How to plan story arcs tutorial?

They should make an anime adaption of your series, it will be great.

@gunjantanwar7792

2 жыл бұрын

That may happen for sure soon if he keep the consistency for making Manga forever

@anactualbear5683

Жыл бұрын

And then after that he could get his own terrible live action adaption, because then you know his work has become a classic.

Gintama is a masterpiece.

@gummybear2700

8 жыл бұрын

Damn straight :D

@dan1ruu

7 жыл бұрын

dyastro gintama is the greatest anime ever

@benjaminhillware1293

7 жыл бұрын

dyastro the greatest anime is that so raven

@kidup_8135

6 жыл бұрын

Dyastro preeeach

@Yennyuo

6 жыл бұрын

Gintama is the best inspiration for stories ;3;

I took into account of what people have been saying in videos related to yours and it makes me want to reinvent myself in terms of my direction in storywriting. I'm a complete amateur in this but I've always had a creative mind for stories & characters since a child. I have this story that I've been holding for years but I have been pushing it aside, adding new info, pushing it aside again, returning to it since several months & changing the story a lot. I've been so focus on the future on my story so much as well that it got in the way. I ended up losing sight of what great things I could do before I get to that point, which resulted in writer's block on where I could make my start compelling enough. Sorry for the rambling lol, just watching videos like these gave me interest & the steps that I need in order to make great content. Your character "Ceazar" looks looks awesome btw!

@zonalvirus6715

6 жыл бұрын

Joel Pirela I am literally the exact same way. I am steadily on my way to my 18th birthday, meaning my comic needs to at least have its 1st chapter done by then, yet I'm still not good enough for this daunting task. I try everything I can to improve. Anyway, yeah, I keep getting to ahead of myself, and I don't know what to do in between certain moments. Do you have any tips you could give me?

@seans.383

4 жыл бұрын

Zonal Virus Wow, same boat bro! I know your comment was a year ago but I’m almost 18 and have been holding this story inside my head for years. Though I want to get better at art before starting. How has yours gone?

@lbeast2855

4 жыл бұрын

Omg same here! I have all these events planned out but idk how fill the “in-betweens” if you will... I hope we become better writers soon, good luck!

@matthewsheridan4642

4 жыл бұрын

You are not alone. Keep at it, even when it is hard, take your time.

@highkey.j99

3 жыл бұрын

@@zonalvirus6715 same here. I have a manga I wanna start but I’m busy trying to make a story and I keep adding things and removing them and getting stuck, but we’ll get through this. The problem is is that we are trying to make the perfect story. Let’s just make a story we want to feel good about and be happy that we made it, and soon enough we’ll all come out with masterpieces

Dude you are an inspiration to anyone not japanese wanting to create japanese style comics! I've been developing a comic for a few years now that is finally getting the point where I'm happy enough with my drawing abilities and story to begin drawing the pages themselves.

@inspiringwhisper133

4 жыл бұрын

I know I'm late (by two years😅) but that's awesome!! It's nice to know that someone with a similar situation to mine own is feeling the confidence to draw! I hope you're very successful with your project and I hope I can get to where you are one day! I guess you can say you're my inspiration!😋 Anyway I wish you luck!

@turnt983

2 жыл бұрын

@@inspiringwhisper133 Update?

@kj-karriemkarriem4328

2 жыл бұрын

I’m working on becoming one when I grow up but u crazy if u think I’m working in Tokyo

I also like to plan where the series will end out. It takes a bit effort, but if someone doesn't want to create a 500+ chapter series it's pretty good.

Funniest Anime is clearly Corey In The House

You are my favourite KZreadr

I agree with you. When I first come up with an idea for a chapter, I try to make it different from previous chapters. By either having a new location or new characters. This isn't necessary, but it makes each chapter more memorable. And I think it helps new readers getting into the story. Spices things up.

@sambridges4670

9 жыл бұрын

That can also be done by adding twists or giving set backs to your characters. By that I'm saying that your story will be more interesting if your characters have to overcome obstacles.

Love, love, love all your stuff! Thanks so much for the videos, they're not only interesting but helpful and insightful. Love your art style also, its got such a lively flow and relatively realistic look to it. Keep up the great work!!

do you have tips for writing beginnings? that's always been the hardest for me

@ShevyshenkoSneipers

5 жыл бұрын

Yes, dont care about anything except your own story, things will pop out easier out of ya minf

@Sanpaku-san

2 жыл бұрын

For the beginning you have to make sure the first page is interesting enough that the reader wants to read on. You can do this by setting the story in a cold open, in the action, or just make it introduce the concept. Then you wanna make sure you introduce the main character and they're life as is and show how the story starts and what initiates the story. In other words what is that, "but then one day..." after the "once upon a time there was a...". So introduce, then kick off the story, but also make it interesting right away.

