Please edit this for the love of God all the cuts and this is such a good chapter

@kims1300

Ай бұрын

OMG please!!!!! It’s so painful!!!

For me, this is one of the most heartbreaking chapters. You finally get to see all the pain Draco had to go through while keeping her hostage 💔

@addiegray2969

Жыл бұрын

This is so accurate!!!

@lae01

6 ай бұрын

So unserious 💀

I actually like the cuts and minor imperfections. It almost feels like a friend is here reading this to me.

this definitely needed more editing. all the mess ups could have been taken out.

people are complaining too much... did it needed a bit of editing to cut pauses? sure but this was great, thank you

Thanks so much for your reading

Thank you for narrating this. Amazing job!!!

Amazing series I'm so hooked

This narrator is doing well. I am hooked to the Draco/Hermione fanfictiinnand goijg to a new story after this trilogy.

Who edited this? Cut cut cut, I get the narrator will make mistakes and need to reread, that's understandable but it takes so much from the story when you keep hearing cut in one chapter.

@whosthis704

6 ай бұрын

can't wait to hear your book!

@Mariposa_Child

4 ай бұрын

​@whosthis704 It takes you out when there's so many mess ups. They're not being unreasonable.

This poor narrator is struggling. And through one of the best chapters too 😭

Thank you ❤

What’s the point of all the cuts and rereading if you weren’t going to edit it out

Best thing to wake up to 😁

This chapter has made me cry till no end lol 😢😅

I’m frankly baffled that, with the sheer number of people collaborating on this project, no one bothered to listen to the final edit all the way through and make sure there weren’t any mistakes with how it was cut before releasing it. There are *so many* bad cuts that leave a mistake in and then just repeat the sentence. Why did no one proof this before it was published.

I can´t work, I´m amazed, I want to cry and scream. Jaaaaaaa omg

I feel like this wasn't checked before it was uploaded - a lot of 'cut' left in and repeated sentences. I know this is up for free and thank you for doing it, but yeesh, just give it a listen through before you publish

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I really like this one even though it is not happy

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He called her MugBlood She should of called that Pig Ferret I always thought Granger was stronger then this book makes her out to be he was Always Always A Coward Always he needed power over her to feel like a man HA he was never a man Never Ever a Coward Sleeve Looser he was a Sick Looser

@cwilking9512

6 ай бұрын

I agree. The only time she cried in Harry Potter was when Ron was rude to her. Bc of her crush in him... So her being overly sensitive and crying as much as she does in this annoys me a bit more than it should

@user-sn1ix5qx1x

6 ай бұрын

I’m sure you guys would be super put together after 6 years of war, everyone you know dying and the man you unknowingly love raping you for months on end 😑 book hermoine was an innocent child. Manacled hermoine is a tortured woman.

@TaraMichele523

Ай бұрын

Yeah except imagine how you would be if you witnessed all of the horror she’s seen. She’s still a BAMF tho!