"I Worked The Night Shift At An Abandoned Middle School, There Was A Set Of Rules" Creepypasta

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  • @danijellino1921
    @danijellino19213 жыл бұрын

    If a Job pays 35 an hour, by the end of the first night i know every Ghost, Demon or whatever by name.

  • @Teddy_B3ar

    @Teddy_B3ar

    3 жыл бұрын

    Bro I don’t care if they pay me 2000 an hour I sure as hell ain’t staying there and getting my ass whooped by demons who are pissed at me for trying to play patty cake with them

  • @GrifoStelle

    @GrifoStelle

    3 жыл бұрын

    Hell yeah leaving a box of doughnuts for the 4th floor demon too

  • @wuzzzy2354

    @wuzzzy2354

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@Teddy_B3ar lmao trying to play patty cake 🤣🤣

  • @BonesDMS4life

    @BonesDMS4life

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@GrifoStelle on me 🤣

  • @makoshark40

    @makoshark40

    3 жыл бұрын

    Havent heard it yet but these usually would be jobs id happily do for there pay rate atleast a month on some these would set me up for life if i invest properly

  • @alabamafan444
    @alabamafan4443 жыл бұрын

    The most unrealistic part of this story is that he got out of bed immediately when his alarm went off.

  • @kittencomicslol

    @kittencomicslol

    3 жыл бұрын

    LMAO

  • @reynacaballero8108

    @reynacaballero8108

    3 жыл бұрын

    FAX LMAOOO

  • @angrypomeraniantrainer618

    @angrypomeraniantrainer618

    3 жыл бұрын

    Ikr, like how could he get up right away? That’s crazy

  • @chrislindamood9378

    @chrislindamood9378

    3 жыл бұрын

    Nah I do this every day

  • @Renovartio

    @Renovartio

    3 жыл бұрын

    You haven't worked night time security

  • @lagumlemoni331
    @lagumlemoni3313 жыл бұрын

    The rules: dont look at the window if you hear scratching The character: im about to do whats called a pro gamer move

  • @dwdesign2873

    @dwdesign2873

    3 жыл бұрын

    Hold my beer

  • @Yoyozlitt20

    @Yoyozlitt20

    3 жыл бұрын

    That’s what she said

  • @Azubjourni

    @Azubjourni

    3 жыл бұрын

    oh no, anyways...

  • @sakosa8784

    @sakosa8784

    3 жыл бұрын

    This cracked me up😂😂😂

  • @planetdesign4681

    @planetdesign4681

    2 жыл бұрын

    to be fair he tried his best with the rules and it’s pretty hard to withstand your natural instinct to look at something that you can hear.

  • @superfolders153
    @superfolders1533 жыл бұрын

    Because it's the same voice actor, it feels like it's the same guy going through every conceivable hell possible

  • @mikerobinson9985

    @mikerobinson9985

    2 жыл бұрын

    It is.

  • @christophersmith6875

    @christophersmith6875

    2 жыл бұрын

    I know exactly what you mean.

  • @Sparrow_Bloodhunter
    @Sparrow_Bloodhunter3 жыл бұрын

    when are we gonna get a creepypasta where the dude doesn't break the rules and walks away perfectly fine, sorta like night at the museum?

  • @kiralonely1307

    @kiralonely1307

    3 жыл бұрын

    Honestly I have the urge to write one after seeing all of the ones where they just continuously break the rules. I'm an obedient fellow, I feel like, especially if the rules being broken was a non-catastrophic-but-somewhat-annoying-dangerous-situation kinda jig, especially if it paid fuckin' 35 an hour, hell yeah I'd do it. Rules are easy, like, I get more stressed out when people don't give me exact instructions cause I'm freaked out about doing something wrong without knowing. I mean, I get people do it so they can show off what happens when you do break the rules and pull monsters out their hats, but like, you can make a story fuckin' terrifying without even showing the monster, it makes it feel forced and kinda cringy, not scary, when the character just proceeds to bulldoze through the rules like a bull in a china shop, and gets fuckin' surprised each time it causes trouble. I'm sorry but like, the rules concept is such a good thing to work off of, but like, so many people just half ass it when you could really get some like thrilling psychological fuckery going on pretty easy if you played your cards right. I'm not trying to dig on fresh writers either, it's just that every rule story sounds, based on the words used and flow of the sentences, like they're almost written by the same person even though they aren't, partially cause the MC always acts exactly the same and just digs their heels in until their scared so shitless that, NOOO no I don't wanna follow the rules, let's just run in fear, and it's making the whole concept seem less and less interesting with each story ffs. I see good ones here and there, but like, my dude, ffs, sometimes it like makes sense for them to break rules, you get a fleshed out character that tells their stories before it's time for them to be relevant, etc., but it, agh, the whole rules story thing at this point, like most of them sound like they were written by a high schooler, and I'm a high schooler tbf, but like, I have at least more usage of synonyms and fleshing out characters and world-building. It feels like they're shitpost stories to pass the time more than actual horror, is what I'm getting at, and it's disappointing. Sorry to ramble, I'm just so annoyed at how like so many rule stories bleed into each other from the monotony of the verbiage used and the MCs never feel relatable, they all feel very distant and cold and hard to connect with so the whole story suffers, and then the MCs often do the same things with no twists or turns or new fresh exciting thrills, concepts, or monsters. I mean, there's been a few good ones, like the ones with the Silver King are good, it's nice to have like world building and like differing characters who react differently and such, but like it's getting to the point I don't wanna listen to rule creepypastas anymore, and I feel like, reading through comments now and again, I'm hardly the only one.