Me: Starts Learning anatomy ME:AFTER 24HRS OF PRACTICE *HOW TO CREATE A NICE PLOT STORY.*

Dunno if this has happened to you yet but i just want to thank you so much. Ever since i found your channel and watched your videos i've become inspired to start the comic i've been thinking about for so long. Now every time i'm feeling down/un sure about my comic i come watch one of your videos and it makes me feel inspired again :3 Thanks heaps and keep up the good work! i love your art :3

Your vids r so good helpful and for some reason entertaining u always upload WAT I'm struggling with. Thx man I'm really proud to be part of your audience!

This makes a lot of sense. When I plan chapters I always want there to be something that happens. Something that excites the reader or at least makes them remember the chapter distinctly. I feel like every chapter should leave a cliffhanger of some sort. Doesn't necessarily have to lead to the next chapter but it should bring the reader back hungry for more. So yeah. Great video man. And I'm diggin' the character design!

Nice video man I really love your KZread channel Request Show how you got all the connections how you made your dream come true

I really learned from this. Thank you Whyt manga-sensei.

I LOVE YOUR VIDEOS!!! You make me inspired

Thx really appreciate your outlook on writing it helps alot

So I paused your video to go find which of my smoke-detectors was chirping, but it turns out the chirp is from YOUR smoke-detector. From 2 years ago. (hear one at 1:37)

@dmtstar3109

4 жыл бұрын

😂💜

@lemonjuice2597

3 жыл бұрын

I checked too, but it was actually both.

Thank you for sharing, you brought some perspectives to my mind that I hadn't thought of. Also, what is the music playing in the background? I would love to listen to it while writing. Thanks again!

I love this I really needed this

How do you name your characters and come up with the clothing for each one

@wiktoriakohman2200

5 жыл бұрын

you need to understand what character do you want to create if its an excentric,cocky,rich boy you wont put him into sweatpants and dirty shirt, if it's and insecure,shy,anti-social girl you wouldn't put her in short skirt and see-trough top right? what time is it is it present,past,future ?

@youremessingupthefengsuave

5 жыл бұрын

Way late but you should also take into consideration where the characters live. Example, if they live in a cold climate they'd most likely wear heavy clothing and multiple layers as opposed to characters that live in a tropical climate who would wear thinner clothes and less layers. Also if the characters are travelling to other countries or continents(anywhere with a different climate), their clothing will change to suit.

@rickyrenju9020

4 жыл бұрын

daisuke uchiha that’s where I’m really stuck at..

@artistaroundtheblock2047

4 жыл бұрын

For my “manga” the main characters are all intergalactic space alien chics so I throw on gear that would help them in combat yet make them look stylish to appeal to the public and be loved by the masses.

@tartagliasjigglydworshipper

4 жыл бұрын

as for designing characters, it really depends on the world you're building. for naming, I suggest looking for names' meanings. also when naming, take into consideration the character's ethnicity and nationality.

Awesome work! Very inspiring.

Thank You brother, I absolutely Agree With This Video! I Want To Write A Manga Soon & Whatever Information I can take Will Be Greatly Appreciated!

I am wanting to make my own stroy thank for guiding me in the right directions

This was great. I'm hoping to be a comic book artist too some day. Your videos are providing a lot of insight. Thank your for that.

If i could draw like this i think I would be writing so much stories and mangas my head would spin, but i would most definitely try to create something like BERSERK, everyone seems to do naruto/one piece/dragon ball and all these high school things but i think BERSERK has one of the most gut wrenching deep stories in manga history..it's like the game of thrones of Manga.

This is now officially the first video I've seen in 2021!

It really helped, thanks

good insight, have you done a video on how chapters should start?

Dang it ceazar is such a good character design. Great job on that one

thanks for the great video

i watched a few of your vids and i love the character designs..is your comic on comixology also?

@WhytMangaOdunze

8 жыл бұрын

+arthur bellfield My comic is on Amazon and Kindle as well as our Saturday-AM Marketplace as "Apple Black Vol.1"

@jordanmyles7718

7 жыл бұрын

Yo, is this a younger version of Ceazer, or was the design just changed?( favorite character so far btw)

@WhytMangaOdunze

7 жыл бұрын

Jordan Myles the design was just changed.

@jordanmyles7718

7 жыл бұрын

+Whyt Manga oh nice, you're one of the few youtubers that actually respond. I actually just got a premium sub for SatAM and I'm loving it, AppleBlack and Z Forever are my favorites so far, and I know you'll get big man, it has to happen soon.

@WhytMangaOdunze

7 жыл бұрын

Jordan Myles Thank you!!

