I wrote a story about a hippopotamus fighting a rhino in a spaceship and a random man and a mouse had to stop them. Got 36/40. Not even joking.

@2tee197

Жыл бұрын

that sounds tapped🤣🤣

@Abdul-wahaabKhalil

Жыл бұрын

man just wrote random stuff and got 36/40

@gamerozstudios9196

Жыл бұрын

If it works it works 😂

@wetpeps9651

Жыл бұрын

wtf lmfao

@ieajackson5518

Жыл бұрын

Beautiful.

AQA examiners on their way to award grade 9's to stories the personally relate to:

@GrindAcademy-12

5 ай бұрын

Violated 😂

@detectivethinker3637

5 ай бұрын

That's the thing about humanities subject.

@MaryamKamaly08

5 ай бұрын

If i get high marks for getting them to relate to me, i should write a story about someone profiting off students’ suffering

@takemetothelakes13

4 ай бұрын

​@@detectivethinker3637they are most definitely relating to harold godwinson getting shot in the eye 😅

@GX_Ethernal

4 ай бұрын

Drive by 😂

Bro wrote about his life😭

@dynamic7351

Жыл бұрын

🤣🤣🤣

@baburlu

Жыл бұрын

naaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

@Husx7

Жыл бұрын

lol sure did

@msmjsiajdgdhsjajahgshsjaje8990

Жыл бұрын

😭😭😭😭

@oujikei

Жыл бұрын

VIOLATION LMAOO

A guy I know wrote about himself sitting in the exam hall and basically talked shit about all the Qs on the paper. He got a 9.

@darrendavies5704

5 ай бұрын

Based madlad

@user-se6kk2wi6x

5 ай бұрын

I'll do that next time

@issap-pope5609

2 ай бұрын

Our teacher told us bout that too😂

@yaraidk

2 ай бұрын

Lmao the examiner must have been like “I feel you man”

@idfkimaclown

2 ай бұрын

Bro I just did that shit in my Lang C1 paper lmao

I wrote about how festivals should be banned because kids get trampled and kidnapped and got 34/40😭

@wardz21

3 ай бұрын

im dead 😭😂 ur not wrong tho 😭

I though I could write the entire plot of a Christmas Carol is 30 mins. I was delusional

@MrEverythingEnglish

3 ай бұрын

😂

I was one of the COVID year students, and I write a story about a woman with her daughter sitting at the airport feeling extremely anxious and then seeing her husband and running to hug him. Got a solid 8 on that 👏 Our teacher also had a go at us after since we were supposed to write a story about "loneliness" but everyone just made theirs extremely personal and he got really uncomfortable reading them 💀

@austinhayles3049

Жыл бұрын

😂😂. I was in the Covid year aswell. I think we all did so badly on the question the first time that they actually made us rewrite a completely new one 😂😂😂

@ulomaa

2 ай бұрын

You guys have to read it out?

Miss this guy made me pass my English👌🏾

@TrashyPeachy_

Жыл бұрын

Me too 😎

@Skizz-iy7ou

Жыл бұрын

Same I was class of ‘22

@opsblock1026

5 ай бұрын

Factssss🎉

A girl took off her shoes in my English lang exam and her feet smelt so bad, I wrote about that and got a grade A (did my GCSEs just before number grades started 👵🏼)

@spongsquad

Жыл бұрын

oh hell naw

@Russian622

Жыл бұрын

LOL

@WSH3TM

Жыл бұрын

this comment made me laugh so hard

@cha0spretzel-534

Жыл бұрын

bro just flamed the shit out of a girl for her creative writing and got an A for it💀

@greeniscoollol

Жыл бұрын

It's easier to write about rhings you've experienced, I guess 😂😂

aqa just found the story to be relative to their own experiences

@kamijo0o0o

3 ай бұрын

fr my teacher said when writing your story you should remember these markers are getting paid minimum wage marking hundreds of papers and you need to write something relatable

Brother been through it to write that 💀💀💀

I wrote a story about a bureaucrat finding a severed ear on a park bench, then spiralling down a rabbit hole due to the absurdity of the situation. Grade 9, then I did one about the weather factory, where businessmen pour acid rain on protesters; Grade 7, then I did one about a child describing a room to his blind father, grade 5: go for absurd

@jibzzzzzzzzzio

3 ай бұрын

i wrote a story about smashing a vase. I got a Grade 9 in my exams. Write whatever you want.

