Band 9 IELTS Writing Sample: IELTS Exam Tips and Tricks

How to get a Band 9 in IELTS Writing Task 2. In this video, IELTS Exam expert Andy analyses IELTS Writing Samples! By watching this lesson, you will learn what IELTS examiners are looking for when they review your essay. Find out how to improve your essay writing skills!
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00:00 How to get a Band 9 for IELTS Writing Part 2
00:49 IELTS Essay Prompt
03:17 Sample Band 9 Writing Task 2 Essay
03:39 High-Scoring IELTS Introduction
04:25 Band 9 Body Paragraph 1
07:22 Band 9 Body Paragraph 2
10:25 Band 9 IELTS Essay Conclusion
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  • @onlyred2
    @onlyred2Ай бұрын

    The problem with this assessment is that if you are fairly knowledgable on the subject you would do well, but the reverse is true as well. There should atleast be a choice for the individuals taking the test, as after all, the test is assessing your level of english writing and not your knowledge on vegans and what not.

  • @malviekorake5977

    @malviekorake5977

    16 күн бұрын

    Very true. I was given a topic I know nothing about. I'm sure if I was given a familiar topic I would have nailed it.

  • @onlyred2

    @onlyred2

    11 күн бұрын

    @@malviekorake5977 its a money making business after all so theyr bound to see how they are gonna get moeny in their pockets unfortunately.

  • @Strawberry__0
    @Strawberry__04 ай бұрын

    My IELTS exam is on 3 Feb 🥺🙏 wish me good luck 🤞🏻🙏❤️

  • @kayfqurux3511

    @kayfqurux3511

    4 ай бұрын

    Please help me this web I don't understand how to use ?

  • @alexandermaxwell5016

    @alexandermaxwell5016

    4 ай бұрын

    I pray you u have a successful n wonderful exam

  • @kayfqurux3511

    @kayfqurux3511

    4 ай бұрын

    @@alexandermaxwell5016 thank you

  • @teen2cp

    @teen2cp

    4 ай бұрын

    Good luck 🤞😊

  • @treasuredaniels4430

    @treasuredaniels4430

    4 ай бұрын

    You will do excellently well in this exam, Amen🙏🏾🙏🏾

  • @chukwuemekaonochie8759
    @chukwuemekaonochie87593 ай бұрын

    I got my results yesterday, 1st March (R9, W7,L8.5, S7.5) Overall Band 8 I’m happy I passed on my first attempt. Love from Nigeria 🇳🇬

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    3 ай бұрын

    Well done @chukwuemekaonochie8759

  • @nazafatmohayraofficial

    @nazafatmohayraofficial

    3 ай бұрын

    Can you give suggestions on how to prepare for reading?

  • @t_k_r_p5872

    @t_k_r_p5872

    2 ай бұрын

    ​@@nazafatmohayraofficialyes

  • @user-mt9yx8nk4f
    @user-mt9yx8nk4f4 ай бұрын

    Thanks, Andy.

  • @josephsitorus8510
    @josephsitorus8510Ай бұрын

    I am happy you have advises us how to prepare ielts test

  • @mdminhajtahertitu8946
    @mdminhajtahertitu89464 ай бұрын

    thank you; a 12-minute video worth watching about 2 hours;

  • @Godblessme85
    @Godblessme854 ай бұрын

    Wow! This is top notch 🎉🎉🎉. Thanks for the revelations.

  • @tim_despair
    @tim_despair4 ай бұрын

    Thanks, that was thorough and clear

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    @tim_despair Glad you enjoyed it!

  • @sp-xq2hc
    @sp-xq2hc2 ай бұрын

    The best video to make an excellent writing i have seen so fara. Thank you

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    2 ай бұрын

    Wow, thank you!

  • @Felcy-cx9bc
    @Felcy-cx9bc4 ай бұрын

    I am very happy to see this content, it is very inspirational and motivates me to be better

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    Thanks so much @Felcy-cx9bc !

