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@RNS681

2 жыл бұрын

Thanks, I’m in England, and have exams all week, thanks for revising help:)

As I walk through the bustling streets of New York, I see many tall and fascinating buildings, with flocks of birds flying over one building to another, and many people walking through different directions, here and there, in this busy but lively city. The fresh smell of bread from the bakery waves over me, making my stomach crave. I went in to the bakery and see a variety of delicious, and glazing colorful pastries. The taste of the pastry melts in my mouth, making me feel joyed. i think i went from describing a city to bakery goods lol i tried pls tell me where i need improvements.

@watermelon3914

3 ай бұрын

i adoreee this!

great video. I did an exercise... the gloomy night photo.. Here is what I tried... The crescent of the moon barely lit up the smoggy city. The town had slumbered except for a few silhouettes of men visible against the dim moonlight. William trudged ahead staring at the spooky branches of the oak and the closed windows. It was ghost quiet except for the tapping of the ferrule against the rocky pavement. A flutter of chilly breeze stroked his long dark overcoat and almost wobbled his homburg cap. A stench of air from the open drain entered his lungs. He coughed loudly and the nightly wolves howled back in reply.

@khushbooprasad439

3 жыл бұрын

😉👍🏻 good

@AA-fn5yu

3 жыл бұрын

Wow

@LFC-Fan-66

3 жыл бұрын

WOAH

@atikayasin9868

3 жыл бұрын

WOW 👍😊

@mercyogunsan769

3 жыл бұрын

That’s amazing. What I have trouble with is trying to use to my five sense to the scene.

As I write my novel, I envision each scene as a picture and it helps me to describe everything in detail.

@fatumadem8443

3 жыл бұрын

@@ahmednisar2359 LMFAOO

@-june-6307

3 жыл бұрын

@@fatumadem8443 what's so funny-

@abduljabbarabduljabbar8819

3 жыл бұрын

Wow

@askhfbfns67589

3 жыл бұрын

am pretty sure thats how everyones barin works but ok

@LilyH174

2 жыл бұрын

Why wow

As I waited for green lights to turn to red so I can cross the street without much trouble, my ears were feeled with chatter of numerous people every overlapping the other making my head spin. There was still some time left before the lights turn back to red, I took this opportunity to admire the beautiful loftly building around me. As the lights turns it color, I walk away from this part of street to admire another beautiful piece by nature.

@advikshukla1472

2 жыл бұрын

not that good

@wkoya4803

2 жыл бұрын

Decent

@LilyH174

2 жыл бұрын

I like that comment

@LilyH174

2 жыл бұрын

Because you yosd lost of agtive

@aaravsharma2527

2 жыл бұрын

Average

1. The crisp smell of trees and wet earth permeates my senses - invigorating and refreshing. The landscape before me is so still, I feel frozen in time. Like if I refrain from moving, I could become one with nature. Spalshes of pink and purple peek out from behind tall, proud trees. The scene blooms with life yet feels solitary enough to make me comfortable lose myself in it. I lean back on the bridge and inhale slowly. The hard wood digs into my back, grounding me. A soft breeze lifts my hair in front of my face, tickling my nose. The soothing silence is interrupted with the light sound of leaves rustling. I imagine the high-pitched chipping of birds with the loud rush of the river beneath me. 2. Tranquillity filla my veins as I happily burrow deeper into the warm, inviting sand. The morning sunlight gently strokes my face, lulling me to sleep with a mind-numbing intensity. Farther out, the sea continues to rhythmically crash against the sand. I can hear every rush of water. I pretend to be floatinf kn the water, continuously bouncing up and down. I lift a grape from the plate beside me. The moment I touch the round fruit to my mouth, a sweet tangy flavour fills my senses. I slowly chew so as to savour the liquid sweetness and soft texture. 3. Shivers rack my body as I behold the terrible scene around me. Placing a hard on the trunk of a gaunt tree emanating death, I try to steady myself. On the sidewalk, a man with his face shadowed by a top hat grins at me menacingly. Another chill goes through my body. RING! I jump at the obscenely loud sound of the clock striking twelve from the jutting tower on the massive hill. I have to stifle a terrified screm when I look at the horror of a castle beside the tower. The moonlight seems to shirk away from the walls so the castle appears to be ringed in darkness. Eveb from afar, the size of the castle is intimidating. Its tall spires pierce the midnight sky looking too much like swords for my comfort. I unconsciously take a step back in the cobbled street and bump into something. I turn around just to feel the blood drain from my face. A scream rips out of me at the sight of the skeleton swaying on the branch of a tree. Please tell me if these are any good and how can I improve.

