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@tydunivan

11 ай бұрын

No, dude, let the assholes be assholes, so everyone else can tell them that they’re assholes!

@jeremyfinch2835

11 ай бұрын

As a self-admitted Trek-a-holic, I subscribe to almost every Star Trek related channel on KZread; yours is my newest subscription! First, I HAVE to take my hat off to your writer/writers! Whoever s/he/they are...do whatever you must to keep them in your group! This isn't just solar dust I'm beaming up your blackhole. The vocabulary and stylization of spoken words have helped the actors who have little or no experience. Honestly, you have a treasure in your midst! Further, I enjoyed your FX quite a bit. You blended the real and the digital as smoothly as I've ever seen in a home-made production. Mega kudos! As a suggestion, have a couple of people in your team switch roles with a couple others. For example, the producer switches with the director, the final editor with assistant editor. Change of jobs creates (sometimes) very happy 'accidents' as we know from George Lucas and his wife re: STAR WARS. GRILL your actors to discover ALL their talents! (singing, make-up, foreign accents, animal husbandry, etc) And from there, USE THEM in production. Sorry for over-sharing! But, when I see all the potential coming from your team....well, I get EXCITED! Best wishes in all future endeavors! Gracias! I look forward for your next production with GREAT expectations!

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

@@jeremyfinch2835 Thank you! Sincerely that was very kind of you!

@SpacialKatana

10 ай бұрын

@@joshuairwin2016 Not enough beam slicing action, I could fix that for you 😁

@grgaassc

10 ай бұрын

yeh!

Did not have a clue that Star Trek fan films even existed until about a week ago. I love this stuff! Thanks.

"You're making this **** up." "I'm flattered you think I'm that creative" LMAO

now this, this is star trek. improvise, adapt, overcome. work together to solve the problem. live long and prosper.

@joestitz239

Ай бұрын

Your describing marines with overcome adapt n such

@thurin84

Ай бұрын

@@joestitz239 yep. but there were a bunch of marines in the formation of starfleet. at least as long as the crayons held out lol. sempre fidelis all you devildogs.

I'll always enjoy a Star trek production done by true fans of the franchise.

Up there in Star Trek Continues country! Oh Paramount, let these wonderful people make full length episodes. Aside from showing you up, what harm could they do?

Excellent episode. Everyone has become so natural in their roles. Tyler (Mason) picking up the fallen over comms as it gets knocked over was so natural, I didn't even consider it was an error that Tyler just rolled with. Cheers for sharing that story at the Q&A after show!

@calanon534

8 ай бұрын

..that was an error? It seemed like comedic timing, to me. "Brother, please, you're making a mess of my staff table.."

Now that is what Star Trek is all about. One of the better episodes ever.

I like how they combined the old-school look of TOS with the visual effects of newer movies/films; VERY cutting-edge! 🖖

@joshuairwin2016

4 ай бұрын

Thank you Chris!!!!

Excellent!!! WOW.. Loved the DREADNOUGHT (of course!).. Great seeing Captain Mason back in the saddle!

@joshuairwin2016

10 ай бұрын

Thanks Gary! And thank you for helping us with The Dreadnought and The Romulan Warbird!

The engineer looks and sounds so done 😭😭😭 "There are a lot of people injured down here, and a couple people dead 🙄🙄🙄" 😭😭😭😭😭😭 She's so funny and it makes it so much better 😭😭😭

This is why fans make better Star Trek films or shows than CBS/Paramount/Viacom.

LOVE this as always! Love Capt Mason and Jamie especially.

I LOVE ALL THE ADVENTURES OF THE STARSHIP EXCALIBUR! I LIKE HOW THE STARSHIP YORKTOWN GOT INTRODUCED. I AM SO EXCITED TO SEE MORE ADVENTURES OF CAPTAIN DEREK MASON AND COMMANDER JAMIE ARCHER! I AM A HUGE STAR TREK FAN! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

i have to say Captain Mason is my fav fan trek captain so far

Now that's Star Trek 😊 Can't wait for the next installment !!!! 👍🏻🖖

Nice to see a Federation class dreadnaught in this.

