this is why you look around the track before rolling it nice entry btw

@SchediaStudios

Жыл бұрын

Thank you! 😁

Ok, first I want to say that I love the various assets you used. You can see that you spend time on thinking what to put into a scene 👍 Now about the animation: 1. the Fall of the robot might need a bit of anticipation. So it kinda looks like he is dripping and then falling. Currently kinda sudden 2. the Minecraft falls way to smooth /stops moving too fast. It’s like: oh yeah I’m off the rail… now time to stop… maybe make it shake a bit and also let it not lag into the ground 3. same for the beehive. Make it land and then shake a bit, it won’t Fall that smooth irl 4. the sliding when he walks to the Mincart could need some improvement 5. when his eyes get small put in more character animation, at example his head moving 6. at the end he walks a bit to fast for the feet imo 7. the bees look way to ordered, like they were just like hair particles or something, tip: use them as a particle and then give those particles some velocity so they are flying around, ofc without gravity, but think you know that Overall: I like the story, bees are integrated very well, nice assets used, lighting also pretty good, animation needs some improvements but till June it’s some time ;)

@SchediaStudios

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for the feedback! Everything you mentioned does need fixing and you were right, the bees are hair particles, lol. I didn't even think to use normal particles w/ velocity. I think I will edit the animation and then resend it. Thank you again for all your help. 😃

@Knoght

2 жыл бұрын

oh np ;)

Awesome entry! Love the character's skin as well 😊

@SchediaStudios

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much!

OMG this is so good! maybe not realistic, but good story and I laughed how he was running away haha

@SchediaStudios

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you! 😃 I saw your entry, it was amazing!

@SchediaStudios

2 жыл бұрын

Oh, I also an updated version I'm working on.

Gorgeous and fun animation. I have a similar situation, though there the Bees have already taken over the world ... and they are more😊👍😁

@SchediaStudios

Жыл бұрын

Lol! Thank you for watching! 👍

Nice!

@SchediaStudios

2 жыл бұрын

Thanks! This animation was fun.

Nice! could you let me know what you think of mine?

@SchediaStudios

Жыл бұрын

Thank you! Your animation is very nice as well. I like the camera angles and the effects, like the smoke particles and wind motion in the trees and grass. 😀