Imagine finding out that your ancestors could flying headbutt the shit out of Federation soldiers and leap around like a mexican jumping bean while shooting enemies. Then imagine you also find an audio file of an ancient Venlil military marching song like this. Makes this a somber song knowing the Dossur permanently disfigured the Venlil's legs to prevent them from having any natural weapons against enemies.

@tracygoode3037

2 ай бұрын

Not the Dossur--the Farsul. Frankly, the Farsul deserved worse than being jailed on their homeworld for what they did.

@kilorat

2 ай бұрын

@@tracygoode3037 One of the topics explored in NoP is holding whole races accountable for the actions of a group. Most of the Farsul on Mileau believed the lies and didn't know of the horrible things done by the shadow caste. It's an interesting topic to explore, my takeaway is there should be consequences, but laser focused on those that knowingly participated. Also there should be a path to redemption for them, otherwise it just radicalizes them, causing future problems. I thought the Kessler Cage was interesting idea, but not good long term, the SC should have occupied them like the allies did with Germany after WWII, and put them on a path of reintegration, not isolation

@Soloong_Gaybowzer

Ай бұрын

@@kilorat Yeah but at some point a society is responsible for it's worst bad actors. Especially if those bad actors were in a government the people consented to. Thing of the USSR. The people suffered under it's rule and during it's fall. But no one came to help them. They made their beds, and had to lay in them.

@DraconicKobold

28 күн бұрын

@@kilorat I agree. I think its implied they will do something like this once the arxur conflict comes to an end.

while im not a big fan of AI, the way you use it is awesome, i just hope it doesnt get out of hand, amazing work

@adastra1978

Ай бұрын

Thanks, I believe that AI should be used to enhance art, not replace it 😊

@Dadwar_Dev

Ай бұрын

@@adastra1978 well it has most definitely enhanced the nature of predators story, i just hope that everyone uses it this way

I wonder this would sound as an epic orchestral piece? You should try doing that with it!

I've finished it off and my plan is to use it on the series end credits with my patreon/donations supporters...

Man your gonna have to make a movie by the time your done 😂❤

@mountainbear1000

2 ай бұрын

Can you imagine the anime version? Epic

@Keslefin

2 ай бұрын

spacepaladin should try get in contact with a studio, to make movie or series from why humans avoid war and NOP.

@danielwolfgang8234

Ай бұрын

honestly, the entire NoP universe deserves its own franchise of movies, tv shows and games.

*signals patriotism in tail language*

@littleredpony6868

28 күн бұрын

Long live Skalga

Sounds great!!

I like it. Well done.

This is the song we'll hear at the intergalactic olympics huh? I dig it.

Sounds great... whatever AI you got it's really good.

I want this song on my Spotify.😄

Gotta love little projects like this that add to the world building 😊 Kind of reminds me a bit of Ensiferum, a band that does orchestral mixed with metal.

@bobspldbckwrds

2 ай бұрын

Holy crap! I've never run across anyone else who knew about them. I saw them way back in the day when they were on tour with tyr and korpiklanni. Thanks for reminding me of happy times.

I feel the viking vibe you're going for works great considering they're a warrior culture and their species needs to essentially drink jet fuel to get drunk

@RantingDireWolf

2 ай бұрын

Humans drink jet fuel too, its mosthly ethenol, aka alcahol, unless you mean they drink harder than a irishman and russian at a collage party? 😂

Would love to hear an extended version with a translation to English possibly

[Verse 1] Nelna Venlil, in Skalga dren, Belim tirna, zilvren wen. Faldir jenno, vilim ser, Venlil silna, nevren der. [Chorus] Oh, Skalga, gilno ter, Venlil zenna, firno ver. Eldin kerna, jilva neer, Skalga, Skalga, venlil veer. [Verse 2] Jilna vendil, Skalga feen, Tilven sernil, liven seen. Vilna jendil, kerva der, Venlil minda, skerva ner. [Bridge] Zilna verna, kilva deen, Skalga, Skalga, silva keen. Venlil rinda, gelva veer, Nelna, nelna, silveer meer. [Chorus] Oh, Skalga, gilno ter, Venlil zenna, firno ver. Eldin kerna, jilva neer, Skalga, Skalga, venlil veer.

@Mr.Michel69

2 ай бұрын

Put ancient Venlil as background

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

@@Mr.Michel69 it sort of is, or at least how far I've got with it up til now. Still needs tweaking a bit.

@Mr.Michel69

2 ай бұрын

@@adastra1978 Like the straight legs?

@yoannbelleville7763

2 ай бұрын

I there a translated version? I would love to know the meanning of these verses.

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

@@yoannbelleville7763 not yet, I kind of left this up to the imagination 😊

The song sounds good and we need to hear more of such excellent content.

wy do i hear german whit a pinch of rock?

@danielwolfgang8234

Ай бұрын

it´s certainly rooted in germanic, but it´s not german.

Ancient Venlil look even cuter than the manipulated ones by the look of this one. Yet from the records they were definitely no pushovers. Makes me hope they reverse engineer the cure.

