Harry Potter and No One in Particular - Chapter 4: To the Hills
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@akiranezumiex96573 жыл бұрын
There are love triangles, and then there are love Dodecahedrons.
@Sclasspsycho3 жыл бұрын
"You're either going to watch the movie Frozen with me, or my new girlfriend is going to die." XD
@thetokutickler
3 жыл бұрын
Literally spat my drink out X'D
@PsychadelicoDuck
3 жыл бұрын
There are contexts that line would make sense in. That was not one of them.
@MFO86
3 жыл бұрын
@@PsychadelicoDuck I'm desperately trying to think of a scenario in which that line would make sense, but the closest thing I can think of is a BlazBlue Gag Reel where Ragna the Bloodedge is an underfunded, underequipped and understaffed police captain desperately trying to keep Yuuki Terumi from killing people, and ends up caving to increasingly bizarre demands from Terumi as a result. Like I said, that's the closest thing I can think of...BlazBlue Gag Reels are NOT known for making sense.
@PsychadelicoDuck
3 жыл бұрын
@@MFO86 Well, what I was thinking was that the line was between two people, one of whom was under some sort of bizarre Saw/Joker style ultimatum from a third party. It'd still be weird, but not... as weird.
@josiahtaylor7967
2 жыл бұрын
I had to pause the video for several minutes because I was laughing too hard 😂😂😂
@imagindevan3 жыл бұрын
Will there be any more chapters after this one? It's getting really good! Also, I notice that you seem to take over more and more of the writing as the story progresses? I really enjoy your writing style.
@Smashiell
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I couldn't help myself when the AI started giving me such great material to play with. I'm planning to make ten chapters in total, so it'll continue for a while yet.
@imagindevan
3 жыл бұрын
@@Smashiell That sounds wonderful! I look forward to the future chapters. I'm interested to see what Neville is planning. In the Harry Potter series, Neville grew from a nervous boy into a confident young man. It seems like he kept progressing as confidence becomes arrogance, and he becomes the opposite extreme of his childhood self. Or maybe I'm overthinking it. ^^;
@josiahtaylor7967
2 жыл бұрын
Wait, this isn't entirely AI?
@PsychadelicoDuck3 жыл бұрын
Just to let people know, I created a tvtropes page for this story. It still could use a bit of work, but it's a start. tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/HarryPotterAndNoOneInParticular
@Smashiell
3 жыл бұрын
This is AMAZING, thank you so much! It's really well written too!
@PsychadelicoDuck
3 жыл бұрын
@@Smashiell Aw, thank you. I hope it helps to introduce some people to this wonderful story.
@PsychadelicoDuck3 жыл бұрын
There were a lot of great revelations and nonsensical moments in this one. I was laughing almost nonstop. And yet it still feels like it could all come together, somehow. I feel really bad for Harry, and the villain is delightfully disgusting villain.
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There are love triangles, and then there are love Dodecahedrons.
"You're either going to watch the movie Frozen with me, or my new girlfriend is going to die." XD
@thetokutickler
3 жыл бұрын
Literally spat my drink out X'D
@PsychadelicoDuck
3 жыл бұрын
There are contexts that line would make sense in. That was not one of them.
@MFO86
3 жыл бұрын
@@PsychadelicoDuck I'm desperately trying to think of a scenario in which that line would make sense, but the closest thing I can think of is a BlazBlue Gag Reel where Ragna the Bloodedge is an underfunded, underequipped and understaffed police captain desperately trying to keep Yuuki Terumi from killing people, and ends up caving to increasingly bizarre demands from Terumi as a result. Like I said, that's the closest thing I can think of...BlazBlue Gag Reels are NOT known for making sense.
@PsychadelicoDuck
3 жыл бұрын
@@MFO86 Well, what I was thinking was that the line was between two people, one of whom was under some sort of bizarre Saw/Joker style ultimatum from a third party. It'd still be weird, but not... as weird.
@josiahtaylor7967
2 жыл бұрын
I had to pause the video for several minutes because I was laughing too hard 😂😂😂
Will there be any more chapters after this one? It's getting really good! Also, I notice that you seem to take over more and more of the writing as the story progresses? I really enjoy your writing style.
@Smashiell
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I couldn't help myself when the AI started giving me such great material to play with. I'm planning to make ten chapters in total, so it'll continue for a while yet.
@imagindevan
3 жыл бұрын
@@Smashiell That sounds wonderful! I look forward to the future chapters. I'm interested to see what Neville is planning. In the Harry Potter series, Neville grew from a nervous boy into a confident young man. It seems like he kept progressing as confidence becomes arrogance, and he becomes the opposite extreme of his childhood self. Or maybe I'm overthinking it. ^^;
@josiahtaylor7967
2 жыл бұрын
Wait, this isn't entirely AI?
Just to let people know, I created a tvtropes page for this story. It still could use a bit of work, but it's a start. tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/HarryPotterAndNoOneInParticular
@Smashiell
3 жыл бұрын
This is AMAZING, thank you so much! It's really well written too!
@PsychadelicoDuck
3 жыл бұрын
@@Smashiell Aw, thank you. I hope it helps to introduce some people to this wonderful story.
There were a lot of great revelations and nonsensical moments in this one. I was laughing almost nonstop. And yet it still feels like it could all come together, somehow. I feel really bad for Harry, and the villain is delightfully disgusting villain.