Fact no one here has listened her voice bcz we all read ff without music 😭😭💀

@trutiyasudke1242

4 ай бұрын

Author need to understand this, that we need romantic or matchting song with the pov's not the voice, cuz we read in our heads always😂

@user-xb5cp2gy1d

3 ай бұрын

​@@trutiyasudke1242 bro you all should get some knowledge, Many authors are putting voice in their fanfictions for monetizing their accounts to earn

@Straykids.forever22

Ай бұрын

Frr.. like I want some romantic or some music that's interesting so we can read the ff

Trust me massaging stomach can never give relief to period pain 😂

@user-me2hb1ls4w

7 ай бұрын

Yes It can give relief to woman with severe stomach pain in periods like me

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

I don't know because I never have stomach pain during periods

@user-in4wd9lu8c

7 ай бұрын

i agree with you 🥲

@sanjidarahman717

7 ай бұрын

It might not happened to you . But I massage my stomach and gives me relief

@pragya496

6 ай бұрын

Agree with u

Look at the sky it's airplane no it's bird no it's y/n self respect

@mariyamvohra1645

11 сағат бұрын

Y would u say tht

average ff's: jk- (after cursing,harassing,abusive,cold,disrespectful) i love you y/n more than my life will u live with me ??(he is a cold and rude hybrid vampire warewolf mafia king who is also a korea's no.1 ceo) y/n-i love u more than my life and yes i will marry you

@slkoreanfans6748

7 ай бұрын

Lol 😂😂 spilling truth i see😂😂😂 1:36

@SugaKookiLuvs754

7 ай бұрын

😭😭😭😭😂😂🤣

@roqaya1371

3 ай бұрын

😂😂😂😂 so true

@richiee1843

Ай бұрын

Real

@arshiyashaikh5578

21 күн бұрын

😂😂😂😂

Yn was so pathetic. Why show anger to ha Joon then ? It will be good if she gets back with a cheater too as she has no problem in people abusing her for no reason?

@user-me2hb1ls4w

7 ай бұрын

She had extreme problem with their abusing but she couldn't do anything because of her family think ATLEAST once before speaking 🙄

@s.o.t.s.o.t.

6 ай бұрын

Indeed weak. Not looking for way out and solutions is weak. Only people with low iq or zero self-respect would endure this trashy treatment.

A family sitting on the terrace... Youngest son: dad look it's a aeroplane ✈️ Elder son: no it's a bird 🐦 The eldest daughter who just read this ff: no its yn's self respect 😂

He had the chance to make a new start by letting her go after the reason behind his bad behavior towards her was revealed. He could have courted her, making her fall in love with him by respecting her wishes. Then it could have been a love-story. But now, he kept manipulating her, blackmailing her just bc he could. After all, she was a doormat with her ex, a doormat with JK at the beginning and stayed a doormat until the end. A few harsh words towards him doesnt make up her easy to manipulate character. Soo unromantic.

@user-gl1nw4ub8u

7 ай бұрын

❤

@user-xb5cp2gy1d

3 ай бұрын

No wants to hear your shitty opinion, go to hell b***h

🤡...bro how tf she forgive him....dont u feel yn a woman is pathetic

Don't know who spread the rumor that massaging stomach during cramps reduce pain

Bro! How can she forgive him!? If this was a Wattpad ff than she would have tortured him instead of forgiveness

Imagine getting slapped until someone tell you to stop 😭 lmao,the scene of the guards slapping the maid continuously is making me wheez 😭😂

@parkseyoo5607

Ай бұрын

Lol😂😂

It's amazing but I feel y/n forget about her self respect. Jungkook did wrong when he understand he still blackmail her he could make her fall for him but no he force her. I love and enjoyed it just little disappointed by Jungkook. Thanks for this ff of yours. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

@MEHAKGHAFAR-jl2fz

5 ай бұрын

didn,t you hear LOVE IS BLIND

@Reisthetic.

Ай бұрын

​@@MEHAKGHAFAR-jl2fzSelf respect is more than love, hope you get an abusive partner

@richiee1843

Ай бұрын

​@@MEHAKGHAFAR-jl2fzit is not the people who get blinded by love are just dumb

just because of misunderstanding he trotured her for 2 years and here she just forgive him no one deserve this and i hate such people who make such weak female charachter this ff was disgusting and a disgrace to humanity

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

This was a request video so I made it

@RakeshKumar-cx9mo

7 ай бұрын

Okbaby

@user-me2hb1ls4w

7 ай бұрын

It wasn't his fault that he was told that his brother's death was because of yn and she didn't forgive him easily and she was planning to forgive him never but we can control love right? Think before speaking about someone's hard work creation 🙄

@ennyhorla-jn9io

7 ай бұрын

Girl shut up! Stop badmouthing someone’s hard work if it’s easy then write yours you can’t just get on your phone and say shit about someone’s work This is just fictional why so serious?🤷‍♀️💔

