For extra English help, visit my website: honeyourenglish.com

@khaledmcgonnell8056

2 жыл бұрын

Both "Hone Your English" and "Honey Our English" are apt

@phillipsmith3422

2 жыл бұрын

@@khaledmcgonnell8056 q

@bluealbin8156

2 жыл бұрын

I know how to show when writing. My question is however, do I have to go with it throughout the whole writing? Or it should be a mix of both tell and show? How do you create the perfect balance? A writer commented on my writing once and said that it became too descriptive. Is that a wrong approach? I am writing my first book ever, so I have a lot yet to learn.

@soyaliovee

Жыл бұрын

@@khaledmcgonnell8056 lol

@kewp5885

Жыл бұрын

@@khaledmcgonnell8056 u got a point

I needed this. Sorry, I mean... My writing droned and bluntly stated scenarios without detail.

@MindBodyStorm

5 жыл бұрын

Nice!

@khyzrshunhojas175

5 жыл бұрын

Coolsome

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks

@ClockworkGearhead

3 жыл бұрын

Adverb! Ahhhhhh!!!

@johngalt8708

3 жыл бұрын

that is the stupidest thing ever. It's like you just used a bunch of words you didn't know the meaning to.

"Show, Don't Tell" is basically the "Tell me X, without telling me X" meme format applied to writing.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Yes

@Orblinkluv

2 жыл бұрын

That's a good point! That's really funny. Imagine a teacher seeing this & using it in their lesson lol

@alienmakintosh479

2 жыл бұрын

Wow i finally understand it, thanks

@thenumbertwo9136

2 жыл бұрын

Weirdly enough this genuinely helps me grasp the concept

@ramyamanimaran6475

2 жыл бұрын

Is it pun applied here?

Good video! I have something to add which I learned from my writing classes. Many of your "showing" sentences used the to-bes "was" or "were". These words in and of themselves can lead to passive and even telling writing--not to mention verbose writing, meaning using more words than necessary to describe or say something. Outside of thoughts and dialogue (people do talk that way after all), to-be's (am, are, is, was, were, be, being, been) should usually be eliminated. Example 1-"The man was fidgeting and biting his nails." could be written as "The man fidgeted and bit his nails." This eliminates a bit of verbose making the sentence more active and crisp. Example 2-"There was a leftover pizza, dirty clothes..." could be written in a more active way by writing it as "A leftover pizza and dirty clothes lay strewn about the floor." Hope this helps other writers out there. Thanks for reading!

@yan-bbyan

5 жыл бұрын

Thank you! My writing has been verbose lately and this would really help.

@aquamarine2416

5 жыл бұрын

you're Right, (I fixed my spelling)

@Modeltraveling

5 жыл бұрын

Thanks for this reminder. I was taught the same way. My essay writing professor at Columbia wouldnt allow us to use is, was or any of the to'be's--ever.

@thenextshenanigantownandth4393

5 жыл бұрын

Thanks for the advice.

@Southpaw_canvass

5 жыл бұрын

Thanks for this!!

I practice this often. I write the vague sentences and then I describe them in more detail "It was hot" no. "Children complained in the car as the blazing sun fused their skin to leather seats." It's really fun and helps me catch vague sentences before I write them.

@aditidhingra9767

4 жыл бұрын

I am learning so much from the comment box as well

@neellavgogoi1453

4 жыл бұрын

😂😂😂

@neellavgogoi1453

4 жыл бұрын

That was dramatic

@xtonibx5770

4 жыл бұрын

@@neellavgogoi1453 Kind of? I guess. I still like it, though (if I removed the word "blazing" it'd be much better). The sentence is trying to convey how hot it is by describing something kids often do on hot summer days. It can also be a relatable memory that pulls the reader in with nostalgia. If you don't like it then you're allowed to have an opinion, but if you can't convey your opinion without a bunch of laughing emojis then I'm not going to take it seriously.

