I can understand what's going on here!! As Kook and Tae wasn't in a perfect marraige. As tae was unsure about his feelings and Kook never get that much warmness from Tae so it was too normal for him to misunderstood him. If that was both sided love from the beginning then they'll never be separated as they'll trust each other.kook was insecure and hurt but he should've give Tae a chance to explain himself. Apparently The thing tae did wasn't totally right but he showed his humanity. But he got his punishment well and I think it's really beautiful ✨ It gives us a lesson from both sides, 1. You shouldn't do anything which can hurt your loved one 2. you should trust and give the person to give his explaination from his POV 3. you should realise your feelings on time or else if your love had gone then it'll gone forever. It's a story that's why they reunited but in the real life it can happen they never meet I hope you understand. author now pin me, I never write these much long paragraphs 🌚

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

I see you notice everything and i am glad you did .. i wish everyone can think like you ❣️

@gengsantiago904

Жыл бұрын

Basta ako I enjoy reading it even late at night na wish ko lang true!,, 5hanks!

@IsayaMdingi

6 ай бұрын

I totally agree with you, and i love these stories as i can learn from them❤❤❤

Sorry, but I lost my interest just around 9:35... Where Tae brought his ex, in his bedroom, he could have taken her in any guestroom and tho he was going to propose JK, he just totally forgot about him, like "fusssshh"!! JK is a person who lives with tae, atleast in his house, right?? How is that possible! I love happy endings, but that is acctually not how relationship works🙂

This is a literally toxic relationship, I hope those people who liked the concept, I want them to happen the same with them,then they'll realise how'd it feel!

when he(tae) return home he call doctor for his ex (ok ok let's say he was just showing humanity or may be because the accident was cause by him) but suprising thing is that he don't even have 30s (to call his husband and inform him ) turuuuu L O V E 😑

@iamdone7671

Жыл бұрын

upps might be he forget that he even have a husband🙂 I mean bruhh are u kidding me if jin didn't call him then he won't even remember about his husband😑

@dea3dl0ve

Жыл бұрын

And he slept with her!???

@vanibhat2082

4 ай бұрын

​@@dea3dl0veis this a cheating story??

In ff everything is fine since we always want taekook to b together.. Bt in reality nobody is going to accept if ur husband brings his ex in home that too bed room.. He cud hv taken her to any other room.. Bedroom is not accepted.. Even though it's arranged marriage.. Since u r jat 17 lots to learn abt relationship.. it's a small overlook I feel u did. Bt ff is good.. Just my thought.. No offense.. In a way somehow Tae's character is not justified to bring her ex to bedroom wen he realises he love jk!! Not matching..

Here taehyung really did wrong I mean completely wrong but human do make mistakes. I won't blame readers, I can understand their view because rn I am a reader too. Taehyung should have been a bit conscious on what he was doing. He shouldn't have bring ex to their bedroom. I liked how you pointed out taehyung's mistakes through other members. i don't know why I am not much disappointed as others. As a writer I can understand how much writer struggle. I suggest you something honey, I use to think that those type of comments against us is hate one but no its not true. Now I understand how much viewers point of view matter. That's why take those comments as suggestion and don't be sad you really did nice. 💜💚

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Thank you 💕

@taekookpride

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 no worries 💜

Aaaaaah this is soo good written and beautiful.... compliments to you!

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

💟💟

Whew!😓 That was nearly disastrous.😱 But, in the end they got their happiness!😌🥰😍😘💕 Loved it!💞

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Thanks 😊

That's the drawback of oneshot jst to reach the main plot,we sometimes use unreasonable content,,,

Lol I like that JK wasn't able to fine JK 1 years and even after meeting him he had to do a lot of things while in almost every ff either Main lead fine other lead in the next day and ask for forgiveness and then other lead forgive in once or The main lead fine other in 2-3 months and after that like previous the other lead forgive him at once

Amazing 😭❤❤❤ please make more longer episodes with top tae

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

I will ❤️

U know u are so good author.... ❤️💕❤️ I like ur ffs alot and everything is possible in ff people are just don't understand so my girl u carry on