@user-oc6er7hm2l

7 ай бұрын

@@user-me2hb1ls4w i have all right to say my thoughts and no one can stop me what i am saying is what i observed and is the truth he says he is a mafia king then how can he can do such a big mistake making an innocent a culprit i know writing is not easy and i am here not badmouthing what i am saying is FACTS understood if not then keep on commenting it won't bother me i am not hating the author i am just criticizing the character because in my opinion he was wrong so where am i wrong?? i have all the rights to speak and i will

I mean he could of looked into before tormenting her for 2 years ,but i suppose he found the truth after 2 years . I mean you know the treatemnt in the house was bad if y/n was getting bossed around by the maid like wow ,again he blackmailed her to stay using her parents he knows he did wrong and he loved her so he knew he was being selfish and the only way to make her stay was this way whether that was right is another question but now he has no brother or family member and wanted her besides him after knowing the truth .

22:59 the way i went from "Wow" 👏 to "WTF" 👁️👄👁️

Wow the story was great can't wait for next masterpieces thanks for the hard work

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

I will upload today

@abdulmoqeet4859

7 ай бұрын

@@tworld381 excited

Hey do you get monetised for your channel

@user-me2hb1ls4w

7 ай бұрын

Yes duh

Hey author i wasn't able to say you thank you after wishing me but as i had subscribed u already i got your channel So, thank you for wishing me you r the first youtuber and writer to wish me ❤ And about this ff just an another masterpiece just didn't liked the harassment a bit and why did you deleted that other ff....😢

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

Due to monetization issue I removed all videos but don't worry I will upload that video soon with some edits. And one good news is that my channel has become monetized

Fully wasted 27:42 minutes for this shitty story. Like seriously he tortured her for 2 years and she forgive him in 1 month. And even in the end also why y/n have to go to him seems like she is too desperate for him.

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

sorry if i wasted your time but this video was requested so i made it

@music_lover0218

7 ай бұрын

@@tworld381it was great. Ignore the comments!!!!!

@anshikavarshney5768

7 ай бұрын

Right

@user-me2hb1ls4w

7 ай бұрын

It was not his fault that he was told that he is a brother so that was because of yn and vine did not forgive him that easily and in fact she was planning to forgive him never but we can't control our love feeling right? Think before saying anything bad about someone's hard worked creation at least the author worked hard to make this FF she's at least doing hard work not like you who don't know what hard to work is and always complains about everyone's hardworked creations

@gurmeetkaur9703

7 ай бұрын

@@user-me2hb1ls4w What do you mean by always complain about everyone's hardwork?? When did you see my negative comment on other videos. I barely do any comment on any video. Sometimes if i liked the ff then I also appreciate author's hardwork. And this is just my opinion about this ff not about author's hardwork. And did I say that your all ff are not good stop writing this and that blah blah blah. I just give my opinion on this. And if you don't like my comment then don't see.

No hate but I'd jk see he is like am i devil😂😂😂 but seriously ff is awesome waoooooóooooooooooooo❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

@tworld381

5 ай бұрын

😂😂

@tworld381

5 ай бұрын

He is not Devil he is my hero 😚❤️

well it was a good one- but a little ahh how do I say- overdramatic- y/n didn't have self-respect that thing made me a little disappointed but overall was good can do better :)

16:34 wasss funny 🤣

Why jk harnessing? I am really confuse Is it a part of ypur any ff or one short?

@tworld381

5 ай бұрын

Oneshot

@MS.JimmyJerry

5 ай бұрын

@@tworld381 I see thanks😊

Waste of time and battery

@Btsarmy_14334

7 ай бұрын

So why are you here

@asareclement845

6 ай бұрын

Because I thought it was better like other authors fiction

@Btsarmy_14334

6 ай бұрын

So watch other authors fiction bcuz she did the hard work too

I am having my first period 😢😢

Yall didn't came here after soso?

Why do i get emotional when someone fights and then love eachother......why ( fake crying)

Your voice is Like SOSO😂

No wonder why this story is called as pathetic....

Nice❤

This ff is average because another ff i see in KZread they're good but in this ff very going so fast like you just skip toooo much like 2 years 😑😶

Actually its not that bad just you shouldn't have added that 2 years harrasment thing

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

I also thought later but I had already made it so I did not change it

Are u from Odisha?

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

yes but how did you know?

@user-gc7ry2lf6i

7 ай бұрын

Demn I'm even from odisha....

@user-gc7ry2lf6i

7 ай бұрын

@@tworld381 I guessed it from your accent actually

@user-gc7ry2lf6i

7 ай бұрын

In odisha where?

@tworld381

7 ай бұрын

Jharsuguda

Disappointing story You should have shown self respect towards YN in this FF, no one would have requested that you not show self respect towards her

The robotic voice reading this put me off after the first sentence !

It was nice ❤ 👍

Sorry to say this I don't like ur ff it's totally not cool. Yn forget her self respect.

@tworld381

5 ай бұрын

ok you can read my other ff

The most boring ff i have ever read in my life

@AyeshaKashif-ox8cz

3 ай бұрын

Soo why did you read this ff