Appreciate you

Thanks man. For some reason I'm able to justt be chillin than out of nowhere I get some sick bars in my head but than I think to myself "Whoa where's the beginning?!" So than I try and add a beginning like yesterday I came up with this but it still needs a better beginning "I've been watching Karate Kid I wanna be just like them and get ripped, I got a FitBit I should probably take a seat but I forgot how to sit." And than I had more about Alinty and Pokimane but I couldn't get them to fuse so I was gonna make them separate songs but I still need a beginning for the second one. What annoys me is I'll start making a rhyme out of nowhere but than later when I try to I can't.

@howtogrime

3 жыл бұрын

Glad to help man. And those are some nice bars you got there. Try not to overthink the beginning of a verse. That line.... "I've been watching karate kid is actually not a bad start. To tie all the little random bars that you've written together. Try having a main point in the bars so if it's about getting fit. Make your Pokemon bars and the other bars that you're trying to fit together about fitness in some way. This should tie it all together even if the bars are different because there's a main point behind it all.

@Silas_Part_1

3 жыл бұрын

@@howtogrime Thank you for the advice and kind words. ☺

Wow bro❤

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@howtogrime

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks bro

Thanks this help me out fam love you