"I bought a ghost town. It came with a list of rules to stay safe" Creepypasta
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CREEPYPASTA STORY►by ChristianWallis: / i_bought_a_ghost_town_...
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Been listening to this guy for the better part of a decade. As long as he keeps putting 'em out I'll keep listening.
@nevasoba5953
Жыл бұрын
Same here, him and MrCreepypasta were the 1st ones I heard
@Booyuaaka
Жыл бұрын
Same but I use him to go to sleep can't sleep with scary stories playin
@yotetoob
Жыл бұрын
Amen brother, been about 6 or 7 years most every night here 🥲
@andreyagallegos
Жыл бұрын
Same
@GrumpyForestHag
Жыл бұрын
I honestly have no idea if halfthe stories he reads are even good, I'm out like a light halfway through because his reading is so calming.
I love how the kid gets mad at his sister after she literally JUST explained what happens when you mess up
@histguy101
8 ай бұрын
He's 10
@couchman-sw6jy
6 ай бұрын
@@histguy101even at 10 I could understand information like that
@threestans9096
6 ай бұрын
@@couchman-sw6jyeven at 35 i see other adults act like that kid. wont read signs, labels, warnings, etc. Best chance is to explain face to face and hope the other person doesnt get an ego…people all but literally say ”i spontaneously choose i am an expert in this area and will make up my own rules for how this works now” seen a 64 year old man ignore a warning label for a gas can and got gas i his eyes like three years ago. the label was bright orange right next to the cap 🤦♂️ hes fine, but tbh seeing that stuff after years of being made fun of for being the guy who reads manuals does kinda make me chuckle, even if he specifically never ever did such a thing.
@jasminechan4705
5 ай бұрын
@@threestans9096my grandpa is one of those people and really stubborn too, wouldn’t listen if you explain it thoroughly and logically to his face. It doesn’t help that he’s getting forgetful. I’m so tired of worrying. But luckily he’s fine, some items are not so fine though
@Buhleep
4 ай бұрын
f around find out lil timmy
Can we really appreciate how this guy has uploaded for over 10 years and still continues to drop bangers💥I'm proud of you my guy! Have a nice day🤗
@darrelldog5
Жыл бұрын
Yes, most content creators don't last half that time... 11 years sure is impressive...
You watch so your buddy doesn't die completely alone. I know it sounds weird to some people, but if there's nothing else you can do you at least give them that.
Why is he pissy that they ran when she literally told him that that’s what she was going to do if he touched the twine 😭
@Buhleep
4 ай бұрын
he got that main character syndrome
I think the most fantastical part of the story is the government giving up instead of locking down and burning back the string to study this before napalming the whole town and forest to build a base.
I prefer a town with less strings attached. Kudos to the narrator and author.
Makes no sense, "stay away from red thread snare with bell, but go near body floating attached by same red thread and presume it safe to get near".
Man this is a Stephen King type creepy pasta. This would be a great scary movie 🍿
@kaipos8601
Жыл бұрын
Reddit > Stephen King
@optimistic5712
Жыл бұрын
I think the story has potential ya. The reason for the antagonist's behavior was left unanswered. Wonder if there'll be a sequel
@optimistic5712
Жыл бұрын
@@kaipos8601Man, going from creepypastas to listening to something like Salem's Lot is funny. They are worlds apart quality. Makes you wonder why you go for creepypastas at all, they're just crappy junk food for the most part
@kaipos8601
Жыл бұрын
@@optimistic5712 Stephen King vomits out garbage, the gems amongst reddits creepy pastas are far better
@optimistic5712
Жыл бұрын
@@kaipos8601 which stories have you read or listened to? Edit: I mean of Stephen King's stories
i have so many questions what were the conditions?, did the other scientist survive did they just walk back out with the thread out of the way? why do they need electricity ? is the antagonist just wanting to play house of such a larger scale?
Yesss, I love the longer stories. Just in time before bed!
This was one of the better stories I have heard in a long time now! Thank you for narrating it for us!
I miss rules pastas! It was a rules pasta that unlocked the whole creepypasta genre on YT for me (Rules for the Night Security Guard, on Mr. Creeps channel, FWIW).
@kimicappiello5480
Жыл бұрын
Mr. Creeps also has other channels, I know one is all SCP stories... He was, including this channel, one of the first creepypasta narrators I listened to when I started listening to stuff online.