  • @rawman44

    @rawman44

    3 жыл бұрын

    I've heard one. Involves a security company, an elevator and 33 floors. Reddit Aliens has a video with it. I actually liked it, thought it was pretty good and the guy doesn't break the rules

  • @snakewithatophat5834

    @snakewithatophat5834

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@rawman44 can you send a link

  • @rawman44

    @rawman44

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@snakewithatophat5834 kzread.info/dash/bejne/X4x4k8yiZ8fdqqw.html here's a Mr. Creeps video on it

  • @kodify.

    @kodify.

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@kiralonely1307 i read like 2 parts from what u said and plz make a story cuz this is long as hell and im not gonna read it now

  • @sinoxcs6334
    @sinoxcs63343 жыл бұрын

    "Follow These Rules So You Dont Die" so anyways i started breaking the rules

  • @sakosa8784

    @sakosa8784

    3 жыл бұрын

    Lolllllll

  • @virgin1792

    @virgin1792

    3 жыл бұрын

    Ok ethan

  • @fffaaa8371

    @fffaaa8371

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@virgin1792 ok virgin

  • @FungalHarmony

    @FungalHarmony

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@fffaaa8371 ok boomer

  • @fffaaa8371

    @fffaaa8371

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@FungalHarmony go back to looking at dinosaurs lil buddy :)

  • @dwdesign2873
    @dwdesign28733 жыл бұрын

    ....yo hear me out.. The rule with the rattling bush says you go home and still get paid. Can you just leave and say that happened for a quick one day pay ?

  • @hayleydelaware5745

    @hayleydelaware5745

    3 жыл бұрын

    No, wouldn’t they’d have cameras they can review?

  • @dwdesign2873

    @dwdesign2873

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@hayleydelaware5745 I don't think it'd catch that properly

  • @melanieortiz712

    @melanieortiz712

    3 жыл бұрын

    No, they'd know

  • @sakosa8784

    @sakosa8784

    3 жыл бұрын

    Nonono the demons will give the man a full paper report of what happened so they finna snitch on you

  • @ArcanineEspeon

    @ArcanineEspeon

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@sakosa8784 Exactly. Your boss is always a demon with omniscience and/or lots of demon buddies so of course they'll know.

  • @theflexers1405
    @theflexers14053 жыл бұрын

    The real scary part is that there’s a job for abandoned schools

  • @applecrisps5304

    @applecrisps5304

    3 жыл бұрын

    Shhhhhh

  • @CosmicErrata

    @CosmicErrata

    3 жыл бұрын

    You see how the kid on the right stands? It's about to T-Pose.

  • @theflexers1405

    @theflexers1405

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@jazeenharal6013 Tbh I never knew, thnx for letting me know.

  • @hoax2537

    @hoax2537

    3 жыл бұрын

    Same thoughts lol

  • @randomlyentertaining8287

    @randomlyentertaining8287

    3 жыл бұрын

    Somebody gotta keep vandals out. Remember, there are abandoned insane asylums that need security guards.

  • @wanderingcalamity360
    @wanderingcalamity3603 жыл бұрын

    I am a man of simple pleasures. I see "rules" on a creepypasta and I can't help but check it out.

  • @ankrperes

    @ankrperes

    3 жыл бұрын

    Rule #1 eat a comfort food listening to this. Rule #2 do not use bathroom during story. Listen to whole story uninterrupted. Rule #3 if your pets hear story and sneeze you are cursed for 24 hours Rule #4 hide from your mirrors

  • @shibblesshalzabot6320

    @shibblesshalzabot6320

    3 жыл бұрын

    It’s played out at this point. Just about every other story involves a set of stupid arbitrary rules to follow. This is just lazy writing/reading now. Every story is now the same

  • @wanderingcalamity360

    @wanderingcalamity360

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@shibblesshalzabot6320 I've seen some that throw something relatively novel in every now and then. But I will agree that the trope is pretty played out.

  • @keefeboone2720

    @keefeboone2720

    3 жыл бұрын

    Wow, that's just sad.

