IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task1-Academic-part-4

Analysis task:
1. Underline examples of paraphrasing in the introduction, comparing it with the question.
2. Look again at the 2 main points that I chose for the overview (paragraph 2).
3. Underline the numbers and years that I mentioned in paragraphs 3 and 4. How many numbers
did I mention in the report?
4. Underline examples of ‘comparing’ language and ‘change’ language in the report.
5. How many sentences did I write in each paragraph?
Vocabulary task:
Watch the video lesson again. Near the end of the lesson, find the list of good vocabulary.
Underline those phrases in the full report on page 1 of this worksheet.
Extra task:
Try to write your own report about the same pie charts using what you remember from the lesson
(but without looking at my answer).
Compare your finished report with mine, and look for areas where you could improve.
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Пікірлер: 53

  • @kyrielin9721
    @kyrielin9721 Жыл бұрын

    The pie charts compare five categories of household expenditure in the UK and New Zealand in the years 1980 and 2008. It is noticeable that the proportion of spending on food and drink fell in both countries over the 28-year period, while spending on utility bills rose. Also, UK residents spent a significantly larger percentage of their household budgets on leisure than their New Zealand counterparts. In 1980, 29% of an average New Zealand household budget went on food and drink, while the equivalent figure for a UK home was 23%. By 2008, expenditure on food and drink had fallen by 4% in New Zealand, and by a full 10% in the UK. By contrast, both countries saw an increase in expenditure on utility bills for the average home, from 27% to 31% in New Zealand and from 26% to 28% in the UK. Leisure activities accounted for the highest proportion of UK household spending in both years, but only the third highest proportion in New Zealand. In fact, in 2008, New Zealanders spent only half as much in relative terms on recreation (17%) as UK residents (34%). In both countries, transport costs and other costs took roughly 15% and 10% of household budgets respectively.

  • @chsam4119
    @chsam4119 Жыл бұрын

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  • @bonjoetomisaiah2462
    @bonjoetomisaiah24628 ай бұрын

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  • @azamatmurodov921
    @azamatmurodov921 Жыл бұрын

    thank you for a great comprehensive lesson.

  • @sonhungnguyen7939
    @sonhungnguyen79392 жыл бұрын

    always helpful, thanks sir

  • @florencenkechi4157
    @florencenkechi4157 Жыл бұрын

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  • @nigoraraimova5010
    @nigoraraimova5010 Жыл бұрын

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  • @akuk2592
    @akuk25922 ай бұрын

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  • @ravindergill2180
    @ravindergill2180 Жыл бұрын

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  • @gurleenvlogs6731
    @gurleenvlogs67313 ай бұрын

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  • @kimtuyen9
    @kimtuyen9Күн бұрын

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    @zahidhasankhoka1649 Жыл бұрын

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  • @roaayass8968
    @roaayass89682 жыл бұрын

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  • @dostonraxmonov8134
    @dostonraxmonov81342 жыл бұрын

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  • @FreenBeckyEternity
    @FreenBeckyEternity Жыл бұрын

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  • @arezoumalek
    @arezoumalek10 ай бұрын

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  • @mexrinsogofforova6040
    @mexrinsogofforova6040 Жыл бұрын

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  • @ngochieu_nguyen
    @ngochieu_nguyen Жыл бұрын

    Hi, I also intend to write 2 paragraphs. However, instead of comparing category by category, I decided to compare 2 charts from different years, but from the same country for each paragraph. My friend, on the other hand, compares two charts from the two countries in the same year. It is advisable to do it differently? Or will I be deducted some points relating to task achievement?

  • @bin5phut334

    @bin5phut334

    Жыл бұрын

    Both ways are fine, however since the purpose of pie charts with fewer than 2 time stamps is more towards contrast and comparisons, your friend's way may be more suited to common logic. The only reason why figures are represented as a pie chart is that people would like to compare/ contrast the figures rather than see the changes, as a table/ line chart is more suited to that task.

  • @sahelmiah184
    @sahelmiah18411 ай бұрын

    Thank you teacher for u lessons

  • @Moonlight-tf3we
    @Moonlight-tf3we11 ай бұрын

    Thank you simon for the lesson. I wrote this sentence for my introduction. Is it correct? The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of five categories on which families spent annually in the UK and New Zealand in the years of 1980 and 2008.