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Nice

Do neither. Don't merely show description. Burn this into your brain: learn how to lie. Showing _is_ telling. (Not really, but stay with me) They both translate in a nutshell: to reveal. Don't tell or show. Instead, suggest and allude. It doesn't stimulate the mind to be told and shown. *Implicit prose makes readers write the story for you.* Practice writing this way to rewire your brain. I'll demonstrate: Russet leaves eddied around the hurried steps of little red riding hood. From the gloom of the crooked wood came a howl that clutched her throat. Her pace quickened, her breath in debt, when a great shadow loomed along the path from behind to swallow her in darkness. She spun with a billowed cloak like the wide-eyed owls that hooted overhead. The wood stilled. Her cry echoed home to the woodsman's cabin and prickled the nape of his neck. It carried cold along autumn streams and dark in the old burrow downs. Small birds scattered. Rabbits shied into dens. Then it whimpered through Grandma's window, who seized the scruff of her collar and gazed out into the murky unknown. Apples lay strewn and glistened bloody. The woodsman's axe was missing from the stump, and he was nowhere to be found. Grandma's garden gate creaked on the wind, her front door ajar. Lead readers on; the hook is in _not_ knowing, not _knowing._ *Make what you **_don't_** write more significant than what you do.* To simply show would read like this: the woodsman snatched his axe from the stump and leaped into the wood; it doesn't matter how little or much I describe it to you, I'm still telling you what happened, instead of provoking a reader's imagination. Make. Them. Guess. Imply meaning _from_ description; do not simply state(tell) or describe(show). Make every line on your page a hook that pulls readers deeper into your story. Every sentence and paragraph should ask a question. *A story should speak fluently without dialogue.* Torture your readers like the sadistic bastards we are.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Some great writing here - thanks for sharing.

@The-Clockwork-Eye

2 жыл бұрын

Brilliant, thank you.

@ijeawele3125

2 жыл бұрын

Incredible! Can a bland writer become this artful and eloquent? If yes, how long do you think it'll take? I would like to write the way Picasso painted, but how???

@inkwyvern5171

2 жыл бұрын

@@ijeawele3125 definitely. I sustained brain damage about 4 years ago and lost my writing, imaginative and problem solving skills significantly. I became dyslexic with it, and writing is a very slow process for me still. If I sat there an entire day writing I'dprobablyget about 500-1000 words I'm happy with for a rough draft. Very slow writer now. Before brain damage, I was an imaginative and poetic machine, but I clawed enough of it back. I'm currently in hospital with severe covid pneumonia in both lungs so listen, my tip for you is to not write or think (when you write and think), just imagine and be inspired. That's how you get into the unconscious flow. Practice going to sleep imagining stories, this works for me. All the best my friend, and if survive this I'll write something a little more practical 😅

@troygreen8959

2 жыл бұрын

@@inkwyvern5171 You have my prayer for your recovery. And I appreciate your passion, drive, and generosity!

Great stuff, Benjamin! This was actually useful for me and my own hobby of fiction writing.

@tabahful

6 жыл бұрын

it's work for academic writing also :)

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks for watching, Alex

@grandmawweslammedamidget

3 жыл бұрын

@@AlAmin-xv8sz Stop having a stroke

@mikemalickyoutubechannel1101

3 жыл бұрын

@@AlAmin-xv8sz Attention please 😂😂

@peaceandharmony4062

3 жыл бұрын

Alex You are the one of my great teachers.

"His explanation was great!" Or "He explaneid so much better than every teacher has taught me ever!".

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

The second option should read: 'He explained the concept so much better than any other teacher had taught me before.'

Writing 101: Ask yourself how you know what you’re telling the reader. Ex: The man was stressed. Ask yourself “How do I know that?” Then share the answer with the audience: There was a man sitting in the corner of the waiting room. His hair was matted to his forehead where beads of had been sweat collecting. His right leg was shaking in a steady rhythm accompanied by his blank stare into the distance. Here, the reader might infer this man was either waiting to hear news on a loved one or even himself. Much more interesting than the original sentence and made possible via the ole “how do I know this?” questionnaire. Great advice & a great video!

