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@dianalushai2785

3 жыл бұрын

We did it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (4:11)

@josiahraymond7914

2 жыл бұрын

():

@josiahraymond7914

2 жыл бұрын

The only thing that is true

@kaiseramador8376

Жыл бұрын

maybe you are the best

@kaiseramador8376

Жыл бұрын

no you mean we did it

100%legends are watching before exam😂😂😅😅

@bappisinterest_369

4 ай бұрын

Mein to exam ke din hi dekh raha hoon😂😂

@amrudinamrudin1827

4 ай бұрын

😂😂✋

@priyadongare1945

4 ай бұрын

Same here

@odz_

3 ай бұрын

😂😂😂😂

@gametubearabic2546

3 ай бұрын

Damn

My elder brother told me to write a paragraph about a rainy day. I watched this video and this video helped me a lot. 😊

I'm so glad to have come across your video! Recently started homeschooling and had no idea where to look when I found out my now 7th grader, didn't even know how to write a paragraph. I will forever be grateful for videos like yours, that help us parents explain things better! ❤

@Yoo-Kang

Жыл бұрын

I hope your homeschooling is going well! - 9th grader

@brittanyyates863

Жыл бұрын

@@Yoo-Kang so far no problem!

@Amal.Mansour

Жыл бұрын

Thank you Brittany! I appreciate you taking the time to comment here. 🌹🌹

@teemronen3483

Жыл бұрын

Im homeschooled to. So much easier!!!

@8adsmastergaming859

Жыл бұрын

why did you have to express excluded it 1:47

I found this video really useful. I was actually having trouble writing a paragraph and then I researched on how to learn how to write a paragraph and then I found this video and I found it really really thank you! ♥

*Topic sentence:"Playing Outside"* Playing outside is essential as it gives you a lot of beneficial such as jogging, running and swimming. By doing these exercise your brains will relax as well as your physical health. Outdoor activities on the other hand can decrease the stresses due to the relaxation of mind. Thank you for your video, it helps me a lot, but can you please check if ever i have a grammatical mistakes!!

@gummyberrygaming9676

2 жыл бұрын

I'm not her, but if it's okay I can point out some mistakes 😄 "Playing outside is essential as it gives you a lot of *beneficial* " _you can use the word _*_benefits_*_ instead_

@user-ue9sd9kv7t

2 жыл бұрын

I want to pay you back so i subscribed to your channel instead. I hope it helps you even a little. Thank you! have a wonderful day!!

@gummyberrygaming9676

2 жыл бұрын

@@user-ue9sd9kv7t awwwwwe you don't have to!😭💖💖 Thanks so much

@user-ue9sd9kv7t

2 жыл бұрын

@@gummyberrygaming9676 don't mention it, i am jubilant doing it and you deserve it tho..hehe!

@setharooskiii

2 жыл бұрын

ah yes, i love getting a lot of beneficial.

These vids are last minute savers....😁💯💯

Best teacher ever

A clear explanation about writing a paragraph. My students will be thankful... and me, too.

This is fun amal Mansour💯💯💯

@paulapilgrim673

2 жыл бұрын

Ok💯💯💯💯

my teacher send it to my class

Ultra legends watching one night before exam 😂

@amigirl3070

5 ай бұрын

Me...

@user-ge2jl3gf9c

5 ай бұрын

Same to you

@Nut12343-j

4 ай бұрын

I am watching in exam day😅

@thilagavathithilaga1444

4 ай бұрын

Yes

@amithaantony2853

12 күн бұрын

Me

i showed this to my school presentation and i got A+++++ MY WHOLE CLASS

I failed my writing exam. I really am interested in writing but I dont know how to do it. This gave me some confidence. Thank you so much.

It’s so useful thanks for sharing my dear

Hi, I'm ally. I'm 20 and I've never learned how to f.cking write a paragraph. By the way this is extremly helpful.

@teddybear6555

3 жыл бұрын

Don’t cuss

Watching this before my exam🗣️‼️‼️‼️

I am a big fan I love your videos

I like your videos Thank you mam 🤓🤓🤩

thank's for the video i got 50/50 in my exam

@Amal.Mansour

2 жыл бұрын

Good for you 💪🏼💪🏼

@timidgaming6967

2 жыл бұрын

In english a half mark is cut intentionally right

@dhanattiphangyou9213

2 жыл бұрын

I got a 0

@chrisz2281

2 жыл бұрын

@@dhanattiphangyou9213 cuz u don't do some basic sentences

@deepeshsahi7607

Жыл бұрын

Lol.... No ones get full mark in English or alternative

This video made me learn paragraph writing

I am glad to learn from you teacher comlete videos because you are teaching me and my family Love you

Best paragraph vid

Very nice video on writing skills development

Thank you so much! I was stuck for years till now 😅😂

Simple and well detailed. Thank you!

