Billie really does sound like an angel in the intro

STOP IT'S SO GOOD-

@asbolusarts

2 жыл бұрын

Oooh thanks a lot for checking this one out too ^^ I had so much fun messing around with the transitions

BLESS YOU I WAS LOOKING FOR THIS 😭

@asbolusarts

2 жыл бұрын

Thanks, I'm glad that you like what you found :D

Serotonin is stored in the intro to GOLDWING

@asbolusarts

2 жыл бұрын

true

You are officially guaranteed for heaven 💛💛💛

@asbolusarts

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you! :D

I really wish I was able to produce and remix as well as you. Both extended versions you created are great but I have such specific progression in mind. Have you seen her Disney performance of the song? At the end there’s a sort of reprise of the intro, I love that. To be suuuuper nitpicky (if I may, because who am I to say anything if I can’t even do it myself)… the fact that you left in the “that’s good” in the middle of the mix in the other extended version bothered me a bit, as for me that’s the indication of the end of the song, so it sounds overlapped rather than mixed, if that makes sense? So I’m my head the idea version would go something like: Same as the original song up to the second verse. Chorus, second verse again. Reprise of the intro from the Disney performance as a sort of bridge, mixed into the final repeats of the existing “head down” chorus, letting it finish the same as in the original with “That’s good”.

@nomadine85

2 жыл бұрын

[Intro: Los Angeles Children's Chorus] "He hath come to the bosom of his beloved Smiling on him, she beareth him to highest heav'n With yearning heart" "On thee we gaze, O' gold-wing'd messenger of mighty Gods" [Instrumental Break] [Verse 1] Gold-winged angel Go home, don't tell Anyone what you are You're sacred and they're starved And their art is gettin' dark And there you are to tear apart Tear apart, tear apart, tear apart [Chorus] You better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down Better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down [Verse 2] They're gonna tell you what you wanna hear Then they're gonna disappear Gonna claim you like a souvenir Just to sell you in a year [Chorus] You better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down Better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down [Verse 2] They're gonna tell you what you wanna hear Then they're gonna disappear Gonna claim you like a souvenir Just to sell you in a year [Chorus] You better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down Better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down [Instrumental break] [Outro: Los Angeles Children's Chorus] "With yearning heart" "On thee we gaze, O' gold-wing'd messenger of mighty Gods" [Chorus] You better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down Keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down Better keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down Keep your head down-down Da-da-down-down, da-da-down-down That's good

@nomadine85

2 жыл бұрын

I realised my description was a bit convoluted so I created the structure with the lyrics.

@nomadine85

2 жыл бұрын

Also if I had any singing abilities at all I would create an additional variation of the second verse rather than repeat it. Hm. Maybe I should at least come up with the lyrics, just for fun.

@nomadine85

2 жыл бұрын

Okay I did it. [Verse 3] They're gonna yell to interfere your ears Then they’ll say it’s just a cheer Gonna blame you like a governor Just to dwell on your career

@asbolusarts

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! I really appreciate it. I have yet to see the Disney Performance. I also really like your own verse, unfortunately I don't have any singing abilities myself :D

its pretty good but to me its just on repeat but good job!

@asbolusarts

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you!

U should redo a version of this but instead of repeating it that last time u should add the rest of the original song to it after u repeat intro 2 times

PORQUE ESTOY LEVITANDOO

take us to church billie