6:02 Aww Jimin's face was like a kid 😍😍😭😭😭💜💜💜

WOWWWWWWW........AMAZING m super excited to watch part 02 💖💖💖💖💖💖

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

♥️☺️ Thank you

WoW.... LOVE It 💜💜💜 what to see more 😁😁😁😁😁

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

Umm sure ♥️☺️

This was so amazing, I can't wait to read next episode😊💗💜thank you💜💜💜💜

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

♥️☺️

Amazing I love it can't wait for the next one

Wow it's awesome story I loved it thank u 😍 plz upload next episode

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

Sure ☺️♥️

And YOU have written another winner💎💖🥰🤩😍😘💞

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

Haha Thanks ☺️♥️

Heartbreaking Loved it Thanks and keep safe

@lustfulldesire7356

3 жыл бұрын

Thanks 😊❤️

Amazing

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

Thank you ♥️☺️

Wow

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

♥♥

Just love it 😍😍😍😍

@lustfulldesire7356

3 жыл бұрын

Thanks 😊❤️

👌👌💜💜💜

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

♥️☺️

next please fighting

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks 😊❤️

@syaajiminie8853

4 жыл бұрын

@@lustfulldesire7356 your welcome💜💜

Please upload next episode I can't wait

@lustfulldesire7356

4 жыл бұрын

Actually I'm working on another one then I'll upload it

@Myworld-jg4fc

4 жыл бұрын

@@lustfulldesire7356 ok take your time💜

Please take these as contructive criticism so that you will also have a better story and reading will be more fun. 1. I understand that english is not your native language judging from different grammatical errors; therefore please have someone who knows the language better check on the grammatical construction of the sentences. 2. The transition from one dialog to the next is very slow. Change the transition to at least 10 seconds, it does not have to take 20 seconds to change one short dialog to the next. This makes the storyline a little bit less dragging. 3.keep on improving your story line. I know you can do it. Again, this a constructive criticism coming from someone who loves to read. Thank you.