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Thank you so much ❣️

Author, I have put up a request at the end. Please consider it. Actually the ff some what is disappointing comparing to the other ffs you wrote! It is not the fact that tae was not cheating or he slept in another room Or he no longer loves his ex. 1) But the fact that a married man like tae brought another woman to his bed room where he doesn't even allow his own husband to sleep adding to the facts that the woman is his ex and there were plenty of other rooms but still he layed her on his own bed (tae not realizing how wrong it is shows that how much irresponsible and insincere he is towards jungkook's feelings that he didn't even consider how his husband might feel to see his ex sleeping on the same bed where he himself isn't allowed) 2) Even a very minor accident of her (his ex) made him forget about his husband and his confession for a whole night. You know let's say he is also a human and he can forget about jungkook and his confession, but people actually tend to forget things of lesser priorities when more important things come. This shows his priority towards kook and his ex. Ok let's forget that too. But there are certain ethics to be followed in a relationship and especially married life. That includes not bringing another person to sleep on your bed when you don't even allow your own partner to do so, even if you are not sleeping in the same room. Just like intimacy is private for a couple, similarly bedroom and bed is also a couple's privacy and the right only your partner have. Bringing a third person there preferably your ex when you doesn't even allow your partner there is not at all ethical or moral in a married life. Most of the readers are disappointed with the plot. But since you are a teenager and still have to learn more about marriage life, the duties , responsibilities, and also to realize the fact that certain things or rights from now on only belongs to your partner, I can't completely blame you. But if you think a married man bringing his ex to his bedroom and letting her sleep on his bed (just like partner our own bedroom or the room of your partner cannot be shared with a third person especially your partner's ex) where he didn't even allow his husband to sleep when he has plenty of guest rooms is really an insincere act from your partner which cannot be ignored or forgiven at all. The fact that he completely forgot about kook and his safety and how he wasn't worried about kook's whereabouts as much as he was worried about the minor accident of his ex all those times is really suspicious and fishy. So this is a request if you could modify this ff and re-upload again with a more promising and realistic plot and this time giving jungkook a fair ending. I guess after reading the comments, I guess majority wanted a better plot. Also the reason why we all are after you is because you look like you would grow up to be one of the promising writers who gives fair endings to both the characters and the one who makes mature realistic plots.

@tataskookie1904

7 ай бұрын

I understand you pov .. and thanks for this explanation.. but .. i am very busy. Maybe I will not re-write it .. but for the next time I will remember everything.

Amazing 🤩, all the very best for your preparations! Study hard but also take care of yourself, don't feel stressed but also don't procrastinate! Give time to your favs also, ie. What you like doing or watching in leisure time:) Hehe i had 10th exam, last yr and being an author myself ik how it feels sooo im wishing you luck! Your fans are always there for you! Take care army ! 💜❤️🥰

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Thank you so much 💕

Im a taekook fan, really im a V fan and whatever makrrs him happyskes me happy i 💜 the author. Im also called V, yet i spell it as Vee

Thank you so much sis 😭😭😭😭💜💚

20:54 here I was like ahhhhhhhhhh😂 And my mom was like 💀 and my neighbors was like👹

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

🤣🤣

I just finished it and considering your age and life experience it's just amazing. After reading the comments I came to know that most of them got offended by Tae's behaviour towards Kookie. But c its a receipt that they feel bad for Kookie. They drift in the emotions that you gave to them. As an author it's your achievement. Well done. Me too cried hard when Tae forgot his Kookie and their anniversary.

But still Tae shouldn't have brought a girl home that too in his room. He would have simply admitted her in a hospital. It's really upsetting but here he is saying he don't have feelings for her . Nice joke

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Common their is no meanings that you can't bring someone in your home or you room ... If you don't have any feelings ... He is good person so he take her to his house

@loveyourself7481

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 making a girl( especially his ex girlfriend) sleep with him in his room when you are already married and even didn't allow his own husband in his room is not a big deal? How old are u?

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@loveyourself7481 look i am not here for argument and i am 17 .. and i don't know how old are you but still and yes maybe jungkook and Taehyung stay in different bedroom because they have arranged marriage .. and also tae didn't sleep with her in the same bedroom he sleep in study room .. and we should just move on from past ... Maybe Lilly was his ex girlfriend but that's not mean that they can't be friends anymore ..