  • @shibblesshalzabot6320

    @shibblesshalzabot6320

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@wanderingcalamity360 I enjoy the longer ones that need to be broken up in segments the most. The park ranger story was my favorite so far and I’m looking forward to the next installment. Just hoping they won’t get lazy and toss in a list of rules

  • @ivylives559
    @ivylives5593 жыл бұрын

    "They will cut your throat for rudeness..." I won't lie that part made me laugh

  • @pleasedontfailusproduction1968

    @pleasedontfailusproduction1968

    2 жыл бұрын

    Pretty bad when you have to threaten someone into being nice lol

  • @Frostfern94

    @Frostfern94

    Жыл бұрын

    Just sounds like Britain

  • @falconman3724

    @falconman3724

    Жыл бұрын

    "Qui'e 'he rudity you got there bruv." knife your throat

  • @LeeroyPorkins
    @LeeroyPorkins3 жыл бұрын

    We're No Strangers To Love. You Know The Rules And So Do I.

  • @Hackerking10010

    @Hackerking10010

    3 жыл бұрын

    Lol

  • @sinister69hades

    @sinister69hades

    3 жыл бұрын

    Say goodbye

  • @TeasIdeas

    @TeasIdeas

    3 жыл бұрын

    A full commitment's what I'm thinking of you wouldn't get this from any other guy

  • @LeeroyPorkins

    @LeeroyPorkins

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@TeasIdeas I just want to tell you how I'm feeling. Gotta make you understand.

  • @TeasIdeas

    @TeasIdeas

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@LeeroyPorkins Never gonna give you up never gonna let you down

  • @JRMAV1
    @JRMAV13 жыл бұрын

    “Cut your throat for rudeness” And that’s when I leave

  • @Azubjourni

    @Azubjourni

    3 жыл бұрын

    i mean it is justified...

  • @fistybaby9489

    @fistybaby9489

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@Azubjourni man just imagine all the assholes that would be rid from the world if that rule was real.

  • @Azubjourni

    @Azubjourni

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@fistybaby9489 Chill dude, the story is fake anyway.

  • @I_Wanna_Die_Fr

    @I_Wanna_Die_Fr

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@Azubjourni yeah duh he said “if that rule was real”

  • @GGGmod1

    @GGGmod1

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@fistybaby9489 These stories are not made for assholes. Made by assholes for the torture of the innocent. Honestly if you cant see the perspective that you are always the victim of some kind of bullying or abuse that is unfightable in these stories then you mustve been in the other position always. Stories are meant to reenact the feeling you had as a kid when, for example relating to the rule of not looking up, you would look up after your abusive parent said dont and you would get beaten, or relating to the say thank you rule, you would not say thank you once and instead of a normal reaction again youd have to expect some extreme beating from your abusive parents. Its all about the helplessnes. And because that doesnt really exist in real life for adults The monsters or entities are always, each of them, absolutely invincible, unstoppable, unfightable and you have no means of defending yourself, of getting any kind of control over your life or your suffering or of finding any semblence of peace. Like yeah the dudes gonna slash your throat for not saying thank you? A very clear violation of what we as humans belive to be a right for everyone, the right to life, for nothing at all? Well if a person wanted to slash your throat you could for example dodge, or block with your arms at least save your neck if you cant your arms, or run away before they get close, or spend time and effort into getting some fighting skill that might help you survive. But no the slash your throat guy is just a god being whose throat slashing cannot be prevented and is 100% absolute. How else would you make stories to scare adults unless you put them against gods with no hope of survival whatsoever.

  • @ArcanineEspeon
    @ArcanineEspeon3 жыл бұрын

    "It was just 7, how'd it take me 48 minutes to wash my face and get ready??" Me with ADHD and multiple other disorders: First time?

  • @elizabethwalker733

    @elizabethwalker733

    3 жыл бұрын

    me too

  • @ashtonchambers2496

    @ashtonchambers2496

    3 жыл бұрын

    Same

  • @qualia8047

    @qualia8047

    3 жыл бұрын

    I have ADHD and iam not the only one ????? I never knew oh my god !

  • @ArcanineEspeon

    @ArcanineEspeon

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@qualia8047 *hug of low self-esteem* Yeah, getting ready in 48 minutes sounds like a dream come true for me.