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Thanks Nate!

I'm from Malaysia, and I truly love this simple, yet powerful tips to improve writing skill. This has been taught in school, but this short video made it so clear that I felt I haven't think before! Fully recommended for creative writing(narrative or descriptive) . Also, as I'm studying to become an English teacher, this is fully helpful to give me idea of teaching. Thanks Benjamin!😀

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

That's great!

Me before watching this video: The man was mad there was only one chair left the store. Me after watching this video: The man roared in rage as he smashed the last chair in the Ikea store. Thanks for making this video!

@nomadz3354

2 жыл бұрын

More like: The man was swept by a tide of agony and destitution as his beloved chairs were stricken away from him. Save for the one final seat, still for sale.

@vietnam973

2 жыл бұрын

@@nomadz3354 Beautiful

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you Nam and Neoq!

@davidd1490

2 жыл бұрын

@@nomadz3354 poetic, but don't fit with the previous meaning hahaha.

@OhNoNotAgain42

2 жыл бұрын

You guys should shop somewhere else

The most comedic video about an educational topic I've ever watched. Thank you for all the laughs and great lessons, my dear sir.

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

You're very welcome

Ironically, when I used descriptions like the "fidgeting and biting his nails" one, I was told that was too much 'stage direction'.

@madnessbydesign1415

6 жыл бұрын

"Fidgeting and biting his nails" is stage direction, I was told. "Let the actor figure out how to play it". Idiotic. I can put that line in a script, and the actor now has some idea of how to play it, rather than guessing at what the character is thinking. I don't care if they actually fidget, or bite their nails, but I do care that they convey the ideas I wrote for the character, otherwise a script is just ideas for an improv group.

@copykonsmusic1065

5 жыл бұрын

That is hilarious!

@cloud2012x

5 жыл бұрын

In my writing class the reason that we were chastised for doing this is because some actors get angry when you tell them how to act. Writing "fidgeting and biting his nails" is better for novels, short stories, etc... and not screen plays, or at least that what my professors would say. Not saying that you are wrong or anything, honestly I still don't get it either lol.

@hteur1

5 жыл бұрын

The examples are clearly exaggerated, but what is important is to get the idea.

@aquamarine2416

5 жыл бұрын

😂

I work with logics, codes, and algorithms. Never have I ever tried to learn creative writing or story telling. But in recent times, somehow I am convinced, without better writing, specially better explaining, I can't be a good mentor. It took me sometime to find this video. These examples hooked me up. You have one more subscriber now! You deserve appreciation for such great content. Keep doing the awesome work, dude!

I think this was the best, most clear explanation of how "show don't tell" works that I've ever seen. At least it was the most helpful for me personally. Thank you.

Great advice for effective writing to make the reader actually feel the situation. like actually being in, experiencing and sensing the scene. 6 minutes that could change your understanding in effective communication through writing. Excellent and very well presented video.

I feel there IS a place for the simple sentence, like when stating plainly a conclusion built up in a narrative or when it serves to contrast against being descriptive, but its also important to keep from over-elaborating. It is better to show than tell, but endlessly droning on or using increasingly verbose and esoteric words can feel tiresome. Shakespeare did say that "brevity is the soul of wit".

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

To be brief: definitely!

@citytrees1752

3 жыл бұрын

You are guilty of your own accusation.

@themajor1884

2 жыл бұрын

Brevity IS the soul of wit. However, this video is not about effective communication; it's about making your writing more interesting. If I were reading a book, I'd be able to imagine a much clearer picture with the sentence 'He was fidgeting and biting his nails' than simply, 'He was stressed'.