@Twilight.Chèri3

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 exactly 💯 right people now a days reading ff and being totally negative on such small thing and lil moves they aren't even ready to understand the situation it's just they was in room so why there Were they don't care it's just what matters to them is was in one room lol even I too feel hurt to see my husband like that but when we talk he explained why this happens how she ended here then I'll understand I'm not dumb to not understand such small thing and there a Word knows as trust dude if trusted and loved them so first talk make things clear then decide what you want but in FF they are showing instead reaction for there action People taking it on self respect and to there heart the just comments negative on bases of Ff but turn into the real life when it's clearly written in every ff disclaimers that IT'S JUST FF NOT RELATED TO REAL LIFE read it for fun but No they don't I mean not all some really don't do that they take it too personal... I too replies so many people about personal coz they bought it to people soo but honestly I started reading ff for fun and to improve my English and I'm not that dumb or immature to not understand such lil situations and tricks .. and please others who read this comment I'm not saying this to anyone personally I kept my point of view for FF and there comments so hope you understand and author Nice work 💜

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@Twilight.Chèri3 i am so thankful that you understand .. pls i hope everyone can understand like you did ... I also want to said that it's just a FF don't take it personally 🤍

I liked this very much , I have one thing to say i have read many TK ff till now.But somewhere I was getting bored because there was only one common thing in every ff: possessive jealous jk I was tired of reading all this but your story line is different which made me very happy to read something new.Please keep writing like this with new storyline Best of luck for your study and for your writing.And don't stress yourself for others we can't please everyone.

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

I am glad that you like my story line ... It's feel nice .. ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🩹 thanks

I'm in love for that story 💜 Borahae ‼️🇧🇷

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Borahae 🤍

Am I the only one who wants the second part of this ff😄😄😄but I really enjoyed this ff ......it was so good 😊😊😊

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Aww thank you so much 💗

@aditimishra3607

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 when can I get the second part...😍😍

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@aditimishra3607 i don't think there is gonna be one more part .. and also i am very busy with my studies so ..

Nice story💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

The whole entire time I was crying but this is a very very beautiful fanfic that you made I love you💜💜💜💜💜

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

💓💓

I love it you must be feeling frustrated because most of the people don't like it they want Tae and Jungkook to have self respect and when you do it they get mad like what is going on inside their heads These days people are expecting too much from others

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Yeah you are ... You know some days ago they were saying me Taehyung don't have any self respect .. and when i give it they don't like it ... I am so tired of everything ... This is very hard for me to handle .. i can't

@beomhan246

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 if I were you I would have just do it my own way and not listening to them

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@beomhan246 i am also trying to do this ... 🤍

I'm crying mess cuz they both having pain and hurt themselves

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

🤍🤍

AmaJIN story 🤧💜🐯🐰

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Thank you 💗

It's an amazing story author, just ignore those bad comments💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

♥️♥️

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

The part I am upset about is how he brought lily to his house he could have went to the hospital, he forgot abt Jungkook and didn’t even think abt him, Ik that lily and Taehyung didn’t sleep together but it’s still wrong to forget/ditch ur husband and take care of your ex…if u say that ff is not connected to real life then maybe once u will make a ff where tae abuse Jungkook and he forgives him right? Because it’s not connected to real life??? Obviously not u wouldn’t that or would u but if do connect this abuse to reality then the ff u made should also be connected to the reality….I’m not say ur a bad author or smithing I’m saying to make a plot that connects with real life then people won’t be upset usually few teens just want a happy ending without think whts wrong or right but you should at least do whts right….Anyways good ff everything was good just focus on the grammar/vocabulary sometimes they are wrong but it’s k there weren’t many Bye take care….waiting a new ff from you

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

I am so sorry ... For satisfied you .. but i think he didn't ditch jk intentionally ... He was worried and he regards it so much and what if tae and Lilly have relationship between them in past .. but there are over now .. and they can be friends so he take her to his home ... And also i am not into abuse FF .. and i don't like those type of FF ... And in my FF i think i gave tae is punishment already and also jk didn't forgave tae .. he take one year to forgive him .. and i think it's enough

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@Slytherin Princess seriously ... When i write " my cold husband slap me .. " this FF you all said that i make tae with no self respect .. and blah blah .. that's why i did it and look what are you all saying .. some time it's hard to figure out what you all want ..