  • @mehedisenglishcare
    @mehedisenglishcare4 ай бұрын

    Thanks❤

  • @mipham9022
    @mipham90223 ай бұрын

    I’m going to take the test at the end of this week, please wish me luck. 🙌

  • @rifatrasheed6138
    @rifatrasheed6138Ай бұрын

    Excellent 👍 👍 👍 explanation 👏

  • @suleymanturganbaev8156
    @suleymanturganbaev81564 ай бұрын

    Excellent 👍🏻can you share pdf format of this essay?

  • @Message527
    @Message5274 күн бұрын

    Very effective session! I'm really pleased and my thumbs on the Subscribe button after watching this video! 😊 Thank you!

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 күн бұрын

    Awesome, thank you!

  • @tshewang9661
    @tshewang96614 ай бұрын

    Thank you for all the guidance. The task 2 topic I got on my test day was “Many of today's most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience”.

  • @omairahmad1830

    @omairahmad1830

    4 ай бұрын

    Hey! Do you have "E2 IELTS Topic Toolkit"? If you've purchased it, kindly share it with me. Thanks

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    Hi @omairahmad1830, Here it is: promo.e2language.com/product/e2-ielts-topic-toolkit-ebook/

  • @yohanngonsalves1020
    @yohanngonsalves10204 ай бұрын

    How recommended is it to use personal examples in task 2 essasy?

  • @zeevlogs737
    @zeevlogs73716 күн бұрын

    Thx❤

  • @john.s
    @john.s2 ай бұрын

    5:49 this is important!

  • @user-wi9ti2hn1l
    @user-wi9ti2hn1l4 ай бұрын

    Good job ma God bless you

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    Thank you so much

  • @abdelkaioumbouaicha
    @abdelkaioumbouaicha4 ай бұрын

    📝 Summary of Key Points: 📌 The video emphasizes the importance of fully understanding and addressing the essay prompt, including answering both questions in detail and providing relevant reasons and examples. 🧐 The video presents a sample response to the essay prompt, highlighting key elements that contribute to a band nine score, such as a clear thesis statement, well-supported ideas, and acknowledging different perspectives. 🚀 The video discusses the importance of coherence and cohesion in writing, advising on the appropriate use of signal language and avoiding repetition. 🚀 The video emphasizes the importance of using a wide range of vocabulary and demonstrating lexical resource and creativity in writing. 💡 Additional Insights and Observations: 💬 "The prompt requires answering both questions in detail and providing reasons and examples that are directly relevant to the prompt." 📊 No specific data or statistics were mentioned in the video. 🌐 No specific references or sources were mentioned in the video. 📣 Concluding Remarks: The video provides valuable tips and strategies for writing an IELTS essay that can achieve a band nine score. It emphasizes the importance of fully understanding and addressing the essay prompt, providing relevant and well-supported ideas, and demonstrating coherence and cohesion in writing. Additionally, the video highlights the significance of using a wide range of vocabulary and avoiding repetition to showcase lexical resource and creativity. Overall, the video offers valuable insights for improving essay writing skills for the IELTS exam. Generated using TalkBud

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    Thanks @abdelkaioumbouaicha for the great summary!

  • @gape01
    @gape014 ай бұрын

    Hi, what happened to some of your videos and courses? I was in the process to buy the Gold subscription at your website but some strange things started to happen and made me put the subscription on hold. Your Udemy IELTS MOCK TEST PREP course is unsvailable and other videos in your youtube channel were also deleted. What happened?

  • @anuthomas9329
    @anuthomas93294 ай бұрын

    Hi Could you please make a video for True false NG questions?

  • @shafaqrauf9398

    @shafaqrauf9398

    4 ай бұрын

    Focus only on key word that is located with helping verb

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    Hi @anuthomas9329, Great idea! Subscribe and stay tuned!

  • @anuthomas9329

    @anuthomas9329

    4 ай бұрын

    @@shafaqrauf9398 could you elaborate and illustrate with an example

  • @fk314030
    @fk3140302 ай бұрын

    I have Ielts test on May 18. I want to get my writing tasks evaluated so that I can know where I stand. Please guide me on this, Thanks.