@jinmgrant94

2 жыл бұрын

This is easy

@jadeandwhizz3566

Жыл бұрын

@@themajor1884 that is very true plus I'm learning about the show not tell method and also as a writer and author to be . The teachers never went into detail about the method during English lessons i had in high school and college.

This is very helpful. Now, I am trying to balance the teaching “keep it simple and cut all the unnecessary” and this one. But this i very helpful for creative writing. :)

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

That's the dilemma. See what you enjoy reading.

The wealth of knowledge realized from this video now encourages me to write aspiring literature

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Go for it and keep learning.

Trying to wrap my head around "show don't tell" and every answer is so typically complicated. This is short, sharp, simple and shiny. Thank you very much.

Very good. Short and to the point. Well explained. I see this in my writing groups from writers of all levels. It's hard to get them to change their ways. Many writers that haven't bothered to learn the craft of writing are documenters rather than story tellers. They're stuck on writing what they saw, not what their character(s) felt or experienced.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Thanks for sharing that.

my eyes widened... i took out a pencil, writing down the sentences from the video! thank u...this was incredibly helpful. good day.

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Nice

This video is 6 years old and it popped up on my feed. I'm 70 years old and feeling as if I have a story to tell. I think I'll begin in the morning.❤ I've got some pictures to paint. 😂

Quite literally a more on the nose type of teaching. This kind of education is unmatched. Thank you for you (as someone who struggles with descripting)

This was my first time on one of your videos, haven’t taken a quiz since school and I got a 10 out of 10 thanks for the lesson Benjamin

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

You got this!

Thank you for a wonderful lesson, not only were you informative but you made the lesson seem like common sense. Just what I needed.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

great

Every tip on writing is a good tip. Thank you Benjamin, always well presented!

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

cheers

This really helps me! I tend to struggle in my English classes and though my creative writing is decent, I really struggle to describe things! So thank you!

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Cool

this was absolutely amazing, it had helped me a lot and now i can finally write my first story. The way how you explained it was so clear. keep up the good work.

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Glad it helped!

Such an important skill and it makes a massive difference to the quality of a student's work - thanks for sharing, Benjamin

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Absolutely!

A writer myself and I didn't think I'd need this advice - so helpful to improve my write-ups from now on.

This is probably the best video that explains this concept. And I’ve watched many. Thank you for taking the time to teach it this way. Thank you.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

You're very welcome

I've never seen any short video like this, with the effective details

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Glad you liked it!

@icanrelate

3 жыл бұрын

Same!

I can't thank you enough for this incredibly helpful video! This is exactly what I needed.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

You're very welcome!

It is astonishing how a single video can make such a dramatic difference in my writing. Thanks so much for it

Compact lesson, very straight and joyful to follow as time snatches by! Very good Mr. Bejamin!

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you!

As an aspiring published author myself, I feel like I needed this type of advice.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

I'm glad it was helpful for you.

Quick, yet excellent writing tips that can be applied to a variety of contexts. Thank you Benjamin.

Can't believe this stuff is free, this content is going to help me to write more descriptively my articles

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

go for it

Thank you, Benjamin for teaching a wonderful lesson. This video was very useful for my daughter and she scored full marks in the quiz..all because of you

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Glad it was helpful!

Simple yet highly effective. Thank you!

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

:)

To be honest this lesson was so helpful… I actually got the idea from it to now tell anything straight away, just give the details or add the details… thank you sir.

Great videos, Benjamin! This was actually useful for me and my own hobby of fiction writing.

My journalism teacher uses this phrase constantly. I enjoyed learning more about what it means!

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks

This is super helpful! I love writing, especially little scenarios that I made in my head but they always look so choppy.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Great!

after watching that video his eyes shrunk in happiness , he stood up looked into mirror and watched himself smile, he was cheered after long time.

Thanks, man. I DEFINITELY needed the clarity you gave in this video.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Glad it was helpful!