@HaThisBunnyIsSoSilly

8 ай бұрын

Cool

@HaThisBunnyIsSoSilly

8 ай бұрын

But on the third story I noticed you said screm and not scream

@ShaukatIqbal-db1yj

5 ай бұрын

You also said Eveb not Ever

For me it’s just so hard to put it in to words. I can describe it very easily but when I describe it it sounds so basic and plain.

@byunbaekhyun2979

2 жыл бұрын

same, its so irritating that i dont have good vocabulary

@handy7482

2 жыл бұрын

@@byunbaekhyun2979 hahaahaaahahahahaahahahaaaaaaaaaaaa

@gemwilliams8035

Жыл бұрын

4:58 true

As I wait for the red lights to turn green, the noises of the numerous people passing by each other and the screeching sounds of the moving cars take over the entire silence. The sun revealing itself from the horizon allows its warm rays to land on the blue wall mirrors of the buildings standing tall on both sides of the immense road in front of me. I stick my head out of the car window to feel the mild air brush against my face. Some of its particles land on my tongue filling my mouth with breeze. I don't know if this is good enough to create a clear image in the readers' minds but please give your honest suggestions on this piece of writing. Even if the suggestions are not very positive I'd still appreciate it.

@asteriskkhant2986

2 жыл бұрын

That's wonderful! IMHO, "...buildings standing towering high on both sides..." would be much more descriptive!

@hyiamunicorn009

5 ай бұрын

i found it amazing

I suppose no other video on this subject could be better than yours. You have made such a difficult topic a piece of cake giving examples through pictures. Great imagination!

@LearnEasyEnglish

4 жыл бұрын

Thank you for your kind comment! I'm glad you found it helpful. 😊

@LilyH174

2 жыл бұрын

I like you he he

@LilyH174

2 жыл бұрын

Everyone is so so so nice 👍

The city was bustling, and was literred with people moving to their various work places. The building embodied majestic being blocking the voilent rays of the sun. Here, i stood gazing at the red traffic light exhauted i leaned back on my car sit for rest. The Traffic light flickered showing green i couldn't wait fora second more of torment . I droved as my car dashed like a jet through the road of Sholeland.

I have not seen any other video explaining so good. I understand each and every word. Thanks a lot for the most informative video.💖💖💖

@LearnEasyEnglish

2 жыл бұрын

That's amazing! I'm so glad it was helpful! 😊

Really help full. I was really confused to write my assignment and you helped a lot. Keep going.

@cubebix3648

3 жыл бұрын

ahAhh

@sexiichynn20

3 жыл бұрын

This is annoying how do you stand this

@muhammedfakhruddin4866

3 жыл бұрын

i know you have wright a WHOLE paragraph for some stupid picture im really confused

@lutfakhanam2434

3 жыл бұрын

@@muhammedfakhruddin4866 I have to write 7 paragraphs

@paksolar7545

2 жыл бұрын

Mai isko adjective ke using ki Liye lik sakti hon

As I was walking across the path,admiring the towering skyscrapers. At the wide road there were loads of cars, having fascinating colours. I could feel the fresh air brushing against my face. My face suddenly turned as pale as the moon as I saw a car rushing towards my direction. I was befuddled as I noticed that the headlights had already turned green. I could already felt the disgruntled noise of traffic. So I immediately tried to reach to the pavement.

