How to write a first class essay & dissertation WITH EXAMPLES

You only need ONE skill to write a first class mark essay and dissertation. In this video I’ll explain what this skill is with EXAMPLES! I WISH this video existed when I was studying…it would’ve saved me a lot of time, trial & error and research.
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  • @MurdaMeg
    @MurdaMeg3 ай бұрын

    I have a research paper due in 9 hours that I’ve just started working on (any other procrastinators here?!?!?) and this video is SO HELPFUL!!! Thank you queen 🙏🏻

  • @traps-wg3gt

    @traps-wg3gt

    3 ай бұрын

    I’ve finished uni but I remember I started working on my dissertation past the due date and my initial high mark was reduced. I’m so happy you are trying tho

  • @Meg_andmogg

    @Meg_andmogg

    3 ай бұрын

    😂 here!!

  • @keelymac8651

    @keelymac8651

    2 ай бұрын

    Girl me too due in 2 days

  • @Ka112eb

    @Ka112eb

    2 ай бұрын

    Procrastinators should investigate having ADHD

  • @collegesweetness

    @collegesweetness

    2 ай бұрын

    9 hours! Just check my bio, lol. This applies to anyone else that's struggling.

  • @curby2351
    @curby2351 Жыл бұрын

    For someone so young you're a brilliant life coach

  • @aneesaidrees2532
    @aneesaidrees25324 ай бұрын

    ‘This is a gold mine’. That’s the thought in my head as come back to this video for the 3rd time.

  • @tobinaldridge6323
    @tobinaldridge63233 ай бұрын

    Damn. I spent a year getting tutoring for essay writing, I still failed school, and not one person explained how to write an actual paragraph or even get close to explaining anything as practically as you did. Thank you.

  • @aiishataal
    @aiishataalАй бұрын

    literature review reading: - have excel spread sheet. look at all existing info out there. have author, date written, title of paper, arguments made in it) - make sure to write author's intention too, and also identify any biases in gaps and limitations section - limitations such as if it is outdated or has bias from being from a certain medium or peer-reviewed

  • @queenideas
    @queenideas8 ай бұрын

    I must say this is the shortest yet most resourceful piece I have found since I started searching for resources that would help me write my dissertation which is like since the beginning of this year, 2023. Thank you so much for putting this together out here,Tam. I would definitely include your video url in my references. You are incredibly brilliant and beautiful.

  • @samihakhondoker2456
    @samihakhondoker245610 ай бұрын

    this is golden your literally saving everyones lives here

  • @bethdonnan6059
    @bethdonnan60593 ай бұрын

    Thank you SO much for this, as a dyslexic student who feels like they're constantly drowning with essays this has made the whole process seem so much less daunting! :)

  • @kendrick10601
    @kendrick106016 ай бұрын

    THANK YOU! I have an essay due to next week, with very few guidelines and this will helpe me tremendously. It's very hard to go back in school after a long hiatus and working full time.

  • @Baeomran
    @Baeomran Жыл бұрын

    Hello and many thanks. I do not understand why lecturers and tutors on workshop do not teach us precisely what you taught us on this video. When i asked them, they always say i cant tell you or help. But thanks a lot of for your help. I have two essays each 3000 words in 10 days time. I appreciate it so much. I wish you Happy new year.

  • @tamkaur

    @tamkaur

    Жыл бұрын

    Hi I’m so glad you found this helpful! Thanks for watching and happy near year!

  • @JC-ol9kx
    @JC-ol9kx Жыл бұрын

    This was so helpful! Straight to the point and very logical. It would be helpful to see a short example using the paragraph structure :D. Thank you so much Tam.

  • @ananyasharma2834
    @ananyasharma28349 ай бұрын

    imagine if tam had this youtube channel throughout uni and we got to see all the vlogs!!! and all the guides

  • @lauraviana9178
    @lauraviana91787 ай бұрын

    Your video is amazing, super detailed and at the same time straight to the point. Thank you!!

  • @ericac6787
    @ericac67877 ай бұрын

    I’ve unknowingly did that in my essays and it always works!

  • @katiemp670
    @katiemp670 Жыл бұрын

    this is more useful than any essay workshop i've attended lmao, thanks so much! this will save me while writing my final essay/diss

  • @tamkaur

    @tamkaur

    Жыл бұрын

    Glad it was helpful!🥰🥰

  • @Hacked983

    @Hacked983

    7 ай бұрын

    I can't agree more

  • @geovannaschultz4281
    @geovannaschultz4281 Жыл бұрын

    Thanks sooo much for the content and value information. I'm in law course, in witch we have to do so many essays and university works. This excel ideia is brilliant!!! ✨💛

  • @katrinpierce6877
    @katrinpierce68775 ай бұрын

    i can't express in words how helpful this video is!!! thank you so much

  • @shraddha.777
    @shraddha.777 Жыл бұрын

    This is such a saviour istg! thanks TAM .💗

  • @user-jr5mh8cc5g
    @user-jr5mh8cc5g8 ай бұрын

    You changed my life! Thank you, this was very helpful.

