Jake: note for myself...never p*ssed of a British or they'll colonize you... Me: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH

@nevaehalindquist3925

Жыл бұрын

Agree

@rat_queen7431

Жыл бұрын

*”A BRITISH”* SPECIFICALLY *A BRITISH*

@Sadkid12377

11 ай бұрын

👍

@snake_holder23

8 ай бұрын

I DIED WHEN I SAW THAT 😂

Dominic is a really nice guy and good friend.

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 It’s a step into the right direction. I’m sure they’ll gain his trust someday.

@yepidk2032

Жыл бұрын

Jake needs to gain back the club's trust.

@aliciabrock7620

Жыл бұрын

@@yepidk2032 They both need gain each others trust back.

@yepidk2032

Жыл бұрын

@@aliciabrock7620 lmao the club did nothing to lost Jakes trust

@aliciabrock7620

Жыл бұрын

@@yepidk2032 did you not see episode 9 or 10?

@YxVideos

11 ай бұрын

@@yepidk2032 did you not see episode 11 and 10 and 9

Hailey, you kicked jake out, didn't let him explain and ran past him. Drew, you made your best friend lost the only place where he felt good, you didn't supported your friends dream. You two are horrible, I know one of you didn't meant it, but you have to accept that you did something horrible, and he is trying to enjoy his life again with someone that does care, and helped him and still helps him. Maybe he will forgive you, but remember, forgiveness takes time, and he has all the right to say no, so don't be angry if he doesn't forgive you two. But Hailey and Drew, you are trying to be better and fix your mistakes, thats a good start. And Hailey, you letting jake enjoy his life is amazing, thats what a true friend does. (Dang i wrote a whole paragraph even if I didn't wanted to 😭😭) ALSO THANK YOU DOMINIC 4 DEFENDING OUR JAKEY BOY HE IS A BABY, HE DESERVES TO BE PROTECTED, THANK YOU SO MUCH ILY!!!

@d4rriutz4_0

10 ай бұрын

I mean, it was Jake's fault too. I'm not a defender of drew or anything, but Jake should've been a bit more honest. And drew was right in the argument, even though he was a bit too aggressive but he had the right to be. Drew is a horrible person, and bully's the club, if he didn't do that, Jake would have no problem with being more honest with him. But doesn't mean Jake wouldn't be his friend, because drew stopped him from getting bullied, what I mean is he would've told drew he was interested in music and he knew drew would be supported. It's not that he didn't trust drew. So hailey, drew and Jake were all wrong. Everyone made mistakes. Everyone *makes* mistakes, and that's life, they just didn't realize their mistakes. Dang- I wrote a whole a$$ paragraph too.. Sh-

@AN0NYM0U_S

10 ай бұрын

@@d4rriutz4_0 I agree in some sort of things in here, but just because people make mistakes that doesn't mean that there aren't any consequences. They treated Jake badly and no one can take that back. And with Drew: Drew didn't know the bullying was for music, he just probably thought someone was rude to Jake just to annoy him, he never even asked for his liking, and even if Jake told him, he wouldn't change his opinion just for that, and his friendship with Jake would be worse until they can't be together because as we know, Drew bullies the same club where Jake is, Drew bullies the people with the same likes as Jake (His friend). That's all- (WE BOTH WROTE PARAGRAPHS- AND IT IS SO FUN LIKE, WRITING A WHOLE TEXT ABOUT FICTIONAL CHARACTERS IS AMAZING AM I RIGHT?!)

@d4rriutz4_0

10 ай бұрын

@@AN0NYM0U_S I agree, even though you make mistakes, there's still consequences..... Meaning, MORE HUFFURING, DRUFFERING AND JUFFERING AND MORE ROSY BEING ANGSTY😼!! (drew x suffering, Jake x suffering and Hailey x suffering) (yeah🥲 I didn't expect you too reply to my reply, especially so early, like dang, I just finished the video lol😂)

@d4rriutz4_0

10 ай бұрын

@@AN0NYM0U_S and also, when I was watching this, I was laughing, acting like I was drunk or sum, 24:45 when Hailey said that, I was like: something Zander wouldn't ever get from his biological father. I laughed so hard, knowing damn well I'm messed up.

@AN0NYM0U_S

10 ай бұрын

@@d4rriutz4_0 i have to admit, I also died in that same part. (Because well, look who says that, the same person that didn't wanted to let him have that at the start-) (And your comment made it better.)

I'm so sorry for the reupload 🙏🙏🙏 And im so sorry for making this part to similiar with ANA Rune's scene 🙏🙏🙏 I promise i'll do better next time 🙏🙏🙏

@THEatsushinakajima

Жыл бұрын

nah it’s ok!! as long as you give creds :)

@nellieara2927

Жыл бұрын

Don't worry. I really love the first but I understand you recreate it. Plus, You will do it better but remember, do not rush yourself, you'll keep learning and do your best

@mattthenewkidoftheguy6940

Жыл бұрын

Don't worry, NoahTCO, it's okay, i still love your vid ^^ it's amazing ^^

@mattthenewkidoftheguy6940

Жыл бұрын

And i can't wait for another part ^^ 😁👍

@GlowwingHeart

Жыл бұрын

It's alright, just remember to add credits! Good video by the way though!