I'm still having a hard time even after watching the video because I don't have that wide vocabulary. But it was very informative and I've learned a lot from it. I do hope that I'll be able to finish my assignment using the knowledge I've gained from this video.

@StudyWithElf

Жыл бұрын

same!!

1st scene: As I walk through the fascinating garden, I am greeted with tingles from the grass and the smell of scented flowers. The bright, colorful colors of the trees and flowers glow under the beautiful rays of sunshine as butterflies dance harmonically to the sound of the soft wind. Sweet pollen flies gently into my mouth and lands perfectly on my tongue, filling me with the taste its delightful flavor. I feel every crevice of the warm wood as I’m walking along the small, moist bridge that stands above a puddle of water. 2nd scene: Sauntering across the coast, the delicate breeze hits my face ruffling my golden curls with its rhythm. With every step, my feet sink into the warm, soft sand, and salt flying with the wind hits my tongue infusing me with freshness. The sea sparkles as sunshine hits its waves while fish dance in the blue inducing calming, therapeutic sounds that fill me with ecstasy. The dazzling trees greet me by waving their branches transversely causing warm sand to fly at me.

@Valentino016

2 жыл бұрын

Wow this left me speechless

@fayfarah2099

Жыл бұрын

Pollen though

@antonsofficialgf.

Жыл бұрын

This is so decent lmao…. **saves them in my notes**

@laviiiii2694

Жыл бұрын

Can you tell me how you have such vast and amazing vocabulary??? any advice??

@salahyoutubep1236

Жыл бұрын

@@laviiiii2694 read books just that

Thank you for creating this video!

Really very helpful I love your explanation. God always bless you 🙏🏻🙏🏻🤚🏻🤚🏻🤚🏻🤚🏻

This has given me an idea, instead of trying to dig these things directly from my head. In future I will try and find a similar image to the one I'm thinking about, this will greatly help me. I found myself pausing and really going for it, especially with the bleak image near the end. Thank you.

@LearnEasyEnglish

2 жыл бұрын

That's great, I'm glad it helped. If you need any help then just let me know. Best of luck!

@cryptogee1879

2 жыл бұрын

@@LearnEasyEnglish Will do. Many thanks 🙏🏾

My teacher gave us this link for a reason (the best explanatory )

@srushtichinnawar3191

3 жыл бұрын

Same

@user-tr4hr6nv5w

3 жыл бұрын

Same!

@afifaufa2142

3 жыл бұрын

DEKUU!!! YOU SUCH A BAKAAAAA

@letsdance6066

3 жыл бұрын

Same 😁

@Srikrishna___19

3 жыл бұрын

Same

Amazing! You have explained it so didactic. I am going to use it. Thanks a lot!

The video is great I love your imagination you make a little piece of cake such a delight!

This helped me a lot to understand the descriptive essay thank you.

Hi my name is Jaeda and this video is really helpful to me because I'm in standard 2 and tomorrow I have a creative writing exam and we will have to write a paragraph on setting so thank you so much for making this video when I get my results I will tell you ❤

Thanks a lot,😊for uploading such a consice video,it helps a lot in my assignment 🌟

thank you so much this helped me a lot

This was an awesome lesson.

I love this video thank you so much !!!

Thank you so much. I looked through many videos and none of them was as good as yours. Helped me out a lol. Thanks. Definitely subscribing and liking after this .

@LearnEasyEnglish

Жыл бұрын

Glad I could help!

thank u so much this is really helpfull for me

THANK YOU!! Excellent video! One of my students suggested to assign it to her class!

@1h3artv

3 жыл бұрын

Okkkkk

As the darkness stretches from horizon to horizon, the crescent moon crept up into the glistening landscape of the sky. Hoots of owls and croaks of frogs filled my ears, ever overlapping one another. The dew adorned the dark blue sky, shimmering like tiny diamonds covering my skin, filling my mouth with an uncanny feeling. The scent of wet air softly brushes my nose as I inhaled it deeply. For each step I took, splashes of water were made beneath my feet, water seeping in through the seams of my dark brown boots, soaking my socks.