@atlantic85

2 ай бұрын

i wonder what my planned steampunk gay romance about orcs will get

i wrote about some guy getting kidnapped by the devil because he didn’t pay his bbc license

@tabi122

2 ай бұрын

Can relate, if I go to hell that's why

@rubyemmott3563

Ай бұрын

LMFAOOO

@mohanakulam7930

Ай бұрын

his what license 💀

@tabi122

Ай бұрын

@@mohanakulam7930 lol £159 a year and no one really verifies you have one so it's probably one of the easiest crimes to commit

@eggonator3046

Ай бұрын

@@mohanakulam7930 tv license

As I said to my friend, he doesn't need to rewrite war and peace, just describe a moth buzzing around a room in insane detail and you will get far more marks

No it doesn't. It proves that good short stories turn on internal/character based conflict and resolution. But 100% agree that over ambitious plotting is a real downfall for students at GCSE.

@danielstuart6455

5 ай бұрын

No the English Language exam only cares about the English Language used in the exam. He's right.

I got grade 5 in English language had to get it remarked and a 6 in literature thanks to him in 2022.

@Dayvidalerxarndar

5 ай бұрын

Fax

This is why I never took English seriously. It’s completely up to the marker

@someoneontheinternet4518

Жыл бұрын

Sorry this is a cope

@dynamic7351

Жыл бұрын

Completely is an exaggeration. Examiner can be biased ofc but they still must mark based on the mark scheme they aren't given full freedom to mark how ever they like. Although there 100% is a good amount of personal bias involved it can easily be overcome if ur just good at writing. If ur good at writing u don't need to worry about ur examiner being biased or anything like that

@abortive1581

Жыл бұрын

English is honestly the most useless core subject for me im fluent in speaking english and dont plan on becoming an author ever and if i needed to write formally for a resume or something there is tons of ai programs that just fix punctuation

@frostborne7831

Жыл бұрын

@@abortive1581 there are way more reasons than that to do English

@abortive1581

Жыл бұрын

@@frostborne7831 like?

I wrote a story about a Spider-Man OC returning to the place his canon event took place in my mocks. All he did was look around the room, pick up the spider and then decide to fight the government for revenge. I got 38/40 for plagiarising off of ASTV and basically writing fanfiction 😭

@dangerbuffrocky

2 ай бұрын

What.

@riyadhzenith853

2 ай бұрын

What is OC ?

@dangerbuffrocky

2 ай бұрын

@@riyadhzenith853 original character

@senjitsu

Ай бұрын

WHAAAAAAAAYT

I wrote the plot of the TV show Vikings in my mock and my exam for GCSE English Language. Got 38/40 in the mock IIRC, it got me a 6 in the real exam 😅

@XhhdshvXhdbbdbd

6 ай бұрын

😂

@qasimkhan34

2 ай бұрын

no way what did u write about

i wrote about a priest 😂😂

@itsjennifertho635

10 ай бұрын

how much did you score?

@omarmohammd5276

5 ай бұрын

@@itsjennifertho635 pretty bad tbh. i thought i did so well

@user-cc6lt9lp2o

5 ай бұрын

What grade did you get?​@@omarmohammd5276

The grade shows the student’s competency in writing characters. You don’t always have time to develop a proper plot, so it’s better to develop and character and their internal conflict than to write a bunch of hemmed-in undeveloped nonsense.

I got a 5 in english language, got it remarked and it went up to a 7

Lol Harry Potter killed me 😂😂😂😂😂y😂

@Zacksiev

Жыл бұрын

How? Avarda kedarvra?

i write "the river moaned in satisfaction it was getting fed"

Wrote about fnaf 3 got like 28/40 😂

TELL ME ABOUT IT, MY LANGUAGE PAPAER TWO WAS ABOUT TRAINS

@dankboi42069

4 ай бұрын

did that one as a mock exam and got grade 3

@OfficialTMBS

4 ай бұрын

​@@dankboi42069I did that for mock as well, got grade 4, I thought I did so well but I was confused in question 2 and I ran out of time.

@zacrongaming2908

4 ай бұрын

@@dankboi42069 same bro although i got a 2...