This video good for my reviews for the exam❤

I am happy to look at this it's really helpful 😊

you rulle queen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yessss

Yuppp now I feel prepared for the midterm tomorrow 👍

A very good video about paragraph writing.

@Amal.Mansour

Жыл бұрын

Thank you! Your comment is highly appreciated!

There is no teacher in my whole province to teach like you.

@Amal.Mansour

2 жыл бұрын

☺️☺️Thank you

Thanks for the vid I 50/50 on my test

Thank you I need it very much because I’m in year four😢🎉

Omg this is so helpful I am studying for a exam next week and because of this video I understand how to write the perfect paragraph 👍👍👏I am really thankful for this video 😂😃🥰Thank you

Thanks so much. Great content. Instant follower

this was nice i learned so many things

Your the best teacher

Amazing explained 👌👌👌👌

You are the most honest teacher

@Amal.Mansour

3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much!

Thanks alot this is helpful

I like it 😁 thank you for this useful videoo

If you don’t mind, Amal, I’m going to show my students this video. What a brilliant video, indeed.

@abdullahasb2220

2 жыл бұрын

hi teacher

@boodz0

2 жыл бұрын

@@abdullahasb2220 Hey bro, don't forget to subscribe to the lady's channel.

@abdullahasb2220

2 жыл бұрын

@@boodz0 i subscribed

@abdullahasb2220

2 жыл бұрын

and to yours

hola a todos y bienvenidos a mi clase en este video aprenderás a escribe un párrafo bueno si sabes escribir una frase entonces definitivamente escribirás un párrafo porque es un grupo de oraciones que están relacionados con uno principal idea y están conectados entre sí así que estás listo, comencemos un párrafo debe tener al menos cinco oraciones una oración temática tres de apoyo oraciones y una oración final la primera paso es hacer una lluvia de ideas con el fin de escribe un buen párrafo escribir el tema general o la idea principal esto es lo que será tu párrafo acerca de por ejemplo amigos por qué la gente miente celebridades jugando afuera ahora usa la idea principal para crear el oración temática la oración temática típicamente identifica la idea principal le dice al lector lo que serás discutiendo en el párrafo los buenos amigos son muy importantes en nuestro vive la gente miente por varias razones ser una celebridad puede ser difícil jugar al aire libre tiene muchos beneficios ahora tienes que escribir el apoyo oraciones estas son las frases que dan mas información sobre la oración temática cada oración debe apoyar el tema oración debe proporcionar más detalles o ideas y si alguna frase no puede ser relacionado con la oración temática solo excluirlo jugar al aire libre tiene muchos beneficios bueno, te da la exposición al sol los juegos activos te ponen en movimiento y te beneficias tu salud fisica jugar o correr puede ayudar aliviar el estrés acumulado y la frustración una oración final señala el final de un párrafo reafirmando el tema oración y resumiendo los puntos principales y recuerda no agregue ningún detalle nuevo en el oración final y siempre puedes terminar tu párrafo con una conexión personal como la tuya opinión o sentimientos esta es mi conclusión oración jugar al aire libre te hace más feliz o cualquiera puede beneficiarse del exterior actividad bueno ahora es el segundo paso que tienes escribir el primer borrador deja una sangría las sangrías mueven la primera línea de un párrafo a la derecha y creando un espacio un párrafo normalmente comienza con una oración temática y el resto del párrafo proporciona detalles para apoyar y desarrollar el tema oración entonces vas a escribir el apoyo oraciones vincular cada oración con palabras de transición palabras de transición Forme un puente entre las oraciones para voy a usar aquí primer segundo y por ultimo puede utilizar ejemplos o hechos para respaldar tu oración principal para que puedas usar todo lo que sea relevante por ejemplo jugar al aire libre te da exposición al sol que está probado para curar estacional depresión jugar juegos activos como el baloncesto y ahora puedes empezar a concluir oración con palabras como finalmente en conclusión para resumir en resumen como resultado el tercer paso es editar tu párrafo busque errores gramaticales de ortografía errores asegúrese de escribir con mayúscula todo lo correcto sustantivos y que comenzaste tu oración con mayúsculas y terminadas con el signo de puntuación correcto y el ultimo paso es escribir tu párrafo y adivinen que lo hicimos muchas gracias mucho por ver y te veré en mis próximos videos

@santoshkumar-vm7et

2 жыл бұрын

Nice😅

@alimuhammad3232

2 жыл бұрын

L

@amalmokhtar33

2 жыл бұрын

Wow!

