My Friend Went Train Hopping and What Came Back Wasn't My Friend...
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Am i crazy or did he watch the news and still went home?
1. You don't get bailed out of prison. 2. You can't trespass on public property. .... Author/protagonist is pretentious and self righteous.
The problem with this story is that the government would have been easily able to keep the story from the public.
Why didn't he tell anyone? Why would people say he's crazy if it was on the news? That made no sense.
@ruffadamsthegreat.2662
28 күн бұрын
Oooh God, I came searching for some Truth!❤ Thank you, SO much!💕 I can't believe that he reviewed this before posting it!
@jr-ft3oz
28 күн бұрын
@@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 damn calm down
@ruth_southernstar
28 күн бұрын
I think maybe telling anyone would make him that guy who mistook an alien for his friend. His life would never be the same. Great story, right? x
@ruffadamsthegreat.2662
27 күн бұрын
@@ruth_southernstar Uh, no If you have to reach that far, to make it make sense, then absolutely not.
@ruth_southernstar
27 күн бұрын
@@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 it's called discernment
How you trespass on public property?
This is literally "my dog went missing for 3 days" same story. Only a person
@RedGrave927
27 күн бұрын
Yeah, i noticed that too. Especially with some sentences and descriptions written verbatim. Especially with the voice imitating and "Food was untouched, but all the meat in the freezer gone" part as well as the ending was what tipped me off that this author pretty much copied that story.
@TonyTheCarrot
27 күн бұрын
Yeah I recognized it was basically a copy. I’m a sucker for imposter/mimic stories but this one is just a poor rewrite of the one with the dog.
@occupyislam1657
22 күн бұрын
YUP😄
The setup of this story is nicely done, but the reveal could have used some work. It would have been far scarier (and more realistic) to have a report that the real Chris' remains were found, with no chance of survival, and mentioning the location as being "very close" to the Area 51 base. From there, having the "Poor Wayfaring Stranger" song would have been a chilling moment of realizing what this thing is and how it's "going over home" through people.
I once met an ex train hopper. He had both his legs cut off on the tracks in an accident and survived. Heavy machinery doesn’t stop for limbs or life.
Bailed out of prison eh? 🤣
man such a good setup such fantastic narration then area 51 gets involved and the news is somehow allowed to show a naked, mangled corpse that of all things broke this sadly
I'm totally going train surfing. Just not to Area 51 lol
Oh, come on now. When the hell has ANYTHING from Area 51 been reported on? Especially on a “breaking news” special? Those reporters would’ve never made it through the desert to an editing room.
This sounds like it was written by a twelve-year-old with a ten-year-old's view of the world.
This one was terrible on so many levels.
Love your videos, but I miss the longer format ones
I see chatgpt hasn't gotten any better at writing horror stories.
Either this story is plagiarizing "My dog was lost for three days. What came back wasn't my dog" by author chewingskin or the dog story ripped this one off. I don't know which story is older but one of them shamelessly borrows almost completely from the other. Word for word and the plot points in many parts. I really like the dog story. The main character's actions work better in the dog story. Other things also make more sense in it. The dog story's plot doesn't mesh well with what the author of this story tried to do with it.
@looneybatemanscotch2579
27 күн бұрын
I'm sure the dog one is the original. I remember listening to it like 8 years ago
@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420
27 күн бұрын
@@comraderaichu6940 right? This is plagiarism.
@ruth_southernstar
26 күн бұрын
@@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420 it's an entertaining KZread story. Many of it's stories are not original. It's just a fun, free, audible platform, not a SAT result.
@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420
26 күн бұрын
@@ruth_southernstar ok, and if this person decides to put this in a collection and publish it what then. They're putting out work into the public and insisting it's theirs. Attribution maybe doesn't matter for the pig at the trough but it does to the person pouring the feed. And if the feed in question is someone else's...
@ruth_southernstar
26 күн бұрын
@@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420 this is not what's going on here
Yeah, this was a concept of mine that could've worked, but never did.
Thanks 😊
I think he means _romantisized_ instead of _romantic_ lol
Favorite narrator ever 🖤🐺🖤🐺🖤🐺 that one scared me dude. I live in Nevada closer to area one than I like 😂
@ruffadamsthegreat.2662
27 күн бұрын
@@susanhorn3952 Used to be mine as well.🙄
Hi Skott, hope you’re having a great day!!! Looks like a good story, not that I’ve ever Train Hopped but always lived near Trains 🚂!!! ♥️♥️♥️😊
Wtf did he say at 14:30
@demiyenh4406
28 күн бұрын
The creature said his name. Micheal
@jendubay3782
27 күн бұрын
@@demiyenh4406 Tyvm
Noice
Yeah this is a real dog of a story . Good narration bad choice .