@giosuepolatod.8662

2 ай бұрын

Remember if is cute we would even pet a lion

@Virtualblueart

2 ай бұрын

@@giosuepolatod.8662I’m well aware. If it’s cute we tend to lose our sense of self preservation sometimes. 😅 And that tendency a part of this sci-fi universe too.

Could imagine this as an afrobeat

Being Swedish I feel like I should understand the lyrics but I don't... Kinda like how it feels with the other nordic languages especially Icelandic.. Also has a bit of a Slavic touch to it. Would love more of it 😂

@danielwolfgang8234

Ай бұрын

Honestly, it sounds to me like a mix of various germanic and western slavic lenguages.

Are you familiar with the Playing By Ear fanfiction in the NoP subreddit? The author might love something like this.

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

That's interesting, I'll look into this - thank you 😊

@VeliusWav

2 ай бұрын

@@adastra1978 You're welcome. I can drop you a link to the first chapter if it would help, but I don't want to link bomb your comment section without permission.

Did you make this just now!?!? Super cool! Do you think that the ancient venlil would've used electronic instruments, though? Or would it have been more drums, woodwinds, and vocalizations?

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

Thanks 😊 I think they might have had a fairly advanced level of technology before the federation found them but I'm not completely sure 🤔

@So_Iace

2 ай бұрын

@@adastra1978 ahh ok I wasn't sure if the fact that they still engaged in duels meant that they were in like early 1800s levels of technology at the most

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

@@So_Iace I'm not sure if SP ever mentions this 🤔

@So_Iace

2 ай бұрын

@@adastra1978 if you get the itch to play around with a more archaic sound I think Heilung would be an interesting group to draw inspiration from since some of their songs are in old Norse which Icelandic is a dialect of.

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

@@So_Iace yeah, I might have a crack at that 😊 really pleased with suno ai right now, they've well upped their game with the music generation on version 3 here. That was it's first try and it very nearly got it perfect!

love it man

Spotify?

How did you make this? Also can you post the lyrics?

Very dope 😎

Absolutely no link with the video, do you have a discord?

Considering they say that their birth defect involves involved, legs being bent inwards. That would mean their legs were similar to ours.

Well this is now an mp3, thanks ]: )

Really nice. Although I'll be honest, with recent historical discoveries I was expecting something a little more...Metal. 😂

Thanks this will live in my nightmares

The spoilers in the comment sections are beginning to actually ruin the story for me. This will be my last comment for the algorithm gods Adastra. Please keep up the good work.

It's so perfect😂

Shouldn't their pitch by funny and high or something, like the space squirrels they are? 🐿🐿🐿🤔😂😂😂 Awesome production! Really, if you continue like this then this story will be ready for cinema production or a TV series. Maybe you should raise funds through a campaign or something, I'm serious!

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

In all fairness it's SpacePaladin15 who owns all the IP rights, this channel is just my interpretation of his work. Kind of like a tribute sort of thing. I just have permission to narrate right now.

@theFutureSoundWaves

2 ай бұрын

@@adastra1978 Oh, I forgot that... you can still suggest that to him, maybe even kick him in the nuts if he refused 🤔😂😂😂 Anyways, you've done a great job. 👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥

@brianviger2798

2 ай бұрын

He's got a point. It seems like there are enough of us who take interest to get a croud funding campaign going. Why humans avoid war is written well enough for a screen adaptation as well. That's one of the things I loveabout SPs writing style. You are probably the only one who could get a hold of him. I've got an indy film director buddy who would probably be on board if wr had a starting point. I'll be in Manchester late may but I could make the drive up for a lunch meeting if you want to talk shop.

Suno AI?

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

That's the one! 😊

Is it German?

@adastra1978

2 ай бұрын

It's a made up language based on Viking 😊

@LannyX2

2 ай бұрын

​@@adastra1978Bragi Smiles upon you. SKÅL

did someone make a conlang for Venlil, or are these just silables stiched together?

@davidhand9721

2 ай бұрын

I tried the "translate to English" button, but nothing happened. It's probably gibberish.

I am not going to lie I am vehemently against AI usage in art. However this whole story and now this song has kept me enthralled through the whole and I cant wait for every weeks next chapter.

This is amazing

Venlil Going to war at last ?

Ready to go to war boys.

I'd reckon skalgan are a bit taller due to their with longer legs and arms...are a bit more muscular have actual ram horns horns (with all the ramming they do lol)

It sounds dope

SKÅL Furry Bruddas!!! 🍻 Update: My Puppy loves this song! He starting singing as soon as it started to play. Bragi smiles upon you, my Friend.

Getting Eurovision vibes

Very cool, translate to english is teally struggling though!! Lol

Who else looks at the Venlil and is reminded of the Ungoy from Halo? Anyone... No just me? Ok then

looks too much like a furry made it, the original concept pics you made were much better. good song

Imagine how the present Venlil would react to such beaty from their so called "savageancestors"❤

Loving thes lyrics