@iforgor421

4 ай бұрын

@@dankboi42069 same bro i was 2 marks off a grade 4😭

@urmoonfaiiry

2 ай бұрын

Did that for a mock, it didn’t even get a grade 1

I wonder if i just wrote about skibidy toilet in INSANE detail i could get a 9

bro had us in the first half ngl

Yeah i mean it sounds like a basic, quaint story, probably more descriptive then narrative.

@lolasimpson-tg3ig

Жыл бұрын

they are attempting to destroy all creativity

@lolasimpson-tg3ig

Жыл бұрын

chatGPT could already outdo anyone with a vivid description. A captivating plot always requires more original thought - thus why they try and restrain it so much.

@articticcblu

5 ай бұрын

plot takes a long time to create, its not created in one spot whereas just describing the scene and creating the characters is much more easier. It does not need common sense !@@lolasimpson-tg3ig

@wippok42

2 ай бұрын

​@@lolasimpson-tg3igcopium

wait a second that’s what i wrote about for mine

@aminah9141

Жыл бұрын

so was it ur story then that he's talking about?

@lucidvibes8133

Жыл бұрын

@@aminah9141 LMAOOOOO

@Abdul-wahaabKhalil

Жыл бұрын

@@lucidvibes8133 cap

Me spending most of my time writing a story with good plot because it's just more fun :/

Basically the Examiners skipped the opening cutscene

My friend wrote abt terrorism and got 36/40. No one even noticed or told him of.

Yeah but I love creative writing so much that I forget to include language 😂 still got a 7 so I don’t really care too much

bruh how is that story getting 40/40

@Liverpoolarcool

7 ай бұрын

Because it’s not about the plot

Bro I wrote about some anime cut scene from Naruto, 😅In my mocks, in my mocks, Amma try it in ma GCSE too 😅

@saifshyha6458

Жыл бұрын

What did you get in your mocks?

@okok4981

Жыл бұрын

aha I also wrote about a scene from One Piece! What scene did you write?

@_Uchiha_Shisui

Жыл бұрын

Btw for those of you who are asking I got 37 out of 40 in the transactional writing

@_Uchiha_Shisui

Жыл бұрын

@@okok4981 great shinobi war

@heavenlyisay2122

Жыл бұрын

madara going on about the intricacy's of life would be as sick for dialogue

Drop that skin care routine king

@senjitsu

Ай бұрын

LOL

I wrote about a modern cruise ship getting attacked by the ghost of the bismark and got 35/40 😂

@senjitsu

Ай бұрын

LOL

i wrote about an exorcism and got 39/40. shoukdve just given me the extra mark.

@wardz21

3 ай бұрын

fr 😭

@senjitsu

Ай бұрын

WOW

I havnt seen this guy since last year for my GCSEs

we resonating with this one 🗣🗣🗣🗣🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Sylvia Plath had a novel like that to be fair

It's not about the story it's about how well it is written. Personally, just choose the simplest story: intro, climax, and end with the relaxation of the climactic point. Easier yet, don't do a story and just do description. :)

I wrote about a half alien-human hybrid adventuring through an abandoned artificial planet flying through space to find a mysterious piece of technology that could generate infinite energy with no cost. The character got killed, and it cuts to the guys on their radio losing it because they keep on dying, but never got close to the source. 34/40

wrote it. got a 1/40

@nuzzlelove

Ай бұрын

my heart genuinely goes out to you

I got my mock week tommorow, 2 french exams I’m the morning and 1 English paper at 1pm

Summary of the event: Write about your life

Really nice title man !

I wrote about a mammoth whose biological brother was a man but the mammoth was inside a cage in a zoo.

i wrote about a bird abandoning me at the zoo

I got 99 but acc studied and prepared some plots lol

so true man thank you

i wanna see the essey how do i find it

@leaves.-.

Жыл бұрын

kzread.info/dash/bejne/l2l3urZ-o5mqqLw.html there it is

I wrote about a chihuahua getting eaten by a dragon in a tree. It made zero sense but i still got 38/40

i wrote a story about a house floating in space and it flies into orbit and kills the guy inside i got 40/40 what the

I wrote a story about a 14 year old that might have schizophrenia and extreme amnesia, or something supernatural happened. Open to interpretation. I got 32/40

The mark you get for transactional and creative writing is basically just luck. You have to write a decent story but it could either get 28 or 40 marks based on who marks it

Bro i had to do this question for my PPE 😂

I once wrote about a talking fish whos from yorkshire

Where can we find the story

Sounds like Waiting For Godot

I AIJT putting no effort into my GCSE story now wtf 😭

Why am I watching this after finishing English 😭

I wrote about soldiers saving bunch of hostages from ter*orists, but ended up saving the ter*orist at the end.