@darthragnarok1066
Жыл бұрын
rules pasta are still my favorite genre, yeah they were getting a little 'over done' there for a while. and as a result there are a lot of bad ones... but there is something about a -good- rules pasta that just hits different. I think i've managed to sus out a pretty decent set of 'rules' for a good rules pasta. 1. less is more... a small handful of impactful rules are better than a large number that don't get focus. 2. no unecessary rules. if a rule gets mentioned, then it needs to feature somewhere in the story. (basic checkovs gun stuff) 3. keep them simple. overly complicated rules with too many steps or exceptions will be difficult for the reader/listener to follow, and they will loose interest. 4. keep them reasonable. similar to the above, but the rules should be something that the protagonist should reasonably be able to accomplish and be provided the tools to do so. 5. have the protagonist at least ATTEMPT to abide by the rules, its just lazy for the protagonist to simply scoff and ignore every single one as an excuse to break them. 6. keep them thematic, the rules should all tie together to a central theme or threat, and there should be some logical connection between the rule, and the consequence. obviously all rules are ment to be broken, but these are some of the things i've noticed most of the really good rules pastas do. (including this one. its a little iffy on #4, but not enough to detract from the story.)
@nathanielfieldield9403
Жыл бұрын
Yeah the rules ones are some of the best! Other one is so good is called the NEW FISH!
@kaipos8601
Жыл бұрын
I think my first one was a security guard at an abandoned mental hospital
@blitsriderfield4099
Жыл бұрын
For me it was a combination of Ben Drowned, the pen-pal series and 1999
This is one of the best Pastas I've heard in a long time, up until the end where it is confusing as all hell
@vincem257
5 ай бұрын
I know for a minute it started to sound like the twine took them all but then it sounded like the lady spared them and made them her slaves.
This was a really good story! I feel a little let down by the ending but that’s just personal taste and 99% of this was awesome! The slow build of the twines, the description of that soldiers death etc were expertly done!
@limehe444d
Жыл бұрын
can you explain it? i’m so confused
@securityscorpion8687
7 ай бұрын
@@limehe444d....whatever force controls the twines has successfully spread to control the town, implying the world itself is next. The narrator doesn't realize he has not "escaped & became a millionaire & come back" but rather was ALLOEWED to escape, because he is controlled by the twines; they are evolving. They are of a finer nature than realized. They have been embedding themselves in the town's culture: normalization. The narrator was chosen to allow the red to spread: he has the acumen to succeed, AND he is ambivalent about the town: he mentions his dad didn't love him much & loved his mom more. The twine queen appearing to be mysterious, vindictive, feminine, mind reading, & controlling may be implying something about his mom, or it may be why he can't see the "root cause", hint hint, of the curse; because it's "too close to home"...literally & figuratively. The narrator has NEVER been free, nor alive, his entire "life". He is the puppet, the pawn, the mannequin he is horrified by....unknowingly. All my opinion. Thoughts anyone?
@-JaggedGrace-
5 ай бұрын
@@securityscorpion8687 Isn't the narrator Stephen?
You are the most consistent. I have never been disappointed in your talent and you never pimp out your channel to promote low quality stories or let other people read and disappoint your loyal fan base.
This is SUCH a good story with such a shit title. Like I understand creepypasta story titles are meant to be descriptive but this is a genuinely good story and I think the super shitty titles is a big reason Creepypastas aren’t respected as legitimate literature. There wasn’t “a list of rules” that came with the town when he bought it. The rules were an engrained part of the towns culture that were passed down for 3 generations.
@Buhleep
4 ай бұрын
yeah, shouldve called it BEWARE THE SNARE 😂😂
I really hope if I die unnaturally that I retain just a little of my dignity before the end.
This is kinda like those dream like creepypastas where weird shit happens and it’s on the characters experience personally and they never can explain nor understand it. Good Creepypasta 7.5/10
This was excellent. Absolutely excellent. The end wrapped up a bit to quickly and ambiguous but all in all a truly wonderful story.
Thanks for the upload, Creepsmcpasta! 👍 😁 Really appreciate the effort that goes into these
been listening for years and i love these so much!
One of the best creepy pastas I’ve heard! Great job on the narration as well - as always 💯
Always looking for to a awesome narration by our man CreepsMcPasta.
The problem with the premise is all it would take is one person to snap and burn it all down
Your voice and tone are my favorite, so happy to ear you here again ! With an amazing story on top of that, thank you for your time :)
This was sooo great, and blows anything Hollywood does out of the water. This deserves a movie
@bluedragonfly8139
Жыл бұрын
Lol, nah.
Wow, what a great story, really had my attention. Yes, had chills listening to this. Like the long stories too.
I will never get tired of this guys perfect storytelling voice
Im gonna be real honest. If i give someone a 100% full and serious warning about exactly what will happen if they go and do something stupid and why exactly it is that if they do it I will not help them, but they still decide to go and do it, I'd absolutely just stand there and be like, "Welp, what did I say would happen... Guess this is where you're gonna be living now." Edit: People seem to be confused about this for some reason, but im clearly talking about the scenarios given in this story and not in real life situations...