  • @qualia8047

    @qualia8047

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@ArcanineEspeon * hugs back * i know

  • @xpgaming1565
    @xpgaming15653 жыл бұрын

    Hands down these “set of rules” creepy pastas are the best type of crerpypasta

  • @RalseiSmokerOfBlunts
    @RalseiSmokerOfBlunts3 жыл бұрын

    Thumbnail: me and my brother sneaking downstairs at 2 AM to get food

  • @LeeroyPorkins

    @LeeroyPorkins

    3 жыл бұрын

    Don't Wake Daddy

  • @liammourant43

    @liammourant43

    3 жыл бұрын

    To get beans

  • @Ollie_the_Possum

    @Ollie_the_Possum

    3 жыл бұрын

    Gotta get that shredded cheese from the fridge

  • @notphoenix6886

    @notphoenix6886

    2 жыл бұрын

    Grab me the pickles and teriyaki beef jerky

  • @queenscylla90

    @queenscylla90

    Жыл бұрын

    *me hunting to eat lunch meat just by itself*

  • @cat-jv2yt
    @cat-jv2yt3 жыл бұрын

    does this place really need a security guard if getting in needs permission from something who will cut your throat if you don’t say thank you? i think we have our security for the building right there

  • @kayd2256

    @kayd2256

    2 жыл бұрын

    Think abt how many urban explorers would just go there and never return. That alone would make it more attractive for thrill seeking explorers. They would just be walking in and piling up at the door.

  • @cat-jv2yt

    @cat-jv2yt

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@kayd2256 yeah true

  • @Nik-ny9ue

    @Nik-ny9ue

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@kayd2256 I giggled at this

  • @ctrlaltdel138
    @ctrlaltdel1383 жыл бұрын

    Stay tuned for the next story, "I am a monster hunter and I break all the rules for fun."

  • @thosebadrcbouncers4254

    @thosebadrcbouncers4254

    3 жыл бұрын

    Now that would be a story!!

  • @gerrardhart6040

    @gerrardhart6040

    2 жыл бұрын

    Doom music plays in the background

  • @beegtuna9375

    @beegtuna9375

    2 жыл бұрын

    You know what that would actually be a good story

  • @salamistewart5863

    @salamistewart5863

    2 жыл бұрын

    There's a couple stories like that "I am a professional rule breaker" And "my property isn't normal"

  • @ctrlaltdel138

    @ctrlaltdel138

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@salamistewart5863 cool. Thanks for the information.

  • @dakotaestabrook385
    @dakotaestabrook3853 жыл бұрын

    The only pain in life is having to wait till i head to bed tomorrow to listen to it

  • @luke4773

    @luke4773

    3 жыл бұрын

    Whaaaaaat? Why wait? Don't torture yourself... 😕

  • @anthonydragone9363

    @anthonydragone9363

    3 жыл бұрын

    it’s 11:10 pm for me 🌝🌝🌝

  • @luke4773

    @luke4773

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@anthonydragone9363 3 hours behind you in Oregon... You don't have much longer to wait especially now!

  • @jackdurden466

    @jackdurden466

    3 жыл бұрын

    It’s ok, I listen immediately upon waking at 5am. And I get up 3 hours before I need to just to listen.

  • @dakotaestabrook385

    @dakotaestabrook385

    3 жыл бұрын

    I've been listening to him for a few years now after corpse stopped posting stories. Listening to horror stories has been the bedtime ritual since i was 14-15 lol. Finally off shift and time to redeem the reward haha.

  • @sonja9410
    @sonja94102 жыл бұрын

    rules for listening to rule creepypastas: 1: be sure that you're the only one listening. if someone else is in the room, wear a headset. 2: do not lose focus on the video. you may pause it to read the comments. 3: if you feel you are being watched, make sure nothing is on the ceiling above you. 4: if your screen goes white or the progress bar disappears at any point, close the tab immediately and start watching a new one. 5: if you experience deja vu at any point in the video, shut off the video and your device, and make your way into the nearest room with a lock. stay inside until you feel his presence leave. 6: if you hear the bell, accept your fate.

  • @voidyvoid11

    @voidyvoid11

    2 жыл бұрын

    I like this Sounds fun

  • @MyTeethAreBlue

    @MyTeethAreBlue

    Жыл бұрын

    I like this a lot purely because I have 3 little clown dolls in my room, each with bells on their hat. Which implies that rule number 6 involves me getting jumped by a very small carnival

  • @sonja9410

    @sonja9410

    Жыл бұрын

    @@MyTeethAreBlue LMFAOO I LOVE IT

  • @alfielipp3756

    @alfielipp3756

    Жыл бұрын

    Rule 7: HOW ARE U STILL ALIVE? DA BELLS ALREADY RUNG!

  • @alfielipp3756

    @alfielipp3756

    Жыл бұрын

    BTW how has no one made a video about this😢😮

  • @annawhite2720
    @annawhite27203 жыл бұрын

    How bored would we be if everyone followed all the rules?😂

  • @sakosa8784

    @sakosa8784

    3 жыл бұрын

    We are humans we gain happiness from others pain - That Vegan Teacher

  • @jabban22

    @jabban22

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@sakosa8784 you did not just quote the vegan teacher

  • @meneither3834

    @meneither3834

    3 жыл бұрын

    the only story were all of the rules were followed was my favorite.

  • @randomlyentertaining8287

    @randomlyentertaining8287

    3 жыл бұрын

    A good writer can do that and the story will still be highly entertaining.