With Respect, MASON IS STILL THE MAN!!!!!! Live Long & Prosper.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

He is, isn't he!!

@wcwbulldog1701

11 ай бұрын

@@joshuairwin2016 Thank You For This Wonderful Universe.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

@@wcwbulldog1701 Thank you for supporting us!

Everything from Avalon Universe is first class and well done. Can't wait for the next episode.

So psyched for this! Been waiting to watch it since I got the notification a couple of days ago. It already looks great! 👍👽💫🛸

That was so cool!! Keep up the great work. Love all the ships, especially the Dreadnought!

Great film as always! It's going to be hard to wait until 2024.

Wow, every episode raises the bar. Your stories are compelling, the acting, well, just wow, and the SFX truly awesome. Thank you so much, LLAP!

You should be very proud of this. Great episode!

Getting better and better. Thank you for the mischievously enjoyable stories.

I wanted this episode to keep going. Excellent work guys

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thanks Randy! More is coming!

Top notch work. Enjoyed the heck out of this!!!

This was amazing! Thank you to everyone who was involved!

Always excellent work all round moving the bar up higher in every episode released to us fans.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you Ian!

Dreadnought at 14:44 was cool. Thx for bringing back Star Trek. I've been starving for some good Trek

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

You are very welcome! Thank you for watching! 😎

The voiceover at the beginning...that reminds me of what they did with the first season of War Of The Worlds TV series in 1988-1989.

As expected. You delivered a top notch story once again.

Glad to see another Avalon production. And also glad to see you're keeping with physical controls on the ships, not touch screens which in my opinion would be a really bad idea for a ship that will likely see combat.

I loved it... Looking forward to more adventures !!!!

This member of the blind and visually impaired community thanks you for this episode. We only have storylines and plots to go on. The comments tell me that the visuals are pretty awesome and the acting is also awesome. I only have voices to go on. It’s pretty believable. Great work. I can’t wait for the next one.

@avalonuniverse6327

10 ай бұрын

Thank you Allen! That was very kind of you! We're very glad you enjoyed it!

@ericmadsen7470

9 ай бұрын

@@avalonuniverse6327 I noticed that Mason said the Yorktown was hit twice and later on the bridge of the Chamberlin Mason said the Yorktown was hit once. Was that on purpose and left in or was it a blooper?

@KentonBenfield

9 ай бұрын

@@ericmadsen7470 The initial conversation included the initial "25%" disruptor opening attack, the ploy to raise Yorktown's shields. The 2nd attack was the single (and devastating) plasma torpedo attack.

You know what? Anyone can be critical of details, but having some knowledge of how much actual work goes into something like this, all I can say about your effort is this: That was fun!

I think its a really nice touch that you've included BTS photos during the end credits. A great reminder of the teamwork and fun that comes with making a fan film! :) Looking forward to the next one.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

I really appreciate that! The teamwork, and the fun experience that we all have doing this, is the most important part of it to me. We make fan films, because we love it. Your team does too, and it always shows!

Loved it! Tyler Dunivan as Captain Mason, is perfect casting. Serious storyline, but with fun elements. Facial expressions were great!

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you! As one of my best friends of 30+ years. I knew he could pull it off!

I liked how you used the shuttle. So many ST disaster stories never use the shuttle;s engines, life support, etc.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you! It was a custom designed shuttle by Samuel Cockings!

You guys didn't disappoint! 😊 I enjoy the touches of humour that you always dab gently through the script. The use of reflections in the first part is creative and adds depth to the set. I honestly look forward to the next episode. Thank you to everyone who worked on this fan production. 👏

Great fun! The opening have me slight goosebumps! 5:25

I like this, as a startrek fan I really enjoyed this.