  • @khaledr5449
    @khaledr54493 ай бұрын

    Where can i find the worksheet that you mention in the last part of the lesson.?

  • @user-ov5to8ne4w
    @user-ov5to8ne4w Жыл бұрын

    Can anyone tell me where to find the worksheet? Thanks a lot!

  • @bhagatpreetsingh8299
    @bhagatpreetsingh82992 жыл бұрын

    It's very helpful ,please, make more videos.

  • @IeltsSimon9

    @IeltsSimon9

    2 жыл бұрын

    I'll. Keep supporting and contribute for this channel:)

  • @oxygenxhunter

    @oxygenxhunter

    Жыл бұрын

    @@IeltsSimon9 please one video in hindi language

  • @amanaulakhaulakh8007
    @amanaulakhaulakh8007 Жыл бұрын

    Sir pls posted video on diagram as soon as possible

  • @triviet1099
    @triviet10995 ай бұрын

    can you please explain why should we use the word 'by'? For example, you use 'by 2008' in this pie chart example. Thank you!

  • @talanttuychiyev8231
    @talanttuychiyev82319 ай бұрын

    JUST PERFECT

  • @malikajal6163
    @malikajal6163 Жыл бұрын

    sir can i use showed instead of saw??

  • @VyTuong-xg7oy
    @VyTuong-xg7oy7 күн бұрын

    thank you

  • @MDRABBI-tm6ce
    @MDRABBI-tm6ce2 жыл бұрын

    make video about table and bar chart how to divide grouply body paragraphs please make writing task 1

  • @IeltsSimon9

    @IeltsSimon9

    2 жыл бұрын

    I did check out the latest video:)

  • @shohjahonsayfullaev8926
    @shohjahonsayfullaev89262 жыл бұрын

    Thank you sir, we appreciate your hard work and ready to support for more content

  • @IeltsSimon9

    @IeltsSimon9

    2 жыл бұрын

    Always ready to help:)

  • @alhamdulillah7382

    @alhamdulillah7382

    Жыл бұрын

    @@IeltsSimon9 Thank you for the help

  • @user-ck3xt1lj5j
    @user-ck3xt1lj5j10 ай бұрын

    Thanks teacher

  • @unique_girl_2907

    @unique_girl_2907

    10 ай бұрын

    Of course

  • @tulipkhan7730
    @tulipkhan77302 жыл бұрын

    Thank u so much....

  • @IeltsSimon9

    @IeltsSimon9

    2 жыл бұрын

    Always happy to help:)

  • @Volleyy
    @Volleyy2 жыл бұрын

    Thank you Simon for this lesson, you taught it in the simplest of terms.

  • @IeltsSimon9

    @IeltsSimon9

    2 жыл бұрын

    Of course, if you guys keep supporting me I'll post more and more videos hopefully:)

  • @Volleyy

    @Volleyy

    2 жыл бұрын

    Please have you posted any video on process diagrams?

  • @JasurbekAbdualimov-bt2ck

    @JasurbekAbdualimov-bt2ck

    2 ай бұрын

    ​@@IeltsSimon9 please give me advice for IELTS writing task 2

  • @aystudiobt214ever
    @aystudiobt214ever Жыл бұрын

    Where can I download the worksheet?

  • @IeltsSimon9

    @IeltsSimon9

    Жыл бұрын

    Ieltssimon9@gmail.com

  • @azamatmurodov921
    @azamatmurodov921 Жыл бұрын

    👍👍👍

  • @gulasalabdumajitova
    @gulasalabdumajitova9 ай бұрын

    thanks

  • @mavlonodev
    @mavlonodev4 ай бұрын

    Where's the worksheet?

  • @mohammadmotawaqueel1000
    @mohammadmotawaqueel10002 жыл бұрын

    Please upload the remaining 2. I have the exam in 2 days.

  • @user-mp2ih4bv8e
    @user-mp2ih4bv8e Жыл бұрын

    Why we shouldn't have a separate Paragraph for each country

  • @raiyanrahman7201

    @raiyanrahman7201

    Жыл бұрын

    Cause we want to compare both countries and categories at the same time

  • @user-jh5iy9oq3b
    @user-jh5iy9oq3b2 ай бұрын

    Where is a worksheet