  • @Sylentmana

    @Sylentmana

    2 жыл бұрын

    I read one where the guy follows all the rules. It had great tension and you felt like the rules were a thin barrier keeping him just barely safe.

  • @angrypomeraniantrainer618
    @angrypomeraniantrainer6183 жыл бұрын

    >:( they always think it’s a joke, why would an employer trick their employees and make them too scared to go to work

  • @Renovartio

    @Renovartio

    3 жыл бұрын

    First time?

  • @notphoenix6886

    @notphoenix6886

    2 жыл бұрын

    Cause it’s funny. Not to the employee, but it is to the employer and older employees

  • @Tyzen7
    @Tyzen73 жыл бұрын

    This picture is so creepy. The body under the stairs makes it x10 more terrifying

  • @PandaTheArtistOffical
    @PandaTheArtistOffical3 жыл бұрын

    yep as soon as i heard “he will cut your throat for rudeness” i would have left that building so fast 😹

  • @notphoenix6886

    @notphoenix6886

    2 жыл бұрын

    You would’ve left your house

  • @Frostfern94

    @Frostfern94

    Жыл бұрын

    That's so rude

  • @pugzmanz460
    @pugzmanz4603 жыл бұрын

    the rules creepypastas are the best creepypastas

  • @shadownightmarine4706

    @shadownightmarine4706

    3 жыл бұрын

    agreed

  • @emilyponciano9609
    @emilyponciano96093 жыл бұрын

    I was about to add this to watch later but I saw rules and was h o o k e d

  • @wormmies140

    @wormmies140

    3 жыл бұрын

    lmaoo same

  • @sakosa8784

    @sakosa8784

    3 жыл бұрын

    You mean it’s the law

  • @not_evo846
    @not_evo8463 жыл бұрын

    Always the best paying or lowest rent places now I don't trust those places because of the story's

  • @melanieortiz712

    @melanieortiz712

    3 жыл бұрын

    What would suck it to be a person who lives at a rule place and then ends up at a rule job

  • @codycotter167

    @codycotter167

    3 жыл бұрын

    You would be set already used to following rules strictly

  • @lightskinassent
    @lightskinassent3 жыл бұрын

    You know it a good story when it starts with “I live in a small town”

  • @razorhighflyer
    @razorhighflyer3 жыл бұрын

    When the description of the creature started, I was just waiting for the "hyper-realistic blood".

  • @-Dr.Plague-
    @-Dr.Plague-3 жыл бұрын

    If you work there then is it really abandoned?

  • @TheAngelOfDeath000

    @TheAngelOfDeath000

    3 жыл бұрын

    It's always nice to see you brother

  • @jazzi4907

    @jazzi4907

    3 жыл бұрын

    Genius as always

  • @notphoenix6886

    @notphoenix6886

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@TheAngelOfDeath000 that’s your cousin, your brother is SCP 049-J

  • @ETOILEPHANTOME
    @ETOILEPHANTOME3 жыл бұрын

    I just have one question: why do they not call back to cancel their job application ? To be honest, he should have just finished his shift and sign a resignation. This is all on him.

  • @mrpickles-hb6zx

    @mrpickles-hb6zx

    Жыл бұрын

    Better than being a sex worker.

  • @ETOILEPHANTOME

    @ETOILEPHANTOME

    Жыл бұрын

    @@mrpickles-hb6zx arguable.

  • @goobermcboogerballs1420
    @goobermcboogerballs14203 жыл бұрын

    This reads like it was written by an edgy 8th grader.

  • @souhridyobose4362

    @souhridyobose4362

    2 жыл бұрын

    all these creepypastas sound like that

  • @mafiaseargent
    @mafiaseargent3 жыл бұрын

    All we had to do was follow the damn rules CJ! -Uncle Phil, solitaire

  • @wackyotter1235
    @wackyotter12353 жыл бұрын

    The band kids must be the most horrific part

  • @johngolden3714
    @johngolden37143 жыл бұрын

    Was late on his first day and couldn't follow the rules. No wonder this guy can't hold down a job.

  • @antk8493
    @antk84933 жыл бұрын

    Just once I wish one character would follow the rules and survive...

  • @horrorstories8890

    @horrorstories8890

    3 жыл бұрын

    I remember a story that the character survives. Something like a ship engine room nightshift or something. He explains his later shifts and says he likes it there near the end of it. He makes friends with the ghost dog and gets his life saved a few time by it. Let me know if you actually find it or if anyone else actually remembers that story.

  • @rawman44

    @rawman44

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@horrorstories8890 I just listened to that story, seriously it was the last one I listened to before this. I didn't finish it though cause it lacks direction after a certain point and falls apart, but yeah. Earlier today I listened to another one I'd previously listened to, something about a security company involving an elevator and 33 floors. That one's pretty good

  • @lop1991

    @lop1991

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@rawman44 do you still remember what it’s called by any chance?

