Wait, a mere captain is representing all of humanity, and also giving orders to an admiral and a general? wtf is going on?

@jagernavet4468

Ай бұрын

That's what happens when people write stories without any clue as to how the military rank structure is.

@terrygerhart6878

Ай бұрын

You did not know he is not a Captain, he is a Capitan. Higher than high, mightier than mighty. Besides Brandon called in and the AG at Galactic headquarters was fired.

@bbryan1973

Ай бұрын

Meanwhile in the NCO ranks…”Specialist Riker ordered Sergeant Major Vance to retreat because the tension was palpable”.

@josefhyatt2780

Ай бұрын

​@bbryan1973 the tension is ALWAYS "palatable" in these stories!!!!😂😂😂😂😂

@geofthompson3844

Ай бұрын

​@@josefhyatt2780palatable? Or palpable?😂

The writer does not seem to know where a captain is placed in the chain of command. 😮

@CryptidsRoost

Ай бұрын

Because majority of these stories are written by AI, usually ChatGPT

@oliveriobarro4505

Ай бұрын

Captain is a O-6

@joanwagner2538

Ай бұрын

So much for AI being so Smart 🙄

@STB-jh7od

Ай бұрын

It's been done before, using lowest ranking soldier available to represent one side to humiliate enemies during negotiations.

@chesleychris

27 күн бұрын

@@oliveriobarro4505 In the Army a Captain is a 0-3

You can tell these stories are mostly written by AI, usually ChatGPT coz names etc are almost always the same... James, Zara, etc and ships are mostly called Resolute or Indomitable lol

The human troops fueled by adrenaline and determination....BS! WE'RE FUELED BY COFFEE AND HATE!!!! 😂😂😂😂

@tonyv8925

Ай бұрын

And, fresh pop-tarts...lol

@brettread6373

Ай бұрын

As a Brit l really think it was a backwards step when they stopped the Rum ration in the armed force's The Dutch issued Gin hence Dutch courage ( I think that's right)

@STB-jh7od

Ай бұрын

Damn Skippy!!

@mikehenthorn1778

5 күн бұрын

And the Marines are fueled by crayons. Lol never be the work that has to be done before a crayon snack and a nap.

@josefhyatt2780

5 күн бұрын

@@mikehenthorn1778 Leave the red ones alone!!!! THEY'RE MINE!!!! Semper Fidelis and as always YAT-YAS!!! PALADIN SENDS

Space is an area of endless blackness, broken by small pinpricks of light. So, how do you start a battle at dawn?

@glitch_the_dragon

Ай бұрын

They more than likely didn’t mean literally. I personally believe he is saying that for the sake of the moment. Others may take it differently, though.

@bobalicious2696

Ай бұрын

It's ZULU time, duh! Otherwise known as GMT.

@steyraug96

Ай бұрын

You've heard the expression, "It's 5 PM somewhere," right? 😉

The spelling errors in the text window are hilarious.

"Appointed representative," would indicate that he's been empowered in this situation by a higher power (president, legislature, commander in chief), to have primary command over this situation. Not a stretch that he could order those higher in the chain of command in said situation.

Martian a bipedal insectoid with an exoskeleton? I thought there's no plant/animals in Mars. Is this setting not in this universe or not in this times? A mere captain giving orders to an admiral and a general?

As am listening the command structure is backwards

Aside from the horriable military refrences, why did the council care about the deaths and downfall of the agressive empire.

@yeetsahoy7867

24 күн бұрын

Probably for balance of the galactic order, like if this one is replaced will it be replaced by someone worse or will the void be filled with multiple others causing more war, chaos and death. Only the writer would know

@privateperson5054

24 күн бұрын

@@yeetsahoy7867 Thats the point. The writer should have written the answer.

I'm not even half way through. I'm greatly enjoying the story line. finally something different

@MrSciFiUniverse

Ай бұрын

Thank you for your feedback!!!! 😊💯

Why would you put troops on the ground when you can just destroy the shipyards from space.

I thought they were going to attack the supply lines, not the shipyards, but then they did just the opposite.

Why is an Admiral and a General briefing a mere Captain? A VERY junior officer?