Thank you for this. I've been thinking about writing my own short stories and this will surely help me word things better.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Great!

One of the best lesson I have ever seen, and quiz score 100.... I'm so happy

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

:)

Your words are like the sweater a person needs in winter. It will make my writing better. Thanks.

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

Interesting simile there, Aktarul!

i hope my english teacher was you. i love the way you convey it. it's simple and straight to the point

thankyou sir. I wish I could've seen ur video few months back. I'm almost at the end of writing my first novel.

@randommess1870

6 жыл бұрын

A.S. 1 thanks. but I've too many mistakes. will take time to edit. I'm on last 3 chapter's. it's called "parallel temptations" for now. may b wil change it later

@popcornandwater5903

6 жыл бұрын

saba butt wow that sounds great! God bless you

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Thank you

Super helpful! I am trying to write essays for music grants and I need to stand out through not only my music, but my writing ability. This really helped thank you!!!

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

:)

Simple, to the point, excellent examples. Thanks great teacher

This is a helpful for me since I am not a native english speaker and a novice writer online, I really have troubles describing the feelings, actions and emotions of my characters which my readers go 'Meh', I have written like five stories which two has at least 30,000 words, unfortunately my readers didn't like it at all, you see I have this ideas coming to my brain but due to my average or below average English skills, writing and furthermore the story itself, I failed to fully explain, as you said, to Show it, well I'm still improving and videos like this will help me, thanks for the upload!

You have my gratitude! Tomorrow's my test on creative writing and I really needed a perfect idea or tip on how could I standardize my writing skills.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Good luck!

@kasfiyazara9975

2 жыл бұрын

@@engvidBenjamin I really did well on that test, today. Thanks!

where the hell were you when i was in school. boy if I had a teacher like you not only I would be your favorite student but I would get 100 on any exam

Thank you. I'm a novel writer and I struggle with show not tell.

Very insightful and straight to the point. Thank you.

"...Paint a picture." That depicts the subject 'show, now tell' so fluently. And so forth, great video!

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Glad you liked it!

I'm writing a paper this week for English Comp - thank you for helping my writing!

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

I assume that's English composition, not comprehension!

I learned more from this video than I have over the course of my grade 10 creative writing class. I wish we did more writing.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

I'm glad you found it useful.

That was simple, short but at the same time amazing and efficient in the usage of both time and words. Thank you very much, i was in very much need of it, including a video that would fit the criterea above. I cannot thank you enough for this video.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Glad it was helpful!

Thank you so much for this😊 It helps a lot even though I'm just starting streaming your video.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Glad it was helpful!

I always watch this video to get motivation for writing. This always comes handy :) Thanks!

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Glad it was helpful!

Absolutely loved it. You were able to help me figure out how to draw a picture without using boring and dull words. Thank you.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Glad I could help

The videos I saw all my entire life about writing were nothing compared to this one, deep in my heart I knew that there was something wrong, finally there’s a step a head to establish a background for my writing

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Excellent, glad it works for you. You don't need to use it with every sentence, it's just a tool to expand description.

This made my day. I am about to write an essay for a scholarship and now everything will totally change.

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Good luck

Wow thats the best help for my novel! Thank you very much! ❤

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

:)

Omg, this is the first time someone explained this in a way I understand.

First of all, I love your technique of teaching, I've never came across these types of videos, I'm literally glad this video was in my recommendation, would love to learn more phenomenal videos from your channel.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

You're very welcome!

Thanks for all the detailed information you have provided in this video. I like your way of explaining every point. Keep sharing such great videos in the future also.

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

Thank you!

Show, Not tell One of the finest insights summed up in three words Very helpful Thank you

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

You're very welcome

Thank you Benjamin! You are awesome and your tips are always very welcome!

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Thank you.

Love how you explain it properly!