  • @seabuckthorniran1
    @seabuckthorniran13 ай бұрын

    Do you know seabuckthorn? Best regards I love writing

  • @Marvelous_77
    @Marvelous_774 ай бұрын

    In order to paraphrase the prompt above , can l write " the number of individuals who are becoming herbivorous , is increasing"

  • @innocentmarerwachari1086

    @innocentmarerwachari1086

    4 ай бұрын

    😅😅

  • @inara9888

    @inara9888

    4 ай бұрын

    Hmm I don't think so? The word isn't incorrect but ig we don't use it for people in general. So like vocabulary appropriate in the given context will help achieve a higher score.

  • @saimanorien640
    @saimanorien6404 ай бұрын

    I have watched almost all of your videos. The method for writing task taught by your channel is diffrent from the Barron's book and other KZread channels, especially the introduction part. Now im confused which method should i follow. Please guide.( My test is on 15 February)

  • @Fazeeh

    @Fazeeh

    4 ай бұрын

    How was your test ?

  • @saimanorien640

    @saimanorien640

    3 ай бұрын

    @@Fazeeh I got 7 band.

  • @andylitchi4364
    @andylitchi43644 ай бұрын

    Possible.

  • @marcusff5457
    @marcusff54574 ай бұрын

    My exam is on 24th of February, wish me a 🤞

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    Good luck @marcusff5457 !

  • @lizchambwe1781
    @lizchambwe17814 ай бұрын

    Good luck

  • @Abhisham16
    @Abhisham164 ай бұрын

    Your dress is also plant-based 😅

  • @vignesh4774
    @vignesh47742 ай бұрын

    My exam is on may 2 wish me luck,its my second attempt

  • @White444NP
    @White444NP4 ай бұрын

    Help me for how to get high score in the IELTS examination.😢😢

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    Sure @NEPALnepalese506. Subscribe, watch our videos and check out www.e2language.com/ for methods and practice.

  • @sangamgurung139
    @sangamgurung1393 ай бұрын

    Today is my exam

  • @user-wc5fn2yy3p
    @user-wc5fn2yy3p4 ай бұрын

    Hi mam! I have a doubt regarding reasons & solutions essay that if i am asked to give only solutions, how many remedies do i have to suggest? And how could they be placed in both paragraphs?

  • @QuickInfobyMY
    @QuickInfobyMY2 ай бұрын

    My IELTS exam is on 4th of may😊

  • @collinskibet2992

    @collinskibet2992

    2 ай бұрын

    We will be doing same day, good luck mate.

  • @QuickInfobyMY

    @QuickInfobyMY

    2 ай бұрын

    @@collinskibet2992 thank you☺️

  • @eraranee7182
    @eraranee71822 ай бұрын

    Plese help me for 27 April

  • @jayprakash-pi4qq
    @jayprakash-pi4qq4 ай бұрын

    Mam..one out of 100000 does not need 9..please..

  • @PranamiSaha-qi8ft
    @PranamiSaha-qi8ft4 ай бұрын

    My IELTS exam is on 9th March.. Wish me good luck..❤

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    You can do it!

  • @mariyabinawala3393

    @mariyabinawala3393

    3 ай бұрын

    In which city?

  • @CricketloverAarav

    @CricketloverAarav

    2 ай бұрын

    All the best for 7 +

  • @chideraoko1363
    @chideraoko13634 ай бұрын

    My Ielts Exam Is On 24th Feb Pls Wish Me Luck 🙏

  • @E2IELTS

    @E2IELTS

    4 ай бұрын

    We wish you all the luck @chideraoko1363

  • @AyotomilolaOnaolapo

    @AyotomilolaOnaolapo

    4 ай бұрын

    How was your exam? Did your listening test have a map or diagram?

  • @sehrishmehmood5969
    @sehrishmehmood59694 ай бұрын

    Today is my test 😅

  • @kareemosama5373

    @kareemosama5373

    4 ай бұрын

    How did you do? My exam in the day after tomorrow

  • @_Nour_333
    @_Nour_3334 ай бұрын

    Ppl are moving from eating meat to eating primarily plant-based diet +ppl are shifting to a ...

  • @austintk9466

    @austintk9466

    4 ай бұрын