@Puppy-zg3jf

Жыл бұрын

​@@tataskookie1904 it's true author we can't satisfy everyone for me this one-shot is really good one because tae don't have any bad intentions it's just call humanity when someone you know injured afcourse they will be worry so in all tension tae forget about the dinner and also you give tae good punishment because kook also suffer 1 year by tae coldness so it's fair for tae also to suffer because he have to think before do something he should think he have husband and before he do he should inform kook so this all missundertanding won't happen now he realised and also you give good happy ending don't worry author for me what you do is right we always support you don't take everyone opinion just do what you think is right

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@Puppy-zg3jf you don't know .. but your words are very important for me .. since morning i got those comments and it's make me feel like i did a very bad things but thanks to you ...

@Puppy-zg3jf

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 don't worry author just ignore the negativity just focus on the positive one just do what make you happy and I'm glad my words help you 💜💜

In the middle of half I just lost my interest.....☹️

@HinachanLol

Жыл бұрын

Me too 😢

Author, I have a request, do you know how those “someone harassed him without knowing…” ffs of taekook, I was wondering if you can like one of those but either one of them have a mental disorder of getting flashbacks in the past and a separation disorder and like the top leaves for like 2 weeks without knowing the bottoms condition or anything and the bottom goes to university and like so on…… and like after the top returns after the amount of time being gone, the bottom gets dizzy without eating or sleeping and goes into a coma for like 4-6 months? And I know you can do the rest perfectly…. If you do this, I love you even more then before❤

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Umm .. i have to think about the plot .. and i will try to write something like this

@arianapadilla1214

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 Its only if you want, dont pressure your self :D, and remember, me as your subscriber, i love you :D

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@arianapadilla1214 thank you so much ♥️

@arianapadilla1214

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 no problem :D

I really love this ❤

Can you make a tutorial for the thumbnail?

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Actually .. my all thumbnail make by my sister .. so I don't know how to make it 😓🥲 but i will talk to my sister see if she tell me . Then i will share it

@taeggukofficial

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 oh...thank you btw😊

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@taeggukofficial welcome 😁

i know you work hard dear so i advance apologize to you.but the one who told that most of view don’t like it or why they can't accept it.i want to say them if it’s really happened to you then you will also can't accept it. i know It's a imagination but still every imagination has its own logic and reason. 1:First of all I don't know how people go in love with him/her against his mind it's really irrational. 2:And secondly, I don't think it takes too long to receive a phone call and say where I am and why. 3:Thirdly, there is no one in the world who would not feel bad seeing their ex-boyfriend or ex-girlfriend with their husband or wife.and it gets even more complicated when his ex-girlfriend or ex-boyfriend becomes more important than his partner in his own life partner. 4:fourthly when his husband or wife takes his ex-girlfriend or ex-boyfriend into his own bedroom and spends the night to take care of him/her and doesn't feel the need to pick up the phone in his own life partner how can that person lived with him/her?If a stranger is in danger in front of someone other than a loved one or an acquaintance.then naturally it is the duty as a human to help that person.It does not mean that he will forget all worldly relations and his family and stick only to him/her.and I think jk didn't do anything wrong, he tried so hard to normalize the relationship with tae.but don't you think that any person would not want to give up when he finds that the person he wants to be in a relationship with cannot accept him at all.and tae never tried to show that he loved jk any of his actions. and where ex-girlfriend or ex-boyfriend is more important than own life partner.naturally any relationship will be not ok.anyway it’s my opinion and i'm not hating this you really work so hard so thanks for your hard work unnie🙂

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

I understand and thanks

@lameya862

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 and I think we can make ourselves better with each person's comments.we can make ourselves more accurate by the feedback of who is thinking what.but if that comment is denigrated as negative then it can be called nothing but silly.we are your view so what we think or like we cant say to you i think it’s our rights of being your own subscribers if you think that being your subscribers we can't tell you of what we think or what we like then it’s okay i will not say anything from now on. coz if we say something some so called good people will say we are talking blah balh and we are sending negative comments. and sorry unnie if i say something that hurt you anyways fighting ✊

