Hey man great work, much better than before. Next step? Be more specific. "I would give this house a good rating" Try something wild like "I'd rate this house 7 out of 10 bananas" When it's a bit abnormal it sticks in people's heads and better yet? People talk about it. This also applies to when you were upstairs You say "could have been better" If you want to be generic you might want to say "there is room for improvement" it would be even better if you mentioned what you could have done better about upstairs Either way, this video is leaps and bounds better than the last that I commented on