Beautifully explained

1:37 - Wow!

As i walked through an idyllic meadow, i was greeted by the smell of sweet scented flowers. Their bright colours filled my heart heart with content. As i walked across the freshly cut grass, i felt the gentle ,warm summer breeze against my tanned skin. In the distance i heard the birds chirping happily ,while the trees swayed from side to side.

Very good video, thank you

Very informative and yet concise.

This helped my daughter so much and as a poet and songwriter it gave me great happpiness watching her improve and embrace her language

@LearnEasyEnglish

3 жыл бұрын

That's brilliant! I'm so glad it was helpful! 😃

@abduljabbarabduljabbar8819

3 жыл бұрын

Really your a poet Mashallah since I am muslim

@NotKaedin

3 жыл бұрын

@@LearnEasyEnglish why do you do this to me?

I am no writter but can someone please rate this out of ten and list my improvements I dash along the busy streets with skyscrappers and cars.I hear the loud screeching noises of the cars and the muffled voices of children and adults.i feel burdened by the sounds and seem very distracted due to my anciety around large crowds of people.That was when CRASH i wasnt thinking straight and bumped into a speeding car. What was this feeling ? It was so trilling is this how it feels to be dead ?

@muhammadgigani7769

Жыл бұрын

Im no one to judge but Remember that She directed you to observe and Describe the area rather than Make A Story of Crashing a Car,

Doing this for my English assignment

slowly the sun was pinking through the clouds the wind was so soft i could feel the goosebumps in my skin .as i make my way to busy road i could hear the horking of the cars from miles away. i shuffle to the other side the fresh smell of bread from the bakery waves over me ,making my stomach crave went in to the bakery and see a variety of delicious, and glazing colorful pastries. The taste of the pastry melts in my mouth, which filled me with joyed. i don't know but i tried

@mohamedkaba8408

2 жыл бұрын

I really like your paragraph can I stay in touch with you ?

Excellent video, keep uploading these kinds of video for effective writing.

Just One word to all the Adjectives used-"STUNNING"

As a valley of towering buildings stretched till the horizon a river of traffic flowed through the center. The blaring honks, reeving of cars and chatter of people echoed through the city. A fleet of cars came to an screeching halt as the signal turned blaring red. The stench of pollution infiltrated my nostrils as I anxiously crossed the road, the harsh wind hammered against my face and the flavor of petroleum in my tongue filled me with distaste.