It looks great, guys! Fun, seeing my alter ego on the screen. This Klingon Commander can't wait to blow up your ship!

Great job, Avalon crew! Can't wait for more.

This remind’s of the old Star Trek serie’s,but,with new actor’s!It’s still so amazing 😻 how popular Star Trek has become!But,I suppose,we want happy future’s no matter what timeline that we’re in!Live long and prosper!As Mr.Spock alway’s said in the show.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you for your kind words! 🙂

Yes. Proper Trek. I'm enjoying this stuff

@avalonuniverse6327

6 ай бұрын

Thank you! We're glad you like it!

I love these fan made episodes. Some are a bit clunky, but they do a great job considering they don't have anywhere near the budget of the actual professional TV series and movies.

I love the idea of Mason having a Klingon half brother. Partly because of my own head-cannon that during the Romulan Wars a Captain T.C. Chang saved a Klingon crew from a dishonersble death at the hands of a Romulan Cabbage and was rewarded appropriately. And thus the name Chang entered Klingon nomanclature.

It is amazing how good this is. I look forward to the next episode.

This was amazing! I love this universe and these crews! Kudos to everyone involved in bringing these incredible stories to us. I can't wait for the next one!

Thank you. That was fun. 😊

Damn Good! You get better each time. We are all proud of YOU ALL!

Bravo!!! Go team Avalon!! Loved the deflector trick!!

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thanks Captain Jennings! Looking forward to seeing you in the next episode!

FINALLY A GOOD TREK FILM ...... AWESOME WORK PEOPLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you!

as always fantastic love every moment. LLAP

These are much better quality than I would have thought! Good work folks! Keep the dream alive!

@joshuairwin2016

10 ай бұрын

Thank you very much! It's challenging. But rewarding!

Every episode from "Ghost ship" to this is fresh and interesting. I was hooked from beginning to end. Well done!

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you Jonathan! I really appreciate that!

I loved this little movie! I love Star Trek

"You, be careful." "Never." Good line.

WOW,really GOOD episode,enjoyed it immensely. Reminds me of classic TOS episodes.I enjoyed this episode more than watching SNWS ( they focus more on cgi/special effects than storylines and character development ) IMO. WELL DONE. Live Long and Prosper

Awesome cool series!! Way way better than what paramount is currently producing 👍

I love it! The opening minutes are a fun adventure, and then you hit us with the traditional Star Trek (Klingon 🤩) twist, and then an interesting Romulan mystery plot to be concluded. The costumes were especially well done. It's a great setup for the the next part of the story. I look forward to it.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you like it!

Your love of Trek burns brightly. 🖖 Well done 👍 enjoyed this very much. You deserve more praise than I am capable of giving. Nicely done 🤘

Love the Avalon Universe. Hope to see more in the future.

Great writing and Tyler rocks

Love you guys, the CG and the acting is still on point, Bravo Valisemo Maestro.

Thank you. Well done!

Long live the STAR TREK fan productions!

That deflector trick was like using a laser cutter blind, but it worked! You know how much I loved seeing another new film from you guys. I hope you're going to keep him and Archer working together when you conclude this era of Avalon Universe. And dude! I missed it during the premiere, but the Romulans captured a cosmic stream alien?! That's like how Ransom and the Equinox crew were using those alien eel creatures to power their warp drive! One observation, though... In the first scene between Mason and Archer in Engineering, Tyler's not looking at Victoria, he's looking downward, either like she wasn't there (they filmed the scene at different times?) or he was reading off cue cards.

Yes to another adventure in the Avalon Universe. And with each installment, the acting and storytelling gets better and better. 10:49 LMAO

Enjoyed watching. Thanks for posting.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank YOU for watching!

Loving it! Excellent Job Well Done!!!! Please do more!! Thanks for all the superb episodes this far. Tyler you're looking fantastic with the beard!! Awesome Dude!

