’they like people who got into MIT' speechless tbh 😭

@annieadelina3766

2 жыл бұрын

It was so violating LOL

@kyletsai

2 жыл бұрын

yeah that one hurt 😔

@sarahhh9136

2 жыл бұрын

I WAS LIKE *hand covering mouth* OOP

@holagirl7144

2 жыл бұрын

my hand flew to my mouth. that was destructive

@haurahaura872

2 жыл бұрын

What is MIT

the among us essay was genuinely genius

@abdullahtalks650

2 жыл бұрын

Pretty creative

@user-ev2zn7if5i

2 жыл бұрын

@@abdullahtalks650 in my opinion it wasn't that creative lol it was just different from what you would see on collegevine or college essay guy. it was literally just the description of the game with a weak connection that ties in a lesson + some friendship element. Idea was ok but the way he brought it out was very lame. Could've been better if approached in a different light.

@mosasako4679

2 жыл бұрын

Thats exactly what these ivy leagues receive with every essay. Somethink “special“. U really think ur the only one?

@lkm630y79

Жыл бұрын

Well, he sure went for the unexpected and took his risk. Which I can respect, since his risks sure got him into the ivy.

I would low-key cry because of the effort it took to write those essays

@mayuhmetal

2 жыл бұрын

No I am literally so sensitive I would’ve been crying dying screaming 😭

Honestly no one needs to go to an ivy league. I used to think that college name means everything but come to find out that you get the exact same education if you go to a community college. I originally went to a top engineering school in the country but then transfer to a community college because I was not happy. Finishing up my Physics degree at Liberty, and got into John Hopkins and Purdue for Graduate programs in engineering. What I'm trying to say is that we need to rethink our preceptive when it comes to college.

@phanminhchau2002

2 жыл бұрын

in terms of getting the same education you refer to undergrad and not graduate degrees right?

@caposolomon8745

2 жыл бұрын

@@phanminhchau2002 both, it really doesn't make a difference. The thing that we need to look at is the accreditation. If the highest accreditation is there then the education standards are the same.

@frogtheasian3111

2 жыл бұрын

maybe, but the fact you worked hard until high school to be accepted into an ivy already shows your work ethic tbh.

@phanminhchau2002

2 жыл бұрын

@@frogtheasian3111 tbf though a lot of people who work hard still get rejected. It's a lottery up in those ranks

@MHI638

2 жыл бұрын

What a story man, I hope everything is going well now.

THEY’RE BRUTALL THIS IS HILARIOUS

@kyletsai

2 жыл бұрын

they rly were

lauren is legit so well spoken n funny it’s impressive. like literally her Fucking among us essay critique effortlessly tops anything i’ve ever made in a HEARTBEAT. her college app was just a link to this vid n they gave her full scholarship. then i saw she had 300k … no wonder

@cnidocyte

2 жыл бұрын

@sasharowen9584

2 жыл бұрын

do u still have the link please??

@sasharowen9584

2 жыл бұрын

@@cnidocyte does she have her college app on it?

@cnidocyte

2 жыл бұрын

@@sasharowen9584 no i was joking😭 but tbh she might

thanks for making me realize I need to revise all my essays

@alrenobenjamin6566

2 жыл бұрын

ooooffffff

Watching this just makes think about how admissions mocked my essays before rejecting me

@denim4938

2 жыл бұрын

Literally.. I wanna cry but momma ain’t raise no beech💪🏼😈

@xalpacazeu1332

2 жыл бұрын

oop

@princess7jasmine

Жыл бұрын

Don't worry, your essays aren't interesting enough to be mocked

@princess7jasmine

Жыл бұрын

@Toru ??? How is that even relevant lmao. The tense in my post was fine.

@Xilladan093

Жыл бұрын

@@princess7jasmine quiet you clown

This isn't what I expected when I clicked this but I kinda love it. Everything about it is perfect. It's adorable.

@mirrowbell5137

2 жыл бұрын

cute enough to watch huh?

@jenosleftshoulder

2 жыл бұрын

HAHHAHAHAH

It wasn’t weird until you called the characters adorable 🥴🥴

@itz_ary

2 жыл бұрын

I mean... lowkey true tho

@taylorswift13pt2

Жыл бұрын

I have a lot more confidence in writing an essay for college-

These essays are much better than anything I have and they’re getting roasted like mad😭

Great courage to open for critiques, Kyle. It’s good to know the peers reviews for reference, as we move forward to better ourselves. I like your essay and hosting. Great job！

@yimingsong7300

2 жыл бұрын

King

That Among Us essay was horrific😁 My self confidence has gone up

Literally the thesis of the essay that got me into Stanford: “There are quite a few characters in the English language. A certain number of characters that I will not count on my fingers - I am eating Cheez-Itz. Numbers. Numbers remind me of the times that I have fallen and picked myself off of the pavement that usually cradles my toes.” Not exactly, but that was basically my introduction. Edit: Needed grammatical adjustments to prevent online ridicule and doubt. I don’t care enough to revise completely.