In 2023 I wrote about a depressed girl who meets a cat got a grade 9 😁

I wrote about a guy drowning in a muddy puddle and got 34/40

I wrote about Harambe

Bro I wrote about an old dude no clipping into the Backrooms

@durveshmohammed2955

Жыл бұрын

Oooh, how'd that one turn out?

@arathan9305

Жыл бұрын

Nah bruh I’m actually planning to do something about the backrooms for creative writing. How many marks did you get?

They really love short plots

I wrote about my first encounter with honey bee and got 40 i thought id fail i just did that because i was hopeless and got full😂

@dylan-kv5xu

Жыл бұрын

the question yesterday for you mustve been a godsend

Well i got 30/40 talking about how cold weather affects someone

Wait people try to rewrite Harry potter isn't that just being unoriginal

Well yeah they don’t give a shit about the story itself it’s just how many methods you can throw into it

Is it advised to write your own story or write about the image they give you?

Tried to write a story about a guy who stabbed another guy in a knife fight. Somehow turned into a gay romance 37/40

I thought it was 39/40 😂 still gud tho

Someone really should rewrite Harry Potter tho because JK is no longer fit for purpose.

@user-fu8bf1go4z

Жыл бұрын

she is

@silentaimer

Жыл бұрын

​@@XDawggg being a vince cuh enjoyer means ur lgbtqphobic xdddd just like me

@Buggy_DClown

Жыл бұрын

What’s the problem with her

@fortnite-kq7ok

Жыл бұрын

@@Buggy_DClown well you see feminism is great until you challenge the pedos, then you're hated by everyone

@securitybreach5182

Жыл бұрын

@@Buggy_DClown Apparently it's because she's Transphobic?

Maybe it was relatable to the examiner

where can i find the story

Where can I find it I’m interested now

@leaves.-.

Жыл бұрын

kzread.info/dash/bejne/l2l3urZ-o5mqqLw.html the first 5 minutes, cant find the actual source tho

Modern waiting for Godot

I mean i wrote a story about a guy washing his hands and the bacteria suffering a horrible death and it got a 9 so 🤷‍♀️

I wrote a fever dream

Is this the case for educas?

@kta6120

Жыл бұрын

Why tf schools choose the unknown examboards to do

@ventaliq

9 ай бұрын

@@kta6120exactly what is that

@lucid6392

6 ай бұрын

no don't try that on eduqas bad idea

@hamzatastekin5731

6 ай бұрын

@@lucid6392i have already finished my gcse’s bro but thank you😂

Nah cause in my exam I actually started to write abt the start of the first Harry Potter and realised half way thru

🔥🔥

story of my life 😪

@ollyshow

6 ай бұрын

Amd what did you get

I based mine off one piece anime

Ikr so annoying 😮

@LukaBlazic-mz3uc

6 ай бұрын

Ik!

Okay wow.. plot doesn’t matter

OHHHHH

i had a similar story but i failed :(

Write what you know !!!!!!

Ye they never had the plot

top lad

😮😮😮😢

Or AQA could just teach relevant stuff for our future and not BS

There is one God, who created Heaven and Earth. He made us in His image and likeness. He made us to worship and we chose to rebel against God. As a result we are seperated from God but God didn’t leave us. Instead God sent His one and only Son, His Son is Jesus. He was born of a virgin and lived a life without sin, though He was tempted in every way as we are. He went on the cross and He willingly took our sins past, present and future. Jesus died in my place for my sins, paying my debt to God and purchasing my salvation. Jesus died but He rose on the third day victory over satan, sin, demons and hell. Jesus tells us to share this story of the Good News and there’s a God that lovingly pursues us. Jesus is coming to judge the living and the dead and those who trust in God will forever be with Him in His Kingdom and those who do not will suffer forever in hell.

@LegendaryHeroponRiki

3 ай бұрын

fine speech

0:08

where is it!

@leaves.-.

Жыл бұрын

kzread.info/dash/bejne/l2l3urZ-o5mqqLw.html