You got to listen to this either drunk or really high, then it’s a great story. DO NOT LISTEN TO IT SOBER.

@pi3tr3

18 күн бұрын

i am pretty drunk and I want part 2, 3... 5... 10 and more plssssssssssssssss >:)

@swiftmatic

14 күн бұрын

Been chillin with Jane, Def wanna part 2 etc.

@TheAxxon

7 күн бұрын

Thanks have it half through just opened my second beer ;)

The lack of pauses is infuriating

@jasonhunter3429

Ай бұрын

the dot dot dots is what got me but the captain captain is also jarring

@abdulshaaff5013

Ай бұрын

It's in the future, they are the military& Genetic enhancement is a thing

@TheSolidSnakeOil

25 күн бұрын

@@jasonhunter3429 Ellipses and asterisks confuse TTS.

@Dusk.EighthLegion

14 күн бұрын

Blimey, it's almost as if we created a pause button.

I liked the part about the Royal Navy rule for saving ammunition.

AI is Always Insufficient. Punctuation is your friend!

Aggressive negotiations

... bad robotic AI narration is bad robotic AI narration. Nuff said.

Captain Captain 😂 is that like Major Major?

@renkir7853

13 сағат бұрын

Major Major Major !

You haven't actually named the author or linked to their original story, because the links in your description are truncated.

@TowGunner

Ай бұрын

Cause it’s AI created

@cheatersvault78

Ай бұрын

sir my channe is not verrified that why link in description is not working i apply for verification but still in pending

@jakeand9020

12 күн бұрын

Link in description works now.

Thank you for the reading

this holds promise while i do wish it was more of ''space orcs'' then ''humans op'' as the techno graph tilts the story into category wise , the fact its author wanted to take different biology into account about thinking patterns being different rather then ''one op rest stupid'' and other such details i be curious to see this fleshed out

New to the Chanel I am enjoying the wht dose hyf mean?

A corporal is the second in command of a warship?

@jasonhunter3429

Ай бұрын

@snake57 guess in the future someone finally worked out corporals do all the work 😆

@travelswithbenny3328

20 күн бұрын

Yeah when I heard that my level of appreciation decreased to the point of moving on.

10 seconds to target & the Human crew have time to hold a conversation? I call rubbish. The story lost all credibility within the first 2 minutes. Please think about what you are saying. "Dunn wasted no time bringing the cannons around". Too late he's dead! At least make the story internally consistent. (No I did not get beyond that point because it was to annoying).

@maywashburn2848

27 күн бұрын

I believe a lot of this is suppose to imply their natal implants give them what feels like minutes in a few second… this story was good but had a very creative use of time

@playertwoeightfourninezero4236

26 күн бұрын

If you watched the whole thing, it’ll explain that these types of humans think on a different level of time due to implants. Near the end, the captain got 5 years of training in 2 minutes.

@3RAN7ON

26 күн бұрын

Have you ever been in a situation where time seem to slow down? For me it was a car accident.. I think that's what the story is trying to portray, that humans can drag out seconds into minutes. I guess that's true using both adrenaline and focus we can do that already but in the story they have cybernetic enhancements that can drag out time whenever they wish. That's my take anyway. Cheers!

@RaginMunchkin

24 күн бұрын

the actual "conversation" is two short sentences. the rest is just describing a rather straightforward thought process. the cannons would start moving with 3 to 4 seconds

@Mousse9

22 күн бұрын

@@3RAN7ONUnrelated to the story, but I was in a similar situation. I was on my bike, standing still at a crossroads. With no visible traffic, I started up. Then a car came around a bend in the road to my right., very, VERY fast. You can’t see far past that bend because houses block the view. Ok, I though, he must see me, I’m directly in front of him. But he didn’t slow down. At all. I panicked, pedaled as hard as I could, when I looked at the driver (there was a passenger as well), he looked straight ahead, not at me. I really thought he was gonna hit the back of my bike, I was preparing to roll into a ball, try and protect my head, etc. I just barely passed him, the wind from him passing behind me almost knocking me over. I went to the sidewalk to try and catch my breath. The car never slowed. I don’t think he even saw me. In those few seconds time really did feel like it stretched forever.

Thanks for uploading. Interesting and hope this is/ becomes a series.

Poor grammar, "I'll" pronounced as "ill", "..." being vocalised as "Dot dot dot", lack of pauses where they are needed. Warning, this is clearly AI read and annoying to listen to. Poster, at least vet your AI reader and insert the appropriate corrections.

@cheatersvault78

27 күн бұрын

sure sir

@cheatersvault78

27 күн бұрын

next time i dont do mistake

I see one statement apparently he don’t like the story I wish the guy would send me his story so I can give my opinion.

I should think that the er, scriptwriter may benefit from being introduced to Rogets Thesaurus, The Oxford book of Synonyms and the Complete Works of William Shakespeare. Good yarn though.

That's a cool FTL system

@rayanderson5797

3 күн бұрын

Yeah. That was probably the most unique aspect, and it was a pretty cool idea.

Aww sweet a story I've already heard with a different name read by a different AI 🙄

@KrisPowlen

20 күн бұрын

@russellcharles3268 What was the title of the one you heard previously, and where did you find it? I would like to find more of this story, if there is any.

@jakeand9020

12 күн бұрын

​@@KrisPowlenChapters 1-3 on "Sci-Fi Synthesis" under the title "The awakening giant" and with a much better voice. The story only goes to chapter 3, but apparently the author is still working on it.

Bad bot narration. Not well written. But I like the general direction of the story. A bit different from the usual run of what's been on my feed

the story is coo-l but has no ending :(

Terrible. Absolutely unlistenable. I'm sure the story is worthwhile, but the narration is the worst. Get off the platform, and make room for content providers that actually care.

I had to stop at 7 minutes or so. No pauses, no emotion whatsoever, story is super boring so far and I have no beer on hand. Hard pass

Very incomplete and very much in need of some work... it could be rather good, but descriptions need to be worked out, such as being a history of the persuasive development put off the way earlier, shortening the military explanation of the advancement timeline, and so on... could become a much better story...

Good Story, but I feel like it needs a third part. After all that exposition, I really wanted a pay off.

Youll never get me to listen to ai garbble

@ericfrancis6613

21 күн бұрын

But you'll comment and give them the money from the interaction😅

Well, my comment is dis dot dot dot dot... Total garbage.

unfinished and a little boring