It’s like that saying. “There’s three things all wise men fear. A sea in a storm. A night with no moon. And the anger of a gentle man.” I’m kind of excited to see Izuku’s path from here on out. Compared to most betrayed stories this one is more realistic and unique. Keep up the great work.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Thank you! I kinda got a bit tired of Izuku getting caught off guard and beaten up kinda easily. I'm actually looking forward to writting more of this story when I get the time!
@WendigoTS
Жыл бұрын
"Beware the fury of a patient man" - John Dryden
@WendigoTS Жыл бұрын
Better than just about every other betrayed deku, i don't really like how in other stories he's caught off guard as deku is really perceptive. Can't wait for more
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
That's exactly how I felt after binging a couple of Betrayed series (and rereading my original story... lol)
@WendigoTS
Жыл бұрын
@My Time good to know that i'm not the only one that feels like it's a bit weird.
@dripinpanda8603 Жыл бұрын
This is gonna be a BANGER😃❤️
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I've got some good ideas for this one 👍
@ArsonGoose Жыл бұрын
cant wait for the next one keep up the amazing work
@karmaakabane7013 Жыл бұрын
It may just be the sadist in me but I honestly want to see the consequences of ururaka’s actions when it’s revealed she’s the traitor in this AU imagine what deku would do to her cause if there’s one thing I know it’s that when the nice guy snaps ain’t nobody safe forget what the others would do to her for framing the nicest and strongest classmate they got
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I'm still working out her arc in the story but I'm sure it'll be great to see!
@LemonStories Жыл бұрын
been forever since I've actually sat down and watched a texting story video, and this was the best video I could've returned with. 7 months late, but amazing job!
@voodoo_gaming
Жыл бұрын
Ohhh shit it’s Lemon
@LemonStories
Жыл бұрын
@@voodoo_gaming yessir~
@Bruvmomentfake Жыл бұрын
Really well written, and I loved the ending
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@czechemperortextstory2926 Жыл бұрын
Very interesting text story. This going different way than other betrayed/framed text stories.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I hope so! I tried my best to put my own spin on the trope here
@miljundominese4015 Жыл бұрын
Kengan Ashura heroes v villains and usj in one vid? Also take a 3 days rest dud
@deathreaper2410 Жыл бұрын
this was real good.im looking forward part 2
@matthewhoff3626 Жыл бұрын
let's see where this goes. cheers.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Hopefully it only goes up from here haha Cheers!
@angelocortez830211 ай бұрын
this was great
@BrainFreeTSReal Жыл бұрын
I don't want to sound like I'm stealing content, so I would like to ask if I can make a story with the same basic premises, but with many changes after the betrayal when this series is over? It gave me wonderful ideas for future series, but I'd like to have any form of confirmation before I start writing.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Go ahead! I'd love to see your spin on it!
@BrainFreeTSReal
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 Thank you, I just prefer to have a creator's permission above all else, since I hate stolen content that's claimed as one's own.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
@@BrainFreeTSReal Its no problem, I understand that feeling haha
@dusk_moon.803711 ай бұрын
The pinging was danger sense but i don't understand how he got it maybe the usesers stayed with deku and he has access to there quirks and the embers that are left of OFA but i will have to continue watching to see if it's explained
@EripmavsDYraid Жыл бұрын
A rare case where the remaster is better than the original. Oh also, question: why not make a betrayed AU of Deku as Happy Chaos from Guilty Gear?
@deathcorereaper5352 Жыл бұрын
i kinda wanna get into making texting stories but i dont what is a good app to use to make texting stories.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I use TextingStory, it's a light blue icon with a text bubble and a red triangle in the app store. It's available for android and I'm pretty sure it's on Apple as well.
@deathcorereaper5352
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 thanks and can't wait for more of your stories.
@mrc7156 Жыл бұрын
Bruh he thinks all might a fake hero cause he left the room unguarded? He went to collect evidence 😂 😐 w logic
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I was going more for how the mental image Izuku had in his head of All Might was ruined, he doesn't think All Might is a fake hero... yet at least. Just that the image he's had in his head for his entire life was wrong. I mean he wasn't just left alone to be attacked, he was also arrested by his idol/mentor. And after getting betrayed and attacked over what he knew is fake evidence by people he fight either for or with and thought would have his back 100%, shit like that can really start to mess with your mind just a tiny itsy-bitzy bit.
@mrc7156
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 Oh my bad Sorry if I sounded rude
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
@@mrc7156 It's fine 😁
@kimroberteslabon8849 Жыл бұрын
When is the next part for this??