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@lameya862 i am happy that you all are commenting and it ok ... Because of that i can understand my fault and next time i will try to make more perfect .. so pls comment and informed me about your thoughts 💭

@lameya862

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 thanks unnie to understood me i really like your every ff so you nice keep going on i'm always with you taekook forever 🥰😍🐯🐰

I want special episode for this story pls🙏

Wow wonderful story

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

❤️❣️

Please please one special episode 🙏🙏🙏🙏

Second 😁🤭

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

🥈🤍

First 🤚🤚🤚

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

🥇

💜💜💜

Hey unnie where is my favourite part huh🌚

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

🌚 you imagine your fav part ...

@my7luckycharms

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 No I wanna see it plweas can u make it for me (puppy eyes)🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨🥺✨

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@my7luckycharms actually as you know KZread is not going to delete my videos if i add smut .. and also i am not to good in writing smut ...

@my7luckycharms

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 oh but u can also write in Instagram and no u r good while writing smut Just try once okay or if u are having any problem related Instagram so u can write in description okay 🙂

3rd 😉😉😉

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

🥉

Firsttt

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

🥇

@iknowmyslefbutidkmyname4393

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 thanks 🤗can i ask u one question plz 😢

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@iknowmyslefbutidkmyname4393 of course you can ...

@iknowmyslefbutidkmyname4393

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 will u make taekook for even after bts go to military service 🥺😞

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@iknowmyslefbutidkmyname4393 yes .. i will ... I will always support them .. and always write about my imagination.

Nice ff but u forgot to justify tae's feelings Hell he only mentioned his love when kook left him Before that he was only doing for jin hyung and confuse himself When did u even show that tae realize his feelings??only after kook left

If he don't have any feelings for her then why he have brought her in his room he should take her hospital or make her sleep in gu room and how can he forgot about his own husband omG do u think this kind of relationship works

GIRL ITS NOT HIT UP IT'S "HEAT UP " 😅😅😅

Tae did wrong and get a lesson

I don't no about tae but when jhope gave marriage card to dem nobody saw dat card r wat becoz inside Dey will mention na hobi weds yn r something sorry I just thought like dat but it was great story

I don't like this story I think you still baby so

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

How old are you?

@phibampdah5745

Жыл бұрын

😂😂😂

Why does it say it’s bottom tae but it’s jk🤔🤨😂

@tataskookie1904

7 ай бұрын

Type mistake 😬

Unii i have a request can you pls make a taekook ff top tae bottom kook " two enemies accidentally wore a same dress and all university students call them couples " pls uni pls 🙏🏻🙏🏻 puppy eyes 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 pls

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Umm i can but not now... I already said that i have to study for my exam . So after i done with my exam i will write it

@myloveforjesus173

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 oh ok thank you , you say you're are 17 years old but still i cant believe that because you're doing great i am just speechless you have great talent and don't think about haters ignore them they're always like this hurting others feelings and i want to say this no mater what happened we will stay your side forever 💚💜 WE LOVE YOU BABY 💜💚

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@myloveforjesus173 thank you so much for your support and love. . and i love you too ❣️

The story is amazing 💕🤧 and i know it's just ff ,still But if he is in relationship with male then how he was in relationship with female ? 😶

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

Umm ... I didn't get it .. but tae was bi so he can date both .. and also jk but tae was not interested in Lilly

@iamdelusional17

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 okk! Thanks for explanation 😊

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@iamdelusional17 mention not

Author I wanna ask something that is yn a he or a she

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

She ..

Author I wanna ask something that is yn a he or a she

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

She !! Did i write it wrong 🥲😓

@BTSARMYFOREVER-ft5mw

Жыл бұрын

@@tataskookie1904 Ig u did but no worries cause it was awesome amazing and heart touching I'm in love with this 😌😌

@tataskookie1904

Жыл бұрын

@@BTSARMYFOREVER-ft5mw thanks