  • @kiapowellvlogs727
    @kiapowellvlogs7277 ай бұрын

    I actually love you this just saved my degree 😭 why do they not teach us this at uni

  • @kaylanaomi12
    @kaylanaomi127 ай бұрын

    This is brilliant 🎉 straight to the point and every tip is useful ❤

  • @yomajoseph2285
    @yomajoseph22858 ай бұрын

    Thank you soo much omg!!!! You're a blessing honestly

  • @haleemahsaida9772
    @haleemahsaida97725 ай бұрын

    Excellent, honestly as mature student I just wish I had found you at the start of my degree.

  • @ayaaaa______
    @ayaaaa______7 ай бұрын

    I can not even begin to describe how helpful this was thank you so muchh ❤

  • @somtounigwe8160
    @somtounigwe81606 ай бұрын

    I cannot thank you enough, your advice is actually practical and has saved my behind for realll. I'll update when I get the results of my dissertation 🙏🏾🙏🏾

  • @sonitclef8675

    @sonitclef8675

    6 ай бұрын

    I'm glad I found this in my second year and not my third 😅

  • @aaannnooo
    @aaannnooo2 ай бұрын

    I wish i saw this earlier. The single most important video on youtube. The only video i felt i needed to comment on. Thank youx

  • @megasare9609
    @megasare96093 ай бұрын

    You're brilliant! Bless you!

  • @soundbodylab
    @soundbodylab5 ай бұрын

    This is so clear and easy to follow. Thank you!!!!

  • @aiishataal
    @aiishataalАй бұрын

    point (topic sentence and what you'll argue, highlight this in first sentence) evidence (1 or 2 quotes from 2 authors, synthesis sources from wide range of academic sources, author A and B argues 'quote,' however (synthesis) author X and Y argued from recent research that X and y) explain 1 (detail and depth, and include relevant course theories) critical analysis (bringing in evidence that contradicts/contrasts first piece of evidence included in this paragraph with other authors and other sources that argue against the first paragraph. allows you tot talk about the limitations and gaps in existing knowledge. then talk about how the evidence contrasts or supports each other. use academic phrase banks to help. be analytical more than descriptive, explain why the evidence why it's significant, how it occurred, why did this happen, why is the author making the argument and why it is relevant) explain 2 (showing nuanced and critical understanding of the field as a whole, tying all the info from beginning of para, made ur point and contrasted arguments and critical analysis with various viewpoints so in this final explanation you're going to show ur aware of everything already out there and tying it to your main point link back (linking it back to the question and making sure it applies to your essay)

  • @jacquikv5560
    @jacquikv55606 ай бұрын

    Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge with us. The information you provided in this video was explained in a way that I could understand and implement easily. I have not written my essay yet, but when I do I will try to remember to update this comment to share my experience and outcome. ❤

  • @dorotadabrowska3799
    @dorotadabrowska37994 ай бұрын

    this is fantastic! gives me hope

  • @ryancutler4775
    @ryancutler47754 ай бұрын

    Thank you, SO much. You explained this so well and this is really helpful!

  • @mahekuppal1296
    @mahekuppal12969 ай бұрын

    This was honestly so helpful and informative, we need more uni related videos TAM!

  • @monikakania333
    @monikakania3334 ай бұрын

    I really needed to know how to structure my paragraphs for my first essay, so thank you for this💗💗💗

  • @bintsiyad8831
    @bintsiyad883111 ай бұрын

    New subscriber here thank for this the most helpful thing over seen and I've sent it to all of my friends at uni

  • @emoefeubiebi5334
    @emoefeubiebi53343 ай бұрын

    I have 3000 words essies to write and also a dissertation waiting. Thank you so so much for these tips. I'm so putting them into practise.

  • @samuelmattu7519
    @samuelmattu7519 Жыл бұрын

    This video was the best thing I could have watched and Ik this is asking for a lot but do you have an example paragraph ❤❤❤thank you very much

  • @user-qo1mi8is7i
    @user-qo1mi8is7i2 ай бұрын

    I'm about to just my Master of Science in Computer Science and International Business at Robert Kennedy College / University of Cumbria and I am nervous as hell. I haven't been in school for more than a decade and I've forgotten how to write a critical analysis paper. These tips really helped. Thank you!

  • @shekinah4651
    @shekinah46514 ай бұрын

    This advice is brilliant! I wish I found this 6 months ago 😭 Would you be able to go into a little bit more detail about what sections you had in your excel sheet? I’m wondering what sections would be advantageous to have

  • @alexandrastein8983
    @alexandrastein89834 ай бұрын

    You’re brilliant!!! Thank you!!!