  • @rawman44

    @rawman44

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@lop1991 the second one I mentioned is "I took a job as a night guard. I shouldn't have" Mr. Creeps has a video on it, and Creepypasta Rules does too

  • @DeezoNato2k
    @DeezoNato2k3 жыл бұрын

    This story had me shoook, rules are the best

  • @2dmetroidfandom579
    @2dmetroidfandom5793 жыл бұрын

    I love these rules and abandoned School Stories I hope you find some more of them you're awesome mr. Creeps

  • @sakosa8784

    @sakosa8784

    3 жыл бұрын

    Imagine turning around and seeing a white as fuck. Chinese ghost kid with black eyes Whoopty

  • @2dmetroidfandom579

    @2dmetroidfandom579

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@sakosa8784 seriously that's all you got that's not even close to being exoti let alone scary Cryptid stuff is truly what's frightening because those are the things that truly can kill somebody especially when the guy went into the alternate version of Earth Cryptid that must have caused Mass Mayhem on this alternate version of Earth the Cryptid resides in and that's my speculation of why there's no people there all those Cryptids have wiped out half of the human or a version of humanity population and probably half of them are hiding somewhere

  • @firfan985
    @firfan9853 жыл бұрын

    Another great video. So glad i found your channels earlier this year

  • @realsupernova222
    @realsupernova2223 жыл бұрын

    This is a whole SCP + FNAF place

  • @randlerichardson5826
    @randlerichardson58263 жыл бұрын

    I’ve worked the graveyard detail before it’s no picnic

  • @wuzzzy2354

    @wuzzzy2354

    3 жыл бұрын

    I just got off a graveyard shift 🤣🤣🤣 4 to closing

  • @TiffanyStarrxxx
    @TiffanyStarrxxx3 жыл бұрын

    Rules creepy pastas are my favorite. Thanks for this.

  • @xeno_threat
    @xeno_threat2 жыл бұрын

    Great story. Few horror stories that I listen to here on YT actually freak me out, but this one did a great job!

  • @richprovan5513
    @richprovan55133 жыл бұрын

    $35 an hour I'm asking for overtime and obeying those rules to the letter!

  • @TheUnseenMouth
    @TheUnseenMouth3 жыл бұрын

    I listen to these as a work out

  • @telesgriff25

    @telesgriff25

    3 жыл бұрын

    Same here

  • @deonrich3149

    @deonrich3149

    3 жыл бұрын

    i listen to these while i do dishes, lol

  • @tomokokuroki3356

    @tomokokuroki3356

    3 жыл бұрын

    What a chad

  • @sleepingforest3979
    @sleepingforest39793 жыл бұрын

    Yes I love these types of stories.

  • @aprilcaldwell6602
    @aprilcaldwell6602 Жыл бұрын

    Perfect voice for story telling.. love your stories.

  • @tambourland
    @tambourland3 жыл бұрын

    Yeah makes sense to be a security guard for an abandoned building

  • @sadgrlhour3405
    @sadgrlhour34052 жыл бұрын

    This is the best creepy pasta I’ve heard in a while and I listen to these every night to help me sleep

  • @finalwitness203
    @finalwitness2033 жыл бұрын

    Dude slept from 12am to 4pm holy shit

  • @kennyalwaysdies1
    @kennyalwaysdies13 жыл бұрын

    I'm wondering why the hell an abandoned building would need a security guard

  • @wuzzzy2354

    @wuzzzy2354

    3 жыл бұрын

    Little Suzy the demon needs the company. Duh! Lmao

  • @yourbootyholeisyourbeautyhole

    @yourbootyholeisyourbeautyhole

    3 жыл бұрын

    to keep curious spelunkers from entering them and potentially getting hurt, i guess? a lot of abandoned buildings are really dangerous (asbestos, old, sharp objects everywhere you turn, walls and tiles hanging by a thread, etc) - especially the older they are, so there are security teams out there that actually _do_ patrol abandoned buildings. it's pretty common if it's become a building of interest for curious teens and urban spelunkers.

  • @notphoenix6886

    @notphoenix6886

    2 жыл бұрын

    Because of vandals

  • @awakegameplays2702
    @awakegameplays27023 жыл бұрын

    Oh boi a set of rules story

  • @anthonydragone9363
    @anthonydragone93633 жыл бұрын

    These are so good!!

  • @Verykindatired
    @Verykindatired3 жыл бұрын

    I love these rules stories!!!

  • @reggiesmith8986
    @reggiesmith89863 жыл бұрын

    I love these rule based stories can you put them all in a playlist

  • @ETOILEPHANTOME

    @ETOILEPHANTOME

    3 жыл бұрын

    That would be too long

  • @sarashaw3112

    @sarashaw3112

    Жыл бұрын

    kzread.info/head/PLJ6w5zu82GROUi1WQaRI2xoBNsIGvJJYP here is the link.