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Hopefully soon, was going to work on the next part tonight but I just realized I have some homework to do.
@kimroberteslabon8849
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 Finish your homework first, it's important..
@Cosmic_wolf_039 Жыл бұрын
Do u know when the next part will be out
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
It's hard to say for now, I'm going to try and start working on it tonight. But I've got some school to focus on tomorrow.
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It’s like that saying. “There’s three things all wise men fear. A sea in a storm. A night with no moon. And the anger of a gentle man.” I’m kind of excited to see Izuku’s path from here on out. Compared to most betrayed stories this one is more realistic and unique. Keep up the great work.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Thank you! I kinda got a bit tired of Izuku getting caught off guard and beaten up kinda easily. I'm actually looking forward to writting more of this story when I get the time!
@WendigoTS
Жыл бұрын
"Beware the fury of a patient man" - John Dryden
Better than just about every other betrayed deku, i don't really like how in other stories he's caught off guard as deku is really perceptive. Can't wait for more
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
That's exactly how I felt after binging a couple of Betrayed series (and rereading my original story... lol)
@WendigoTS
Жыл бұрын
@My Time good to know that i'm not the only one that feels like it's a bit weird.
This is gonna be a BANGER😃❤️
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I've got some good ideas for this one 👍
cant wait for the next one keep up the amazing work
It may just be the sadist in me but I honestly want to see the consequences of ururaka’s actions when it’s revealed she’s the traitor in this AU imagine what deku would do to her cause if there’s one thing I know it’s that when the nice guy snaps ain’t nobody safe forget what the others would do to her for framing the nicest and strongest classmate they got
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I'm still working out her arc in the story but I'm sure it'll be great to see!
been forever since I've actually sat down and watched a texting story video, and this was the best video I could've returned with. 7 months late, but amazing job!
@voodoo_gaming
Жыл бұрын
Ohhh shit it’s Lemon
@LemonStories
Жыл бұрын
@@voodoo_gaming yessir~
Really well written, and I loved the ending
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
Very interesting text story. This going different way than other betrayed/framed text stories.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I hope so! I tried my best to put my own spin on the trope here
Kengan Ashura heroes v villains and usj in one vid? Also take a 3 days rest dud
this was real good.im looking forward part 2
let's see where this goes. cheers.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Hopefully it only goes up from here haha Cheers!
this was great
I don't want to sound like I'm stealing content, so I would like to ask if I can make a story with the same basic premises, but with many changes after the betrayal when this series is over? It gave me wonderful ideas for future series, but I'd like to have any form of confirmation before I start writing.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Go ahead! I'd love to see your spin on it!
@BrainFreeTSReal
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 Thank you, I just prefer to have a creator's permission above all else, since I hate stolen content that's claimed as one's own.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
@@BrainFreeTSReal Its no problem, I understand that feeling haha
The pinging was danger sense but i don't understand how he got it maybe the usesers stayed with deku and he has access to there quirks and the embers that are left of OFA but i will have to continue watching to see if it's explained
A rare case where the remaster is better than the original. Oh also, question: why not make a betrayed AU of Deku as Happy Chaos from Guilty Gear?
i kinda wanna get into making texting stories but i dont what is a good app to use to make texting stories.
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I use TextingStory, it's a light blue icon with a text bubble and a red triangle in the app store. It's available for android and I'm pretty sure it's on Apple as well.
@deathcorereaper5352
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 thanks and can't wait for more of your stories.
Bruh he thinks all might a fake hero cause he left the room unguarded? He went to collect evidence 😂 😐 w logic
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
I was going more for how the mental image Izuku had in his head of All Might was ruined, he doesn't think All Might is a fake hero... yet at least. Just that the image he's had in his head for his entire life was wrong. I mean he wasn't just left alone to be attacked, he was also arrested by his idol/mentor. And after getting betrayed and attacked over what he knew is fake evidence by people he fight either for or with and thought would have his back 100%, shit like that can really start to mess with your mind just a tiny itsy-bitzy bit.
@mrc7156
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 Oh my bad Sorry if I sounded rude
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
@@mrc7156 It's fine 😁
When is the next part for this??
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
Hopefully soon, was going to work on the next part tonight but I just realized I have some homework to do.
@kimroberteslabon8849
Жыл бұрын
@@MyTime1863 Finish your homework first, it's important..
Do u know when the next part will be out
@MyTime1863
Жыл бұрын
It's hard to say for now, I'm going to try and start working on it tonight. But I've got some school to focus on tomorrow.