@TheAthens619
Жыл бұрын
The definition of fuck around and find out
@Nikotov3
Жыл бұрын
You wouldn't if it was someone you love. You might be able to find the strength to leave them but you wouldn't be able to just let it go.
@TheAthens619
Жыл бұрын
@Professional ShitPoster if someone is told explicitly not to do something and they end up dying or getting hurt, whose fault it that? In this situation, it is a no brainer that you HAVE to leave that person behind rather they'rea loved one or not; you'll be stuck and die with them. When you fuck around and find out, that's a you problem and not a me problem
@TehAntiSpammer
Жыл бұрын
@@Nikotov3 Seems like its been answered already, but like if you saw someone you love jump off a building, im sure you wouldn't jump after them to try and catch them. Its like that in my mind. Ofc im gonna feel sad, but they were warned for a reason.
@flowflower2816
Жыл бұрын
@@TehAntiSpammerthey don't deserve to die over being stupid, especially if I love them, love is forgiving the stumbles and missteps of the one you love, letting them rot in the consequences of their actions isn't love, especially if it's over something like not following the rules, of course some actions are too awful to forgive but you know what I mean
There needs to be part two to this. I know there isn’t. But…it was just so good!!
A better title for this would be "My town is covered in red threads. There's a reason we don't touch them" Still, an amazing and heart wrenching story
👏👏👏👏 oh my lord YES a good long one for tonight!!!! Coffee, j, and CreepsMcP….I’m ready.
Thanks as always! Superb narration, I can only ever listen to you when it comes to these things. Hope you're doing great 💯
I tried listening to other narrators, but nothing can't come as close to CreepsMcPasta. I can't listen to other narrators long enough to even finish one full story but I can listen to this guy all day any day.
@lilithbean
Жыл бұрын
Should try the cerber series narrated by naturestemper he’s pretty high production and the story is AMAZING
@captainbigos9267
Жыл бұрын
@@lilithbean Tried the guy, but his enunciation leaves something to be desired. I had do rewind a few times to understand what he was saying and had to focus more than usual for the rest of the time.
@Justadonkey
Жыл бұрын
You don't like dark somnium or lighthouse? Those are the absolute best in my opinion if only because they are very particular as to what stories they choose to narrate
@voodoovixen666
Жыл бұрын
MrCreepypasta and Dark Somnium
@captainbigos9267
Жыл бұрын
@@Justadonkey Lighthouse is great. Love the way he does different characters. Very talented as a voice actor.
This story would make a great horror movie! Where the hell is Hollywood?
So much mystery, an excellent take before bed!
Amazing, thank you for the long ones like this!
Am I the only one who just can’t sleep without one of his videos playing? Started listening when I was 13 and I’m almost 21 now and I still do it
Is there something missing around the 36 min mark? The little bump in the most-repeated-bar tells me I'm not the only one who stumbled and went back there.
Ten years and you keep churning out the best out there. Thanks for this!
Amazing story I just question why they didn’t just firebomb that rural town to dust and glass
Wow, CreepsMcPasta, good sir you have certainly picked a winner. It’s a rare thing that a story keeps me so entranced, and The time went by so quickly I was quite upset when it ended! To the author of this piece, I give my highest Praise, and a sequel would be too much to ask for, and could possibly even ruin it, but one can hope. Such a unique tale of “string theory” (lol) but definitely not the one we’d want to be true. And just as what Bill Murray whispered into Scarlett Johanssons ear at the end of “Lost in Translation”, I’m, (surely not alone here) absolutely dying to know what the goddess said. Definitely one of the best I’ve heard in a while, a long while. And you did an outstanding job delivering it to us all. The writing was as near perfect as one could ask for, the theme was absolutely engaging, and the slight amount of unknown is enough to either satisfy, or drive you mad! Ok, I’ve raved on enough, and I meant every word, but Well done sir! Well done!! 👍👍👍
Wow, that's a long time! Congrats 🎉 Awesome narration and really gr8 stories 😊
Really cool background picture, I wish I could find it somewhere without the text, would love to use it as a wallpaper
Ive been waiting so long for another rules story
@brandino6793
Жыл бұрын
there are none, sorry. maybe 1
What an amazing story ! Really enjoyed the concept very original
In my humble opinion the kid should of listened 🤷♀️
Lovely job! Thank you for a decade of excelling at story telling and inspiring vivid dreams.
He deserved it I wouldn’t feel too bad.