  • @j3075

    @j3075

    Жыл бұрын

    I did

  • @dread44
    @dread443 жыл бұрын

    I love the stories with set rules

  • @TheGEARGUY123
    @TheGEARGUY1232 жыл бұрын

    ‘Never work here no matter how good the pay is’ Me: ‘or I can just follow the rules and make bank’

  • @nani_3917
    @nani_39173 жыл бұрын

    I love these types of stories

  • @mmonge954
    @mmonge9543 жыл бұрын

    Didn't even get his first paycheck smh.

  • @ReeXcellent
    @ReeXcellent3 жыл бұрын

    Even tho this is a basic creepypasta format it’s still my favorite 😁

  • @shibblesshalzabot6320
    @shibblesshalzabot63203 жыл бұрын

    Oh yay, a new creepy pastas that is all about a ridiculous set of rules to follow!! It’s been all of what, three - four days since that last one??

  • @tomokokuroki3356

    @tomokokuroki3356

    3 жыл бұрын

    'Rules' pastas are so stupid *keeps listening anyways*

  • @Jtworthy1

    @Jtworthy1

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@tomokokuroki3356 honestly

  • @tat-2-71

    @tat-2-71

    3 жыл бұрын

    I'm pretty sure I heard one yesterday. Seems like thats all he reads anymore.

  • @shibblesshalzabot6320

    @shibblesshalzabot6320

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@tat-2-71 yeah it’s getting seriously old. I skip right over them but now it’s gotten to the point I’m considering unsubscribing because there’s like 3 a week

  • @squirrelthegamer8483

    @squirrelthegamer8483

    3 жыл бұрын

    It’s not just him, it seems all readers are doing these “strange sets of rules” stories and personally I just think those writing creepy pastas are becoming extremely lazy and creatively bankrupt

  • @TheNewsClips
    @TheNewsClips3 жыл бұрын

    The rules series are so goodddd!!!!!

  • @shisuiuchiha3080
    @shisuiuchiha30802 жыл бұрын

    These creepy pastas are so exilo rating 💕

  • @noahgavin8646
    @noahgavin86463 жыл бұрын

    Rules store is are the best. Keep them coming!

  • @hollisjones6835
    @hollisjones68353 жыл бұрын

    That thumbnail scared me half to death

  • @MacBoydFanAcc
    @MacBoydFanAcc3 жыл бұрын

    Im a simple man, I see rules, I click.

  • @unknownhuman9993
    @unknownhuman99933 жыл бұрын

    i love these you best one out there

  • @fighterjoe22
    @fighterjoe222 жыл бұрын

    "Sounded like he was in his mid-30's." Being in your 30's sounds no different than your 20's 🤣

  • @Garf696
    @Garf6963 жыл бұрын

    That was good. I really liked this one.

  • @echo1456
    @echo14563 жыл бұрын

    I'd be on these stories so quick, I'd be a time traveler... but i must wait till night comes in order to sleep

  • @honeybee8813
    @honeybee88133 жыл бұрын

    Rip to every main character I'd simply follow the rules

  • @veil9326

    @veil9326

    2 жыл бұрын

    Rip id fuckin quit

  • @chelsea1990.
    @chelsea1990.3 жыл бұрын

    Why are there so many rules creepy pastas? Is it because its an easy story line for people to write to? Side note, I fell asleep listening to one recently about a bus driver with rules anyone know what it was called?

  • @Teddy_B3ar

    @Teddy_B3ar

    3 жыл бұрын

    Just search up bus driver rules, it was a pretty good one that was posted maybe a month ago max

  • @Teddy_B3ar

    @Teddy_B3ar

    3 жыл бұрын

    kzread.info/dash/bejne/pYqZ1M6Oj5q4pKw.html found it

  • @chelsea1990.

    @chelsea1990.

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@Teddy_B3ar thank you very much :)

  • @joehasberryjr7398
    @joehasberryjr73983 жыл бұрын

    Great story really pt2 asap

  • @Karma_Sans
    @Karma_Sans3 жыл бұрын

    They don't even have to finish, just the "there was a set of rules" they know we're hooked

  • @potatokitty
    @potatokitty28 күн бұрын

    I always enjoy these stories.

  • @lizzettorres1111
    @lizzettorres11112 жыл бұрын

    These are my favorite stories

  • @syntheticvocalist-p472
    @syntheticvocalist-p4722 жыл бұрын

    I find it kinda sad, now that we’re older we have new fears, and these kinds of stories, while they definitely would be horrifying if they actually happened to someone, don’t really scare us. We have fears like not paying or bills on time, and where are we going in life. The monsters under our beds have become nothing more than a basket of old memories. And the real monster, the real threat is the inability to thrive with the finite amount of time you have left on this planet. I thought of a perfect way to cheat this system also. Have someone you know hide in the bush next to the door, and when you knock on the glass door, your friend will rattle the bushes, you get paid, and you get to go home. Oh also if the ghosts had someone break in, that person would probably fucking die immediately, so basically being a security guard there is pointless. Also there was no rule about not showing up in the first place. It was literally his first day, if I got sent a set of rules like that I’d probably just be annoyed and not show up. Like what?

