Conflict … key, tension-o-meter

I am glad I got your first video in my recommendation

Thanks so much I was writing

You’ve helped me so much man, your my favourite KZreadr

@comicsforbeginners

2 жыл бұрын

Ha, thanks Jerome! You're my favorite viewer!

Great advice. Thanks for your video.

@comicsforbeginners

2 жыл бұрын

Thanks JD! Good to know you're always watching and giving your opinion, I really appreciate it.

@jdsantibanez

2 жыл бұрын

@@comicsforbeginners I like the way you write and draw. I have some of my stuff on Facebook. Maybe you would like it. I try to mix Noir with SF or Urban Fantasy.

@comicsforbeginners

2 жыл бұрын

@@jdsantibanez Yea, I see we've both taken a few cues from Frank Miller :-)

A trio of friends dressed in black called "Cindy, Susan and Sandra." I found that funny for some reason. Maybe because i'm guilty of doing this.

@comicsforbeginners

2 жыл бұрын

Ha ha, I'm probably guilty of that somewhat too! The name part is certainly something I've become more aware of since writing fiction. Even tho characters are completely clear to me, readers can't necessarily remember back 40 pages to when that character was described. You need an evocative name that clearly sets them apart - and in fiction maybe a short refresh like "he adjusted his glasses" or "she brushed aside her red hair". I tend to put A LOT of characters in my books, which makes this point extra poignant.

Me struggling with my characters hehehe 😅

is it good I that I had the whole summary of my story and still plan the process while making my script?

@comicsforbeginners

2 жыл бұрын

I'm not sure I understand your question correctly, but... whatever works! The great part about writing a script is it can be edited. Drawn comics pages are pretty hard to edit :-)

One is white , the other is 'BLACK' , one is rich, the other is 'POOR', one is educated ,the other is ' ILLITERATE' 👀, very sus, very very very sus

@comicsforbeginners

Жыл бұрын

If you're implying some kind of subtle racism in the way I arranged the words in sequence, I can assure you that is not the case. But definitely something to be mindful of.

@MrXDreamsOfficial

Жыл бұрын

Definitely want to be mindful of that, sir

@ornamentalminimalist7860

Жыл бұрын

@@comicsforbeginners yeah , could very easily be misconstrued as what u refer to as 'SUBTLE' racism

@comicsforbeginners

Жыл бұрын

@@ornamentalminimalist7860 Certainly not my intention. Plenty of actual racism out there to tackle, I wish people would focus their energy there..