Bro arguably has the best narrations on KZread
After this long with such amazing content you deserve so many more followers I've been sharing you around and telling work mates and such how great of a narrator you are
There is something about his voice and the way he reads the stories and he uses one image for the whole video that makes it incredibly scary and I love it
Rule #1 do not buy this town. Rule #2 do not visit this town.
Thanks I’ve been checking everyday for a new vid 🙏🏽🙏🏽
So what happened between discovering the woman in the clearing and the end it feels like missed part of the story out?
@TwinmomFamof6
Жыл бұрын
I agree. I'm setting here myself thinking.. " what just happened?" The story was great until the end but it went south when they found the woman in the woods.
@GotShot22
Жыл бұрын
Basically the woman entity allowed them to live as long as the protagonist did whatever the entity wanted.... and it sounds as if the entity wanted the protagonist to provide the town electricity again so that it could "play" with the puppetized townspeople as if they were going about their normal lives. At least, that's what it seems like to me.
@radvasaikar
Жыл бұрын
This feels like an origin story of the alien town for the werewolf story series voiced by dark somnium
@Samuel_Loegan
Жыл бұрын
Interesting
@Nikotov3
Жыл бұрын
My interpretation is that the town accused a woman of being a witch (wich she ended up being) and burned her deep in the forest. But she put a curse in the form of the strings before she died. So then she grew the strings and killed the town in revenge for all these years. She made them suffer which is why she didn't just kill them all instantly. Then, I guess for her own amusement, wanted to show them her creation and since the town is dead and she can't do anything else. She's forcing the protagonist to supply electricity so the town can run while she plays with them.
Thanks for the upload:) fantastic narration as always!
That was a intense interesting eerie good story, I loved it your narration is always so good, thank you once again Creeps for making my day😁👍💯
Thank you for still posting top lvl stories man ive been listening to you sense you started in like 2012 or 13 pls never leave so many have
This would make a good movie.
These stories have TV beat any day
I've listened to alot of creepy tales, but few have left me with a chill that lingered well after the story was finished. This is going into my top 10 most spine ratling creepy stories I have ever listened to It has such an air of the terrorifying unknown that even when the terrorible evil is revealed. It still holds the unyielding feeling of fear of the deadly unknown. A brilliant masterpiece of a horror story.
@Jerharris90
Жыл бұрын
My goodness, if you only have 10 that scare you, you are just starting..
@southernroots3896
Жыл бұрын
@@Jerharris90 If it isn’t too much trouble… could you provide some suggestions? I’m new here 😊
@ZedMazaus480
Жыл бұрын
@@Jerharris90 Oh there's more than 10. I would put this in my TOP TEN like I said.
been binging you all day and as soon as im about to get off yt, you post lmao
So who was the lady why was she magical and could only use red threads apparently. When did the town start being cursed and again why didn't he just call down a serial strike to destroy the entire town and everything around it.
Just spent the last week looking for this video 😂 was the first video I watched and is my favorite story ❤
These are really fun...Thanks for the upload!
Perfect just in time for me to monitor my raid 5 array build!
Imagine a crossover with creepypasta and Comics. Like a guy moving to metropolis away from this town and it's Snares.
This is definitely one of those "right up my alley" type stories. 😀
Yay!! Lists of rules comeback!
This was EXCELLENT!
This one should 100% be made into a film
Okay…wow this was an incredible tale. Why would you not put that soldier out of his misery if you could see the trajectory of his demise?
So what was the protagonist tasked to do at the end?
This had me gritting me teeth from beginning to end. ❤
I love the feeling of being able sleep because the paranoia has started to hit hard
Brilliant!
Such a weird story, I love it!
10:40 ok I am completely drawn in to this!
Since 2016 for me,one of the best voices of you tube
Man this one was really good. One like this in some time now.
The red twine reminds me of "Vita Carnus" for some reason
We love you bro keep it up!
It was just starting to get good don't leave us like this!
Nice! Almost an hour! Thanks brother man!! GTSY BTW too! ;)
Well, that was creepy and dark AF 😱 LOVED IT 🥰 thanks for the story and narration!
We love a long story 😊
I ain't no taco man that's for sure
I’m most happy when you post ❤
I bought a dope town it came with a bag of weed
Amazing story
Ok I loved this xx thank you xxxxx
Oh THIS is an interesting one! Really unique
I don't get scared easily but I got scared
@yesterdayitrained
Жыл бұрын
Love your name!
Oh damn, this story is 🔥 ty good sir for your hard work, and high-fives to the author 🖤 💀☠️🖤
One of the best horror fiction stories I've ever heard. & I'm a picky bastard 😅
The kid was told and knew the rules no loss
This was really good
this was really good but the ending was strange and very fast.
An amazing story! 👍