  • @astier234angel9
    @astier234angel9 Жыл бұрын

    I did this for the first time and it does work! Thank you

  • @tamkaur

    @tamkaur

    Жыл бұрын

    Great to hear! X

  • @Naobonilla
    @Naobonilla Жыл бұрын

    You inspire me 💕🙌🏻

  • @fejirotalks
    @fejirotalks5 ай бұрын

    Needed this thank you!

  • @abbeytube
    @abbeytube7 ай бұрын

    Thank you so much, made it easier God Bless you!

  • @lucianapeck1152
    @lucianapeck11527 ай бұрын

    This was so helpful , thanks so much! Xx

  • @bluntpathway
    @bluntpathway4 ай бұрын

    You are amazing! Great video, this is useful

  • @_.numoon._
    @_.numoon._ Жыл бұрын

    Thank you for this ❤️❤️❤️

  • @MbaliHope-zc2mx
    @MbaliHope-zc2mx2 ай бұрын

    Omg this was so helpful! Thank you ❤

  • @Broken_Junta
    @Broken_Junta11 ай бұрын

    I have watched this video like twice if not thrice It's a 10/10 eloquently...

  • @LeahEyasu
    @LeahEyasu4 ай бұрын

    thanks for your fantastic explanation mate , you are awesome,

  • @samsamhareri1932
    @samsamhareri19325 ай бұрын

    Thank you this is so helpful ❤

  • @girlfromnextdoor_
    @girlfromnextdoor_6 ай бұрын

    you saved my life thank you so much

  • @queensheba1711
    @queensheba17112 ай бұрын

    Thank you so much for your helpful information .You are really helpful ❤

  • @LilTinyBunny
    @LilTinyBunny2 ай бұрын

    Lifesaver!! I also study at Leicester and I will try this for my next essay. Thanks so much! I will update my comment!

  • @40.tathuthuy8
    @40.tathuthuy82 ай бұрын

    so helpful, thank you so muchh!

  • @Jess-qx3zk
    @Jess-qx3zk Жыл бұрын

    amazing video! so are you saying that you're supposed to highlight the gaps/limitations of the sources raised to support your point when raising counterarguments?

  • @user-qe8zi6ex2j
    @user-qe8zi6ex2j9 ай бұрын

    She did not stutter even once.

  • @RimiBaidya-ux6jb
    @RimiBaidya-ux6jbАй бұрын

    Beautiful!!!!! ❤

  • @samuelmattu7519
    @samuelmattu7519 Жыл бұрын

    How many words would each of your paragraphs be and and would each of your paragraphs be a completely different point or could you use the same point just with different evidence

  • @mehrozjamil
    @mehrozjamil7 ай бұрын

    Thank you for this

  • @maryachiverton7481
    @maryachiverton74818 ай бұрын

    wow how amazing this is God bless you

  • @suzanadsuza4819
    @suzanadsuza4819Ай бұрын

    Thank You !

  • @huishaa
    @huishaa11 ай бұрын

    Thanks queen❤️

  • @melodybales2038
    @melodybales20384 ай бұрын

    I am a writing consultant and you are saying some banger tips in this video! Good writing is all about being clear and demonstrating that you have exercised critical thinking on the topic and can explain it logically. Saved this for myself to remember later. The US has a different system for schooling, but it's still super valuable, and who knows maybe I'll end up across the pond for my graduate level education. 😊

  • @cesmed
    @cesmed7 ай бұрын

    Thanks, you got a new subscriber

  • @Ritxxxh
    @Ritxxxh2 ай бұрын

    You should be teaching these skills at university, soooo helpful. Thank you ❤

  • @sabbbzx
    @sabbbzx6 ай бұрын

    your amazing thank you

  • @spicynoooooodles
    @spicynoooooodles Жыл бұрын

    tysm, fr saving my ass rn 😅😂have always struggled with essays my entire uni life and now have ur bible to follow 😄

  • @scintillatingddl
    @scintillatingddl7 ай бұрын

    Brilliant!

  • @Timmar
    @Timmar5 ай бұрын

    Hi!! I really LOVE youre content❤️ Can you make a vid abt youre investing journey.. im thinking about starting myself, but im not confident enough for that right now haha😊

  • @KikiFou
    @KikiFou6 ай бұрын

    Most useful video on writing a good paper ❤

  • @tamkaur

    @tamkaur

    6 ай бұрын

    Thanks a lot 😊

  • @Tiktokdoe
    @TiktokdoeАй бұрын

    Thanks you so much

  • @voxresist2211
    @voxresist22117 ай бұрын

    How do you translate Uni and Markscheme to American university requirements? What does the phrase mean and how is it comparable?