Hey could you do a ‘how to plan out a volume ?’

cann you do a tutorial on planning battle and positioning i cant seem to draw out a female doing a kick without looking stiff

Thanks dude

How do you do you deal with plot convince? I am working on making a manga and I am still working on the outline, I figured I might want to ask someone with experience how to avoid stuff like that.

Whyt, when is the next volume going on amazon

Génial c'est trop bien 👍😜

very helpful video :D

bro im working on my on own anime and i love your videos, and black apple is amazing i would love to watch it on crunchy roll to be honest, i wanted to kno if your willing to help on my anime as well, i have solid ideas and done alot of research.

I don’t know how to draw at all but I want to learn I want to create a story and hopefully it’s gets recognized by millions one day

@Whyt Manga -It's a little difficult for a chapter to be "stand alone" when, in my case, it is part of a greater graphic novel effort. In my case, I have tried to make each chapter an arc as well as any subarc in the overall timeline of the story and use the chapter ending to resolve the principal arc in such a way that it is a punctuation mark to move on to the rest of the story (and since it is a science fiction/space opera retelling of Great Britain's war with Nazi Germany, I use a relevant brainy quote, usually from Churchill to finish the last panel). You cannot read Chapter 4 -The Hinge of Fate without reading the Prelude, Chapter 1 The Gathering Storm, Chapter 2 Their Finest Hour, Chapter 3 Triumph and Tragedy, nor can you read the penultimate Chapter 5 Closing the Ring or the final chapter 6 Darkest Hour without having read all that came before. Might you have any thoughts about the development of chapters when they are subdivisions of a larger extent work? Takers?

12:00 was really helpful.

Ik this is hella old,but do you write your script as you draw or have a seperate notebook to do it in? A fellow manga/anime creator here😀

Do you know if there is a french version for your manga ? (sorry for the langage i've got some difficulty ^^')

I’m done with the story planning. I’m going to start drawing now Wish me good luck guys!!:)

@LivePhoenix

4 жыл бұрын

How's it going man, update me I'd like to know

@ahmednazari2325

4 жыл бұрын

Han Solo I’ve done 1/4 of the book. As I am not that good of a drawer, it is taking me long to draw them pages..( slow process..)

@LivePhoenix

4 жыл бұрын

@@ahmednazari2325 that's awesome, Keep up the good work man, wish you luck And also, by any chance can you brief me a little of your story (Just curious)

@ahmednazari2325

4 жыл бұрын

Han Solo yeah sure, it is about this guy who lives in a world ruled by a robots. Now what is the plot that I can’t tell you but it is futuristic and Stone Age at the same time.... I hope I didn’t give too much away 😇

@LivePhoenix

4 жыл бұрын

@@ahmednazari2325 sounds interesting

I must first say this, you are an insanely talented artist, and I can only dream of achieving your skill-level. I myself am trying to make a manga. I've been working on it for years, but I haven't once felt good enough about it. Can you please give me some tips, tricks, and the like? I so desperately want this to be my career. For both art and story. Especially story.

I'm writing my manga as well

Dude you are epic bro

Make a video all about Apple blacks script and step us through

Also I'm wondering I I'm doing this wrong-- like with mine. I always write out the story and dialogue for that chapter/ one book and then draw...but it takes a while... Also ...how do you lengthen the story of one book / chapter..bc I wrote everything out and I feel I don't have enough pages like a regular manga has.it comes up a bit short. I guess I'm asking , how do I lengthen it and stay on topic.

I see it as a side quest sometime in open world game you have the main story and side quest for example say the main story is you have to talk to the king in the kingdom but as you make your way you see a side quest for a character you would like to romance so you do that but it did not do anything to the main story that is how I see chapters sometime and sorry this is a little long.

@blackham7

8 жыл бұрын

+Herb Partee Same thought it was just me so the side quests is like extras/fillers and the main quests are the main storyline

What type of mechanical pencil is that?. The ones I have my drawings come out less clean. Or is it some technique you use.

@WhytMangaOdunze

9 жыл бұрын

Paper Mate Grip 0.7mm.

@johnclave4194

9 жыл бұрын

Whyt Manga thanks nice video. Also what type of papers do you use? Didn't you make a video on your supplies?.

@Novaisnova

9 жыл бұрын

***** y are u wanting to draw! go back and train! lol

@spongebobhank4728

9 жыл бұрын

Jango16 Bruh, he's already dead tho...

@Novaisnova

9 жыл бұрын

eeL yzneR bruh, it was a joke

ive always wanted to make my own manga but my art sucks can u give me any recommendations on how to improve ( btw keep up wiv the good work whyte manga)

@WhytMangaOdunze

8 жыл бұрын

watch this video to improve! kzread.info/dash/bejne/ZZeMy5uoqb3ZdsY.html&lc=z13syxzw1yejvzkyr04cfzmi1uvjej4q120

How long a script should be for 1 chapter of manga?