This made me relate to Jake 10x more, everyone needs a Dominic, and ı am really glad ı have one of my own

New people watching angst videos: "THIS IS SO SAD IM ABOUT TO CRY😭😭😭" now people watching angst videos: "i am always up for dramas😍🍿"

I hope the story continues and I hope they all forgive each other

This is amazing bro keep up the good work you’re doing

Why is everyone so shocked Jake made another friend like: World don't revolve around you girl your not the only one

I love your video as always and 2 days ago, I turned adult so wish me luck to adulthood. Also, Dominic is not being a friend, he's just being a father figure. I hope we will get to see Emily soon...

@AnimeIsMeName

Жыл бұрын

I mean Emily.

I’m not crying I just sweating out my eyes😭😭😭

AHAHHAHAHAHHAAA OMG XDXDXD "Never piss off British or they will colonize you" LMAO XDXDD

I love it but i don't really get the drama by calling someone by their last names

@Hime0720

Жыл бұрын

Because when you call someone their last names, you see them as acquaintance but if call them their first name, you guys are close to each other.

@story1x5studios44

Жыл бұрын

Just like Harry Potter.

AHHHHH So Good,I'm waiting for the next part, Keep the spirit for your fans!

I might be late but... Damn Dominic is tall.

This will be good I can’t wait part 13 will be so cool I can’t wait

THE QUALITY IS SO GOOD WTH

19:15 this was so wholesome I almost cried

Can't wait

I cant wait for part 13 lol 😭

I’ll Say This Again. Good I Was Waiting.

OMG why did Jake just called him friends omg 😱🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 and I’m saying this brah omg JAKE WHY BRAH WHY WHY😭

One mysterious thing is that Jake’s past bullies never aged.

We need part 2 but take your time

*Me thinking Dominic is a normal adult* OH S*** HES BRITISH

If anyone wants to know the intro song is called Shadow

I just love how i have a friend also named *dominic*

YOU! YES YOU.... CONTİUNE!

Hello! Please don't take my criticism as hate but here are some points that are annoying. 1. The repeated storyline: Repeating an event again and again get tiring as well as boring, in this case it's the fighting between the club and jomies and then Jake snapping. Yes I admit that the two groups don't get along but always making them fight every episode gets tiring. Also the way that Jake reacts, I understand that this is the 'broken Jake" AU, but the difference is that broken means less emotions and more depression, here it seems like the "Snap AU". 2. The grammar: A few spelling mistakes here and there are perfectly fine, but they are there in every scene, also I would give the advice of giving more character from the way they talk, like when Hailey was crying you can add stuttering as people stutter when they talk while crying. 3. The crying: It does not match the scene or the character, for example Hailey is the most emotional in the group so it makes sense for her to cry, but for Zander to cry seems very unlikely. Speaking of crying, in the episode they cry over every single thing and have the same expressions. I'm saying that there are different ways to create this, let me give an example: Zander saw Jake and Dominic at the mall, his eyes widened for a bit and then he came back to normal, or Milly saw Jake at the mall with Dominic and her face breaks out into a smile of relief for finding out where he is. 4. The way the events ae unfolding: To be honest, it all seems very rushed, the relationships between the characters, the storyline, the hatred and the fights. I don't think anyone would open up to someone after they took them shopping once. The storyline is interesting, don't get me wrong but there are a lot of loop holes. I would advice working on the script thoroughly and making the conversations seem realistic. End note: I know that you worked extremely hard on this and I'm no experienced gacha tuber, but I'm giving criticism so you can improve. I appreciate your efforts and look forward to future uploads from you.

@noorlankingdom

Жыл бұрын

criticism accepted 😌👍

@saotomemihosuzukiii

Жыл бұрын

I kinda agree with it tbh :^

@MysticPierce

Жыл бұрын

im not reading this, but yes i agree lmfao.

@sunrise_Mimi.starligjt

Жыл бұрын

I wish you added a TLDR- but YEAH! I AGREE-? (I read a tiny bit- so...)

Looks like I wasn't wrong about the music club and possibly the jomies of being jealous

Can you please make a part 3

WHERE IS THE NEXT PART CMONN😾

Me gustó esa historia muy bonita pero ya pesotes dicatura de estos también y si

Ayy my name there Dominic

👄🙊🙊

Umm hi so Jake was sad mad at the same time brah I mean like the same time becuaes jake never does that in the music club 😢😢😢😢🥹🥹🥹🥹🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😩😩😩😞😞😞 ok bye and rosy bye to 😋😋😋😋

Wil i goes i better watch the video about music F.

What ie that music you used at 6:59

@noorlankingdom

Жыл бұрын

Kevin Macleod-Sovereign

@Ghost_Of_Solar

Жыл бұрын

Thanks 😊

Next

Jake sterling go back

Why did you add your oc to TMF?

@noorlankingdom

Жыл бұрын

Because the others are also having their own TMF Fanmade Characters, so i want to make it as well ^^

WHO THE FUCK IS DUDE?

haily onlyfans when?

@saotomemihosuzukiii

7 ай бұрын

little guy what?