  • @Susie.wemove
    @Susie.wemoveАй бұрын

    I know this is a bit off topic- your make up is stunning!!

  • @gracediarychannel
    @gracediarychannel14 күн бұрын

    Thank you so much P' Tam. P'(Pi) in Thais means sis or bro. Sending love from Thailand🇹🇭❤️

  • @omeral-jumaili8154
    @omeral-jumaili81549 ай бұрын

    so beautiful and smart

  • @bentinabire8052
    @bentinabire80522 ай бұрын

    Thank you! I love you ❤

  • @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    2 ай бұрын

    Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?

  • @bentinabire8052

    @bentinabire8052

    2 ай бұрын

    ​@@NathanacAdemicConsultant Hi, sure.

  • @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    2 ай бұрын

    @@bentinabire8052 Can you share a contact info or any social handle where we can communicate?

  • @PrudenceNkomo
    @PrudenceNkomo2 ай бұрын

    Ur such a intelligent and beautiful lady❤❤❤. Lots of love from South Africa❤❤. Keep doing what u do best❤❤

  • @duruchinwendu753
    @duruchinwendu7533 ай бұрын

    Thank you

  • @maggie7960
    @maggie79604 ай бұрын

    if you use phrases from the academic phrasebank does it show up on turnitin :)

  • @preciousferrie
    @preciousferrieАй бұрын

    Do you continue to the point paragraph , after your introduction? Please let me know as I am confused ? I start uni in September 😮

  • @Andrea2605dea
    @Andrea2605dea5 ай бұрын

    My Uni doesn't have examiner comments and previous dissertations available. Could you provide some links or profiles I could look up any dissertations with examiner's notes?

  • @anirudhkaushik3643
    @anirudhkaushik36432 ай бұрын

    Well explained. My dissertation is due in 2 weeks. I am 90% on the same pathway and good point on synthesising evidence. Well done on your degree

  • @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    2 ай бұрын

    Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?

  • @anirudhkaushik3643

    @anirudhkaushik3643

    2 ай бұрын

    @@NathanacAdemicConsultant no thanks Nathan

  • @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    2 ай бұрын

    @@anirudhkaushik3643 Ok if you need any help with an academic task, or maybe consultancy about higher education I would love to help you out, can I have your contact info where I can reach you out?

  • @ericgt79
    @ericgt795 ай бұрын

    This is great for undergrads... For grad students, especially PhD students, not so much.

  • @samuelmattu7519
    @samuelmattu7519 Жыл бұрын

    How do you find contrasting evidence

  • @Numbll
    @Numbll7 ай бұрын

    Can you do a tutorial on the research part? i don't really get the template..

  • @SarahHussain-dg7cd
    @SarahHussain-dg7cd7 ай бұрын

    Hey hun we’re you getting 2:2 at beginning of second year ??

  • @osh_hoq6217
    @osh_hoq62172 ай бұрын

    PLEASE HELP ME! HOW DO I FIND THE PREVIOUS DISSERTATIONS ON THE UNIVERSITY OF LEICHESTER SITE?

  • @FittoBySyd
    @FittoBySyd5 ай бұрын

    Omg I am studying Marketing at The University of the West Indies. I have been looking for KZreadrs that studied Marketing. New subscriber here.

  • @sotarts05
    @sotarts056 ай бұрын

    For the academic phrase bank can you send the link?

  • @catsntears
    @catsntears5 ай бұрын

    Can i use this as an high school student? (11th grade)

  • @rohitha3508
    @rohitha35089 ай бұрын

    Sadly my uni didn’t give any mark scheme for dissertation 😢

  • @sezin7843
    @sezin78434 ай бұрын

    I dont really get the critical analysis part? Are we the one who analyses? Or we find other academic sources that contradicts or shows the weaknesses? How is that not a literature review if we do so? Someone help please :)

  • @oliviabarnett-king
    @oliviabarnett-king2 ай бұрын

    Does anyone know if a similar tool the uo Manchester provides exists for scientific reports?

  • @EDA_OFFICIAL_1
    @EDA_OFFICIAL_14 ай бұрын

    I wish this was around when I did my dissertation 😭

  • @beth30591
    @beth305912 ай бұрын

    oh goshhh your accent is amazing 😭😭💟

  • @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    @NathanacAdemicConsultant

    2 ай бұрын

    Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?

  • @zeeva9377
    @zeeva93777 ай бұрын

    Can you please mention the books that you read? 12:40

  • @h10vlogs
    @h10vlogs Жыл бұрын

    Just do my dissertation for me X I got 2 weeks to go can I still make it I barely did anything 😢

  • @partyrocket5237
    @partyrocket52378 ай бұрын

    how many references should i use in a 2000 word essay?

  • @sadiyahshaheen4767
    @sadiyahshaheen4767 Жыл бұрын

    i don't quite understand explain 2

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