@deepadhami6061

Жыл бұрын

Very good

@marinacrystalshell5113

3 ай бұрын

Good job! You got all the senses! 👏

Rose stood by the sea, staring at the bright moon that reflected off of the clam waves. Suddenly, the water grew a red tint that became more visible every second. Rose squinted in confusion. She thought she was seeing things, but no, she wasn’t. The sea was full of bubbles that would constantly pop after a few seconds. Rose stepped backwards a bit. She analyzed the waves as they grew bigger and bigger. Was it a tsunami? The breeze in the air started blowing against her jacket. She zipped her jacket to keep it on her. Suddenly, from afar she could see a humongous wave coming her direction. She gasped, and without no hesitation she began running as fast as she could. The breeze swayed and moved as fast as her. She saw a huge shadow behind her. She already knew what it was. A tsunami. She tried running a bit faster, but she was becoming exhausted and could barely breathe. She was determined to escape this wave before it could get to her, but surely there were tons of more waves coming her direction. She began seeing more citizens in the distance that appeared to be running away, too. She began screaming, ‘Everyone! Run, it’s a tsunami!’ People were recording on their devices and staring in amusement. She held tightly onto her purse and grabbed a phone out of it. ‘Shit.., I’ve got call my husband and tell him to get out of the house with the kids!’ She muttered to herself. She immediately dialed his number and waited impatiently for a response. He picked up. ‘Honey, I know this’ll sound crazy but a tsunami is heading our direction. We’re in danger. Take the kids and flee the city. Run as fast as you can. Don’t get in the car. There’s gonna be traffic. Tell the kids that mama loves them.’ Rose said to Michael. She was barely breathing, yet, still determined to make it out alive for her children. No Mother should wanna abandon their child. Especially if they have the opportunity to stay in their life. ‘Mama, I loveeeee you….!’ She heard a faint voice from the phone. It was her eldest daughter, Emily. She was only 4 years old. ‘Mama loves you-‘ Before Emily could respond the wave’s speed increased and she could see the shadow entirely hovering over her. When she looked up she could see the wave. The wave came crashing down immediately. She, luckily, knew how to swim. She lost her grip on her device as it floated away underwater. She struggled to breathe, but she held her breath long enough to make it to the surface of the water. She began swimming in different directions hoping to find help somewhere. Her hair was drenched and water came pouring down from her hair. She had to catch her breath. She inhaled and exhaled several times. She turned around and didn’t see waves but just water and destroyed buildings. Suddenly, a building a few inches ahead of her began tilting to the right. She realized it was about to crash down. ‘Shit..’ She mumbled. Was this the end for her? She suddenly heard a voice from above of her. ‘Ma’am.., come with us! We’ve gotcha!’ It was a helicopter in the sky. The helicopter began to get low to the surface of the water. Emily was heavily breathing while a man reached out for her hand and pulled her into the helicopter. She was drenched in water and was clearly freezing cold. They grabbed a towel and began drying her off with it while asking her questions. ‘Ma’am, was there anyone else with you when this tsunami came crashing down?’ A female in the front seat asked. ‘No, but I have a husband and children. I’m worried for them.’ Emily responded. ‘Do you know your address?’ She questioned Emily. ‘No. I don’t.’ The female raised one eyebrow in suspicion. ‘Alright..’ The woman muttered.

@mateo_lolz9487

2 жыл бұрын

I completely forgot Emily was the daughter at the end. I’m sorry. I meant to say Rose.

@defnotmadiha

2 жыл бұрын

Oh my god! Amazing!

@prxmiisee

6 ай бұрын

i love it

This was so amazing and helpful, thank you!

Thank you very much for this great video.

I've learn something new, thank you ☺️

Thanks a lot it helped me alot 💗💗 You saved me from teacher's punishment ❤❤ I also understood it very well And Inshallah it will be the best essay

@f4reva

2 жыл бұрын

bro wdym teacher’s punishment ??

You should create more content like it- top notch stuff!

@shanettemckenzie1670

2 жыл бұрын

Thanks like some things that would have God bless day

Thank you so much I was stuck in this topic it helped me a lot 😀😀

This is amazing! Thank you!

It gave me a great question

Thanks to my teacher that she suggest us to watch this video as homework 😍 it really help me to create more creative essay ❤️

Thank you so much, a very good video.

Wow so cool

As I walk through the enchanced forest, I am greeted with the fresh scent of flowers.Their bright colours emit diluted contrast compared to sunlight. Chirping birds merely flutter in the naval blue absense. The trees woe in the presence of orange rays. The warm borrow, conjured up from the sprouts of the trees themselves, give a feeling of aliveness as I walk calmly.

@hareemahad9933

Жыл бұрын

Wowww

it very helpful

Really great vid!!!It helped me a lot🙂

help me alot

Very true 😊

You have a very nice voice

Amazing.. Thanks for my progress understanding 🙏🏻

Thank u ❤❤❤❤❤

Nice

This is really amazing and helping

Here is mine As I stepped out of my house, I could feel the whirling weather. Skyscrapers were over my head. The cars were going vroom and the people were moving like a river. The fresh air landed on my tongue. I could smell the pollution which was because of the vehicles and i could also smell the bread which was being made in a bakery nearby. Everything was just like a normal day.