Thank you for another fine short. I just wish the hands where not tied, so as to make full length shows. Love the Avalon Universe

This is one of the better fan produced Star Treks. The "Lost Starship" episode was well done also.

Non-stop action - compelling, unexpected surprise; i.e. Mason's Human/ Klingon family history! . . . Great job, guys! It's gonna be a long wait till A.D. 2024, but I'm anticipating a great next episode; keep up the good work, guys. ... Live Long & Prosper. 🖖💚

Not bad chaps, you've re-created the TOS universe really well. Keep it up! :-)

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thanks man! 😎

That was terrific. Thank you.

Man! That 1st 5 minutes is INCREDIBLE! You guys are killin it! Realism, accuracy, effects, acting, LCARS++, etc.! So well done, even the little touches like a floppy disc similar to the one Spock held up in a TOS episode in about 1966. Keep it up! My ONLY criticism: Please consider toning down Victoria's lipstick color. It's beautiful, but a bit distracting.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thanks for the kind words. Unfortunately VA's material for the rest of the series was all shot at the same time. So, it is what it is.

Absolutely Awesome story well done right up there with anything paramount is putting out keep up the awesome work your keeping the soul of Star Trek Alive 💯❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Wow. The special effects and sets are amazing. Takes me back to my childhood TOS days. (None of this Apple store, or 2023 updated stuff. Real knobs, blinking lights, in the control panel.). I'm normally skeptical of fan films, esp. the acting. But this is not bad.

@joshuairwin2016

10 ай бұрын

Thank you! I appreciate the kind words. We're just trying to make fun adventures for fellow fans!

I love the Avalon Universe. Almost a complete split from the regular series

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you! Yes it does have its own creative direction.

Starts with a great story hook 🪝😁

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thanks! I am glad you liked it! 😎

Absolutely Amazing Episode!!!! I love captain Mason and I hope you guys can continue to tell stories in this universe!!!!

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you Jesse!

Enjoyed the episode ! Looking forward to future ones !

Excellent job on the acting and special effects for this series.

Ok, this was really good and there's one of my fave unspoken starships in it.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

I'm a big fan of the Dreadnought myself!

@LostInTheFarmersMarket

11 ай бұрын

@@joshuairwin2016 They really did 'er justice, also I can totally see it being a admiral level ship.

Seriously this is awesome fan work. So glad this keeps popping up in my KZread thingee.

Another Fantastic episode!Well done to everyone involved!🖖😊

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you!

That was incredible. Great storyline and very good grapics. I can't wait for more.

Fantastic guys!

Excellent work - so well put together and acted. Thank you for some very convincing Star Trek!! 🚀

Hope I don't get moderated out: The Avalon Universe is one of my favorite fan universes. This is a particularly well-done episode. The acting is good, and the costumes are really good. Looking forward to more in this.

Good stuff. Thanks for the work you do.

I’m impressed this is a very good show. I’ve watched all the others episodes and they just keep getting better and better. We definitely need more episodes like this. Good job guys 👍👍👍 definitely be watching for more.

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thank you! I really appreciate you saying that. It means a lot to us!

This is great stuff...now if only Paramount would hire you guys we all might get great Trek again!!! QAPLA!!

@jonathanbrown7250

10 ай бұрын

I wrote a whole diatribe about what a bunch of idiots Paramount is to hire incompetent mutton-heads when there's real talent out here in youtube-land. But I used so many naughty words to describe the Paramount execs and the mutton-heads they hired, I think the mods had to take it down.

It Warms my Heart to see another episode thanks for the Good Work and By All Means Keep It Up!!! 🖖🤠

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thanks! And you got it!

Well you got me hooked I’m very impressed by this. A round of applause you deserve.

Fantastic episode!

@joshuairwin2016

11 ай бұрын

Thanks!

Really enjoying the series. Thanks for giving us something great to look forward to in 2024. :O)

That was such a well realized battle. Well done.