Write what you think of the story.

@DavidClark-es1ww

Ай бұрын

Two of everything including wives, suns, bioluminescent plants, Blue's skins, anti gravity cars, scales and etc.! Just waiting for palpable to show up!😮😊🤔🤤

@denisborile8462

Ай бұрын

Si le voglio

Very interesting. Wish there were more of it.

Better than most. just make sure things don't get too repetative like some do. stretching a 20 minute story into a boring 35 minutes is a waste of my time and brain cells.

It was a joy to hear ,,unexpected turn in the middle👍

Great story 2 👍🏻 up. 💯

Loved it, thanks again!

So far all of your stories are top notch

Outstanding video 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Brilliant, loved the story

A'ight 🐺

Great out of the box story line. Enjoyed it very much.

I have similar story just like that i create in 1992 when i play a game on Sega Genesis ''Top Gear'' in when i write names of the cars. i got obsesse writting new name i never thought writing a story of my own. Each time i find an new title, someone have always have, but this time around 2016 i finally have my own TIME GUARDIANS with two ancient aliens female race and new technology that surpass the imagination, but i can't reveal the 3 main characters power and ability. ...in the story it have 10 to 12 characters that become the TIME GUARDIANS. This is my project and mission the save lifes in all realms of reality. [ the spaceship is not just a spaceship, it way more of what you may know'' a spaceship design to defend all level and re-contruct worlds. conpare to the story i heard, that nothing

I wish we on Earth had some of these kinds of inheritance rules! 💘👍👍✌️💯

Interesting story line

the caves part reminded me of the story from the game Advent rising.. lol

Overly descriptive to the point of interrupting the story's flow. About 25% less descriptive narration is about right. It's so descriptive it slows down the listener's ability to recreate an Imaginary image of the story's setting.

@Sci-Fantasy

Ай бұрын

Thank you, we'll take it into account!

more graphics would be a bonus i realize you give good graphic description but the actual physical pictures to go with the description would go down very well please i mean maybe not every thing lie a movie but more like a comic strip style graphics pictures but not moving pictures

Great story. 👍🏻

Good story 🎉

Why is it always a white guy? Just wondering lol

@Sci-Fantasy

Ай бұрын

And it's true

@tadpethtel8035

28 күн бұрын

because, more often than not, they are the ones writing the story. It's natural to have your main character to be at least somewhat similar to yourself. It's much easier to write a narrative that comes across as authentic if you are coming from a place where there some commonality of culture, family, lifestyle, ethnicity, etc. Isn't it a bit disingenous to bitch about the human's "racial" makeup, when talking about interactions between a member of the human "race" and an extraterrestrial one. Because we are all of the human "race". And whatever physiological differences that have evolved in us because other the particular climate, country, and region in which our family lines existed on earth, we are all still earthlings. So as far as we should be concerned,we would be much better off, if we approach life as human......the human race....period. Ethnicity, culture, lexicon, physical attributes...those should never trump our humanity....they should only add texture and color to what humans represent. If we were all identical, we'd be like hive minded clones, and would be much less interesting as a species. Can you imagine if all the dogs were similar.....same color, same size, similar appeareance.....well I think it would be the same for us.

@lonewaffle231

27 күн бұрын

Honestly in the story it's not mention what Paul's race is so he can be what ever race you want him to be. The pic is just AI art.

Nice

i am curious as to where the story comes from, as in what book or movie

Kinda weird but good

Yes I like it

I think that these stories are starting to repeat themselves

I don't like,,,,Only one scene picture!

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something different...

Why is there a female named Lira/Lyria in all you stories??what is special about the names?

@Sci-Fantasy

29 күн бұрын

Thanks for the comment. I heard you.

Symbology in almost every line sensory overload to be sure, Black armor, villains taller then others and sneery, silvery spaceships, harmonic resonators, saving the Universe, massive consoles, etc. Typical AI! 🧐😕😭😔🏁🇹🇻

@Sci-Fantasy

Ай бұрын

I'm sorry you didn't like it, I hope you find the story to your liking

Not really into syfy took a chance did like the story 😊