At first I thought the changes increase his demeanor we're due to him being sexually assaulted. but then turned out to be an alien. Although they did find his naked body so we can't rule out S.A.
This was a pretty good story. I liked the idea of train hopping. Excellent narration as always. Have a splendid weekend ❤🤗🌟
Former trainkid/rider here....def scary shit happens and I e seen some weird shit doing this. I've lost a lot of friends to train hopping too. Anyways love the narration as always , thanks for the story and zzzz❤
@notaperson9831
28 күн бұрын
I lowkey resent the main character/narrator for his attitude toward the traveling community lol
I am so excited for this! i just want to say that i absolutely LOVE every video you put out. Besides the soothingness of your amazing voice-its beautifully obvious you put so much of yourself into your work and i thank you for that! Loving your craft is such a rarity nowadays on here and its beyond evident in your videos! Thank you for all your hardwork-I do so appreciate it❤
@melisaanweiler9242
28 күн бұрын
Skotts got a groupie..lol
@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420
27 күн бұрын
@@sweetpeasarah1 settle down. He's not going to date you.
What came back was a beatnick hipster looking for a place to crash. No need to fret, however. For he has food stamps and 120x Salvia he traded a railroad spike dagger for.
Awesome, as always 👍🏻
shiey vibes
🚂🚞🚞🚞🚞🚞🚞🚞 👽 Thanks for the story Skott. ❤
Heck yessss
This is my favorite kind of story. Doppelganger/Shapeshifter entities. It's also very rare to hear new material that's well written and narrated too... Thank you Skott
@ruffadamsthegreat.2662
28 күн бұрын
"well written"???
@looneybatemanscotch2579
27 күн бұрын
This is an outright Rip off of "My dog went missing for 3 days" look it up.
My God, I didn't see that coming. How terrifying. And now for the weather...
@ruffadamsthegreat.2662
27 күн бұрын
@@ruth_southernstar It's too silly to be believed!🙄 As if it's the work of a twelve year old.
@ruth_southernstar
27 күн бұрын
@@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 It's a story, not a police report. If it's not for you, go elsewhere. Fast.
@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420
27 күн бұрын
@@ruth_southernstar it's a plagiarised story.
@ruth_southernstar
26 күн бұрын
@@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420 so? many stories on KZread are. they are stories not dissertations, and are simply to be enjoyed, or not (seemingly) in your case.
@ruffadamsthegreat.2662
25 күн бұрын
@@ruth_southernstar Oh, so if my opinion differs from yours, then I need to leave? Okay, if that's how we're gonna roll, with you being the self-appointed Opinion Police, and since you believe that you're the arbiter of how others should view things, you can kiss me where the Sun don't shine, Karen.😈
Oh man, I can't wait to hear this! I remember sleeping in a train yard with my best friend. We were waiting for a southbound train to hop on, but it didn't show up till it was daylight. I always wondered what would've happened of that train had actually showed up in time. Maybe it was divine intervention, because it's pretty fuckin dangerous too.
Narration was excellent- this story was not on the level to be read out loud. I hope the author keeps up honing their craft, as writing is a skill that sharpens as you practice & take CONSTRUCTIVE criticism
@ruth_southernstar
26 күн бұрын
@@JerichotheRed it's just a story on KZread. Find another channel rather than insult the narrator. And don't shout.
@marialacambra9715
26 күн бұрын
@@ruth_southernstarThey didn't insult anyone, much less the narrator. You must mean the AUTHOR. Different things. No wonder you thought the story was good if this is your reading comprehension level.
@ruth_southernstar
26 күн бұрын
@@marialacambra9715 and there it is, another KZread hater KZread is full of them. I refuse to engage further.
@marialacambra9715
26 күн бұрын
@@ruth_southernstarYou're taking every bit of criticism really personally. Are you the author or something? How fragile are you to deem every commenter who didn't like the story as a "hater"?
@ruth_southernstar
26 күн бұрын
@@marialacambra9715 there is no reason to be so critical of the author or the narrator. There is also no need to judge me. If you don't like a channel simply move on, don't use it to criticise something you don't like. They are stories, for goidness sake.
This one sucked
@JordanMayjor3p7
27 күн бұрын
Yup. It was terrible writing.
you’re a great story teller, but as soon as i heard that news segment i lost all interest. very cheesy writing. other than that, the author is pretty good
Friends don’t let friends vote Biden
This is a rip off of yhe creepypasta "My dog went missing for three days" 🤣
Good to see creepypasta is still dogshit. Some things never change
@jendubay3782
27 күн бұрын
Oh there are several damn good ones tho. Just saying
@marialacambra9715
26 күн бұрын
@@jendubay3782Can you recommend some please?