This video is very helpful and I cannot understand why there are 70 people that hit the dislike button? Tsk tsk but anyways, thanks. But I am just curious hehe am I the only over 30 here trying to relearn english? Hehe

Thanks

gr8 video . this video helped me very much

The vast oceanic sky seduced me with its alluring expansive horizon. Stretching far beyond one's sight, the clouds peaked high like mountains reaching for the gods of Olympus. A mixture of sharp lime-like air intertwined with the salty sand as it enthralled and slept into my lungs. The waves played the piano as my legs glided joyfully across the vivid beach.

This video is full of information, thank you so much and keep going we need more of videos like that. We learn a lot from you

Nice voice. 😉😉😉. Totally amazed . Btw thnx. I hav exam tomorrow. That's y I'm searching 4 essays

@LilyH174

2 жыл бұрын

I hope you do your exam well

Mossy green textures saturated the landscape. Bouquets of orange and blue decorated the sloping hills beside-violet flamed bushes. Spring sighed in breezy whispers tossing the leaves of the trees. A woodpecker in the belly of the woods echoed in the distance.

Bro like actually who tf doesn’t already kno this lol. But i appreciate thee effort

Really helpful as I am writing my review

I like this video

As I enter the City of New York. I see many people walking onto the road, people, I see very tall iconic buildings and busy every time the city itself says it is busy as a bee. I hear a lot of noises such as from the vehicles, the people chattering, traffic lights zooming in and zooming out of the street, and the tires screeching. I sense the smell of the smoke, and carbon dioxide around the city because of the vehicles and it's foggy when cars move around in the busiest city. I could taste the fog of the vehicles and it was dusty and some parts of the trees had fallen because of the pollution. When I do, I feel goosebumps on my arm because the vehicles start to screech when the traffic lights go green. I tried... I was describing the NYC...please tell me do I have to improve anything on this? Thank you!

Do you have a list of words for different settings?

thanks

1st one: Gradually, stepping foot onto the grass a soft crunch sound climbed up my ears. Softness tinkled my toes allowing me to feel welcome. I am greeted with such delight from the beautiful trees. Scented flowers escalated into my nostrils. It also sat there in packs smiling enjoying the bright weather. The colorful trees lit up bright like a candle. I was mesmerized. Soft breeze grabbed hold onto my arms, as the sun began to rise, it felt a joy of excitement. Trees began dancing side to side.

As I waited for traffic light to turn green,I could hear people chitchat,cars tires producing an irritable sound while they stop along me.I could feel smoke of cars getting into my nose making it difficult for me to breathe. As I turned my eyes left right I could see magestic buildings standing still impressing me with it's beauty,till light turned green again!

excellent , thanks

I’ve got my gcse exams tomorrow and this was very helpful, I saw the picture and wrote all my senses. Then played it to see what you had gotten and so I could improve some sentences. I use a lot of high end vocabulary but I always struggle to make the sentences make sense and flow to the next, I end up just writing a bunch of well written, interesting sentences but the whole paragraph together doesn’t make much sense. How could I improve that?

@LilyH174

2 жыл бұрын

Yes that is true

i like this video

Thanks babe

Could please upload a video about how to describe a person

Great to see bu

This was super helpful!

It ,s very nice

It helped me. A lot thanks

YAAAAS

Good

Thanxs this is Exactly what i needed for my english exam 😅🤞

@Chloe-qv8sw

3 жыл бұрын

Exam week 😱😅🤞🤞

@softiesistas6201

2 жыл бұрын

same and mine is litterally like tmr,a bit of last minute revision so this save my life 🥲

This is very helpful for me

Awesome way to teach.

Thank you so much

cool)))

Your video is awesome

This video is very helpful for all students. I must say that your videos are awesome and all students should be learn for this video. This video help me when my exam is coming soon.

@LearnEasyEnglish

3 жыл бұрын

Thank you for your kind comment! I'm glad it was helpful 😊

@shakshiyadav3949

3 жыл бұрын

Thank you ma'am

@angeleneallen8847

3 жыл бұрын

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@angeleneallen8847

3 жыл бұрын

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I explain this video as Outstanding👍👍 and Fantabulous 😁😁