@tegelstenen4178

2 жыл бұрын

WHAT

@tegelstenen4178

2 жыл бұрын

I need the full document of that essay because that's some legendary shitposting.

@girlscoutfather2710

2 жыл бұрын

@@tegelstenen4178 Thought about posting the final draft on Reddit, lol.

@linagarett

2 жыл бұрын

@@girlscoutfather2710 Please post it. I'd want to see the greatest academic shitpost inspo.

@tegelstenen4178

2 жыл бұрын

@@girlscoutfather2710 Does that final draft still exist?

how do you even allow people to read your work. I don’t even like to reread my work after i’ve turned it in, let alone let my friends make fun of it.

@parad0x.76

2 жыл бұрын

fr tho i never reread my work since it’ll just end up me making another whole ass essay bc i disliked the last 1

@cady5499

2 жыл бұрын

Same here. I feel ashamed of my work hahaha.

i shouldn't have seen this, although it is funny at times, I am now questioning what I am writing in college essays. It is amazing content though

@tazziiiee

2 жыл бұрын

Ur in senior year of high school?

@sudhanshugupta3969

2 жыл бұрын

@@tazziiiee yea

@tazziiiee

2 жыл бұрын

@@sudhanshugupta3969 don't worry, it will all be alright bro, just stay true to urself and ur personality, don't worry or panic and just nail the essay 🤗✌🏼😊

@sudhanshugupta3969

2 жыл бұрын

@@tazziiiee hope so bro💜 thank you

@sridevisudhahar309

2 жыл бұрын

bro same, i dont even know why I'm here good grief

This is great but the "physically apart, but emotionally together." That right there 😭🤚 you're pushing it.

I’m just impressed somebody is in contact with this many Ivy level students

I think it’s a privilege to have friends who critique and criticize your work so you could build in your craft 😌

honestly this is rly helping me with my essays

OMGGGG you're honestly so confident. I could never. Ngl I kinda liked the among us essay though. It was ACCURATE and you reminded me of my bsf cause she also be playing with us and that girl is a serial killer when it comes to that game😭😭. Also the roomie one sounded really honest and genuine cause i'm also a night owl with a stress eating problem so i would've loved to be your roomie. Generous of you to share tho😗

that was just a imposter x crewmate fanfic

Tbh my friend's essay that got her into Stanford is about her baking bread.

this was sooo funny! thanks for making my day! and making me rethink every essay i've ever written

I LOVE YOU FOR INCLUDING THE SINGING

I'm in community college.. and lemme just say these essays are something else lmao

I want to know how they don’t stutter at all when reading the essays and stumble on their words when roasting. I mean THAT takes skill. Btw nice essays! I’m going to learn from your excellento word choices

I would have died on the spot, props to you for staying alive

So they’re criticising those essays that I can’t even write them out 🥲

When you think about it, all college does is prepare you for your career. And while it is VERY good to have an Ivy on your résumé for a job, people without them are still making getting top tier jobs - and are less likely to be in debt if they couldn’t afford an Ivy education. Ivy’s are great but they don’t ruin your future cause you didn’t get in. For some people it meant they could go to a great college, not be in debt, and start their future with a clean slate.

THIS IS SO FUNNY LMAOOOO UR FRIENDS R SO REAL

this is hilarious and it has no right to be

I really liked your Standford essay it felt genuine and it really showcased how you were as a person (positive and negative) instead of being some perfect human being

no but i love your essays sm 😭🤚🏼

i fuckin died when you quoted eminem in the caltech essay

Honestly I don't think I could ever do this with my friends T^T I would be okay wityh them proof reading but reading it outloud in front of other people is just-

Alternate title: Being roasted for my Squidward vibes for 25 minutes...

Six days until early action apps are due, thanks for showing some of your essay I now must edit.

Ivy league kids in college: haha I'm rich and in a top institute Also ivy league kids: why do I have so much crippling debt?

He resisted so much criticism, and laughter, most of them obviously hurts the hurt. This kid will go far.

this masterpiece is a year old now

OMG LAURENNNNN I loveeee her edits!!!

This was a hilarious video. That's pretty courageous to allow yourself to be roasted this much. Respect

man really wrote an essay about among us for a college admissions essay

God damn they really went for your throat

How are these essay like this isn't even about education😅

Bro wrote an among us essay and got into princeton 💀💀💀

One of the only good KZread videos I’ve watched in a WHILE

Omg they obviously don’t know what dry mouth is for a clarinetist or any wind player… it’s one of the symptoms of pre performance anxiety and nervousness… that’s why a spit generator would be awesome…. Your friends obviously don’t know that much about musicians… seeing how they were teasing u about a perfectly reasonable invention that im pretty sure all wind musicians would love to have 🙄

@kapjoteh

2 жыл бұрын

Drink water

@OEBlackman

2 жыл бұрын

@@kapjoteh bro we all ready do that, we still need to make sure that we have at least some saliva, hence the spit generator.

through MY leadership. oh lord, i love this video 😭✌️

Today I've learnt that lists make Ivy League kids laugh

This video made me laughed soooo much, my favorite KZread video out of anything I watched!

