Galactic Council Demands Tribute, Humanity Sends Alien Prisoners | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
Galactic Council Demands Tribute, Humanity Sends Alien Prisoners | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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Пікірлер: 7
@crazycajun1572Ай бұрын
Constantly repeating and stepping back and changing
@danielbutler578Ай бұрын
This had the potential to be a good story but it keeps going back and repeating itself. Whoever is putting these garbled stories out is definitely failing when it comes to the editing.
@randomstranger9674Ай бұрын
I gave up three minutes in. I have no reason to care about the few characters I've seen so far, and the plot seems to be developing fairly predictably towards the outcome suggested by the title.
@jamespseaman4136Ай бұрын
Why do you change the story?
@edfrawley4356Ай бұрын
Try publishing a story with an actual timeline not just a bunch of paragraphs thrown into a pot
@OmnicondaАй бұрын
sorry i just cant listen to this story - had to check if it it was just on repeat going over the same things over an over
Пікірлер: 7
Constantly repeating and stepping back and changing
This had the potential to be a good story but it keeps going back and repeating itself. Whoever is putting these garbled stories out is definitely failing when it comes to the editing.
I gave up three minutes in. I have no reason to care about the few characters I've seen so far, and the plot seems to be developing fairly predictably towards the outcome suggested by the title.
Why do you change the story?
Try publishing a story with an actual timeline not just a bunch of paragraphs thrown into a pot
sorry i just cant listen to this story - had to check if it it was just on repeat going over the same things over an over
Huge plot holes, numerous redundancies, horrible editing.