  • @anatoliod.mendoza-cruz9751
    @anatoliod.mendoza-cruz97513 жыл бұрын

    We have to rescue him he has survived two years my peeps . Some people want to join ?

  • @dmac8123
    @dmac81233 жыл бұрын

    jeez Qlanks is really good at getting himself in creepy jobs

  • @angrypomeraniantrainer618
    @angrypomeraniantrainer6183 жыл бұрын

    If I was payed a bunch of money to work the night shift at a haunted place, I’d have names for every ghost, demon, monster, witch, and everything, and I’d force all of them to be my friends.

  • @marcusbergman6116
    @marcusbergman61163 жыл бұрын

    This job seems unsafe enough that you'd have 2 people on the job...

  • @maryelmore3412
    @maryelmore34123 жыл бұрын

    good story thanks

  • @I_Love_Llamas
    @I_Love_Llamas2 жыл бұрын

    I'm gonna pull an all-nighter tonight and binge creepypastas. Wish me luck

  • @Peter-6233
    @Peter-62332 жыл бұрын

    Can’t wait for: I have to clean a bathroom at 3:00am There are some strange rules

  • @thoratheexplorer6597
    @thoratheexplorer65975 ай бұрын

    Love the story

  • @eisgodd
    @eisgodd3 жыл бұрын

    I love your videos.

  • @Eggs_Benedict27
    @Eggs_Benedict272 жыл бұрын

    THIS IS THE SECOND ETHAN FROM A CREPPYPASTA WITH A SET OF RULES AND A NIGHTGUARD JOB, THERE'S NO WAY

  • @syntheticvocalist-p472

    @syntheticvocalist-p472

    2 жыл бұрын

    Hm?

  • @jayrey6003
    @jayrey60033 жыл бұрын

    Every list of rules story there either late or take an hour to read the rules and missed rules.

  • @dominicg2456
    @dominicg24563 жыл бұрын

    why can't he just go back to the school and go thru the door for 60 seconds? Technically he's still in a room of the school from the way its worded. He just has to go back to the actual exit

  • @jimsalina9290
    @jimsalina92903 жыл бұрын

    That damn list gets you everytime.

  • @mr.fearfright8734
    @mr.fearfright87343 жыл бұрын

    Im about to meet my gfs dad in less than an hour and im listening to creeps before lol

  • @peterpumpkineater6979

    @peterpumpkineater6979

    3 жыл бұрын

    Well good luck man.

  • @mr.fearfright8734

    @mr.fearfright8734

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@peterpumpkineater6979 thanks it went well i honestly expected far worse

  • @neeraj4878

    @neeraj4878

    3 жыл бұрын

    How old are yuh bruh?

  • @LeeroyPorkins

    @LeeroyPorkins

    3 жыл бұрын

    "I Met My Girlfriend's Dad. He Gave Me A List Of Rules."

  • @neeraj4878

    @neeraj4878

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@LeeroyPorkins 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

  • @eastonarts
    @eastonarts2 жыл бұрын

    My KZread music glitched and I got to listen to a horror story with some chill lofi in the background it was awesome

  • @Scott-jh2go
    @Scott-jh2go Жыл бұрын

    Mr. Creeps I like your stories with the rules

  • @sakosa8784
    @sakosa87843 жыл бұрын

    Alternate title: I became a security guard at a school Edit: it has been months since I’ve been to this channel and I still love it Please bro please continue the fallen angel saga (One with the domains and shit like u gotta fight eldritch demons to save ur gf ya know) I wanna go read it on Reddit but I’m To lazy lol

  • @Bobczv
    @Bobczv2 жыл бұрын

    Getting stitches while listening to this

  • @Dachrell
    @Dachrell2 жыл бұрын

    I'd like to hear one with something not being on the list, so the protagonist has to survive through something they couldn't prepare for. Either dying or writing a new list for the next person

  • @mbhdontrapnomore8870
    @mbhdontrapnomore88703 жыл бұрын

    Really good story .....

  • @dwdesign2873
    @dwdesign28733 жыл бұрын

    Hyped

  • @hoodstrong6980
    @hoodstrong69803 жыл бұрын

    nothing like a 16 hour nap to make you sharp for first day...think we have found the work history prob...

  • @NEMOfishZ92
    @NEMOfishZ923 жыл бұрын

    Yay I love rules stories

  • @stevenXCV
    @stevenXCV3 жыл бұрын

    Hello Mr. Creeps!

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