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Thank you

This video is exactly what I needed to improve my English language skills 😍😍😍 I'm glad that I found your Chanel 😎 Yes it's time to rise the bar 😍🍻

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

excellent

Excellent video, so simple and impactful! I definitely want to put these tips into practice now, I feel like this really helped my writing skills with lyrics!

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Cool

Online learning is definitely difficult, but man using lesson perked up a few English grades. Truly a great way to get students into visual writing, thank you dearly for the lesson..

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Cheers

Thank you so much kind sir. Tomorrow I have a descriptive writing draft and when I watched your video, I knew the tips and tricks to make my writing better and pass the test. I am now practicing it so I can do well tomorrow.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Good luck

I’m writing my first book . Thank you for these tips 👍🏼 I didn’t pay much attention to this at school although prolific in my attempts ☺️🦋

@gazster

7 ай бұрын

i remember when i've watched a movie, or played a video game or read something and it's like i'd step back and sort of analyse and i would think to myself if only i was the creator here i'd make parts more intresting, it's like an urge there for the story telling side of it. i always remember thinking that, i already have a job at the moment so never really got in to writing ✍ but i think it would be intresting writing books, especially non fiction where your mind can go wild with the story telling side of it.

Very useful, I liked the energy and I found your expressions quite funny. c: Found myself engaging to this more than most of those other writing videos, Thanks. I really appreciate it.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

You're very welcome.

I'm from India. I was fishing about novel writing then I caught by your video which really captured all my attention. Decidedly it's really helpful 😊.

Great lesson on writing. Thank you very much

Thank you. I've been hearing that "show don't tell" for ages but didn't know what it meant. This simple and understandable. Got it. Thanks again.

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

:)

I appreciate this so much. I'm writing my first book and really needed this lesson. The quiz reinforces the video nicely. Bravo.

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you!

Nice lesson today. I'm too lazy to improve my writing skill and this is my first time to write an english sentence again since a long time ago, i know what's the point of the videos that i watched, and understand what they're talking, sometimes i also practice my speaking by reading a text and spelling pronounce vocabulary with more better and correctly. I'm so thankful with your video benjamin

Thank you so much for this video! It's taken me so long to understand the show not tell thing. My brain just can't figure it out when people say to do this. I love writing, but it's difficult for me. Thank you again aaa! I've learned more in this tiny video than I did 3 years in English class

@engvidBenjamin

2 жыл бұрын

You got this!

I love this! Your voice doesn’t sound like you were forced to do this like many other tutorials. 😂 I like how you went over multiple examples and you actually took time to go over those examples instead of rushing through. It helped me a lot! Someone commented a suggestion on my document saying, “maybe show not tell?” but I had no idea what they meant and when I saw this video, it helped me a ton! I usually do show, but then my words seem weird since I just keep describing or don’t know how to not stop. Thank you.

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Cool. Thanks for the feedback.

This helped me so much, thank you! I just finished writing my first novel.

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Awesome!

This is fantastic and exactly what I was looking for. Thank you for the video!

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

You're very welcome!

Short and to the point. Thank you!

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

You bet!

This is super helpful. I was failing my writing exams. You gave me a clear understanding on how to be a better writer.

@engvidBenjamin

Жыл бұрын

Yay!

Thanks! This will really make my attempt at a webnovel more grandiose and exciting for the two readers I have... :D

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

:)

this video and your teaching has definitely added a new, stable variable to the current abomination that is my writing. i will definitely be descriptive, paint integral details for the purpose of being good at written communication as well as understanding complex, intelligent journals and articles. thanks!

@engvidBenjamin

3 жыл бұрын

Cool. Good luck!

People always say show dont tell, but they never say what they mean by it. This is a good video full of examples of what show dont tell means.

10/10 sometimes I just need a refresher xD thanks!

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

No probs

I sit completely stunned and fascinated at how powerful language can be when used purposefully.

@engvidBenjamin

4 жыл бұрын

Cool

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@engvidBenjamin

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@engvidBenjamin

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