I watched Smallville.

When drawing out my pages how big should the paper be?

best everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr looing forward to meet you my sense

Would a chapter be a book/manga in on its self and a volume being multiple books/manga chapters?

Tell me how did u make ur manga please tell me... I'm an aspiring manga artist.

Lol the smoke detector in the backround

I have a question. I've actually came up with a manga when. I was in high school I stopped drawing for a few years personal reasons. But I wanted to start it up again. I have a brief storyline and a few characters. I want to bring it to light and start up.... Now for the question do I write my story first than or draw panels with the story with the panels.?

@Edgypoo

9 жыл бұрын

Always ALWAYS write down the story first. then write what happens in the first about 10 chapters. Best is to roughly know how the story ends. Then plan out the pages of the first chapter and make rough drafts of the panels. THEN you can start with the actual drawing. Planning is really important. You don't want to notice something off and have to redo pages. Or when you come up with a better idea you can't change it anymore. You have to think about your story until you are satisfied with it, otherwise you will look back and dislike it. (small changes still could occur) This can be a big pain but in the end you will be glad you did it that way... If you don't wanna write so much you could record yourself while talking about the story (and then you could additionally take short notes of your speech) Well I hope I helped you a bit and good luck with your idea!

Which skechbooks are you using?

@johnraypervera8429

7 жыл бұрын

+sporebean 22 lol XD

In manga I know it all has to be canon stories only but can i add in non canon stories just for fun?

@MaxAveris

7 жыл бұрын

probably, naruto and bleach does that all the time

@lemonjuice2597

3 жыл бұрын

If you write it, it’s canon. The only way it wouldn’t be is if you wrote two works with the same story but one was different.

Caesar!!!

I know this is weird but I have ALOT OF REQUESTS BECAUSE I WANT TO UNDER STAND HOW TO START A STORY OFF

Just wanted to say apple black is pretty good but you just need an editor to help with dialogue

@ohhithere2196

3 жыл бұрын

I agree

hey I like your KZread channel but can so more excited when talking about your mangA or try to sounds different when doing this

i just need that tutorial to design my character

@WhytMangaOdunze

9 жыл бұрын

This may help kzread.info/dash/bejne/l5mNtterZZuZmrg.html

Hair styles, eyes, clothing,facial expressions

about how many pages per chapter?

question,is there a possibility for non japan to make his own manga and publish it in japan?

@blainksplashyt9656

2 жыл бұрын

Yeah of course honestly I’m working on one myself

how to come up with clothes

are your comics famous in my country japan? I read doraemon, hamtaro, Perman and more

I like the know the basic fundamentals of storytelling and when to break them.. just like drawing. I also personally like to focus on the ending and sometimes work backwards, but not too often. Also kill your darlings.

@Camtaylor82

9 жыл бұрын

DMing and Improv help ALOT too.

I will keep you in mind, and contact you in the future for a massive project. Meanwhile, pre-production time for me.

@artistaroundtheblock2047

4 жыл бұрын

Apam Merlo Did it ever happen?

how did you get the g-pen?

@krossen

8 жыл бұрын

+Alan Henrique de Araujo Pereira search Jet Pens on google

@alancaz5056

8 жыл бұрын

okay ty

ive purchase really cool. how can I get one made?

@wtwmikey

8 жыл бұрын

PPPPFFFTTTTT LOL

@wademcd1665

8 жыл бұрын

What?

Yo guys(Readers) the manga seems good, but is it really good, his drawing is badass but I'm talking about the story

@barax9462

7 жыл бұрын

This a Question☝🏾️

@RensGoguma

7 жыл бұрын

Yes, definitely worth a read

@xCAMOxMyth

6 жыл бұрын

Darknesscoming he was asking readers

link to song please!!! :)

@WhytMangaOdunze

9 жыл бұрын

its called "Get Back Up", you can find it in the youtube creation tools audio library.

How to write story chapters according to kentaro miura Step 1: write it Step 2: wait 6 months

I can hear the fire alarm in the back lmao

Mhmm

Gintama is so good

PS: How the heck do people draw that good without guidelines?

Apple Black should have an anime adaption

Good tutorial! But can a chapter have more than one thing happening?

@WhytMangaOdunze

5 жыл бұрын

yes!

Dear god ceazar looks sooooooo different

I guess I'm just happy if a manga doesn't have stupid back ground flash backs in the middle of a fight in which u can figure it out as they are fighting like a certain manga...."Naruto"

#appleblack

u so good ;u; I'm jello

I really have a good plot but i cant really draw in style

Samurai Jack episodes are like this

i agree gintama is the funniest

Soooo jealous...

how to write or how to draw

I love One Piece so i'd try to end with cliff hangers

your drawings look like Naruto and One punch man plus together.