Did anyone else notice the contradiction when the narrator said that the neutral planet would instantly vaporize anyone that showed aggression but when the battle started upon arrival of both parties "nothing happened" A Blip in the story

@kieronknott8741

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I came to the comments to say this i noticed it straight away

@tonynelligan1930

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why waste your own ammo when they are willing to waste their own.

Obviously u have never bn in the military its not BS its called training

This got corny, no captain of a ship would join a boarding party even if the ship surrendered. The only exception is in a corny story, or a pirate captain. Otherwise OK submission.

Good bad ordinary, it's a storyline can you do better 😂

For The Last few Days maybe a week i've been avoiding this guy's stories like the plague. So what I'm going to do is stop listening to this One and go find a real story wrote by a real writer.

Both the enemy commander and human commander are supposed to be severely injured so that scene is totally BS. Scenes like that are ridiculously common from this author. I'm very surprised he hasn't killed anybody off and brought him back to life yet. That's One of his most ridiculous things he does. Another is to finish a scene off and then immediately rerun it with a different version. Someday he might actually learn to write. Or maybe give the idea to 10 year Old and let them write it they probably do a better Job. Especially with the fact that his stories are cookie cutter stories he doesn't know how to write original ones. Apparently.