but it probably won’t come up, namely between my astral elf and his relationship with Corellon. He lost faith after losing his entire family due to corruption in the royal family and their factions and became a refugee. Most recently he also lost his new hometown he has been protecting for the last 50 years. As for why it probably won’t come up, I find I want to invest more in his ranger class mechanically and the campaign will wrap up before we reach level 20. If we could go all the way to 20 I would dip into light cleric to show his renewed faith. As for the other side, this same character is actually a mentor to a good half of the party, some having known him since they were a child. He is something of a strict teacher but so far this kind of scene hasn’t come up. He has just taken on a new student though, an npc, and by taking responsibility for her, saved her from being punished for a crime somewhat unjustly (corruption is involved and he didn’t want her to be further victimized but she has committed crimes, yes, but the corrupt people would have scapegoated her instead of take responsibility). I suspect such a storyline might come up in that direction since the party is pretty self sufficient and adults so my astral elf is more hands off with them. Same can’t be said of this npc who is a teenager. Should be interesting. (Apologies for the length)

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    Жыл бұрын

    That sounds like a really interesting story!!

  • @mentalrebllion1270

    @mentalrebllion1270

    Жыл бұрын

    @@gi_to_the_gii oh and it just got better! Lol he just found out some information that is making him wish to flee and will put him at odds with our Paladin. Which is really juicy intrigue wise because the two actually get along really well and enjoy each other’s company. All that just happened is definitely going to put them at odds though, soon enough. I’m just so excited as we just got out of a heavy intrigue session. Lots of miscommunication and lack of communication and secrets and just soo much intrigue.

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    Жыл бұрын

    @@mentalrebllion1270 dayumn the ✨drama✨

  • @mentalrebllion1270

    @mentalrebllion1270

    Жыл бұрын

    @@gi_to_the_gii exactly and my heart is still racing on it! 🤣🤩

  • @trevland1303
    @trevland1303 Жыл бұрын

    Nice job 👍

  • @Katie-bz4ls
    @Katie-bz4ls9 ай бұрын

    Oh wow tell me everything about them. I'm emotionally invested!

  • @darknessie4482
    @darknessie448210 ай бұрын

    Lovely character design

  • @FloatyyBrain
    @FloatyyBrain5 ай бұрын

    I am so invested in this story it’s a problem

  • @iliansarigo1969
    @iliansarigo196910 ай бұрын

    AMAZING

  • @danielemazzali9810
    @danielemazzali98105 ай бұрын

    i love your style of drawing, and the expressions and the hair. It's so evocative with so little strokes. But man, you have to shorten those necks xD

  • @Th3Jun3Bug
    @Th3Jun3Bug3 ай бұрын

    LOVE YOUR ART STYLE!! Please, what is your advice? It’s so appealing to look at and I really want to improve my style

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    3 ай бұрын

    Aaaah thank you!! I've been drawing for like 8ish years so my number one tip is to just practice but I know that can be a little useless to hear the way I learned was just copying artstyles I liked and then slowly I developed my own and ye I've been practicing ever since and I still got a long long way to go so it feels a little weird to be giving advice but yeah that's that!!

  • @horamigaun
    @horamigaun Жыл бұрын

    It's always been hard for me to draw smooth movements. And here you have pretty much lots of them. Well-done! Do you use music from your playlists? Or something suitable/popular?

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    Жыл бұрын

    I've just basically been brainrotting over Epic the musical and I found that this song fit their dynamic pretty well!! I'd say it's kind of a mix of the two like yes it is 100% on my playlists and also it's pretty popular and suits my characters too

  • @littlemisscrazin
    @littlemisscrazin Жыл бұрын

    Fellow small creator :D

  • @ork5419
    @ork5419 Жыл бұрын

    I remember the first DnD oc I made, he was odd. He was like half goat? I hardly remember, but I decided I would give him goat legs (so original right) and legit I could not draw it for my LIFE. Try putting goat legs on a human, its impossible... That oc now spends his days in the depths of my bin, not seeing light in years.

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    Жыл бұрын

    I feel that I have too many ocs in the bin T_T that sounds like a fun design tho!!

  • @sof_0w0
    @sof_0w011 ай бұрын

    Could I use your video for an animatic collab for the epic the musical? Don't worry your chanel's name will be featured and more people will learn about you

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    10 ай бұрын

    Yeah no these are my own characters and I wouldn't want to be just shoved into one fandom so thank you for asking but I have to decline

  • @xyanneabat9493
    @xyanneabat9493 Жыл бұрын

    I have so many questions! What race are these two? Who are they? What are their classes? What's their relationship and the beef? But I don't wanna pry my nose into something if it's one you don't wanna share. P.S. The shorter guy looks like Laurens animated, I'm shook

  • @gi_to_the_gii

    @gi_to_the_gii

    Жыл бұрын

    They are both half-elf rogues!! The shorter one is my pc her name is Héloïse and she's an arcane trickster, the taller one is named Marquis and he's the leader of a thieves guild. Héloïse was part of this guild and they had a father-daughter relationship kind of like Nimona and Ballister from Nimona if you've seen it!! But after an,,,,, incident, she got kicked out that's what this animatic is about c:

  • @xyanneabat9493

    @xyanneabat9493

    Жыл бұрын

    Awesome!!

  • @callied6215
    @callied6215 Жыл бұрын

    the movement and emotion in this is done so well, love it!