Retreat? He'll, we just got here.

The new AI stories are getting better, still a lot of rambling story but still palatable. Read a Harlequin romance novel intend for women who came of age in the 50s 60s 70s and 80s, not my topic of interest but readable and well written. So to will AI reach this level of authorship.

@garygough3158

Ай бұрын

Harlequin tried their formula on SF too, ref "Laser Publications" . Give an outline to a ghost writer, send that to a committee to remove large words, anything controversial or thought provoking, publish. Total waste of paper and failed spectacularly.

Admirals and Generals commanded by a captain, must be a James Tiberius Kirk wanna be

We had those as a Paratrooper when I was stationed in Italy, they're a little spooky, lol

YES! Noone seems to really understand military ranks, esp the Navy (a captain is equiv to a colonel), not a general

A choke point in space? Do writer know the vastness of space?

@rainemiller5016

Ай бұрын

Play stellaris, and you'll get the idea of it

@TheSilverKK

Ай бұрын

@@rainemiller5016 will try thank you

@steyraug96

Ай бұрын

Paired black holes, perhaps, orbiting each other, in a sense? Multiple Meteor fields?

Even if you consider him as a Navy Captain, which is in the army a Full Bird Colonel, he is still Jr to an Admiral and a General.

You need to fix the rank structure.

The story concept was good and the flow not bad, but the execution was bad. As others commented a Captain representing the Earth then ordering Admirals and Generals around is totally BS.

when does a captain order an admiral

@barelyasurvivor1257

Ай бұрын

In AI Stories, and people ignorant of Military Ranks

Was wondering how a mear captain was giving orders to both an admiral and general. This is not how the chain of command is done captains are lower than a general or an admiral. Someone didn't do here homework 🙃

I dont mind the ai voice over, but these ai stories are all the same bro. 😭

Should have answered that there would never be true peace while yheir Emperor lived.

You need to forget the words "determination" and "resolute". They're like a drug to you. Your writing can't progress with them. Get a "thesaurus".

@edwardroche2480

25 күн бұрын

This is a whole lot better than some of them they use the same words hundreds of times to describe the same events

Future things change

6:50 AI.... Not drivel. But shows an amazing lack of understanding of the setting and its own 'worldbuilding'.

Well I've officially listened to enough of these to learn that when the author uses the word palpable the story is mediocre at best.

Great battles are ahead for humanity this is just the beginning, it's our DNA. 😊

"We strike at dawn" WTF? In space there is no dawn... SMH

What I'm more interested in is that every story I've listened to from this channel either has a chunk missing or starts over from the beginning somewhere in the middle. Thumbs down, again!

Like most of these stories creators ..... they have no idea of the "Chain of Command" or of positions of top command officers. I've listened to dozens of stories with mere "Lieutenants" as executive officers. That would only happen on a very small command. And there are always the same tired phrases and dialogue in every story.

"We strike at dawn" has no meaning in space

why is a ship's captain telling an Admiral and a General what to do

@tonyv8925

Ай бұрын

Ship's Captain has exclusive authority on his/her ship.

@danielh6015

Ай бұрын

That is true but he can’t order around an admiral nor other captains , which is what he is doing . An admiral would lead the squadron of ships with each captain having control of their specific ship. This isn’t happening here

What a crappy ending

If you would use real voice actors instead of AI, I'd respect this.

minute stories ... written in 1 minute without any knowledge on the subject ...

Weak Ending WTF is this Peace Talk. Alien Lizards Attack we WRECK THEM.😊

I don't think I've listened to one of these stories yet that hasn't used the word "cacophony." Also, whoever, or whatever, is doing your auto-text sucks. The same words get misspelled, incorrect words on the screen that don't match the voice, etc. Also, when referring to a Naval ship, or star ship, the first time the name is used is U.S.S. xxxx, thereafter it's just xxxx.

Wow... At least decide how you're going to spell the alien race consistently in the captions... So sloppy. You'd think they'd teach ChatGPT how to spell...

Low Rent, Scuffed, Offbrand Mass Effect knockoff.

Lousy narration. Jumps forward to completely different sequence of events

I thought of Israel and Hamas when I listened to this story.