Now I know. Before I submit my college essays I should ask my friends to roast me on them 🙃

i’m i tears… man they really violated you.

Hearing these kids makes me feel insecure LOL

My voices in the head just keep telling that this guy is being cut at the core of his personality and wow you will never forget

I really enjoyed the video!😆😆 Thank you!! And we have similar glasses!

I feel like good advice for these essays is to just be geniune. Many of these clithches and critismis can be avoided by not overthinking it to the moon and back.

I did not apply nor get accepted into any of these schools and yet i feel like my application was better than this 😂 this was pretty funny though, im subbed.

One of my essays said that America crawled out of the ocean, and then it went everywhere. Maybe Kyle is schizophrenic or lost his logic to Bjork. Anyway, I had to rewrite my essay, which is good. Anyway, if I were ever to write an entrance essay, I'd write it about my bicycle. That was my independence and where I had a lot of philosophical talks with myself. Honestly, I've been blasted by Ivy League students, especially SD. I was still shy about telling people about my family life, my learning disability, how I was taught to read, which messes up my ability to spell at times, or the fact that I had to ride over 20 miles a day to give my money to my often intoxicated mother. We won't get into my bio dad. mom is doing better, at least. I gave up not saying anything about it. When I got my ACT score back, I saw my 21 and was like, off to OTC we go, a community college. As far as math goes, I made a 17 on that section. I am a curious person and will take Math 050 this spring. I really want to learn Trigonometry.

lmao this was a fun vid! but as a senior in high school i gotta be honest them essay prompts daunt the shit outta me :’)

I wanna be Ariane's friend so bad

These kids are all avid participants in the ATC subreddit

bruh i would’ve been, “shitting and throwing up,” after hearing those critiques.

The last time DeAndre Hopkins was deemed as a small player was when he probably played high school football 😂

R.I.P. self esteem

Nah bruh these essays were funny asf, nobody else in that call could write something like that

HAHHA this video is so funny I love your friends

This is my favorite video. I feel less anxious watching it.

I would be annihilated if they read my essays💀

I love the 北京福娃 in the background lol

The title-“I hate IVY league kids” The thumbnail-included schools that aren’t ivies

this was really funny and your friends seem great lol

Not the “erase this essay from your mind” if you want to get into MIT

I can smell the debt

@interesting795

2 жыл бұрын

Pre med he’ll be fine

@bepoo8267

2 жыл бұрын

@@interesting795 graduate at 30, get free of debt in another 10

@gn2630

2 жыл бұрын

if ur parents make like less than 80k, most ivies give u VERY generous grants

The more important degree is any graduate degree you pursue. What matters is the education and skills you have, not the college name on the diploma. Ivy Leagues are a waste of money, you can get the same education at a good state school for undergraduate degrees

Among us essay was neat and then the others made me mad that you got into Princeton

Me hearing the essays: *curl*🐙🐙🐙 *curl*

“you can tell he’s never tried weed” lol

The only difference between schools from IVY League/Competitive Schools and schools like Penn State is opportunity.

Wtf bro I can’t even keep up with this game theory class at Yale

"Because I was the admissions officer that actually read this essay."

lmaoooo kyle's friends and their roasts 😭😭

'i hate ivy league kids' - an ivy league kid

i like how he made this video to roast himself but at the end of the video he says “i like how i’m doing pre-med” SIR EXCUSE ME

I love seeing Houston being represented at all these different schools. That being said…GO COOGS!

"Hi, I'm Sophia, I'm going to Princeton and I'm here to steal all of Kyle's simps" 1:27 LMAOOOO

BAHAHA this is gold 😂👏

i liked ur essays kyle

I got rejected from Harvard therefore I hate them

they're laughing but what about their essays 🤨😶

@kelab4599

2 жыл бұрын

I’m sure they’re better at writing essays than him hence why he went to them for constructive criticism.

@buyucuserefsiz2199

2 жыл бұрын

@@kelab4599 not better, kyle just picked wrong topics

@kelab4599

2 жыл бұрын

@@buyucuserefsiz2199 Well I’m sure he might think they are

@sanp2032

2 жыл бұрын

@@buyucuserefsiz2199 nope pretty sure the other person was right

@penguinxrock

2 жыл бұрын

i think they're already a step above him if they didn't write about among us

Me looking at the thumbnail like “Stanford isn’t an Ivy League school.”

I LITERALLY DID NOT KNOW YOU WERE FRIENDS WITH LAUREN OMFG?!?! I just started watching you last week and I’ve been watching Lauren for years ahhhh

You looked so hurt though 😂

You can't even be mad at her for the Steph curry "undersized!" As a man who is 6' 3" I can 100% tell you I am NOT undersized!

17:15 he tried to make a fancier apple watch.

It basically just go to the college that you want to go to. if you get in ofcourse

I just wanna go to Yale for the food tbh

I like to imagine that everyone else applying to college also writes essays like these

Man wanted to start a new epidemic of addictions in the U.S.