@amalmokhtar33

2 жыл бұрын

But why😁

pov: your teacher send you this video for school

@johnchristopher5939

3 жыл бұрын

The Video Sends my teacher

@FancyBilly

3 жыл бұрын

lmao true

@luckytoxic5013

3 жыл бұрын

Yes

@Oopwelldam

3 жыл бұрын

Yea

@brahhbro3590

3 жыл бұрын

LOL MINE DID AHAHAH

Excellent explanation thats i have Heard before go ahead

@Amal.Mansour

2 ай бұрын

All the best

Thank you❤🌹❤🌹❤ very useful

Very thankful video I wanna thank you very much

Thank you so much for sharing your easy-to-understand video on paragraph writing. Indeed, this is a good scaffold to enable my students to construct their own paragraphs. God bless and happy holidays!

I wanna thank you so much you have helped me so much with my personal essay, I was so stressed with all of the work I had to do on it but now I know what to do because your video helped me, thank you

@Amal.Mansour

2 жыл бұрын

🌷🌷🌷

I appreciate it sister 😊👍

Nice video

Good video 🎉

@Amal.Mansour

2 ай бұрын

Thanks for the visit

Very helpful thanks

This is a great explanation. Would you be OK with my embedding this video (giving you credit) in my online writing course? The course I am working on is a free public not for-profit course for the CA Dept. of Education Adult Education Division. Thank you.

@Amal.Mansour

Жыл бұрын

I’m glad to hear that you found my video helpful and would like to use it in your online course. I hope that my video will be a valuable addition to your course. Best regards,

I need to watch this cus I need to make an paragraph because it's my assignment

it`s great work. that was best explain i`hv seen so far

@Amal.Mansour

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you 🌷🌷

Thank you❤ Your videos are amazing ✨ Love from Jordan ❤🇯🇴

@Amal.Mansour

5 ай бұрын

Thank you Rama ❤️🇯🇴

Thank you, the explanation was right !

Omg this is so helpful thank you!

Great 👍

Thank you so much it helps me a lot.

Thank you very much You talking style explaining way is very good Your teaching are the best Thanks again ♥️

You are a good teacher

Thank you Amal I have exam tomorrow and this really helped me understand better !

Great👍

Excellent!

Such a good teacher

Clearly understood

nice video

Good Amal you did a nice job

My teacher put us this video and i understood so much thanks you :)

Thank you sooo.much the best explanation ❤

@Amal.Mansour

Жыл бұрын

Thank you 😊

@Nana-xs3xl

Жыл бұрын

@@Amal.Mansour it helps me a lot thank you ❤

thx now i know what to do for our quiz thank you so much💖

Very helpful . Thanks l got 20extra points in my exam for the nice paragraph

Thanks for the lesson mrs😍

Thank You Very Much

Hi Amal I really appreciate it It's a good explanation and help me a lot. Thanks!

@Amal.Mansour

2 ай бұрын

Glad to hear that

Short and clear just espresso thanx for the explanation

Hello from Uboldi 6th grade promotion course. We are happy to get your help writing.

😍😍😍😍Wow ! That's great

@Amal.Mansour

Жыл бұрын

Thank you! 😊

From India ♥️

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Love this!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

@Harm2256

6 ай бұрын

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Thank you mem

Love from India ❤️

Thank u Amal Mansour

Interesting!

@Amal.Mansour

Жыл бұрын

Glad you think so!

After watching of this video I can write a paragraph thank you very much ❤❤❤

Good job 👌

My teacher in English made me watch this it's so helpful thx ma'am😊

Thank you.❤

Nice viedo I like it very much

thanks man appreciate it

Great video i learn alot thanks 😊

this amazing my exam is day after tomorrow thank you soo much

@RareIsNoOne

3 жыл бұрын

I suppose you're the only Minecraft player here other than me...

@Meta_Club_0aura

3 жыл бұрын

@@RareIsNoOne lol so true

Thank you so much it helped me a lot

This video is absolutely perfect for my Gr. 6 class to learn the basics of paragraph writing. So simple to follow and well explained. Love the visuals !! You rock !!

@Amal.Mansour

10 ай бұрын

Your comment totally brightened my day! It's always great to hear that the videos are helping others in their educational journey.

@PYHN12t-bar

10 ай бұрын

Hi Mr corvers

Tomorrow is my English exam,This video helped me alot thank you for providing such a good video.

Thank you for this useful information. Its very helpful to use in the classroom for paragraphs lesson. Appreciate you!

@Amal.Mansour

Жыл бұрын

I’m glad you found value in my content! 🌹

Thats just perfect explaination, My english teacher is trash and shall get tips from here TY so much wish me luck tomorrow